Well, since I always try to be a man of my word, and since I got the 10+ reviews I hinted at in last chapter's foreword, you deserve your reward and get a new one after a day.
And since you wanted a description of the scene after the "kiss", you got it. And don't dare not review it or I will send Sally Struthers to your door with hungry kids to make you feel really really bad about yourself :D
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El felt miffed. Really miffed. Almost pissed. She turned her head and saw Mike's wrist watch close to her face, sitting on the armrest, the green numbers mocking her. 3:12. The colon between the hour and minute went on and off, once every second.
On. Off. On. Off. On and off and on. Every time it happened, another second passed, another second of El lying awake, cursing her boyfriend. She turned her head around and saw the boy she was mad at right now. The glow from the corner lamp gave a soft illumination to his face, his freckles distinguished in the contrast. He was the boy she loved. Who was sleeping soundly without a care in the world. The boy who had sent her to orgasmic heaven a few hours earlier. Twice.
She had been wary to ask him to put his lips onto her vagina. She had wondered how he would react, if he thought the idea disgusting or not. She had read about foreplay and had been eager to try but actually going through with it had been more difficult for her. But when he had moved his head forward, she had only expected him to just kiss her, like she asked, to just give her a peck and move back again.
But Mike had surprised her. Surprise may not even be a strong enough word. He had shocked her. After the kiss, he really had pulled his head back and looked into her eyes while licking his lips, as if sampling her. She knew that her eyes had been full of desire and when he had gotten up, she had feared that it had gone too far and he was about to run in the bathroom himself to clean his lips. But no, that hadn't happened. Quite the opposite.
Mike had grabbed her legs and pulled her onto the couch proper until her head was on the pillows. Then he had sat up and moved in front of her, where he had lain down on the bed and spread her legs before pressing his mouth onto her vagina again. When she had read about it, the book had said it would feel like a very pleasant, intense tickle but in reality, nothing could have prepared her for the onslaught on her senses.
She had had to continuously keep one hand on her mouth to avoid her moans and squeals waking someone. Luckily, Holly and Mike's parents slept in their rooms, as far away from the basement as possible in this house, apart from the attic. Now that she was able to think about it a bit more, she realized that she had given him a lot of conflicting information, wanting him to stop to let her recover but whenever he slowed down, she told him to go harder again.
She looked at him again, her sweetie still sleeping without a care in the world. Why wasn't he wide awake, pondering the implications of what had happened? But no, it was only her whom sleep eluded. As she cursed his peace of mind inwardly, she saw his eyes opening a bit, his eyes focusing on hers before his eyes opened wider and his mouth twitched into a smile.
"Hey." he whispered. "Can't sleep?"
Instead of answering, she couldn't help but kissing him, pushing her tongue into his mouth and reaching for his. It took his tired mind a few seconds before he realized what she was doing and to return the kiss but soon enough, they were pressing their bodies together, the kiss continuing until they had to break apart for air.
"What you did earlier?" El said quietly, her hands on his face. "You need to do that again sometimes."
"Okay." he nodded, still half asleep, and sat up, sliding under the covers and down to her abdomen, where he pushed her shirt up, which she had put back on to avoid anyone from his family finding her naked in the morning.
"I didn't mean now, it's in the middle of the... ooooh!" she tried to stop him but as soon as his mouth was on her, all coherent thought left her brain.
One hand covering her mouth again, El began moaning and panting, her other hand moving under the covers to rest on his head and push him harder against her. She couldn't believe that it was happening again, twice in the same night. Even though she had no experience to compare, she felt that Mike was very talented in doing this and if she didn't know better, she would have thought that he had practiced this before on someone else.
His tongue seemed to be everywhere at once. She felt it flick over her clitoris, run up and down her folds and dip inside her. Over her quiet moans, she could her the suction noises his mouth made when his lips left her skin, while his tongue continued to work on her before his lips got back. She heard him hum as if he was eating a very tasty meal but before she could think anything else about that, she felt herself begin to twitch and her body began shaking in orgasmic bliss again.
"Oh yes! Oh Mike!" she squealed, trying to keep her voice down. "I'm coming again."
"Mmh-mh." he hummed again as if he was nodding and he separated from her as she shook.
When she had calmed down, she looked down at herself, seeing nothing but the bulge under the covers and she pulled them away to look at him. The view was quite strange for her, seeing her half-naked form, her legs spread and his chin resting on her lower abdomen. Mike had his eyes closed and looked as if he was sleeping, albeit with a smile but before she could say something, he opened his eyes again.
"You feel okay?" he asked, his voice having a raspy quality that made her hotter than it should.
"Yeah." she nodded, still somewhat out of breath. "That was mind-blowing."
"Good." he smiled in contend and wondering what he would do now, she saw his fingers move against her folds and spread them apart before his tongue moved against her again.
"Oh my god!" she keened, louder than before now and hoping his parents and sister weren't light sleepers.
"That tastes so strange." he commented. "But I like it. And it's such a cute pink."
"Hrgn!" she groaned when his lips descended on her again, his tongue moving faster now.
His hands spread her legs even further and his head pressed harder against her as if he was trying to find something deep inside her with his tongue. A small part of her brain remembered Max's game of measuring the guys' tongues and how Mike's was the longest and now she was more than happy that Mike had won that contest. Her hips began bucking up, the coil inside her tightening again and when he added his left index finger to the mix, caressing her clitoris with it, she began to mewl at the feeling, a sound she never made before.
"Yes! Yes! YES!" she panted and her hips began bucking in earnest.
This time, he didn't stop what he was doing while she climaxed. His hands pressed against her abdomen, keeping her body as steady as possible while he continued his ministrations. El panted heavily, moaning loudly and not even trying to keep quiet and her shaking became harder by the second until the coil inside her snapped and she just managed to get a pillow over her face when she climaxed with a scream.
After pressing a last kiss on her clit, Mike moved back forward, pressing his lips onto hers and making her taste herself. He rolled off of her again and wrapped his arms around her body, pressing her against him as he fell back asleep, making her gape again at his ability to simply accept that he had brought her to orgasmic heaven twice again. It took her another hour to finally fall asleep.
That sleep lasted for another three hours. Her eyes opened, feeling gummy and heavy and a look at Mike's wristwatch told her the reason for her tiredness. It was only twelve minutes after six, way before her usual wake up time, even when she had school. With a tired moan, she got up and got into the bathroom, flopping down on the toilet and letting go while trying not to fall asleep here.
She made the mistake of wiping her face with cold water, feeling more awake now. As she returned to the main room and saw Mike's sleeping form, her body reacted quickly, heat pooling inside her abdomen again just from the memory of what happened during the night. She still couldn't believe how it had gone down. A simple demand for a kiss on her vagina had turned into four massive orgasms just from his tongue and his comment that she tasted great made her anticipation for a repeat go sky high.
When she had reached the couch, one thing came to her. He had now seen her completely naked, had had his lips on her breasts and vagina, his hands had been everywhere on her body as well but other than a single second from the side, she had never seen his manhood. She thought about what she had read in the book Max had given her, of the description of how a woman could please a man with her mouth.
She knelt down next to him, wondering if she should do it. Mike opened his eyes and smiled tiredly at her before he got up and walked into the bathroom himself, making her take a deep breath at the missed opportunity. Two minutes later, Mike stumbled back into the basement, flopping back down on the couch and stretching his long legs, lying on his back and closing his eyes again.
El licked her lips, unsure if she should simply do it. She looked down at his crotch, something that wasn't missed by Mike and his body reacted, both from seeing where she was looking at and from the memory of what they did last night. For him, it had been a night made in heaven. He had used everything he had learned about it and it had worked, the sounds and the feeling of El climaxing from what he did doing more for his self-esteem than the athletic body he got from the swimming.
"I love you." he said quietly, her eyes turning to him and gazing into his soul.
"I love you too." El smiled and looked back down at this crotch. "Let me prove it."
Before he could ask how she wanted to do that, she had already pulled down his pajama bottoms and released his growing erection with a snap. She gasped at the sight, seeing it a lot bigger than that one second on Christmas morning, and that had been after Holly had painfully landed on it in her eagerness. She wrapped her right hand around it, feeling and seeing it continue to grow and get harder.
"Uh... you don't have to do that, you know that, do you?" he asked apprehensively.
"I know." she nodded. "I want to."
She bent forward and wondered how she should start. She put her tongue against the tip, feeling him gasp and tense up and stopped immediately, wondering if she had done something wrong. His hand moved to her head, caressing her hair and giving her a barely perceptible push down, making her grin.
Remembering something Max had mentioned, she put one finger against the base and the other on the tip, looking at the distance between her digits and giving an inward giggle when she realized that Mike was apparently more endowed than Lucas was. She put her tongue against his base and ran it upwards to the tip, feeling it twitch when she reached the frenulum and Mike's groan told her that he liked it.
After repeating it three times more, she put her lips around the tip, gently sucking on it and running her tongue around the sensitive area of his tip. Mike was already panting hard, the sensations completely new to him but boy, did it feel good! He couldn't believe what she was doing and he made himself close his eyes because he knew that if he watched her, he would shoot his load immediately.
El grinned at his expression, both concentration and pleasure in one and pushed her head down, taking his tip into her mouth completely. It was a strange sensation, feeling the gentle twitches against her gum and tongue and she sucked a bit harder, hearing him groan even louder at what he was experiencing.
She took her time getting used to it, not wanting to take him too deep into her mouth to avoid gagging. She managed another inch, her tongue active the entire time. His groans became more frantic and she knew he would climax soon. She took him deeper again, but this time, she misjudged the distance and felt the tip touch her throat.
"What?" he gasped when she suddenly released him and started to cough. "What happened?"
"I took it too deep." she still coughed, trying to swallow the gag reflex.
"I'm sorry." he apologized,
"What for?" she looked at him confused. "You didn't do anything."
"I don't know." he chuckled. "I can't think straight right now."
"My confused love." she giggled and pressed her lips on his. "You know, there's one more thing I want to do."
"You sure?" he looked at her with wide eyes. "I don't have any..."
"No, not that." she stopped him. "Not yet anyway. But I want to do something we have done already but only with clothing between us."
"Oh." he realized what she meant.
El straddled his hips and pressed herself down on his manhood, feeling it a lot more than before. Her folds parted to the left and right of his shaft, her clit gliding along the skin which was already lubricated from her mouth and got even more lubricated from her arousal. She began moving harder, feeling the caressing on her nub a thousand times better than with clothes on and she wondered how it would feel if he really put it inside her.
"Oh god!" she panted, her hips undulating harder and harder.
Her hands moved into his so she could get better leverage as she sat up. Her upper body weight now pressing her down, she felt as if she was going to explode and although she didn't want to yet, her body moved on its own, grinding hard back and forth, the friction causing sparks of pleasure to go off inside her brain.
Mike on his part felt great as well. When El came forward, her clit was moving over his tip, and he felt the sensation of a growing climax in his body. He looked at the goddess on top of him, her facial expression one of pure bliss and her mouth open in a silent moan. He saw those lips and simply wanted to kiss her, so he pulled her down to press his mouth on hers.
That's where everything went wrong. As soon as his lips were on hers, El tensed up and lifted her head a few inches. When Mike opened his eyes, he saw it wracked with pain, her mouth again open but this time with a silent scream that didn't come from pleasure. His concern for her was so great that it took several seconds for him to realize the pressure around his manhood. It felt as if he was being squeezed by something very tight, warm and moist. A look between them confirmed his fears.
"Oh god, El." he gasped, seeing a tear escape from her eyes.
"Mike." she cried softly. "It hurts!"
"El, move up so it gets out." he quickly said, which was very hard to do, given how it felt for him.
"I can't." she sniffed.
"I'm going to put my hands on your hips and lift you, okay?" he told her and she nodded.
He felt horrible. When he had pulled down El so he could kiss her, she was in the process of moving forward. His extra pull had made her move a few more inches, slightly off of his manhood and it had lifted, so when she moved backwards, it was positioned perfectly for something they hadn't dared to do yet. El's enthusiastic move backwards had done the rest, his manhood entering her completely.
His hands on her hips, he gently lifted her up. Inch by inch, his manhood left her, El whimpering into his ears as she felt the soreness already. It took almost thirty seconds until his manhood was completely out, flopping down to his naval and shrinking rapidly, his concern for her well-being superseding any arousal he got from seeing her half-naked.
"Oh god, this was not how I imagined to lose my virginity." El managed to chuckle after a few seconds.
"El." Mike whispered and she could see tears in his eyes.
"Shh, don't cry." she said, putting her hand on his cheek and kissing him softly. "It wasn't your fault."
"But it was, if I hadn't pulled you down..."
"Mike, stop!" she ordered, sitting up on her knees even though it hurt a bit. "I'm not blaming you."
"But..."
"It was an accident." El said and kissed him again, wiping the tear away that had been running down his other cheek. "I'm fine. Okay, it stings a little, but other than that, I feel okay."
"And here I had our first time so perfectly planned out already." he sighed and chuckled as well, accepting that she didn't blame him.
"Really?" she giggled, snuggling close to him. "How would you have done it?"
"Well, we would have gone to a date, with everything." he replied. "Then I would have taken you home, having made sure before that it was empty that day and then spending our time kissing and undressing each other. And after a long foreplay, I would have gently entered you, making sure you don't feel any pain and only pleasure."
"Aw, that's sweet." she smiled warmly and got up, moving down his body again.
"You don't have to do that." he tried to stop her. "And I doubt it will come back now anyway."
"We'll just see about that." she took the challenge. "You still deserve it."
"I love you so much." he said seriously.
"I love you too." she wiggled her eyebrows and ran her tongue around his tip, feeling it grow rapidly again. "See, it works."
"I retract my statement." he chuckled and began moaning when she was taking him into her mouth again. "Oh god, that feels so good!"
"Mh-mh." she hummed, trying to get his mind off what happened a few minutes go.
This time, she moved her head harder on him, taking him in deeper without having to gag. Mike groaned loudly, his hips moving up whenever she came down, seeking more pleasure. El went all in, her head bobbing up and down, the slurping noises all-encompassing now, at least to them. Less than four minutes later, Mike tensed up and El just managed to release him when he climaxed, his sperm shooting out of his manhood and hitting her in the face.
"Ew, gross!" she laughed and ran into the bathroom to wash her face.
"Sorry!" he called after her, unable to move currently.
"I didn't expect it to be that... explosive." she giggled as she returned, seeing him clean himself with a tissue.
"Can you blame him, given what he was exposed to?" he chuckled and pulled his shorts back up.
"Mmmmh." she hummed after snuggling into his side, her head on his shoulder. "Well, I'm not a virgin anymore. Was it as good for you as it was for me?"
"You..." he stammered but then saw her grinning face. "Okay, if you can make jokes about it already, I guess I should stop feeling guilty."
"Yes, you should." she nodded. "Lets get some more sleep. I got very little last night, thanks to you."
"Why is that my fault?" he asked.
"Oh, you know, thinking of your tongue inside my... pussy." she said, remembering the second name of her vagina from the magazine. "And then waking up at six."
"But that really wasn't my fault." he argued.
"Honey, when I say it was your fault, you say, 'Yes dear, I'm sorry', got it?" she giggled.
"Yes dear, I'm sorry." he said, mimicking her voice.
"Close enough." she smiled and wrapped her arm around his chest.
"El, are you okay?" Karen asked as they ate breakfast, seeing their guest munch on an Eggo waffle while almost falling asleep.
"She didn't sleep much last night." Mike explained. "And she's the opposite of a morning person."
"Holly was the same last night." Karen nodded. "Too much candy in the evening."
"Yeah, that was probably it." Mike accepted that, a much easier explanation than the real one.
"Michael, I must also tell you that I'm disappointed in you." Karen added, making Mike sweat, thinking that his mother must have heard them last night.
"About what?" he asked, dreading the answer.
"You didn't even call your sister on Christmas." Karen said, Mike letting out a sigh of relief.
"Well, she didn't call either." Mike argued.
"She did call." Karen winked.
"When?"
"Yesterday morning, when you guys were at the pool."
"Why didn't you say anything then, I would have called back." Mike moped.
"Because I shouldn't have to." Karen chuckled. "But Nancy knows that you would be way too occupied with El, so she forgave you in advance."
"Thanks." Mike mumbled and looked at his girlfriend. "El?"
"Mommy, is El sleeping?" Holly asked from her seat, seeing El with her head leaning on her hand, breathing steadily and the remains of the Eggo in her hand forgotten.
"I think so." Karen laughed.
"Don't wake her." Mike stopped his sister before she could shake El. "She will maul you like a rabid wolverine."
"Don't scare your sister." Karen gasped but laughed.
"I'll take her to my room and put her into bed so she can sleep for another hour or two." Mike chuckled and took the Eggo out of his El's hand before lifting her up gently. "Holly, can you come with me?"
With one arm under her knees and one around her shoulders, he carried his sleeping girlfriend up the stairs and into his room. He mentioned for Holly to pull the covers away so he could put her into the bed, tucking her in once she was in and pressing a kiss to her lips and forehead. He left her alone and returned back into the kitchen, where Holly giggled to Karen at how Mike had carried El like his bride, making him smile.
"Mike, where do you see yourself and El go?" Karen asked serious.
"College, jobs, marriage, kids." Mike shrugged. "If she wants to, of course."
"Good." Karen smiled, seeing how determined he seemed to be to make those dreams reality.
After breakfast, Mike helped his mom clean the table and wash the dishes, something else that he only seemed to be doing when El was in town. When Holly wanted to go out to play in the snow, Mike volunteered, getting dressed and playing with his sister who wanted to build another snowman to add to the gigantic one they had built on Christmas Eve.
Some time later, El woke up, feeling a lot better than before. Momentarily disoriented by her surroundings, she smelled Mike's scent, quickly wrapping herself into the covers but a shriek caused her to get up. She walked to the window and looked outside, her heart melting at the sight of the man she loved giving his sister piggyback rides, the blond child shrieking in happiness as Mike tried to imitate a horse, neighing and blowing raspberries to sound like an equine.
Realizing that she was still in pajamas, she quickly changed into some proper clothes and walked down the stairs, finding Karen in the kitchen, preparing their dinner. While she wanted to join Mike and Holly outside, she thought that she had to offer Karen help, not wanting to appear to take her hospitality for granted.
"Oh, look who's up." Karen grinned as she stirred whatever was in the pot.
"Did I fall asleep during breakfast?" El asked.
"Yes, you did." Karen chuckled. "Mike carried you upstairs."
"Wow." El rubbed her face. "That never happened before."
"You still want to..." Karen asked, holding up the half-eaten Eggo but El ripped it out of her hand immediately. "... finish that?"
"Thank you." El mumbled.
"You really like them, do you?" Karen chuckled.
"Yes, I do." El nodded and quickly finished the waffle. "Can I help with something? What's that anyway?"
"Nonsense, you go join Mike and Holly, if you want." Karen smiled. "And this is our lunch, lentil soup."
"Okay." El smiled and walked to the hallways to put on her jacket, hat and gloves.
"El!" Holly shouted when she joined the two in the backyard.
"Hey, little one." she waved at the girl, Mike throwing her on his shoulder again and galloping over to her.
"Brrr." Holly cooed, pulling Mike's hair to get him to stop.
"Iiihiihiihihi-phrrrr." Mike imitated a horse's neighing again, even pawing the ground with his right foot, making El laugh.
"El, look, the snowman now has a younger brother." Holly pointed to their left, El seeing a snowchild next to the big snowman.
"That's very nice of you to give him some company." El smiled at the girl.
"El, you wanna ride Mike too?" Holly asked innocently but causing both Mike and El to cough in embarrassment, both aware of the double meaning of that word.
"Yes, I would very much like to ride him." El replied, giving Mike a wink.
"Wanna do it right now?" Holly asked, Mike spluttering and blushing again.
"Sure." El couldn't help but laugh at Mike's reaction.
"Mike, let me down!" Holly ordered and turned to El as soon as she was on the ground. "El, now you can mount and ride him."
"Okay, little one." El still laughed and climbed on Mike's back, who then began skipping forward like a horse, a little more difficult for him this time, given that El weighed a bit more than Holly.
"Go El!" Holly yelled. "Ride him hard! Really wear him out!"
"Seriously, she has to understand what she's saying." Mike groaned to El's hearty laughter.
"Mike, she's six, she doesn't understand it like you and I." El pressed a kiss to his cheek.
"It doesn't help that I understand it the way that I do." he chuckled.
"Shut up and hop along." she laughed until they heard a click.
"That's so cute." Karen gushed, putting down the camera and going back into the house.
"My mom and her camera." Mike sighed and let El down again.
"I wanna see that picture later." El shouted.
"Sure thing!" Karen shouted back. "Did Mike complain?"
"Yep!" El shouted again.
"Seriously, it's so mean that all the women in my life are ganging up on me." Mike gave a mocking sniff.
"But you love us all." El giggled, wrapping her arms around him and looking up at him.
"And I love you the most." he smiled down at her and dropped a kiss on her lips.
"Ew, now you got my brother's cooties." Holly gagged.
"Wouldn't want anyone else's." El winked at the little girl who then threw a snowball at her. "Oh, it's on!"
"Mike, help!" Holly shrieked when El began throwing snowballs back at her.
"Oh no." Mike shook his head and sat down on the porch swing, even though it was a bit stiff from the cold. "You tickled my butt."
"Aaaaah." Holly yelled in joy when engaged in the snowball fight with El, though El was gentle with her throws before making snow angels with the little girl.
Mike looked on, smiling warmly at El and Holly and their fun together. And from the kitchen window, Karen saw the same thing, a similar smile on her face when seeing how well Holly took to the girl who stole her son's heart.
Well, that was it for this chapter. Was the "kissing" scene to your liking? :D And who would have thought I write an accidental defloration? :D
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