( Here's the newest chapter of A God's Journey. I'm trying to show the character's emotions more mainly because I feel like I'm not, so this chapter might be longer than usual and with that being said, enjoy the new chapter. )

Meanwhile in Lisa's Underground protective bunker.

A chalkboardis moved to the front of the sisters, friends,and parents.

" I knowyou said we had tomake a planbut why'd ithave to be inyour protectivebunkerlittle dudette? " says Luna while raising her hand.

" Well elder sibling, down here I can think more clearly and I have the extra space so as you can see I have concocted a plan for when we rescue/save our brother unit from the so called " king of all that is evil. " says lisa.

" Great going lil sis! ' says luna. " Yes thank you but I wish you had included us, we all have to stay connected. " says lori crossing her arms.

" Well I would have but I feel like it's impossible with those two's non-stop bickering. " lisa says while pointing to lola and lana who are, and you guessed it, fighting.

" Lola! Lana! Stop it right now! " says lori commandingly.

They stop and lana says pointing at lola, " She started it! " " I did not and you know it! " she yells.

" I don't care who started it I'm ending it! Now stop messing around this is important. " she says.

" Your sister is right girls, we need to focus if were going to save your brother. " says lynn loud sr.

They glare at each other then look at the chalkboard and focus on lisa.

" Alright people! Pay attention, this is our plan for saving our brother or as some of you know him, a good friend. " she says while looking to bobby, ronnie anne and clyde. " Now listen up, for phase one we will make our way to the planets location via teleporter. From their we will-

" Wait where'd you get a teleporter from? " asked bobby.

" I will answer questions when the full plan is explained without disruptions. " she says while glaring at him making him sink in his seat,.

She then clears her throat and says " Now then as I was saying, the teleporter will work from the use of rita loud's mind, she has the most recollection of this planet so she will wear a headset connecting to the teleporter and it'll break down your molecular structure then you'll individually be sent to the planet. "

" Are you ok with this honey? " lynn sr asks his wife in a concerning voice. " You're not scared of it malfunctioning or anything? "

" Lynn I will do anything to get my baby boy back, even die just so long as he's alive. " she has holding his hands. He smiles and says " Of course dear, I'll follow you through every step of the way. "

" Now then for phase two, Once we all arrive on the planet we will make our way to the castle which is where our brother should be being held captive. " she says pointing to phase two on the chalkboard.

" Wait what? That's a suicice mission. Savini will kill us the second we step inside. " lori says while standing up.

" If you would stop interrupting then I would tell you why it isn't a suicide mission. " she says annoyed. Lori then sits back down. " Thank you, now then onto to phase three, once inside we will take out some guards and wear their armor to blend in. "

" And for the last phase, we will save Lincoln from his clutches and make our way home. " Most of the sisters agreed with the plan until lynn said " Whats to say he won't come back? And not by himself, his whole army. "

" Your right, the only way to ensure Lincoln's safety is to kill this evil king guy. " says ronnie anne.

" But this " guy " is like, really powerful and our training hasn't even been completed yet, " says leni. " Leni's right, our training is even completed yet so how can we even defeat savini? " says luan.

Rita thinks about it for a couple minutes she stays silent until she sighs and says " There's a way. " catching everyone's attention then lori says " Really mom? How? " she asks surprised.

" His power is entirely made up of the opposite of Lincoln's power, so if we find a way to seal it away then. "

" He's completely powerless! Mom your a genius! " lori says enthusiastically.

" But how do we do that? " ronnie anne asks.

" Don't worry, me and leni have been studying spells since we were young, so we can take care of this." " Well that takes care of that I guess. " ronnie anne says raising a brow.

" Alright then sibling units let's get this plan into action and save our brother. " lisa says.

Everyone agrees and the plan is set into motion. First the headset is set onto rita's head and everyone is sent to the planet one by one then the last one's are rita and lisa and they send themselves their in an instant. Then as the headset falls to the ground the hatch opens and a figures shadow peaks inside.

Meanwhile on Savini's Home planet

Once rita arrives with lisa, lori grabs them and their taken to a condemned building for a hideout.

" Alright sibling units once we rescue Lincoln we some sort of transportation to take us away from the castle. " says lisa.

" Hmm, this place has cars right mrs. loud? " bobby asks.

" Um yes, why? " she answers confused

" No reason, hey ni-ni lets go. " " What? Where? " says ronnie anne raising a brow.

" Doesn't matter now let's go! " he says while running out making ronnie anne follow but stops at the door and looks back and says " Bring him home ok? " she says concerned then runs after her brother.

" I have a feeling we'll be seeing those two soon, but anyways let's get to the castle. " says luna.

" Ok but who's coming with us? " says lori. " All of us what do you think lori! I wanna save linky to! " says lola.

She bends down and says " And as much as I appreciate that it's too dangerous we're going to need you and lana to stay back with mom and da-

" I'm going lori. " rita says quickly making her oldest daughter look at her then she stands up and says " Mom no, who's going to look after the girls. " " Your father will we've already spoken about it. " " Mom it's not safe I mean what if- " Lori! My baby boy is not only not in control of his god like power, he's been kidnapped and is probably being tortured, so we are not going to argue over this. " Lori stays quiet then she hugs her mom and says " Ok mom, i'm sorry i have no idea what your going through. " She hugs back and sheds a tear and says " It's ok sweetie. "

They seperate from the hug then lynn sr. says " Well then you guys gotta get going, Lincolns probably scared for his life. "

" Right, c'mon guys baby bro needs our help. " says luna, and her sisters nod then lily coo's then lori pats her head then her, lynn, luan, leni, and luna all run out then fly to the castle in the front of the city/town with rita following behind.

Meanwhile with Bobby and Ronnie Anne

The siblings run over to behind a building while some police walk into a store then ronnie anne says " Please explain to me why we're doing this again?! " she whisper yells.

" Lisa said we need some sort of transportation so...we're gonna steal a car. " he says watching the road.

" What?! " she says loudly, then bobby pulls ronnie anne down and ducks his head as some officers look down the alley way then says. " Who's there? Come out now! " he says then him and his partner start to walk down the alley and walk slowly.

Bobby whispers into her ear and says " Follow my lead. " he then stands up and stands in front of them but are a couple feet apart then he says " Uh hi, i'm a...foreigner! And i'm new to this place so I don't know much. " Ronnie anne then says " Yeah and we were just leaving bye! "

She then grabs bobby's hand and they run away from them but an officer says " Hey get back! " only for bobby and ronnie anne to run into their cruiser and drive away leaving them speechless then he says " Were so fired aren't we? " " Yup. "

" Did we just take their car! " his little sister asks with a smile. " Yup! " he answers also smiling then says " Now we head to the castle and get lincoln out of here. "

Meanwhile with the loud sisters

They fly to the back entrance and knock out the guards then run inside only to be met with hundreds of guards waiting for them shocking them then lori says " But how? "

" Did you really expect me to not be ready? " a voice says making the girls freeze in place, literally they can't move even if they try their hardest.

" Lori...I can't move! " says leni. " I know me neither! He must be using some sort of magic. "

" Boy are you smart. " They hear footsteps and savini walks through the crowd of guards with his mask still on. He smiles and says " Come for brother correct? Well you're too late. "

" What does that mean you big jerk! " Says lynn. He smiles under his mask and looks behind himself and says " Dark one why don't you introduce yourself? "

The girls are confused until they have wide eyes when they see Lincoln, their only brother walk to them. His perfect snow white hair is now pitch black, his blue pupils are now red and the symbol on his chest is not only red crack marks are starting to appear around it.

Just as savini is about to say something the wall is broken down when rita flies in and punches him clean in the face through the crowd of guards. As her daughters look at her they see her clothes have changed into silver armor with a gold helmet and a dagger on her waist. She snaps her fingers and the girls are released from their frozen imprisonment, she then looks at Lincoln and covers her mouth in shock and savini says regaining his balance " Surprised rita? You should've expected this. "

Rita loud has never felt more anger course through her veins then ever before, her aura spikes pushes back the girls but not lincoln who glares at her, all savini does is laugh then says " I haven't seen you this angry in a long time! "

She growls and yells then flies at him and punches him through the castle making him cough up blood but he smiles and kicks her stomach.

Lincoln is about to fly to them but luna gets in front of him and says " Lincoln bro it's us! " he glares at her and punches her stomach then trips her and kicks her into a wall then says

" I have no idea who the hell you people are. " he says coldly shocking them, then mira appears next to him and takes out two daggers from her pockets and says " Mind if I join in? I've been waiting for the right moment to test out these new powers! "

" Go ahead but it'll be a waste against these weaklings. " he says before he shoots a red beam of energy at lynn blowing up on contact making her fall to one knee and spitting blood.

This angers lori and she flies over to mira and punches her into a wall, then the two engage in battle.

Luna says to lincoln " Bro I don't want to fight you, don't do this he has you under some spell. "

" LIES! " he yells then flies to her and punches her face and knees her stomach then cups his fists and slams her down into the ground. He's tackled by luan who punches him multiple times but it has no effect and he headbutts her then grabs her arm and throws her into the air and shoots red beams at her.

She dodges in time and flies to him and kicks his head down and elbows his stomach but he grabs her arm and he pulls her into his punch knocking her down.

Luna gets up weakly and wipes some blood from her face then growls and flies to lincoln and punches his face with anger and says " Screw it! I'm getting my brother back! "

Lori dodges mira's slashes and kicks her head into the wall and uppercuts her then says " What new powers? Your the same to me mira! " " Shut your mouth! " she flies to her and kicks her down then is about to stab her when she's punched back and lynn pants and has anger written all over her then says " Lori go help mom I got this. "

" No lynn your injured. " " Forget about me and get out of here! " she yells but lori stands her ground and says " No! I lost one sibling and I'm not going to lose another to some crazy women! "

" I am not crazy! " she yells. " Shut up sibling moment happening. " lynn says then looks to lori and smiles then says " Alright lori Let's take her down together. " " Couldn't have said it better myself. "

" Are you done because I'm ready to make you bleed. "

They nod to each other then both fly to her and lynn barrages her with punches but she dodges until she's kicked in the back by lori and lynn punches her face making her bleed. They high five while mira gets even more angered then her stealth suit glows and mira becomes invisible and suddenly lynn is punched confusing her then she's kneed in the stomach and uppercutted.

" She's invisible! " yells lori. " Yeah I know! " lynn is kicked down and kicked in the head and is unconscious while lori takes a breath and closes her eyes then gets in a fighting stance. She listens for any sound. She then hears some footsteps heading right towards her then opens her eyes and says " Gotcha. " she dodges her punch shocking mira then punches her face and kicks her stomach then rams her into the wall and she's visible again, then she grabs her dagger and holds it up to her throat and says " Make any movements and your dead. "

" You don't have what it takes to kill. " she says with a glare. " That's what you think, now listen i have questions. "

Mira glares then smiles.

Rita goes in for the punch but savini dodges and says " You got one hit on me because my guard was down your not going to hit me again. " " SHUT UP! " she yells with tears coming out her eyes. He then grabs her by the neck and says to her " Oh rita even when I look at you now your as beautiful as ever, tell me something did you ever tell him? "

Her eyes widened then she breaks out of his choke hold and says " Of course not. " He smiles then says " That can be arranged. " She's confused then he takes out a lasso and wraps it around rita and she's unable to break out and says " I made my own lasso of truth, it only took a bunch of dark magic. " " Don't do this savini! " she yells. " Too late. "

Lori is shocked and says to mira " And your telling the truth? " " Yes, everything I just told you was and is the truth. " Lori is quiet and looks away from her then looks back to her and is about to ask her something when she sees she's gone then she curses under her breath and looks to luan and luna and see their badly beaten while lincoln only has a few bruises then is about to help when savini flies back in with rita and freezes all the loud girls again and says

" Well rita, any day now! " he tightens the grip and as she's about to say something lynn sr. and the younger siblings all run out the car booby and ronnie stole with weapons and says " Alright hands up savi- dang it. " he's then frozen along with everyone else and savini laughs then says

" Splendid! A bigger audience well rita, the stage is all yours! " he says sadistically.

" Honey what's he talking about? " asks lynn sr.

She sheds a few tears then says " I'm so sorry lynn. "

To be continued.

That was the longest chapter i've ever written before I hope you enjoyed this one because the next one might be better you just have to wait and see! : ) so until then farewell.