AN: An attempt at a Naruto fanfiction. All creative criticism and thoughts are welcome.
Also, I don't own Naruto
'Character thinking'
"Character speaking out loud"
'Demon thinking'
"Demon Talking"
Chapter Two: The Awakening
As Naruto's consciousness started returning to him and he regained my senses he began to hear talking, sounded like Old man Hokage and three other voices, two male one female.
"No Danzo, I'm not letting the boy become one of your mindless puppets" said the only voice he recognized which was the voice of the Third Hokage
"Then what do you suggest we do with the boy Hiruzen" said the other male voice
"When he becomes of age I will enroll him in the academy."
"Why will you let the demon brat join the academy, don't tell me you really plan on letting the brat become a shinobi" said the female voice
"Let me remind you Koharu, he is not a demon, he simply holds the demon." replied Hiruzen
Naruto started shuffling
"You're dismissed he's waking up"
When he heard footsteps then the door open then close he took this as a cue to start shuffling some more and his eyes fluttered open, ow, even opening his eyes hurt
"Jiji is it true you're going to enroll me in the Academy?" asked the blonde boy
"Yes, once you reach age ten I'll enroll you in the academy"
I smiled slightly, I will be making my ascend to become a shinobi.
"Jiji can I leave this place and have that new ramen flavor"
The old man chuckled "Yes boy but not right now, you need to rest, I estimate you'll be out in 2 months but you should be able to eat in about a week"
(Time Skip to 8 days later)
These past eight days he's been spending his time in his mindscape while his body rested he changed the appearance of his mindscape to make it more hospitable for Kurumi-chan, it changed from a sewer to a plain with a few trees, here and there basically just looked like a regular outdoor plain. Although his injuries realistically it was supposed to take more than 2 months for his body to heal but thanks to Kurumi-chan his body healed at a ridiculous pace, 3rd degree burns, fractured ribs, and broken arm and leg are not injuries that healed in 8 days. The nurses and doctors were shocked to say the least but it just added to their rage, the demon can regenerate at a rapid pace.
He was free to go so he headed to his apartment to let Kurumi-chan begin the process, after consulting Kurumi-chan with it and talking about it during these past eight days he decided against telling the Hokage about the whole Kyuubi situation and the Rinne Sharingan he was going to get, not that he didn't trust him but still.
As he made his way to his apartment a thought reached his mind
'Hey, Kurumi-chan... is it going to hurt'
Although he couldn't see it, he could have sworn she just smirked evilly
"I hate to say it Naru-kun but yes, it will feel like your eyes are being stabbed repeating, after that it'll feel like someone casted an Amaterasu on your eyes but dont worry Naru-kun, the pain will only last for an hour, while your eyes may feel sore for a few days after the process it over it'll definitely be worth it." The redhaired female said
Now he was nervous, that definitely did NOT sound pleasant, but he did have to agree with her, the benefits definitely outweighed the bad.
He layed down on his mattress in his apartment and entered his mindscape, inside was Kurumi-chan, her appearance was same as before except for a necklace she wore with the kanji for "Seal"
"I would recommend creating a table so I can strap you in, I know this will be painful and I can't have you flailing around, it will mess up the process" I reluctantly created one and layed on it as she strapped me on.
I closed my eyes and i felt her soft hands over my eyes, it was quite pleasant.
"I'm sorry Naru-kun"
The pleasant feel of her hands was the last pleasant thing I felt before the pain took over.
(Time skip to 2 week)
She said it would feel like someone was stabbing my eyes repeatedly? PFT oh how he wish it felt like that, no, it was MUCH MUCH worst, this made the pain he felt at the monument feel like a stroll though the park, but I digress, he now my the Rinne Sharingan, but Kurumi-chan recommended he rest his eyes for a week at least after the process was done, just to be on the safe side.
That was 2 weeks ago and now Kurumi-chan told him that it was safe to use his eyes now, she told him that before he jumps into the deep end he should start with the basics, and it would be better that he trains his body to handle the strain that using these eyes will give me. Most of it would be mental strain yes but still, working his body would definitely help. She started him with doing basic weights on each leg.
After I was fit enough for jutsus she taught him his first one, the Kage Bushin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Jutsu). It was an A-ranked technique that required a lot a chakra but was no problem for him since cause of his massive reserves. The trick to Shadow clones is that the memories from the shadow clone return to the caster after dispelling, it proved great for training. She had him perform them while water walking, of course, learning these techniques was a walk in the park with his Rinne Sharingan but the difficult part proved to be doing these techniques while walking on water. But he eventually got it down quickly due to his Rinne Sharingan
She taught him the basic academy techniques after I got them mastered we started getting into elemental jutsus, she taught him one jutsu from each element, the first one she taught him was the Katon: Gokakyu No Jutsu (Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu). The basic fireball technique of the Uchiha clan.
The second was the Fūton: Daitoppa (Wind Release: Great Breakthrough) a C-Ranked Technique that allows you to blow wind through your mouth
The third was the Raiton: Jibashi (Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder). It allows you to send a wave of electricity through your hands
The fourth was Doton: Doryūheki (Earth Release: Mud Wall) Which allows you to create an earth wall when you slam your hands on the floor
The fifth technique was the Suiton: Suidan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Bullet Jutsu) This jutsu allowed you to spit a steam of water out your mouth, you can also split it and shoot them like bullets.
He did these until he was able to do them with two hand signs, except for Wind and Lightning, he showed complete and utter mastery over these two elements, he can do his Lightning and Wind jutsu without any hand seals but he still liked using one hand seal.
Kurumi told him that he would have to practice with the 3 other elements until managed to gain the same amount of control he has with his Lightning and Wind techniques. Once he's done that then he would be able to dabble into sub-elements. It's a popular belief that sub-elements like Yoton (Lava Release) Or Hyoton (Ice Release) for example can only be used with a bloodline. However, this isn't true you simply just have to have complete control over the 2 elements (or 3 if we're talking about Jinton (Dust Release) required to form it. For example, people from the Yuki clan usually had near-perfect control over Water and Wind so making ice wasn't much of an issue to them, they just had to practice their balance.
To make the subelements you have to use combine and balance both elements. It sounds simple but it really isn't. It usually takes a long time but with shadow clones this time should shorten.
His body can now handle taijutsu so Kurumi had him work on his taijutsu. He learned a taijutsu style based on agility, you would outmove your opponent and land hits in pressure points slowly crippling your enemy. He had to extensively study human anatomy in order to learn where the pressure points were to make this style work. He also had to be really fast in order for this technique to work.
If he was going to be honest, it's based on the Hyuga's Juken, in a matter of fact he can probably replicate their Juken because he can see the tenketsu, but he didn't want to, maybe eventually but not now.
Going to the library was also much easier now, he didn't need to steal the books now, he would simply make clones and henge them and have them go to the library and read a book on every subject ranging from history to books on chakra theory. He had them go to the restroom and dispell every 10 minutes so his brain won't overload with information.
On a book on the Third Shinobi War is where he found out about Uzushiogakure, his curiosity toward fuinjitsu bloomed. When Kurumi initially told him of the Uzumaki clan he was fascinated, they were known for their longevity and their seal masters. He was shocked at how badass his clan was. He decided to try and become a seal master, to continue the Uzumaki legacy and not let his ancestors down.
He made a mental note to visit the ruins at one point. Because there was bound to be some scrolls or something, Iwa and Kumo must have searched through the ruins for stuff but the Uzumaki were known for their seals, he's sure that there was some secret vault with really badass jutsu or seal locked behind really complex seals that only allowed someone with Uzumaki blood or something to open it... well at least he hoped there was. But damn his clan must have been such badasses, he really wanted to bring his clan back to its former glory, that's a goal he'll work towards.
It all sounded great and all, however, there is one problem. Konoha, he doubts the Konoha council allow him to simply waltz out of the village and start a new one, and if he did then he's sure they will try and control him and the village. He came to the conclusion that he would eventually need to leave the village in order to fulfill his ambitions.
However he will need his inheritance from his father, he already got his mothers but he can't get his fathers until he made Chunin or was 18, so he would have to stay until then. He thought back to the conversation.
(Flashback)
12 year old Naruto was making his way to talk to the Hokage about his parents to see if he had any inheritance. He decided to say he read about the Uzumaki in a book cause he wasn't entire sire if he should tell him about Kurumi-chan.
I opened the door to see him cursing paperwork. Then looked up and noticed me.
"Hello Naruto my boy what can I do for you"
"Hey jiji I have a question."
"What is it?" asked the elderly man
"Hey Jiji can you tell the 'shadows' in the room to leave? I'd perfer it if this conversation was kept just between us."
His eyes widened in shock but soon receded and lifted his hand to signal his ANBU they they could leave.
"How did you know they were here?"
"I could sense their Chakra"
His eyes widened once again
'A sensor? those are rare, my my Minato, Kushina, your son is definitely something' he mused
"Anyways, what was your question?"
"Okay so I read a book from the library about the Uzumaki clan, was I from a clan?"
The elderly man's eyes hardened then sighed.
"I guess there's no way of hiding it now then. Yes, you are the last of the Uzumaki clan, they along with Uzushiogakure which is where the majority of them lived fell in a joint invasion by Kumo and Iwa, due to fear of the Uzumaki growing stronger. When Konoha arrived to support it was too late. However your mother was in Konoha time and was safe, but I'm sure there are Uzumaki's scattered around the Elemental Nations"
"Jiji, who was my mother?"
"Sorry Naruto I'm not sure it's the right time to tell you"
"Come on Jiji I'm 12, I'm not some idiot kid, I'm sure I can handle it" I said with enthusiasm
The older man could only chuckle
"Alright if you say so, your mother was none other then Kushina Uzumaki, she was a phenomenal Kunoichi, she was also known as 'Konoha's Red Death'.
I faked a shocked face since I already knew who she was
"Did she love me?" asked the blonde boy
"Yes my boy, she loved you more than anything else, you should have seen her reaction when she found out she was pregnant with you."
He already heard this from Kurumi but nonetheless, it made him happy and brought a smile to his face to hear it again.
"Did she leave me anything?"
"I wasn't going to give you her inheritance until you made Chunin but seeing as you are mature to handle it I'll give it to you" said the older man as he pulled out a scroll and said
"It will open with your blood, open it when you get home"
"Okay thanks Jiji, but what about my father?" asked the blonde boy
"I'm sorry Naruto, that information I cannot disclose, you have to make Chunin or be 18"
I decided not to push it, I already got my mother's inheritance, so this trip was already a success.
"Okay thanks Jiji, Ja ne"
(Flashback End)
It was now night and he was resting so he entered my mindscape to spend some time with Kurumi
"Hey, Kurumi-chan, what are your thoughts on my plan to revive Uzushio"
"Is definitely ambiguous, but I believe if anyone can bring Uzushio back to its former glory, it's you, you have my support"
"Thank you Kurumi-chan, Ne, do you really think there are others besides me?"
"I'm not sure, but I'm pretty sure that there are clan members scattered around, the Uzumaki are too stubborn to die out after all."
A small chuckle left my mouth
"Right"
AN: FemKyuubi is going to be the main girl, but I need suggestions for who else I should add to harem so far I have:
Mei
Yugito
Samui
Hinata
Guren
Koyuki
Konan
Pakura
Shion
Karin
Temari
FemHaku
I was thinking of adding 2 other OCs but I'm still thinking about it. Honestly most of the girls I added were so they're going to help Naruto with his subelements. Also, would you guys like a massive harem? It's already pretty large but still, he has to have a pretty big one if he plans to bring back the Uzumaki clan. Let me know.
Ja ne
