AN: An attempt at a Naruto fanfiction. All creative criticism and thoughts are welcome.
Also, I don't own Naruto
'Character thinking'
"Character speaking out loud"
'Demon thinking'
"Demon Talking"
Chapter Six: Wave Part Two
Haku was currently walking through the forest searching for herbs so she can heal her master Zabuza, he underestimated the masked blonde in his battle and he did a number on him.
She couldn't interfere with their battle on Zabuza's orders but that blonde kid was certainly something... to be able to go toe to toe with Zabuza-sama is impressive
Even if she didn't get a good look at his face she found herself attracted to the blonde... but she must rid herself of such thoughts, tools aren't allowed to have feelings. She will eventually have to kill him because he poses a threat to Zabuza-sama
As she was picking up herbs she eventually got to a clearing and she noticed a familiar mop of blonde hair lying on the floor...
Naruto was in his mindscape when in the outside world he sensed a chakra signature he's felt before.
He brought himself to consciousness but didn't open his eyes cause it would reveal he is now awake
'It's him.. he's the boy that fought Zabuza-sama" though Haku as she neared the boy she began to notice his features.. he was attractive, to say the least. She saw his whiskers and the urge to feel them was practically yelling at her face.
As she stared at him an unfamiliar heat began rising on her cheeks
"No, he's a threat to Zabuza-sama... I must use this as an opportunity to eliminate him. Forgive me..."
"You know it's not very nice to stare at someone while they're sleeping... they would think you were ogling at them" whispered a voice to her ear behind her
She gave a very girly 'Eep' and jumped away. She felt like her entire face was burning she began to reach for her basket to get the senbon she had. She only brought 5 senbon and enough water to make 5 more ice senbon.
However when she reached in she felt 3 blades on her neck, she didn't dare turn.
"They're clones, they will kill you if you give me an answer I don't like to the questions I have" said Naruto
'Crap, how did I let myself get caught' cursed Haku
"How did you get behind me?"
"I sensed you coming so I created 4 clones, 1 took my place, the other 3 were incase I needed to engage you in combat. The clones and I hid and waited for you to get closer, and when you did I snuck up on you, when you jumped away, I used the 3 other clones to trap you"
Haku's eyes widened 'He's really dangerous, to come up with a plan like that on the spot'
While Haku was in her thoughts Naruto took that as an opportunity to soak in her appearance. She was pretty, her skin was pale and her hair fell down and she had 2 locks going down the side and framing her face. Her eyes were brown. She wore a pink Kimono and had a choker on her neck.
"So tell me Hunter-nin, why is such a pretty girl like you working for someone like Zabuza" asked Naruto in a flirtatious tone
'Hunter-nin? What is he tal..Oh'
"H..How did you know I was the Hunter-nin?" asked Haku with her guard up but the blush on her face wasn't helping
"Your chakra is the same as the Hunter-nin, I also know that you were hiding in the trees throughout the battle, however, I wasn't sure if you were an actual Hunter-nin or not, but when you hit him you didn't hit a lethal area and didn't kill him on the spot. That was enough proof for me to know you were his accomplice, now answer me, why is someone like you working for Zabuza" It was a genuine question, her chakra didn't have a hint of evil in it, something not expected for someone working for Zabuza
She widened her eyes
"I fight for him because Zabuza-sama is my master, I am his tool, he found me when I was young and he taught me everything I know, so I fight for him."
Naruto raised an eyebrow at this "What's your name"
"Why?" askes Haku but then she felt the blades get closer
"Haku... Yuki Haku"
Naruto widened his eyes. The Yuki clan were Hyoton (Ice Release) users, as far as Naruto knew they were wiped out in the Kiri Bloodline Purges
"I thought the Yuki clan was wiped out" asked the blonde
"I am the last of my clan" she said sadly
"You too huh?"
She looked at him and was about to ask him about it but Naruto started speaking
"You're from the Yuki clan so I take it you know how to use Hyoton?"
"Yes, I do"
Naruto just smirked and brought his hand up and made an ice senbon. Haku's eyes widened
"A...Are you f...from the Yuki clan?" she asked in a hopeful tone. She couldn't believe it, she thought her clan was wiped out
"I'm sorry to disappoint but no, however I do want you to train me with how to use Hyoton, I can only create senbon, Jutsu Scrolls on subelements are rare"
"Why would I train you? Were enemies" asked Haku
Naruto walked up to her and placed his finger under her chin and lifted up slightly and brought his face up to hers. Their faces were now inches away then he whispered
"Because I will give you a prize if you will" he said as he brought his face closer. Haku's face started burning, and she can feel her nether regions starting to feel funny. Something about this boy was making her crazy, whether it was his appearance or aura she didn't know. But what she did know is that he is powerful, she dares even say more powerful than Zabuza. The aura he is releasing is something else.
"Wh..What would my prize be" she asked slightly panting
Naruto turned around and walked away to her disappointment. A slight whimper left her mouth as he walked away. Naruto noticed it and smirked, he also noticed the new scent coming off her, it was a scent he recognized.. Hinata is always giving off that scent when she's around Naruto.
"Tell me, do you hate Gato?" asked the blond
Slightly taken back from the random question she just replied "Yes, I do why?"
"What would you say if I told you I would help you and Zabuza kill Gato and raid his base? I assume you're only working for Gato for the money."
"Yes we are, but why would you do this?"
"Well for one I've developed an intrest in you. Two I hate back stabbers and I know Gato is going to back stab you guys. And three, Gato is rich, I can take his company and get the money, if money is what you want then I'll help with that"
She blushed when he said he had an interest in her "How do you know he's going to backstab us?"
"A little birdie overheard Gato saying something about 'letting the Ninja weaken Zabuza, then he'll attack them, Kill Zabuza and take the girl as a toy' and I'm not sure if I'd want my new little friend to be turned into a toy" he said as he walked up to her and caressed her cheek
She felt herself getting hot and slightly moaned at his touch "H..How do you know all of this"
"Let's just say I have eyes in places. Those eyes helped me find Gato's base, if you want we can go have fun and ransack the place and kill Gato and take his money"
The offer was very tempting, all of her senses were screaming at her obey the boy in front of her.
"O..Okay I'll tell Zabuza-sama what you said"
Naruto began to caress her cheek again and brought his hand to her sides and started caressing it sensually "Thank you Haku-chan, meet me here in 2 days at 10 with your response.."
He leaned down and brought his mouth close to her ear and whispered "...and if I don't like your response then I might have to punish you" finished the blonde as he disappeared in a blur along with the clones.
She fell down to her knees and began panting. She was sweating and it felt like something was burning in her nether regions. She's never felt anything like this before. He's barely been gone for a few minutes and she already missed his presence... it was intoxicating.
She quickly recomposed herself and began to gather herbs for Zabuza's medicine. However a certain blond never left her mind.
"Naruto you truly are evil" said Kurumi with a laugh
"I don't know what you're talking about Kuru-chan" said Naruto innocently
"You almost made her orgasm with that" she replied with a full blown laugh
"I did what I had to do... I don't know about you but having a few Uzumaki Hyoton users is a very tempting offer. I was lucky she is the submissive type, if she wasn't this might have ended very differently" replied Naruto
"Well I can't disagree with you on that... but either way, with the aura you were giving off any girl no matter who would become submissive. Who would have thought that all those seduction books would turn out to be helpful" she said with a giggle
Naruto chuckled "I'll make great use of them anyways my clones found the location, I wasn't expecting this little run in with Haku-chan but I can't say I'm disappointed. However we have to hurry and get there and sign the contract before Kakashi-sensei starts getting suspicious"
"Right, say Haku and Zabuza join you, what are you planning on doing after that? You have to return to Konoha"
"I might try and bring Haku-chan with me to Konoha and have her be a civilian so when we leave she won't become a Missing-nin and can leave, however her Hyoton (Ice Release) might cause problems, they might try and make her a breeding stock. Unless she can hide her ice abilities. But if she wants to continue traveling with Zabuza then I'll let her do that. I'll just meet up with them. But I'm sure Zabuza might go fight in the Bloodline Purges, I could get him to vouch for me when I go look for the woman with Yoton (Lava Release) and Futton (Boil Release)
"Now let's go to the temple" thought Naruto as he began to disappear in a swirl
When Naruto arrived to the destination it wasn't any bigger than a shrine. Kurumi told him that it was to avoid attention and told him where the secret entrance was. To actually entering you had to push Kurumi's chakra into the slap. Once he did his vision started getting blurry and he appeared inside a room. There was a door and that was about it. He looked around and noticed a lot of seals
"What was that?"
"It was a Space Time Jutsu, to where the actual room is. And about the seals, they're traps, anyone who doesn't have my chakra or permission to enter would have died 71 times already, now go through the door"
Naruto made his way towards the door and noticed the door and handle had seals on it too
"Goddamn Kurumi-chan... this is a bit over kill.."
"Yeah yeah whatever just enter"
When he did he noticed the room was enormous. It was huge and there were scrolls littered all over the ground. Hundreds upon hundreds of scrolls.. maybe even thousands. There were old looking scrolls and new looking scrolls. Even Kurumi was a bit shocked at how much scrolls there were.
"Kurumi-chan.. you're insane" said Naruto gaping at the amount of scrolls
She just sheepishly laughed "I told my foxies to get as much scrolls as possible and I never told them to stop so..."
Naruto laughed "That's very like you so I'm not surprised, now where is this summoning contract?"
"Oh yeah I'll lead you to it" she began to lead him. They reached a spot in the wall where Kurumi told him to pour her chakra in and when he did it opened up to reveal a giant scroll
"Aha Sign it! Sign it! Use your blood" said Kurumi excitedly
Naruto signed it in his blood and made 600 clones
"All of you, read 20 scrolls and dispel once you've finished it. Dispel every 20 minutes so my brain won't overlord with information" said Naruto
"Hai" said all the clones in unison as they all picked up a scroll
"Naru-koi when you send clones make sure to lace my chakra with it so it can enter. Now let's get out of here and try out your new summons" she said
"Okay geez geez you're more excited than I am" said Naruto as he left the room
Once outside they went to a clearing
"Usually you would need blood for summons but not for this one"
"Ah so I just do the hand signs and pour chakra then slam my hands down?"
"Yes"
Naruto began running through the hand signs and finished it with a slam
"Kuchiyose no Jutsu"
When he did a giant white fox appeared. It had 4 tails and the tips were black. Around her eyes were black marks
"Huh? Since when do we have a summoner?" said a loud booming feminine voice then she notices a blond human in front of her, she assumed this was her summoner
"What is your name young one" she asked
"Naruto Uzumaki, Kurumi-chan lead me to your summoning contract"
"Kurumi heh? It's been a long time since I've last seen her"
"If you want to talk to her that could be arranged"
"Oh really? Please do"
Naruto put his hand on her paw and took her to his mindscape. He's recently learnt how to do this
Inside their mindscape the fox asked "Where is this place?"
"It's Naru-koi's mindscape" replied Kurumi
The fox looked down and saw the human form of Kurumi
"We're using human form's eh?" she said as she began glowing and the light began to shrink and it eventually died down and out the light there was a beautiful woman. Her hair was tied up in a messy bun and had a white kimono with black trimmings with a black sash. On her head were a pair of white fox hears with black tips. Her 5 swaying tails had black tips as well
She smirked at looked at Kurumi "Naru-koi eh?"
Kurumi gave a blush "Yep, he's my mate"
"Mate? Have you marked each other?"
"No, we can't mark each other until he releases me from my seal and he can't do it until he gets the key. He's going to get it soon though" replied Kurumi
"Well it was nice to see you again" she looked at Naruto who was besides Kurumi
"We'll be honored to have you as our summoner, I'm Hikari, the leader. When we get out of here use a normal amount of Chakra and we'll send you your personal summon. The general abilities of foxes is the ability to shoot out flames and liquified flames, similar to lava but lighter and not as dense. We can temporarily blind the enemy or the enemy's summon with a bright flash that we emit, it can either be directed or area wide, just as a warning if it's area wide your comrades can be affected as well. We are also among the fastest of the summons, faster than the snakes. We can change our size and shrink so we can be used as messengers, however we can only use a human transformation like I am right now once we've fully matured, max sizes depends on each fox minimum is 30 meters tall, it only goes up from that unless they haven't fully matured yet. Each fox also has a special ability, so please summon us when you require our assistance Naruto-sama" she said with a bow
"Oh course Hikari-sama" Naruto replied with a bow of his own
She then looked at Kurumi and smirked
"I'll see you again too" as she began to disappear
Naruto left his mindscape and began running through the hand signs again and slammed his hands down
"Kuchiyose no Jutsu"
In a small poof of smoke a small fox appeared, it was a dark black with orange tips on it's single tail. It has black screla eyes with a tint of orange and white slit. Naruto was escastic to see it had orange. This was automatically the best summon.
"Hi Master, I'm Miyako, your personal summon. I'm sure Hikari-sama told you what we can do, I still haven't gotten my special ability yet and I'm not fully matured but I swear my special ability is going to be super cool and powerful. And in no time I'll be a super cool powerful sexy vixen ready to take on any threat for Master. But right now I can be used as a super cool messenger, I can also attack people with my claws and fire" yipped the small fox in a squeaky voice as it jumped up and down then began to climb on him and rested in his head
"I'm sure you will Miyako-chan" said Naruto as he brought her down and carried her oh his arms and began to scratch her ears much to her pleasure
"Master is nice, I can also tell that Master is very strong too. Please don't send me back Master I wanna stay with you, I promise I'll be a good kit if you let me stay with you here" pleaded the fox
"Yeah sure you can, I see no problem with it. Wait, does it drain my chakra if I have you here for extended time?"
"No Master, I can stay here as long as I like and it won't waste any Chakra, you only need to use chakra to summon me" replied the fox
"I see no problem then Miyako-chan, let's go then"
"Yay!" said the excited fox
"I think you might want to hold on for this" said Naruto as he felt the fox grip his arm tighter. Then began to leave in a swirl
When they arrived near the Wave in a swirl Miyako began to yip excitedly
"Woah Master what was that? That was really cool!" said Miyako
"Glad you like it, it's what's called a Space Time Jutsu that is used to teleport"
"That was super cool and fun Master"
Naruto chuckled "Thank you, I have a question though can other people understand you like I can right now?"
"No, to other people it sounds like I'm yipping. But you can understand us because you're our summoner. When I get older I'll eventually be able to speak your language. Another thing, because I'm your personal summon we can talk telepathically, so If we are in a steal mission you can hive me orders telepathically. You can't do this with any of the others though, like Hikari-sama for example, so that means I'm special" said Miyako said excitedly
"I see, thanks for this information Miyako-chan"
"No problem Master" she replied happily
"Told you they would love you" said Kurumi in his head as she watched the scene
"I knew they would, I mean who wouldn't"
"Oh no! Please don't I don't need you getting a big ego, you'll end up like an Uchiha" said Kurumi hysterically
"Calm down I'm not one to stoop that low" said Naruto with a laugh as he made his way to Tazuna's house with Miyako on his shoulder
Kakashi and the rest of the squad started getting nervous since Naruto hasn't returned and it was starting to get late.
They went out to search for him but didn't find him. Hinata especially was worried for her blond crush. What if something happened? What if he died before she told him how she feels? Most importantly, he died before he could take her virginity. Now she'll never be able to lose it and she will have to die a virgin.
However their worries were cut short when they saw their favorite blond making his way towards the house. He was seemingly talking to someone but where was no one there making them wonder if he lost a few screws. But as he got closer they noticed a small black fox on his shoulder.
They all ran outside (yes even Sasuke). Naruto noticed him and began apologizing
"Hey guys, sorry for my outburst yesterday, he just pushed my wrong buttons and I kind of lost my cool"
They heard the small fox yip then Naruto looked at it and said "No, I'm not a robot, it's just a figure of speech"
The fox yipped again. The squad looked at the blond curiously
"Wait Naruto-kun what is this fox? And you can talk to it?" questioned Hinata
Naruto looked at her with a smile "Yeah, I guess it's kind of like how the Inuzuka can talk to their dogs" Hinata nodded
"First of all Naruto where did you get that fox from?" asked Kakashi
"She started following me" replied Naruto
"So you let it?" asked Kakashi
"Well yeah, I wasn't just gonna leave her"
Kakashi decided to just leave it at that
"Alright Miyako-chan" said Naruto as he pointed at Kakashi
"This is Kakashi-sensei, the one that reads porn all day and my teacher" The fox yipped angrily Naruto then pointed at Sasuke
"This is Sasuke, the emo bastard that broods all day" The fox yipped Naruto then pointed at Hinata
"This is Hinata, the girl I was telling you about, a great friend"
The fox.. growled?
"Now now Miyako-chan no need to be mean" The fox growled in response
"Sorry Hina, Miyako-chan doesn't like you" said Naruto with a frown
"It's okay Naruto-kun, But I'm just glad you're safe, I was getting worried when you didn't return" said Hinata with a blush ignoring Miyako's growl
"Well honestly... I kinda got lost.." said Naruto with a sheepish grin as he rubbed the back of his head
They just sweatdropped then entered the house to have dinner
When they entered the house Naruto was greeted by Inari apologizing to Naruto and the team about what he said.
"It's okay Inari, It was also wrong is me to lash out like that"
"Grandpa told me how you guys defended him from that Ninja in the bridge, so I think we might be saved"
"Yeah, don't worry. If anyone want to go after the old man they'll have to go through me first." said Naruto and Inari just laughed
The rest of the night went as usual, Sasuke refusing to look at Naruto while they shared the room.
However Sasuke was studying the blond, he was an enigma, he managed to hold his own with Zabuza. He still found it hard to believe Naruto was this strong. When he found out Naruto was the dobe of the year he was slightly shocked, but he eventually told then why and he was even more shocked. However he felt like there was something else to him... something darker, the way he killed those 2 Ninja... Without any hesitation or hint of remorse. Not that he'll ever admit it but he found himself not minding the blond, as long as he didn't hold him back.
Haku arrived to the hide out after her little run in with Naruto. Remembering the boy a blush couldn't be held back and made its way to her face
"What's wrong with me? He's a danger to Zabuza-sama yet I didn't try to do anything to stop him.. No.. its not that I didn't try.. it's that I couldn't, in his presence every sense in my body was telling me to not engage him in battle and make him an enemy. Besides... with his offer he might not have to he an enemy, we would help him raid Gato's main base. If we didn't cooperate he would punish me... and maybe if I cooperate he would give me a prize... wait, I never got his name" she shook her head to get rid of her dirty thoughts as her blush deepened
Zabuza stared at his surrogate daughter (not that he'll ever admit it). Ever since she's arrived from her trip to gather herbs for his medicine she's been acting strangely, she would zone out and her face would become red
Oh course Zabuza wasn't stupid, he wasn't an A-Ranked nin for being an idiot. He knew something happened on her trip, however he decided to wait and see if she would tell him herself
"Zabuza-sama, I have something to tell you"
"What is it Haku" asked Zabuza
"Well... you see when I went to gather herbs for your medicine...I met with someone..."
"Just spit it out"
"Well I saw the masked blond boy you fought with on the bridge"
Zabuza raised his small eyebrow "And what of it?"
She started shuffling nervously "He made an offer to me- I mean us"
Zabuza looking at her curiously, it was sure a sight to see his previous stotic almost robot like surrogate daughter act so out of character
"And what was that offer?"
"Well he wanted to team up with us and raid one of Gato's base and kill him. He also said he'll give you money after we raid the base and take his company"
"Why would we need his help? He could hold us back for all I know" Of course Zabuza knew that blonde gaki was no push over what so ever. He could tell he was holding back, but he wanted to see Haku's reaction
She started getting nervous "Zabuza-sama please understand, this boy was holding back in his battle with you. In all honesty even I can't defeat him in battle, when I was going to engage him he was behind me before I even knew it, he also made 4 clones before I even realized it, one of them pretended to be him the real one and the clones were waiting to strike. When he sneaked up on me he caught me by surprise and I jumped away, before I even reached for my senbon he had the 3 clones holding a blade at my neck. All of these was before I even realized what happened, he also figured out I was the Hunter-nin that took you away. He is powerful and I believe it's in our best interest to ally ourselves with him, please reconsider"
Zabuza was slightly shocked. Haku was fast, that was her speciality, if there was someone faster than and was able to sneak up on her would have to he someone powerful indeed.
"Alright, we'll need with him"
Zabuza raised and eyebrow when she gave a small smile with a blush
'This is going to be intresting'
"Suiton: Mizurappa (Water Release: Raging Waves)" said a feminine voice as she split a decent sized stream of water out her mouth
"Good job Hina-chan, you did great, all of this training has paid off"
"T..Thanks Naruto-kun" said Hinata in between breaths
"It's starting to get dark, let's go back to the house, I'll carry you if you want"
Hinata blushed "N..No its okay, I wouldn't want to bother you with tha-Eep!"
"Nope too bad you're too tired to walk there" said Naruto as she swept her off her feet and carried her bridal style
They walked back to the house only to see Kakashi and Sasuke in the house
"So I take it you guys finished your jutsu as well?" asked Naruto
"Yeah, I take it you guys did as well?"
"Yeah I was impressed Hinata competed so quickly.. but again she's a Hyuga so her chakra control is impeccable" Meanwhile Hinata was blushing at the praise
"Alright guys Dinner is ready" they heard Tsunami say
They all walked to the table and had dinner, after dinner they all went to their rooms
Naruto was currently getting out of the shower heading to the room Sasuke and he shared. Tonight was the night that Naruto would meet up with Zabuza and Haku, he would have to see if they actually show up or if they try to ambush them. If that happens Naruto will finally have a reason to try out Kotoamatsukami he didn't want to but he would have no other choice.
It was now 10 and Sasuke was asleep, Naruto woke up and got Miyako up
"Miyako-chan, were going to go meet with a friend. Do you want to come? There is a very high possibility that you'll have to kill if you don't feel comfortable killing yet then you can stay here, because we might raid a very bad guy's base" said Naruto telepathically to Miyako
"No problem Master, I'll kill for you if you need me too, I'll follow your orders, if they're your enemy then they're my enemy" She replied telepathically
"Okay, get on" he said as he patted his shoulder
She climbed on him and got on his shoulder. She gripped him tighter as she began to see her vision swirl signifying that they were using that super cool Space Time Jutsu
Haku has been waiting nervously for the subject of her thoughts recently to arrive.
"Haku where is this friend of yours?" asked Zabuza They've been here for about 5 minutes waiting for him
"He probably got caught up with something" replied Haku in his defense
A few minutes passed and they noticed the space a few feet infront of them began to shift and twirl and out the twirl a black figure can be seen coming out until eventually Naruto materialized and was standing in front of them with a small fox on his shoulder and the mask they saw him with on
"Yo" said the blond as his mask seemed to melt off revealing, something he recently learned to do, since it was made out of his chakra he just manipulated it to make it seem it was melting
Naruto then noticed Haku's change of attire.
She now wore standard Kiri pinstrip outfit stopping at her knees, over this she had a green Haori with white trimmings. On her waist she wore a light brown sash and her Hunter-nin mask hung on it. (Same appearance as canon)
And Zabuza's attire was the same as before
Upon seeing Naruto Haku blushed, something that didn't go unnoticed by the 2 males with her
"So you're the gaki Haku has been going crazy over for these past 2 days?" said Zabuza as Naruto smirked and Haku began sputtering
"I didn't know you felt that way Haku-chan, I'm flattered." said Naruto with a glint in his eyes
Haku now had a blush that would make Hinata jealous
Zabuza chuckled then Naruto spike again
"I apologize, I haven't introduced myself formally. My name is Uzumaki Naruto, pleased to make your acquaintance, and this here is Miyako-chan" he said as he gestured at the fox then slightly bowed as the fox yipped
"I'm Zabuza Momoichi and this here is my student Haku Yuki" Haku looked at him shocked that he didn't refer to her as a tool. However she found a smile make its way to her face.
Zabuza then said "So what is the deal?"
Naruto turned to him and got serious "I know Gato's base inside and out, I'll use a jutsu to make him sign his company over to me, I'll give you guys a good pay and I wouldn't mind being allies with you guys"
Zabuza raised and eyebrow "Why would we wanna be allied with Konoha?"
Naruto chuckled "No no no, you have me wrong, you'll be allied to me, not Konoha"
Zabuza raided his eyebrow at this"Hmm, very well then, if Haku here trusts you then I see no other reason to go against her"
"There is also another part to the deal, Haku-chan will help me with my Hyoton"
Zabuza nodded seeing no problem with this remembering that Haku mentioned he could use Hyoton
Naruto smiled then grabbed Haku's hand making her blush even more then she statted spluttering
"W...w..what are y..you doing Naruto-kun"
"Don't worry Haku-chan I'm not proposing yet"
Her face now resembled a tomato
'Yet?'
However she wasn't able to say anything else because Naruto grabbed Zabuza's shoulder and they began to disappear in a swirl.
AN: Alright so Haku has been introduced, some of you may be complaining that Haku fell for him too easily, my explainion is that in most harem fics I've read they all usually fall for him because he's kind and stuff. Sure he may be able to get one or two girls like that but it's very unlikely that he'll get 5 girls like that, so my version of Naruto will seduce them, and use any means to have them join him, he won't necessarily be dark but he won't hesitate to seduce, kill and/or manipulate people. And some of you may wonder why Zabuza agreed to join him so easily and quickly and it's because he holds Haku in high regard, if she trusts him and fears his power then it means he must be strong, so it wouldn't be in his best intrest to make an enemy of him. If you can't beat them, join them.
But anyways, so Naruto has a summoning contract now, I have a few things planned for Miyako, I MIGHT add her to the harem but I'm not entirely sure If you guys would like that. He's also going to have a bunch of new juteu to use thanks to the room Kurumi showed him, I'm gonna make it clear that most of the jutsus he uses are gonna be made up, if there is an already existing jutsu that does the same thing oh well, also I might also use inspiration from other fics, so if a jutsu he uses seems fimilar to one you've read on another fanfic I might have got it from it. I just don't feel like searching for jutsus online. I'm also going to use google translate to translate it so the translations might be off sometimes, I don't speak Japanese or know much about it.
Well anyways this author's note is already really long, so tell me if your thoughts so far or whether Miyako should join the harem or not.
Ja ne
