Hello people. Thank you to everyone who has been reading my story. It gives more reason for me to work so hard on it. Alright I'll get on with the chapter. Enjoy! (Oh, warning for disturbing imagery of dead bodies in this chapter, supposed to be shocking sorry. Like really it's kinda gruesome so avoid it if you don't have a mature mind) anyway enjoy!

-Miraculous Ladybug and Chat Noir-

Cloud-Control stood menacingly over the citizens of Paris. He lowered his arms, embarrassed by his silliness. Cloud control looked down at his left hand. A grin tugged at his lips as he raised his left arm and showed all of Paris the back of his hand, or more likely, the ring that rested on his marriage finger.

"M'lady!" Chat Whispered urgently. "Look! He's wearing a ring!"

"That must be where the akuma is hiding!" ladybug Replied, also in a whisper, excited to be one step closer to finishing the job. One step closer to getting on with the day. One step closer to getting to home and sleeping.

Cloud-Control let a single command, "CHEER!". A dark glow of black emanated from the ring and a dark beam of purple shot out from it. The beam moved across the citizens. A dark glow now also emanated from the crowd below. A roaring cheer erupted up. Cloud-Control rejoiced at the power he had over the citizens.

"Did you see that?" Whispered Chat, a incey bit intimidated.

Ladybug gave Chat Noir a look of a minimal amount irritation along with harsh sharpness. "Ofcourse I saw it! I'm not blind!" Ladybug replied, hardly up for such blatantly stupid statement such as 'Did you see that' and pretty much most of the usual Chat Noir shenanigans.

"He must be incredibly powerful to control that many people in one go!" Stated Chat

"Alright, let's get this over with quickly!" Said ladybug, as she lept from their hiding spot, moving down towards the akuma.

"Ladybug!" Chat Whispered harshly after her. "What are you doing!" Ladybug, in her exhaustion, was acting out of character. She was being reckless, dismissive and un-calculative. With her acting this way she was bound to get hurt. Not only would her thinking be strained, but so would their abilities. Their exhaustion would slow their reflexes and movement, put ache in their muscles, weaken their attacks and make it harder for his lady to understand the abstract requirements to properly use her lucky charm. And now she was running straight into the fight without him. With an exasperated sigh of anoyance, Chat vaulted from the hiding spot and chased after his lady.

Cloud-control, still basked in his power, was continuing to look into the crowd when a dark butterfly sign appeared over his mask.

"Cloud-Control, be careful. I sense the powers of the ladybug and cat miraculous nearby. You must get them for me or I will take away your control of Paris!" Hawkmoth's voice had the feeling of complete power and control. It emanated such weight that crushed all immediate thoughts other than what he was ordering of him.

"Yes Hawkmoth. I understand. I won't fail." Cloud-control continued to look on at the crowd. Suddenly, after the talk with hawkmoth, he suddenly had a feeling of powerlessness, and decided to use his power again.

" I am not satisfied Parisians!" Cloud-Control began, starting to summon his power. His arm raised and his ring glowing. "I feel you can do better than that! Continue cheering and don't stop till I say, but this time LOUDER!" And with that a beam covered the crowd, forcing them to cheer even louder. It got so loud that Chat Noir and ladybug's ears felt like they were bleeding. It caused the duo to feel dizzy and it took a lot of strength from both of them not to fall unconscious. They currently stood behind an arrangement of metal, that was a wall of the Eiffel Tower. The leaned on the wall for support as the roaring continued. It seemed they would have to deal with it in this fight. Ladybug motioned for Chat to move forward with her, and with them being able to properly communicate, he begrudgingly moved forward. It was so loud that the akuma had not yet noticed their footsteps slowly swaying towards the akuma. Suddenly the duo saw a butterfly symbol appear infront of the akuma. Cloud-Control then swiftly turned towards ladybug and leaped towards her, with the hand in which his ring rested upon.

-Miraculous-

Ladybug swiftly, if not sluggishly, dashed to the side to avoid the sudden attack. Ladybug was unprepared for the sudden change in the situation and in her dash she stumbled and fell to the ground. She was tired and her normally perfect fighting instincts and reflexes had already taken a hit on the first bit of action that appeared. She bet hawkmoth was having a kick out of this. The roaring crowd and the pain in her ears didn't exactly help either. The akuma once again lunged at Ladybug. Still shocked, ladybug didnt have time to role away. Chat Noir saw that ladybug didn't have time to move so he extended his baton to push his lady out of the way. He felt a little bad, as it would have hurt, having his weapon extend into her stomach and move her across the floor. Chat shrank back his baton and launched himself towards ladybug and grabbed her hands. He flipped her up and together that landed on their feet. Entering a defence stance the duo readied for an attack. Cloud-Control jumped back and also stood in a defencive stance. The duo and the akuma stood 30 feet apart. Something was gnawing at Ladybug's mind. Why was Cloud-Control getting so close and personal? didnt he control people with a beam from his ring? Unless...

"CHAT NOIR!" Ladybug yelled, trying to communicate with Chat. "I THINK HE ACTUALLY HAS TO TOUCH US BEFORE HE CAN CONTROL US!"

" AND THAT IS WHY HE HAS BEEN TRYING TO TOUCH YOU!" Chat Noir replied with a shout. He stared at the akuma. Cloud-Control was still standing in a defensive position. He was waiting for us to attack. "LADY, I THINK HE WANTS US TO ATTACK SO HE CAN TOUCH US WITH HIS POWER!" Chat shouted, still having to compete with the ear bleeding sounds of the crowd.

"GREAT OBSERVATION, KITTY!" Congratulated Ladybug "I'VE ALSO ALSO NOTICED THAT HE SEEMS TO ONLY BE REACHING FOR ME WITH HIS LEFT HAND! THE HAND WITH HIS RING! WHAT IF HE CAN ONLY CONTROL US IF HE TOUCHES US WITH HIS LEFT HAND!"

"WHICH MEANS WE CAN AVOID BEING CONTROLLED IF WE JUST AVOID HIS RING HAND!" Finished Chat Noir "ALRIGHT LETS GO AND KICK THAT AKUMA'S BUT!"

Ladybug and Chat slowly creeped around Cloud-Control till they were on opposite sides of him. He now realized the position he was now in. He was pinched inbetween the superhero and heroine. Both of them had their weapons at the ready and at any moment they would attack and it would be hard to defend himself on two sides.

Ladybug nodded towards Chat Noir. Both of the heroes lunged. Chat attacking from the right of Cloud-Control, Ladybug from the left. It was a good plan. Attack from two sides and pinch him in the middle, incapacitate him and remove the akuma. Basic stuff, but Cloud-Control had different plans. He jumped up into the air and landed behind Ladybug. He lunged forward and shoved Ladybug in the back with his left hand. "Gotcha!" Cloud-Control rejoiced. Ladybug turned around in shock and Chat Noir stared at him with rage and a tinge of disappointment. Disappointment towards himself by letting his Lady getting hit. "Now... what would you like to do first?" Cloud-Control taunted. "I could force you to remove your miraculous? Or maybe I could force you to jump of the Eiffel Tower as well?"

Chat Noir looked at him with a face full of fear along with unparalleled hate and disgust.

A butterfly outline appeared over Cloud-Control's face. After a few seconds, it disappeared and he looked towards Ladybug with anticipation. " Hawkmoth has given me a great idea! I think I'll make you hurt. Don't worry, I won't hurt you physically, Nooooooo, Nooooo. What I'm going to do is much worse!" Cloud-Control raised his ring and spoke with a voice that penetrated the still roaring cloud. "I command you, Ladybug, to feel a special kind of pain. The pain of loss, of loneliness, abandoning, desperation and regret. See all the pain I want you to see!" A beam of purple light escaped his ring and connected with Ladybug. In an instant Ladybug fell to the ground, on her knees, and broke into a horrific wail.

-Miraculous-

(Murdery bit in bold, skip this part if you want)

Marinette stood outside of her family's bakery, a sign in the window showing it was closed. Marinette walked through the door and the familiar chime of the bell dounded as she walked in. She was incredibly confused. She could have sworn she had been fighting a supervillian but now she was at home. Now that she thought about it, that couldn't be right. Ofcourse she hadn't been fighting, that was preposterous. Marinette called for Tikki but got no reply. A spike of worry entered her mind and she instinctive lifted her hands to feel for the Miraculous. Phew. They were still their. Tikki must just be in my room. She walked through the bakery and into her home. "Mama? Papa?" Marinette called, but she got no reply. She walked into the tv room and went to switch the light on. Nothing, Ofcourse. Marinette walked forward and she tripped on something. She landed on the floor with a slam but was lucky to only be hurt hard enough to get a bruise. The lights came on in the room but in a slight tint of red. Marinette looked at her arms and saw that she now wore the attire of her superhero counterpart. Marinette was so confused. She swore she never said the transformation words. "That's weird. Spots off!" Nothing happened. "Spots off!" She tried again. Weird. She looked back down at her hands and was surprised by what she saw. A knife rested in her palm, covered in blood. Shock flooded through her and she threw the weapon to the floor. What the hell was going on. Marinette turned around to leave the room but what she saw had a yelp escape from her throat. In the door way of the room lay a pile of bodies, sat against each other, a pile of five of the people she found most dear. Sabine, Tom, Grandpa, Grandma and Chat Noir. The light in the room turned more red as thick tears of red streamed from Marinette's eyes. A cross cut had been slashed across each one of their throats and it had spilled blood down their clothes. Slits rest on each of their wrists and multiple stab wounds could be found across their stomach, ribs and chest. Marinette screamed out in agony and dread. She stared at her family and partner, tears of blood escaping her eyes, along with the eyes of the dead before her. She turned her head at the knife she had thrown away. Had she done this? Yes, she had! But why? Why did she do this? She crawled over to the knife and stared at it, crimson liquid covering it. She lifted it to her chest and all went dark again.

-Miraculous-

(Murdery bit over with, continue reading)

Marinette woke up, sitting on a bench in the school, what just happened? She was sad. Why was she sad? Why was she crying? Marinette wiped away the salty tears from her cheaks and stood up. People where headed home. School must be over, she concluded. She gathered herself, still confused on why she was so upset, and headed towards the exit. She stopped at the stairs and saw her three best friends Alya, Nino and Adrien. "Hey guys!" She shouted, running down to them. The trio tilted their heads in her direction and the reaction that stretched across their faces hurt Marinette like a slap to the face. They looked at her with a combination of hate, disgust and disappointment. All three of them. "What's wrong?" Marinette whispered, scared any louder would cause them to attack her. "What's wrong!"Alya started anger seeping into her words like a venom " What's wrong is you threatening Lila!"

"WHAT! I never threatened Lila! She threatened me!" Yelled back Marinette, upset that her best friend would believe she would ever threaten anybody.

"Ohhhh sure!" This time Nino was the one that spoke. "You can't honestly believe that we would think Lila would so something like that."

Marinette looked to Adrien, desperate for any kind of support. "Adrien." Marinette begged, while tears filled her eyes." Please tell me you believe me. You of all people must know that Lila is lying!"

Adrien spoke with a harshness she hadn't ever before heard in his voice. "Lila has lied a little in the past, but she would NEVER threaten somebody. Your a liar and you're pathetic. No one wants to be friends with someone as cruel as you. Never talk to me, or anyone of us again!"

At the loss of her last bit of hope she ran. She ran and ran till she found a dark ally way. She had been deserted and betrayed by her friends. Lila had accomplished her mission. Marinette had never felt more alone. She let herself break down into sobs and tears.

-Miraculous-

Ladybug screamed and cried and sobbed and slouched. Her body was here but her eyes where absent looking, as if she weren't properly there. The sound of ladybugs pain peirecd the sound of the croud and shook Chat Noir to the bone.

"STOP IT, CLOUD-CONTROL!" Yelled Chat Noir. "PLEASE THIS IS HORRIBLE!"

"It can all go away Chat Noir. Just give me your miraculous!" Replied Cloud-Control, who's voice still peirced the crowd, just like his lady's yells.

"FINE! YOU WANT MY MIRACULOUS, I'LL GIVE IT TO YOU!" Shouted Chat, launching himself up and behind the akuma before it could react. "CATACLYSM!" A serge of destructive power flowed through him into his hand. Chat now raised his destructive claws towards the akuma's face. The croud stopped and the only sound that resonated around the Eiffel Tower was that of Ladybug's cries. "Now, listen here, Hawkmoth." Started Chat, poring every bit of menace he had into his voice. "You are going to release the akuma from his ring, and release Ladybug of her pain or I swear I will have no problem cataclysming this man to dust. I will do anything to make sure my lady's pain will end. DO! IT! NOW!"

Hesitantly, Cloud-Control nodded and went slack. Chat stepped back and Cloud-Control dropped to the ground and removed his ring, throwing it to Chat. Hawkmoth may be evil but he had no intention of killing a man today. Chat Noir caught it, using cataclysm to destroy it. The akuma victim transformed back and ladybug stood slowly and caught the akuma that was trying to fly away.

Ladybug fell back to her knees and puked, disgusting images still stored in her mind. Chat ran to his lady and helped her up. Ladybug, still weak, summoned the Miraculous ladybugs and fixed everything to how it was before the attack, but to her disappointment, her memories of the events stayed. Chat Noir's ring beeped. He had to go. He didn't want to. He wanted to comfort his lady, but his identity had to stay secret. So he left, leaving ladybug to recover on her own. After what felt like and hour, but what was more like 5 minutes, Ladybug pulled out her yo-yo and started to swing back towards the school.

-End Chapter 4-

Thank you for reading chapter 4. I liked writing most of this chapter just the Murdery stuff I kinda didn't like. Anyway I hope you enjoyed this even with the creepy bits and that you enjoy your day. Next chapter should come out sometime in the next week. See you then! Oh also... longest chapter yet!