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XIONAF: 1. The OC will be introduced in this chapter. I'm sorry if I didn't mention that in the last chapter.

In this chapter I will refer to someone formerly in the Chantry as a nun as I don't know the proper term however, I think the proper title is Mother (Mother Giselle). In this story, I will also need some help synchronizing the calendars of each continent. As in my second story, I would like the Inquisition events just beginning and Robert's Rebellion just to have ended.

NOTE: I don't claim to be an expert in these stories so please inform me if there is an error that is not corresponding with the canon lore. However, I will change some things in order to fit it in with my narrative.

The reason I wanted to rewrite this chapter was the fact I wanted to extend and perhaps a bit of description.


[General POV]

The fade, a metaphysical realm separated by the veil. A greenish haze surrounded everything coated in darkness. Where the Golden City once stood now corrupted were in -395 Ancient seven magisters opened the gate with blood magic triggering the First Blight. That is the past now, for now, there is an opportunity to redeem themselves.

There stood three desire demons conversing with one another. The first one, the leader, was the tallest standing 6'3 with a busty figure wearing a golden microkini covering her large luscious breast. With her waist curving inwards and hips going outwards. It was the perfect hourglass figure. Abs were visible on her body showing off her impressive physique and sundry scars demonstrating that she was the alpha of the group. Her gluteus maximus was also very nice curving outwards for a very appealing figure, She had four horns protruding out of her head which was gained when she proved herself to her group. She had soft blue eyes, feminine eyebrows, and red nail polish and lipstick. Crespa also had blonde hair which overall looked like the ultimate femme fatale. Crespa was the leader because of her unusual talent to lead, solve problems, and of course, in what is considered the apogee of her life, her ability to seduce. Unusually her cherry hasn't popped because she only likes to be a cocktease but never actually doing it. Despite being a leader she has developed a quite flirty and risque personality. When she worked as a nun with her two best friends she was celibate however she was forcefully raped thankfully her cherry wasn't popped as someone helped her. Unfortunately, she died of blood afterwards. As a spirit, she tried to keep her chastity a lot of times until she was turned into a Desire Demon as a demon almost got her chastity. Now to her, it's not sex that gives her pleasure, it's the pleasure of denying it.

The second one stood at 6'1 with a figure not as busty as her former but still filled in quite nicely. She wore clothing that covered more than the leader but still is considered skimpy showing lots of skin near her cleavage, hips, and legs. She had slitted, red eyes with black thick hair. Her ass was also not too shabby. She was the second-in-command but unlike Crespa, Amelia was quite reckless and boisterous. After Crespa died she, along with her best friend Andarina, wept and became depressed eventually turning to prostitution. They were quite famous throughout Thedas known as the "Sleazy Sisters". However, later on, they were contracted with STDS which is why you don't become a hoe. In the fade, they succumbed to their lust with only their leader standing above them.

The final seductress stood at 5'7 with a relatively short figure. She had a lithe figure with petite mammaries and buttocks. She wore a sexy bikini with a patterned bra covering her breast and a red cloak that covered her crotch(Think of Princess Leia Slave Costume). Also wearing a golden collar with chains covering her body. Out of the whole, she was the most submissive and kinkiest. When she was a prostitute with Amelia, she was the most forward one and was the one who approached potential clients. In the fade, she still is a prostitute and a slut but if there was anything she would put above sex it was her friends.

Andarina spoke out first, "Hey why don't we fuck that man-meat over there. You know there the most powerful." She purred pointing towards the demon practically. With an expression of pure excitement. Amelia roared in agreement, "Yes, we are open for business, after all, I call dibs on riding." She smiled in anticipation. Crespa while usually smiling in agreement for being to tease someone was mysteriously frowning.

[Crespa POV]

Dovakhiinnn... The Dovakhiinnn comes... Who was he/she? And why am I thinking about it? For the past three months, I have been thinking about this Dovakhiin. I should be thinking about getting revenge on men. They all wanted one thing, power. Whether it be money, influence, please, it was the same. I usually hid my actions between sweet words but in truth, I just wanted my revenge. But now I just think about this Dovakhiin. AAH!

"Crespa.."

"Crespa"'

"Crespa!"

"CRESPA!"

What the hell? I'm not this unaware of my environment. "Hey," I responded. My friends looked at me with a concerned expression. Andarina questioned first, "You alright sister, look for the past three months, you've been distracted. Tell us." She cupped my hands pleading while Amelia joined in, "She's right you know, we care about you." I looked at them with sadness no... regret. "I'm fine just... go," I said to them. They hesitantly let go of my hands. I turned around and started walking towards the fade.

Dovakhiin's Lokaal...

What the... A blinding light appeared forcing me to cover my eyes.

Trust me you must. Guide you towards your destiny I must

Destiny? To hell with it. If I can get revenge permanently then maybe. The light guided towards me to a place called King's Landing. It smelled like absolute shit. But it was warped, was this a dream? I entered the castle and ascended to a room where I heard voices. I leaned on the door.

A twisted voice spoke out, "Bring order into chaos. Bring chaos into order."

A wispy, cold voice spoke out, "The Eternal Winter shall come to truth. None shall oppose us."

A guttural voice spoke out, "Thy Kingdom come, Thy will be done on Nirn as it is in 'Heaven'."

The voices spoke in unison: "SO SHALL IT BE!"

And suddenly I felt very sleepy. No... I must return.

[Jaehaerys Black POV]

"Father, is it true, in my dreams Rhaegar and spoke of a prophecy... That I would bring chaos and destruction," I spoke out loud. His face paled and looked down in shame. I knew it, I thought. Catelyn stood up meanwhile surprising me pointing at me saying, "YOU ARE A MONSTER!" Slap! A resounding slap was heard throughout the room leaving me surprised while Ned lead her out of the room. By the seven! She is not this scornful. No one dared to speak after that and I looked at everyone see shock and surprise as

"Son, please listen to me the prophecy is true but-"

Tears threatened to flow out of my eyes. My mother, my whole life is a lie. Everyone who said it to me. It was true. I shakingly said, "So I am a monster."

"No please listen you are a human being. You are a person. You are family. We love you no matter what." he said as he grabbed my shoulders. Everything I knew and he didn't even bother to tell me why I was outcasted.

"Why didn't you tell! I was left in the dark. I tried to believe mothers words but it's true I am a monster!"

"Jon No! Listen please if you knew you would probably do a rash action like right."

I thought about and it was true I would do something rash.

"Please just leave me alone. I need to think." I started as I started to walk to the door.

"Jon come back. We have to do this as a family. You are not a monster!"

"You don't know whats it's like to be a monster!" As soon as I shouted that I immediately regret it as I saw there hurt and concerned expressions. Pity. I did not like people pitying me: I am strong, I smart, I am independent, and I don't need help. With a solemn expression, I walked out the door confused and lost.

[Crespa POV]

By the maker! Where am I?

"Heh, heh, boy's we got some fresh meat."

I opened in eyes in fear. There were four bandits surrounding me in what looked like in an isolated, winter environment. They're gonna rape me! No, no, no. I was gagged. With tears threatening to flow out of my eyes. Speaking of eyes, why were all their eyes red.

I tried to escape to my restraints but I couldn't. In fact, the red mist surrounded my restraints. Where were my powers? I looked at myself and saw my default form. This can't be. I can normally manifest into whatever I want but now I can't. There has to be something else at play.

Snap!

I looked up to see a dark-haired boy suddenly snapping one of the bandit's neck. Boy's this age shouldn't be able to kill! He skillfully outmaneuvered the three bandits and slashing and dicing their bodies. How could someone so young kill easily? Fear. I only experienced this emotion rarely and now is the time. He started approaching see his grey and red eyes. He smiled at me with joy yet there was a tinge of sadness. I started moving backwards. Unlike other men, he didn't scan which is interesting was it because he was innocent or he is disciplined. No, he must have seen stuff. Sadness. No child shouldn't have to do that even if they were a boy. Was he an orphan?

"Don't be afraid, I've come to help." I don't know why I trusted him. But that disarming smile was something I did not expect. He cut open my ropes and the first I thing I did was hug pushing him between my breast. It surprised, and I looked at him blushing. No, wait. He didn't even attempt to grope me. Maybe he suppressed his feelings during combat this made me think, was power, not his motive? I was confused, years of attempted rape left a scar on me. Can I give him a chance, raise him? Maybe, just this once.

"Your welcome miss." he smiled. That smile was intoxicating filling me with emotion not felt in a long time. Joy. I smiled back. The Hell? Wait wasn't there four?

Suddenly there was a knife on his neck. I stared at the person behind with a cold glare but staring back was the same red eye. My powers grew back but not fully. Maybe the fewer people influenced by the red glare the less power the entity took. I teleported behind him killing him with the snap of the neck.

It was too late. I looked at his neck spilling out with blood and eyes. His eyes were without emotion and saw trauma. A kindred spirit. NO! He will not grow up hating everyone. He can grow up with happiness with a kind mother. I don't know what made me snap but I just wanted to give him a chance, unlike every other boy.

I went down looking at him worriedly and tried to plug his wound. It was too light as I saw the light leave his eyes. Were tears leaving my eyes? I just met him but something tells me he needs to survive after all he did save my life.

ROAR!

I have knocked down on the ground again.

Worry not Dovahiin's Teacher

There was that voice again. Powerful and ancient. Another roar was heard out. I looked and saw a DRAGON! Was that an Arch-Demon? No no. Too small to be an arch-demon but too big to be a baby.

"Call me Paarthurnax, there is still time. But in order to heal, we must come to a land far, beyond your imagination."

I nodded at him and got on with the boy. I looked at him in concern. He has to survive.

"Hold on."


That ends this chapter. Please leave reviews on how I can improve my writing. Next "Preparation For Fate"