Previously on Dragon Ball Super Aftermath: Rewritten:


A massive red pillar of light slams on the ground, causing it to shatter completely. A figure walks out of the light, as it fades. A fox figure glances toward the two, its eyes glowing red.

Piccolo gets into his fighting stance, gritting his teeth. "Stay on your guard, Gohan. I sense killing intent in this being."

Rittuir, Liquiir's counterpart, begins to walk toward him, his hands around his back. "Greetings, mortals of Universe Seven... You are lucky that I came, and not the others... I am the nicest out of them... Perhaps, you'd like to join us on our quest to rule the multiverse...?"

"Cut the crap!" Gohan yells, obviously not interested in his offer. "Why would I join you?!"

Rittuir smirks, some sort of red essence forming in his hands. "Join us, and we can obtain power that can surpass the Omni King..."

Piccolo clenches his fists, a white aura flaring up around him. "We would never join you! Over my dead body!"

The two of them launch at Rittuir at full speed, as they both slam a punch in his face, his head budging slightly. "...I see, then I will have to force you to join us... I was hoping I would not have to fight you, but I suppose I have no choice but to do so..."

His eyes pulse, as a massive shock wave sends Gohan and Piccolo crashing across the landscape, shattering part of it. Rittuir launches after them, the red essence gathering in his hands. "Now, join us!"


Chapter Four


Broly gets up, blood running down his shoulder. "Gck... He's powerful... I must... I must protect this planet."

He roars loudly in rage, as he launches at Munod at full speed, barraging him with a volley of punches. Munod dodges all of the punches with ease, as he slams his fist into Broly's face, sending him across the landscape.

Broly manages to stop himself in midair, panting heavily. He launches at Munod at full speed, roaring. Before he could swing a punch, Munod roars, as he slams a kick in his gut, nearly knocking him completely unconscious.

Broly free falls to the ground, crashing onto it. He gets up on his knees and hands, panting some more. Blood drips on the ground in front of him, as he looks up, his rage beginning to spike up even further. "Grrr..."

Munod levitates onto the ground, smirking. "You're quite the persistent one... However, you are at your limit, mortal. Join us, or you will have to face me..."

Suddenly, Broly snaps. He roars loudly, as the ground shatters beneath him. His hair begins to spike up like a Super Saiyan, as his irises turn a dark yellow. He continues to roar, a green aura spiking up around him.

Broly had entered his Wrathful transformation. He launches at Munod at full speed, catching him off guard. He lands an uppercut on his face, sending him back a little. "Hrh!"

He begins to barrage Munod with many punches and kicks. Munod squints at him, as he begins to once again dodge the attacks. He lands a punch on Broly's face, sending him back a little.

Broly growls as he launches at Munod at full speed, swinging a punch at him. He catches the punch, as the two of them vanish, shockwaves traveling through the air.

They appear above the ground, clashing punches and kicks. Munod would be toying with him at this rate. He grabs Broly, slamming him in the gut multiple times, before throwing him to the ground.

Broly gets up, yelling loudly. He opens his mouth widely, as he charges up a massive energy blast in it, launching it right at Munod. Munod punches it away, as it causes a massive explosion in the air.

Broly vanishes above Munod, launching a volley of energy blasts at him. Munod's eyes pulse, as all of the blasts are deflected elsewhere. He slams Broly in the face, sending him into a rock. "You're annoying, mortal..."

The smoke is blown away by the wind coming from Broly. He raises his hands, charging a massive green energy sphere. He roars, launching it directly at Munod.

Munod creates a miniature white Hakai sphere and flicks it toward the sphere, similar to what Toppo did to Frieza. The green energy sphere is immediately erased by the Hakai, as Broly stands there in shock. "GRRH!"

Suddenly, Munod launches right at Broly, slamming a fist with great force into his gut. Broly coughs spit and blood out of his mouth. "I...impossible..."

Munod aims an energy blast right into his face. He fires it, launching Broly into space, greatly injuring him. "That should have damaged him enough..."

He vanishes above Munod, the same red essence that Rittuir had in his hands. "And now, you shall join the Evil Gods, Saiyan. You will obtain limitless power and we will rule the multiverse together..."

Broly was losing hope in winning. He couldn't win... all of these years of getting stronger. He'd have protected his father, but he was killed. He'd have protected his new friends, but... they would get killed by this evil being.

No... this couldn't end... He couldn't just let it end like this. Kakarot and his friend had shown him a Saiyan's true purpose, and that is... TO FIGHT...

Broly's hair begins to flash yellow, as he roars loudly, a massive green pillar of light shooting from him into space. The entire galaxy cluster shakes with his increase in power. His pupils disappear from his eyes, as he launches at Munod, slamming him in the face.

Munod is launched into the planet, causing the landscape to completely shatter. He flies toward Munod, as they both clash punches on the surface, causing craters to form everywhere.

Munod laughs crazily, slamming Broly in the face. "DO YOU BELIEVE THAT YOU COULD KILL AN EVIL GOD?! THIS POWER IS AMAZING!"

Broly launches at Munod, as he charges two energy blasts, attempting to slam them into his gut. Munod dodges the blasts, as he slams a full-force kick onto Broly's back, sending him into a mountain. "PERSISTENT BASTARD!"

Broly flies toward him, as his muscles begin to bulk up even more. His shirt completely rips, as he continues to barrage Munod with punches.

Munod clashes with him, as they vanish once again, shockwaves traveling through the air at crazy speeds. Broly flies up, as he launches another gigantic green energy sphere at Munod. "GROOOAAAARRRR!"

Munod holds out his hand, stopping the massive energy sphere, his arm shaking a bit. "THIS IS NOTHING, YOU FOOL! YOU ARE ONLY DELAYING THE INEVITABLE!"

Broly roars once again, as his hair flashes green. His aura becomes a lot larger, as he enters his full power. He begins to overpower Munod, as he is consumed by the green energy sphere. Munod roars in pain, as a massive explosion happens, completely shattering part of the planet's landscape.

Munod falls out of the explosion, as he is barely able to land on his two feet. "Tch... I did not expect this Saiyan to be so strong! I will have to use my full power in order to take him down."

Munod roars loudly, as his muscles begin to bulk up. His eyes turn into the Ultra Instinct silver eyes, but they are dark red. A black aura appears around him, as he enters the true form of Ultra Instinct. "Behold... This is... the Dark Era..."

The two of them launch at each other, as they throw a full-force punch, clashing fists. A shockwave travels across the entire universe, causing it to shake.

Broly feels his right arm break, as he roars, being sent back. Munod laughs loudly, raising his hand outward. "No matter how many powerups you go through, it will not be enough to faze me..."

Broly raises his left arm, as he yells loudly, launching a volley of Ki blasts at him. Munod walks toward him, dodging each of the Ki blasts. "Give it up..."

Munod had enough of this battle. He appears in front of Broly, as he slams his fist into his face with full force, breaking his nose. "GRAHHHH!"

He then karate chops Broly into the ground, destroying the land once again. Broly's hair fades back to normal, as he completely loses consciousness from the force of Munod's power.

Munod powers down, as he lands next to Broly, looking down at him. "It looks like he is finally unconscious... Now it is time to convert him to our side..."

He raises his hand, as the red essence surrounds Broly, engulfing him. A pillar of darkness shoots from him, as he stands up, his eyes pitch black with glowing red pupils. "We will take down the Omni King..."

Suddenly, a bunch of power surges through Broly, as he roars, sending wind everywhere. Munod chuckles, smirking at him. "Indeed we shall. You have gotten a massive power boost when being converted, Broly..."

He replaces a hand on Broly's shoulder, as they shoot off to another location in the entire multiverse. Who knows where they would go?


Toppo gets up, panting from the damage he has taken. He vanishes next to Dyspo, helping him up. "Dyspo, get up. We cannot lose against this being."

Dyspo gets up, walking toward Denpa. "Toppo, I'll distract him. You enter full power." Dyspo looks down at the ground, closing his eyes. A faint purple aura begins to appear around him.

He takes off toward Denpa at full speed, as he slams him in the face with a punch. Denpa skids back a little, as he looks toward Dyspo, squinting at him. "You think that is going to work?"

Denpa swings a kick at Dyspo, but he dodges it. Toppo looks down, as he clenches his fists. He begins to roar loudly, the ground beginning to crack underneath him. "HAAAAA!"

Dyspo flashes across from Denpa, running around him. He creates afterimages, as he vanishes above him, swinging a kick down at him. Denpa catches it, as he slams him on the ground, causing him to cough spit. "GUCK!"

Dyspo leaps back, panting. He yells loudly, as he launches at Denpa at full speed. He brings down a kick right at his face. "JUSTICE... KICK!"

The kick hits Denpa head-on, as he is launched across the landscape, crashing through rocks. Dyspo lands, smirking. "Take that!"

Toppo continues to roar loudly, as wind is shooting from him. The sky is flashing, as lightning is striking everywhere. His muscles begin to bulk up, his eyes flashing.

Denpa gets up from the rocks, not being fazed. He chuckles, brushing some dust off of him. "Is that all a warrior of Universe Eleven can achieve? You may be fast, but you cannot compare to my speed..."

Dyspo slams his foot on the ground, causing it to shatter. He yells, launching at the Evil God at full speed. He swings a kick, but Denpa catches it, as he slams Dyspo in the gut, causing him to cough blood.

Denpa then throws Dyspo, as he is launched crashing through the landscape, shattering it. He slams into a rock, as he falls onto the ground, unconscious. "What a weakling... Hopefully, the fat one can prove to be more of a challenge..."

Toppo finished his transformation, as he lets out a roar, his power shattering part of the landscape. He enters his Full Power God of Destruction form, looking up at Denpa. "Hmph... In order to defeat a god, I had to become one..."

He takes off toward Denpa, catching him off guard. He nails Denpa in the face, launching him across the landscape. "HAAA!"

Toppo begins to knock him through the air, causing shockwaves. He mauls Denpa into the ground, following it with a Hakai. Denpa rolls out of the way, as Toppo vanishes next to him.

He swings a punch at Denpa, as he blocks it, being sent back. Toppo launches after him, as he slams him in the gut, launching him even further, slamming him into the rocks. "HURAHHH!"

Denpa gets up from the rocks, bruises all over him. "How infuriating!" Suddenly, Toppo launches next to him, charging up an energy blast.

"OH SHII-!" Denpa is consumed by the blast, as he is launched across the landscape once again. When the smoke clears, he is standing there, grunting.

"Impressive that you are still standing, destroyer," Toppo says. Denpa opens his eyes, smirking. Suddenly, he launches at Toppo, beginning to barrage him with a ton of punches. Toppo blocks it, skidding back heavily.

The force from the punches causes a mountain behind Toppo to collapse, as the two travel through the air, clashing blows, and punches. Shockwaves travel across the landscape.

Denpa is getting bored with the battle. Toppo yells, swinging a heavy punch at him. He dodges it, as he slams Toppo in the face with a kick, sending him into the ground. "You are quite strong, but you are nowhere near my level!"

Toppo flies back toward him, launching a barrage of Hakai Spheres at him. Denpa launches toward him, knocking them out of the way with his bare hands. He swings a kick at Toppo's head.

Toppo blocks the kick, being sent toward the city. "Tch!" He stops himself in midair, as he roars loudly, creating two Hakai spheres, as he presses them together, forming them into a gigantic one. "HAAAAA!"

He roars loudly, as he launches it at Denpa, sending it crashing through the air. "HAKAI!"

Denpa raises his fists, as they begin to vibrate, glowing brightly. "I am sure it would be lovely to see your poor little civilization get erased by your own Hakai!" He slams his fist into the massive Hakai, sending it back toward Toppo.

Toppo curses, as he raises his hand outward. The Hakai comes toward him, as he roars, slamming his hands into it. He begins to be sent toward the city, as he begins to slow himself down. "UGGHH! I CAN'T... STOP IT!"

He continues to struggle, doing all he can to prevent his own Hakai from reaching the city and erasing it. He would begin to lose the tug of war, as he and the Hakai start getting closer to the city. "JIREN!"

Suddenly, the Hakai is launched into the sky into outer space. A tall muscular figure appears in front of Toppo, his arms crossed. Jiren had saved Toppo and the city.

Toppo powers down, as he falls toward the ground, panting heavily. Denpa and Jiren make eye contact, as they vanish to an area in the middle of nowhere. "So, you are the strongest warrior in the multiverse, eh?"

Jiren doesn't respond. He uncrosses his arms, as he begins to walk toward Denpa, the entire universe shaking from his energy. Denpa clenches his fists, as he takes off toward Jiren. "Finally, a worthy opponent!"

Denpa swings a punch at Jiren's face, as it is stopped in midair by an invisible force. "EH?!" Suddenly, he is barraged from all directions, as Denpa is launched miles away, flattening mountains.

Jiren takes off after him, as he is behind Denpa. "I expected more from an Evil God." He mauls Denpa into the ground, causing him to cough spit. "AGH!"

Denpa manages to stop himself before impacting the ground. "Heh... An interesting challenge you are!" He launches at Jiren, as the two of them begin to clash blow after blow.

Shockwaves shatter the landscape some more, as Jiren slams Denpa in the face with an invisible force. Denpa growls as he launches at him, throwing a punch. The punch gets stopped in midair, as Jiren's eye pulses red, sending Denpa miles away, crashing through a mountain. "AGHHH!"

Denpa launches at him, his eyes glowing. "Now you have made me angry! I am getting bored of toying with you and your friends!" He slams his fist into Jiren's face, knocking him back. "Tch."

Jiren launches at him, as the two begin to barrage each other punch, clashing blow to blow again. Lightning bolts and energy shoot out of them. Jiren slams him in the face, sending him back.

Denpa shoots back at him, as he slams his fist into Jiren's gut. "Grh!" He then roars, mauling Jiren to the ground.

Jiren stops himself before he impacts onto the ground, looking up. He raises his fist, as he charges a heated energy ball in it.

He launches the raw energy ball at Denpa. Denpa blocks him, as it sends him into the sky, resulting in a massive explosion. "UGWAHH!"

There would be silence, as Jiren lands on the ground, waiting for Denpa. Suddenly, electricity shoots off in the sky, as a white aura is now around Denpa. "Fine... I will get serious now..."

In the blink of an eye, he is in front of Jiren, as Jiren is barraged from all directions, being launched across the air. "GRR!"

He launches back at Denpa, swinging a heavy punch at him. Denpa catches the punch with one hand, as it shakes a bit. "Not a bad punch, but you are clearly outmatched!"

He grabs Jiren's face, as he shoots at the ground, slamming him into it. He then follows it with a Ki blast, resulting in a massive explosion. When the smoke clears, Jiren is standing there, a hole in his shirt.

Jiren yells loudly, as a fiery aura appears around him. He would be in his Full Power as of now. He'd be angry, but he calms himself down.

He takes off toward Denpa, beginning to barrage him with extremely fast punches. Denpa blocks it, as he roars, clashing a punch with Jiren. The two of them continue to battle for a little while.

Toppo stands up, looking up at Denpa, panting heavily. "Grrh... Jiren... I... I'd help you if I could, but we'd just get in the way..."

Denpa's current state would still be slightly stronger than Jiren's full power. He blocks one of Jiren's punches, as he spins around, kicking Jiren in the head, sending him flying. "Tch!"

Jiren lands on the ground, getting up. He looks up toward Denpa, as he clenches his fists, them beginning to glow brightly. This was all or nothing.

He roars, as he launches a MASSIVE heated energy ball, the same one that he fired at Goku right before he went into the Mastered state of Ultra Instinct. It comes toward Denpa, as he raises his hands, being sent back by it. "GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!"

Jiren yells, pressing with full force. "OWARI DA!" Denpa loses the power struggle against it, as he is launched across the landscape, a massive explosion destroying part of the planet's landscape.

Suddenly, Denpa vanishes behind him, laughing. He clenches his fist, it glowing with white energy. Jiren turns around just in time to be slammed in the gut, coughing a lot of blood. "G-Guh!"

Jiren is launched crashing through mountains, as he lands on the ground, panting heavily. "D... Tch... YOU... DAMN YOU!"

He begins to roar, as a red fiery aura begins to surround him. His muscles bulk up, as his shirt begins to rip. He continues to roar loudly, the entire universe shaking from his burst in power.

Wind shoots from him, flattening the landscape. He continues to yell, as he breaks his limits once again. A red Ultra Instinct-like aura surrounds him, as he begins to walk toward Denpa.

Denpa chuckles, as he yells loudly, his eyes glowing brightly. A white aura shoots around him, as he stands across from Jiren. "I will show you twenty percent of what I am capable of! Prepare yourself!"

The two of them launch at each other, clashing a punch that shatters the ground around them. Wind and electricity shoot everywhere, sending Toppo and Dyspo back. "UWAGHH!"


To Be Continued in Chapter Five...


Hello! I hope you enjoyed Chapter Four of the rewrite of Dragon Ball Super: Aftermath.

Broly has been forcibly converted to the Evil Gods' side, and Jiren was pushed to his limits!

What will happen next? Find out in the next chapter! I have also tried to start using Grammarly to correct some issues I missed, and it is working pretty well!

~ Scruffy