Previously on Dragon Ball Aftermath: Rewritten:


Jiren yells, pressing with full force. "OWARI DA!" Denpa loses the power struggle against it, as he is launched across the landscape, a massive explosion destroying part of the planet's landscape.

Suddenly, Denpa vanishes behind him, laughing. He clenches his fist, it glowing with white energy. Jiren turns around just in time to be slammed in the gut, coughing a lot of blood. "G-Guh!"

Jiren is launched crashing through mountains, as he lands on the ground, panting heavily. "D... Tch... YOU... DAMN YOU!"

He begins to roar, as a red fiery aura begins to surround him. His muscles bulk up, as his shirt begins to rip. He continues to roar loudly, the entire universe shaking from his burst in power.

Wind shoots from him, flattening the landscape. He continues to yell, as he breaks his limits once again. A red Ultra Instinct-like aura surrounds him, as he begins to walk toward Denpa.

Denpa chuckles, as he yells loudly, his eyes glowing brightly. A white aura shoots around him, as he stands across from Jiren. "I will show you twenty percent of what I am capable of! Prepare yourself!"

The two of them launch at each other, clashing a punch that shatters the ground around them. Wind and electricity shoot everywhere, sending Toppo and Dyspo back. "UWAGHH!"


Chapter Five


Denpa and Jiren vanishes, as more shockwaves travel through the air. They grip their hands together, as they get into a power struggle. They push heavily, the ground cracking under them.

Jiren roars, as he goes to knee Denpa in the face. Denpa's head barely budges, as he swings a punch at Jiren's gut. Jiren coughs blood, as Denpa headbutts him, sending him back.

Jiren gets up, as he roars, launching at Denpa at full speed. He is barraging him with punches, but Denpa is dodging, blocking, and catching each of them. "You're nothing compared to me. So you're the strongest mortal in the universe? What a load of crap!"

He slams Jiren in the face with a punch, as he is sent crashing through the landscape. There is a huge explosion, sending wind everywhere. Denpa vanishes above him, holding his hand out. "Though, I must say... You're quite powerful... Welcome to our side..."

Jiren's eyes shoot open, raw energy shooting from him. He leaps up, going to slam Denpa in the face with a punch. Denpa's head barely budges again, as Jiren leaps back, panting heavily.

"Fine, then..." Denpa says, charging a massive energy blast. "IF YOU'RE NOT WILLING TO COMPLY, THEN I WILL KILL YOU!" His voice echos, as he launches the massive energy beam at Jiren.

A purple energy beam hits Denpa's beam from the side, launching it away, causing a huge explosion to happen in the distance. Belmod, the God of Destruction of Universe Eleven, would be standing there with his angel, Marcarita.

Jiren turns toward them, completely exhausted. "Belmod... What are you doing here...?!"

Belmod doesn't answer Jiren's question, as he begins to slowly walk toward Denpa. "Marcarita, let's take Jiren and escape. We cannot afford to lose him as an ally."

Marcarita nods once, as she taps her staff. The three of them get shot off into outer space, Denpa watching, furious. "You little... Oh, I am going to enjoy killing you, Belmod!"


Rittuir's eyes pulse, as a massive shock wave sends Gohan and Piccolo crashing across the landscape, shattering part of it. He launches after them, the red essence gathering in his hands. "Now, join us!"

Gohan gets up, helping Piccolo up. The two of them leap at Rittuir, as electricity travels across the air, clashes being seen. Piccolo launches at Rittuir, slamming him in the face with a punch.

Gohan leaps over him, as he dropkicks Rittuir onto the ground, causing a crater to form. The two of them stand next to each other, looking down at Rittuir. "Careful, Gohan. He's on par with a God of Destruction."

Rittuir gets up, brushing the dust off of him. "Was that supposed to hurt...? That was nothing... I will show you what power is!" He raises his hands, launching a volley of white energy blasts at Gohan and Piccolo.

The two of them dodge Rittuir's energy blasts, flying across the air toward him. Gohan vanishes behind him, attempting to punch him again. Rittuir catches it, as he throws Gohan into Piccolo with a lot of force, sending them flying again.

They manage to stop themselves, launching a combined energy beam at Rittuir. He flies out of the way of the beam, launching himself toward Gohan and Piccolo. He swings a double punch at them, but they block it, skidding back.

The two of them elap at Rittuir, going to attack him with a barrage of punches and kicks. Rittuir just stands there, catching, blocking, and dodging all of the punches at extreme speeds, the rest of his body not budging one bit.

Piccolo swings a punch at Rittuir, as he prepares to dodge it. However, Piccolo launches an energy beam from his fist to catch him off guard, burning his face a little. "DARGH! YOU LITTLE...!"

He slams the two of them in the gut with great force, causing the both of them to cough blood. He then elbows them into the ground, following it with a couple of kicks to send them into a mountain.

Gohan and Piccolo get up from the rubble, panting. Gohan begins to yell, electricity crackling around him. The rocks around him begin to rise, as a white outline surrounds him.

Rittuir watches Gohan's transformation, smirking. "Yes, yes... Show me some of your power... I am starting to get a little... bored..."

Gohan's power begins to rise, as he continues to yell. His hair begins to stand up a little, as more electricity crackles around him.

Piccolo smiles, getting into his fighting stance. "It looks like Gohan is finally going to get serious against this guy. We may not be as strong as Son Goku and Vegeta, but we got our own tricks."

It clicks inside of Gohan, as he lets out a loud roar, a massive white aura flaring up around him. He enters his Mystic state, looking at Rittuir.

Piccolo glances toward him, nodding once. "Gohan, I'm going to charge a Makankōsappō (Special Beam Cannon). I need you to fight him and I will launch the attack to take him down."

Gohan smirks, as he takes off from the ground toward Rittuir at full speed. He is taken by surprised, as Gohan begins to barrage him with punches and kicks, each of them landing and knocking Rittuir back.

Rittuir then swings a punch at him, but Gohan manages to dodge it, the punch grazing off of his hair. The two vanish, as they begin to create shockwaves in the air, clashing.

Piccolo puts two fingers up to his head, as the tips of them begin to sparkle and glow from the energy. "Keep it up, Gohan!" He concentrates on charging the Special Beam Cannon, growling.

Rittuir and Gohan continue to clash punches and kicks, sending more shockwaves across the land. Gohan launches an energy blast, but Rittuir manages to dodge it. He then swings a kick at Gohan's side, but he manages to block it, being sent back a little. "Tch..."

Gohan yells, as he raises his hands, charging a yellow energy beam. "MASENKO!" He launches a massive Masenko at Rittuir, as it consumes him, sending him toward the ground. "AGHHH!"

There is a huge explosion, destroying part of the area. Piccolo continues to charge the Special Beam Cannon, knowing that Rittuir isn't done. He is right, as Rittuir gets up from the crater, growling.

Gohan lands in front of him, getting back into his fighting stance. "You won't be able to win against me, whoever you are! I am Son Gohan, the son of my father, Goku!"

Rittuir looks up at him, as Gohan suddenly realizes that he is low on energy, yet he should still have plenty. "Wh... what's going on? I... I feel my energy being drained!"

Rittuir laughs loudly, as he grabs Gohan, slamming him in the gut. Gohan coughs a little bit of blood, holding his gut. "Wh... what did you do...?!"

"Well, young Saiyan," Rittuir says. "That is a matter we will discuss later, when you are converted to our side!" He punches Gohan in the face, sending him across the landscape.

He then launches back at Gohan, but Piccolo had finished charging his Special Beam Cannon. He yells, pointing his two fingers toward Rittuir. "Makankōsappō!"

An extremely fast concentrated beam shoots from him, piercing Rittuir's chest. Rittuir coughs blood, falling on one knee. "Why... why you!"

Gohan and Piccolo vanish in front of him, charging a massive energy blast. Rittuir looks up, as he growls. "I am only the weakest of the Evil Gods! You have absolutely no chance against us, you mortals! I AM NOT DONE WITH YOU YET!"

Blood continues to run down Rittuir's chest, as he coughs a little more blood. "I... Tch... Master is going to have my head for this! I will not die here! Remember what I said, you fools! I am the weakest of all of them! You stand no chance against any of my allies!"

Right as Gohan and Piccolo launch the massive blast, Rittuir vanishes away, only narrowly able to avoid their blast. Gohan powers down from his Mystic state, the two of them panting.

"Piccolo," Gohan says, "I don't know why they are here, but we can win this. I think it is time for me to step into the picture again."

Piccolo looks toward him in surprise, but then he closes his eyes, smiling. "Good, I'm proud of you, Gohan. You can do your school work, but you need to train as well. If you slack off again, don't come asking me to train you again."

"We need to find a way to get to father and Vegeta," Gohan says. "I think they may be in trouble. We have to help them."


Shockwaves travel through the air at crazy speeds, as Goku and Vegeta are seen sparring like crazy in their Super Saiyan forms. They vanish rapidly, as they clash a punch, causing the sky to flash and the ground to shatter.

They vanish again, as Beerus and Whis watches from below. Goku slams a punch into Vegeta's face two times, but Vegeta roars loudly, mauling Goku into the ground.

Goku gets up, as he launches toward Vegeta at full speed, a yellow trail following him. He swings a full force punch at Vegeta, but he blocks it, grunting. The two continue to clash punches and kicks, flashing across the air.

"They are quite fast, even in their Super Saiyan forms," Beerus says. "Eventually, I won't even be able to keep with them at the rate they are growing in power."

Vegeta yells, entering the Super Saiyan Two state. His power is multiplied by ten times, as he slams his fist into Goku's gut, causing him to cough spit. "GAHHH!"

Right as he throws another punch, Goku enters the Super Saiyan Two state as well, blocking the punch. They continue to zoom through the air, causing more shockwaves.

Whis looks at his staff to see what is happening at other parts of the universe. His eyes widen, as he turns toward Beerus. "My lord, you know the Saiyan named Broly?"

Beerus yawns loudly, as he turns toward Whis, scratching the back of his head. "Isn't that the Saiyan who forced Goku and Vegeta to fuse?"

Whis sighs a little, looking back toward his staff. "Well, it turns out one of the Evil Gods have taken him and converted him to their si-"

Beerus sits up in his chair extremely quick, his eyes widening. "OH NO!"

Whis is taken back by his response, blinking rapidly. "Well then, I was not expecting you to be so surprised about Brol-"

Beerus interrupts him again, shouting and holding his head. "I FORGOT TO HAVE BREAKFAST THIS MORNING! I JUST REMEMBERED!"

Whis sighs, rolling his eyes, and shaking his head. "My lord, I understand your breakfast problem, but I was trying to talk to you about Broly."

Beerus blinks twice, turning toward him. "Oh yeah, wait... Oh that's actually very problematic... That Saiyan is said to be on par with a God of Destruction, like that Jiren fellow..."

Goku and Vegeta fly down, landing on the ground toward them. They'd have heard the name Broly, as they power back down into their base forms.

"What's going on, Whis and Beerus?" Goku asks. "Did you two mention the name Broly?"

"I certainly have, you two," Whis says. "Broly has been... taken by one of the Evil Gods. He has been converted to their si-"

"WHAT?!" The two say in surprise. Goku quickly turns toward Vegeta. "Vegeta! We need to fuse and go stop Broly and help him!"

Whis sighs loudly, facepalming. "Could I perhaps say a sentence without being interrupted, you three?"

Vegeta gets so enraged, that he enters Super Saiyan Blue, slapping him on the face. Goku is launched across the landscape, crashing through a couple of rocks. "YOU IDIOT! YOU NEED TO THINK BEFORE YOU SAY!"

Goku gets up, a massive bruise on his face. He rubs it, wincing. "Sorry, Vegeta. I just got into a panic. We have to help Broly. He doesn't deserve this."

Suddenly, Whis gets a call on his staff. He answers it, and is surprised to see Gohan and Piccolo. "Whis! We need to come over there!" Gohan says.

Whis figures it probably has to do with the Evil Gods, as he taps his staff, transporting them here. Beerus notices that and gets frustrated. "Oi, Whis! Why don't you always use that?!"

Whis chuckles, shrugging slightly. "I just like to travel. I find it a lot more relaxing. Anyway, what is going on, you two?"

Piccolo walks up to Whis, a serious expression on his face. "Whis, not long ago, we encountered an Evil God. They are extremely powerful, and Gohan and I nearly lost to him. He claimed to be the weakest of all of them."

Beerus takes a grape from a bowl next to him, dropping it into his mouth. "Let me guess, it was the equivalent to the fox guy, Liquiir, wasn't it?"

Gohan thinks for a moment, remembering Rituiir's appearance. "Yeah, he looked like a fox. Like Piccolo said, he claimed to be the weakest of the Evil Gods."

Beerus leans back, stretching his arms. "Oh please... All of us know that Liquiir is the weakest God of Destruction. He doesn't like it when that is mentioned to him."

Vegeta turns toward Gohan and Piccolo, crossing his arms. "We also encountered an evil god earlier. His name was Sirus. We were forced to fuse and use our full power in order to kill him."

Gohan's eyes widen, as he remembers something that Whis said once. "Whis, you said that Belmod is stronger than Beerus, right? That makes him the strongest God of Destruction to date."

Whis nods at him. "Indeed, ah... I see what you are saying. Belmod's Evil God counterpart must be stronger than Sirus was. It took Gogeta's full power attack in order to disintegrate Sirus. This could be quite the trouble."

"What are we going to do about it?" Piccolo asks. "We need to be able to eradicate these guys with minimal casualties."

"It's simple," Goku says. He walks up to Piccolo, clenching his fists. "It's obvious at this point we have to fight. It will not be easy, but we have to work together."

Vegeta, Gohan, and Piccolo nod toward them. Goku looks up toward the sky, then back at them. "Let's get going. Let's go to Earth and protect it."

The sky begins to flash, as all six of them sense an energy coming toward the planet at a rapid pace. Something crashes down in front of them, as Goku, Vegeta, Gohan, and Piccolo leap back, getting into their fighting stances.

Multiple figures walk forward from the smoke. Vegeta's eyes widen, beginning to recognize one of them. "Is that... Is that... Jiren...?"

All of the fighters lower their guards, as they see Marcarita, Jiren, and Belmod walk froward. Goku walks toward them, the rest of them standing still. "Jiren, you must have fought one too as well, right?"

Jiren turns toward him with a blank face, crossing his arms. "Correct. I was defeated by Universe Six's counterpart."

All of the fighters are shocked, even Beerus a little bit. "You... As in.. you, Jiren? You were defeated by an Evil God...?" Goku asks, sweat trickling down the side of his face.

"We don't have much time to chat," Belmod says. "Two Evil Gods have nearly claimed victory. They are extremely tough."

Goku and Vegeta turn toward each other, locking eyes for a second. Goku then turns toward Jiren, looking up at him. "Jiren, there is this guy named Broly. He is as strong as you, and has been captured and converted to his side. He is a Saiyan like us, and we need your help in order to save him."

Jiren is silent for a moment, as he glances toward Belmod, then back at Goku. "A Saiyan as strong as I... Fine... I will help just this once."

Goku smiles, as he jumps back. "Jiren, we haven't fought once since the Tournament of Power. Let's train!"

Vegeta leaps next to Goku, getting into his stance. "You may have defeated me during that tournament, but I have gotten even stronger than before, Jiren!"

Jiren uncrosses his arms, standing across from them. He stares at them, his face still blank. "Come."

The two of them yell, taking off from the ground toward him. They begin to barrage him with a bunch of punches and kicks, but Jiren stands there, taking them. They enter the Super Saiyan state, speeding up their barrage.

Beerus continues to watch the battle between the three of them take place. "That Jiren fellow is quite powerful. He's on the level of a God of Destruction, like Broly."

After the punches still do nothing, the two leap back, entering Super Saiyan Two. They leap at Jiren, launching Ki blasts at him. The blasts swerve around Jiren, exploding in the distance.

Vegeta leaps at Jiren at full speed, going to punch him on the face. His head only slightly budges, as he leaps back, grunting. "Fine... It looks like we cannot hold back, Kakarot!"

Both Goku and Vegeta begin to yell, as they enter Super Saiyan God. Their hair then begins to flash blue, as a bright flash of light is seen coming from the both of them.

Energy crackles off of them, as they enter the Super Saiyan Blue states. A glowing blue aura flares up around them, as they stand across from Jiren, the rocks floating around them.

Jiren squints at the sight of that transformation again. "Show me your power."

The two of them roar loudly, the aura around them getting even bigger. They take off from the ground at the same time, swinging a punch at Jiren.


To Be Continued in Chapter Six...


Two chapters from two separate stories in one day! I hope you enjoyed this chapter.

I wanted to give Gohan and Piccolo some justice in this chapter. I managed to pull it off successfully and give them the spotlight.

I will see ya'll soon!

~ Scruffy