So, due to me being distracted by other things and my mood never really setting on Kaiju Huntsmen for long enough to do too much work, I haven't really finished the 8th chapter. So to give some of you guys something, I decided to answer some of the reviews I've gotten and give you all a heads up the next chapter is roughly halfway done.
Shadowstorm-Vash (I already answered this in pm, though I accidently used a friend's account, so I'm just copy pasting the answers I gave in there in case any of you have the same issues and let the guy know it is me)
Wow they are even better at board games yang and ruby have been playing for years. And I guess Godzilla just found the sword? Unless you are saying he made a sword of that caliber before he exploded? This story is so contrived that I'm losing brain cells as I read it. Also for the love of god please get a proofreader/beta for the story. And fire eyed warriors? Wow way to rip off both of Ruby's special qualities. Godzilla just seems like a one person team RWBY and is too OP. Also Weiss would never think to tell her father about nuclear power she hates him remember? I can't even...with this story anymore.
1) Just because you've been doing something longer than someone, doesn't mean your better at them at that thing, board games are no different. Besides, the Board game was a strategy game, which Xenilla(Spacegodzilla) is known for being a genius at, there's no reason why he shouldn't take to it very easily.
2)If you're talking Godzilla making Reactor before him exploding, 1) Him building up that kind of nuclear energy takes awhile and is expended while fighting, I already stated in the 2ndish chapter that they were constantly fighting for the first several months while they were in Remnant, so that also slowed the build up 2)Who says HE has to make it, especially since he's part of a team with a living supercomputer
3) I did say this was my first story right? It's not going to be the best writing, and the first two fucking SUCKED in that aspect. I did get better though, with the help of something like a Beta reader... so there's that.
4)The "insert color here-eyed warriors" thing has been done WAY before my dumb little crossover, we're talking like a month after Volume three ended at most when people started doing it. Also Flame eyed do something distinctly different then Silver's do, warrior doesn't actually fit them now that I think about it, but Eh. Also the fact that there's different types, like Ironwood said.
5) Admittedly, I wrote this before I really grasped how much Weiss hated her father, so...hindsight is 20/20. Also, she wouldn't have told her father it to make money for him or the family, she would do it to better mankind, due to it being a limitless amount (as long as you had Godzilla) of a energy source more powerful than what they already use, no one in their right minds would not consider using it. Then there's the point where I actually DID bring up some hatred from her for her father, when it was brought up the Nuclear energy is harmful to human life, and that he wouldn't care and put lots of people in danger for money.
That's all I can think of in terms of my defense, thanks for reviewing and putting down actual criticism instead of just saying "This fanfic sucks and you suck cause it sucks".
Shadowstorm- Vash first review
When has Godzilla ever been a dragon ball Z character? You've gone too far into Mary Sue OC territory and made him disproportionately stronger than the world around him. This eliminates tension and drama of combat. Kiryu is no pushover and neither is space Godzilla. While Zilla is a bit more understandable in power gap you are obviously not taking into account the cannon events of the animated series that sequels the Zilla movie. Additionally you will most likely alienate the rwby fans as you keep dissing the characters from that series by constantly saying in one way or another that they are all so much weaker than "human" Godzilla. I will keep reading in the hope it improves as it IS an interesting concept
Dude, its motherfucking Godzilla, and you want me to make him as strong as RWBY characters? Bare in mind that almost all of these characters are CHILDREN IN TRAINING! Putting him at that level 1)not only completely ignores the literal decades of combat experiences that he already has but 2) also ignores the fact that he still has enough nuclear power and strength to wipe out a city. Even if you disagree with me on the power scaling of the Kaiju, which admittedly isn't wrong as when I first started to write this my still at writing fights was dog shit and I wanted the fight to be a lot closer then what the end result was, YOU CAN NOT TELL ME THAT ANY OF THE RWBY CHARACTERS CAN EVEN COME CLOSE TO THE POWER GODZILLA HAS, outside of maybe Salem and the maidens. (Also, the Zilla in the animated series, WAS THE ORIGINAL ZILLA'S OFFSPRING)
headreviewer mk2
damb good update for such a long wait and well worth it as well.
also i have a question about zilla. in the movie they said he was a-sexual is he still or is he now b-sexual because if he gets pregnant out of nowhere there is going to be some explaining to do
Thanks for enjoying it, but about that whole can of bullshit… right now I'm just considering him to be biologically male, just with no idea what THAT particular piece of biology is for. It may change in the future, but seeing as this subject never comes up in my mind, I doubt it will.
sohelekhang72
Im addicted to it moar its also the best out of the rwby crossover
I'm deeply concerned for the RWBY crossover community if mine is the best
Guest
Pleaaase bring Mothra back dude! I don't care if she's Godzilla's love interest, sister, mother, friend, enemy, frienemy, just please bring her back!
-Sincerely, a huge Godzilla fan tired of seeing Mothra die
Nice answer: Maybe in the future, but right now, Mothra's death in this is kind of important to the plot and a major part of Godzilla at the moment. So no can do right now
Unnecessary blunt and rude answer: Eat poopoo and perish, we don't need that shit here
All people who ask about ships
Will you do ships?
Yes, but I won't rush them and I won't make bullshit up for them. Aka, I want them to be natural
The true warrior
Umm yeah uh...the way you describe Godzilla in the fanfic is like introducing a cliché anime character, and also shouldn't he be a big badass monster transformed into a human and his height is one that doesn't look intimidating hes like around jaunes height and what he's wearing doesn't speak 'I can utterly fuck up your city and world with a swing of my tail' he's the god of destruction not a slightly tall than 6ft cliché anime character who will have a harem with all the girls in beacon academy that is a big fat 'NO!' And soon in the fanfic I read that Godzillas weapon is a katana with a not so creative name for a katana but I haven't read all the way through so I don't know what expect so here's a few key ideas for Godzilla if your gonna make another fanfic like this: he should at least be 7ft or taller and have a body type that speaks 'I can break you with a flick of my finger' so he should have a very muscular body like I'm talking like hafthor Julius Bjornsson 'the mountain' type of muscular and also battle scars from the previous fights he had with other monsters, also his clothing should be like a leather jacket and biker clothing and pieces of armor around his bgod that he stabbed his spikes through and his weapon would only his bare fists and nothing else so no weapons cause a god of destruction doesn't need a weapon to deal with pests like the grimm,human,and faunus and his personality should be brutish and intimidating he's the type of guy that is like a quiet but dangerous type of person but is understandable towards humans and faunus but still really hateful to them and his facial features should be masculine and intimidating with multiple scars his hair like a sumo type of hair since he's from Japan and his fighting style would be like a slugger/brawl using heavy and powerful blows to break his enemy's or kill them and his semblance use his atomic energy as a boost for strength also as like a rage that is almost like yang and he can also use his atomic breath as a projectile...so that's what I think about how godzilla should be in your next fanfic if your gonna make one
First, fuck unnecessary harems, that never crossed my mind. Two, everyone interprets everything differently, and I'm using my interpretation of what human Godzilla would be like. Where'd you get Katana from? I thought I said Reactor was a broadsword, which is the kind of sword knights used to have, and also Katanas are japanese, which judging by how often Godzilla destroys their cities, I'm guessing he isn't very fond of them at least. Beside, katanas were designed to have short fights and not for lasting blade on blade, so that clashes with his fighting style anyway. And while your interpretation of Godzilla is easy to see, it's not the way I see Godzilla and it conflicts for what I have planned for the future so I won't use that interpretation, also, I'm too lazy to go back changing the entire story to fix it. Btw, if you had read more of the story, don't know if you did, you would of read that Reactor LIMITS his power, meaning he doesn't need it, and is actually better off in a fight without it then with it.
yesboss21
Do you have drawings or arts on what the humanized Kaiju's look like? Im more of a visionary (but can't draw) than a imaginary(?) (But can see the picture)
I'm in the same boat, I honestly like seeing more than imagining it, but can't draw either. So no, I got no photos for you my friend
A 'Reincarnated' writer
You know... I just hope their relationship can become better in the future, after they (somehow) find a way to return to their home world.
And Godzilla and Xenilla's relationship is something interesting to write. They're basically Godzillas after all.
Yeah, it's why I brought it in, as Xenilla and Godzilla's interactions are my favorite to write about and are the main way I plan on having character growth between them.
Random Crossovers
Is Xenilla actually SpaceGodzilla ? The way you described him is closely similar to SpaceGodzilla ?
Yes, then again it said it in the author's note at the beginning of chapter one, I just didn't want to use the stupid name of SpaceGodzilla.
