Everyone was walking as Jak explained it could take 10 minutes to get the guest rooms and of course on foot. Paranoid about being followed, Clank had lit up his sensors for any organic life form that was dangerous.

There was someone following them but from ground, by roofs. The follower sped up a bit to get to them. This figure was very agile and flexible, wearing a streaking pitch-black cloak, hiding the face with the hood and mask with red lens, voice modifier, etc. This person was also heavy reddish-brown boots, an armored chest-piece making it look like puffing out of its chest, and lastly heavy brown pants. Many people call him, MX.


[Meanwhile on Earth; Paris]

A cool evening that sent Carmelita Fox in a chase hunt against this "Shadowis" guy. She was feisty to find the Cooper Gang, especially Ringtail.

Not again, she thought to herself. Sly, I hope you're alright, she couldn't let go of her thoughts of him. Whoever this being was, he sure had the heavy hand of taking half of the cops here.

A cop approached her, "Anything?" Fox, feeling concern, asked. The cop shook his head, but commented "You might want to look at the cameras."

She got up quick and went into the camera room with the cop, and they tacitly played all of the events occurring. She saw everything from what happened at that warehouse to outside where the Cooper Gang and Shadowis "disappeared".

She saw how Sly and Murray were struggling to fight with Mr. L as the other members of his group the "Masters of Doom" as they're called, Cliché name, Fox thought. Then Mr. L left and Shadowis appeared crashing.

"There he is, so he'd jumped into a fight?" She asked, now really confused.

"Apparently so." The cop didn't have anything to add to that. He, too, thought it was weird for that "monster" to just show up out of nowhere.

They were fighting and Sly was losing. Then came the part where the cops showed up and then from there the chase. The policeman paused for the video, before the inspector could say anything, they both said that the next part she's going to see is where everything is weird, and they emphasized on weird.

The next video now unpaused and it showed the chase, as the famous Cooper van approached a street and then a light appeared they disappeared. Shadowis also appeared and looked furious but then here's where it got weirder.

Shadowis stopped and it looked as if someone edit the video because he just disappeared and the cop cars approached finding either of the Cooper Gang or Shadowis anywhere.

"What the?!" Inspector Fox exclaimed in astonishment.

"Yeah, that's what we said."

"Review those footages again to see if anything is edited." She ordered and they did.

She couldn't believe the Cooper Gang just vanished into thin air or into something worse. She went and sat back in her office trying to find any connection with this "Master of Doom" and Sly.

After of hours (approximately 9 hours) she found some stuff about the Masters of Doom, but no connection with Sly whatsoever. She searched file after file, interrogation after interrogation, nada.

"Darn it!" She cussed in frustration.

A fellow policeman approached her office, reporting they found a lead on the Masters of Doom. She jumped out of her seat and asked "What is it?"

The policeman explained that there was a list of buyers of them getting several drugs and weaponry being sold in India, China, Japan, and whole list of nations across the world.

After a brief explanation, she ordered a few of her men to find those buyers and get them for interrogation.

The policeman exited as she sat back down, feeling relaxed. She thought to herself, I'll find you, Cooper. I always do.


[New Haven City; Apartment/Guest rooms]

"It's not much, but you guys can hang out here as I'll try to see if we have anything updated on these Masters of Doom." Jak explained. There was a large couch, a bedroom, bathroom, etc. anything that anyone needs to live in a home.

"It's not bad, but where's…." he paused "HoloVids?" Ratchet asked seeing as there wasn't any in this guest room.

"Holo-what? I don't know what you're talking about?" Jak answered.

Both Ratchet and Clank gasped in horror.

"What?" Jak asked.

Both Ratchet and Clank just shook their heads and simultaneously said "Nothing."

Sly looked around and saw a nice of New Haven City as they call it. Murray also looked at the view with Sly, "It's beautiful."

It sort of reminded him of good ol' New York City minus the flying cars-eh, Zoomers? Sly then wondered about Carmelita and hoped Shadowis hadn't caught her and imprisoned her, or did something even worse than he imagine. The dude was an unstoppable demon. He never fought anyone like him before. He was even more powerful than Clockwerk.

Ratchet did something similar like Sly and he too stared out into the city. It reminded of Metropolis. He chuckled thinking of what Qwark was doing. He stared at Sly who appeared to be looking saddened or disturbed.

"You, alright there, man?"

"I'm just thinking about my planet Earth. No offense to you or Jak but I've never met aliens before, so this is a whole new level of weird for me." He explained.

"I see." Ratchet seeing where he was coming from.

He tried to make conversation by not making this too awkward between him and Sly. "So, you're worried about your friends and family. I can attest to that."

Sly sighed and debated with himself on being open with Ratchet about his orphan history. After all, he just met all of these new people in a brand new world.

"I was an orphan when I was 8. Murray and Bentley are my only friends and family." He added while also thinking about Carmelita.

Ratchet stared at him for awhile, thinking to himself, He's just like me.

Jak approached both of them saying that he was about to head out to check on something that was for him and added if Sly and Ratchet needed to contact him immediately.

Only silence was in the room.

He exited with Daxter by going to the elevator and getting out of apartment complex.

Jak outright states "I feel bad for them."

Daxter sardonically pointed out "Do you now?" He paused. "Is it cause they're stuck here on our home planet with us?"

Jak agreed on his last statement, "Well, that...and it's just they don't deserve to be away from their homes." He paused. "I mean they're heroes from their respective worlds. I'm not sure how much trouble they've been in depending on how many people want to kill them. One thing's for sure, they have me on their back."

Dax tried to lighten the mood, "Yeah, ok. Don't get all sentimental about them, they'll be alright."

"Oh, and you know that how?" Jak playfully asked.

"Actually, I don't." He answered, bluntly.

"See, you just proved my point." Jak smiled and shook his head.


[Meanwhile back at the apartment]

Murray walked around trying to find the kitchen and with a rumbling stomach. He was really hungry after all that fighting with the Masters of Doom and that Shadowis-guy.

Across the living room Bentley and Clank were having a conversation about themselves somehow later on that devolved into a serious discussion about Quantum Theory and other geeky-stuff they talked about.

Sly and Ratchet still stared outside, not talking to each other.

"It's perhaps wise, we get down to the business when Jak gets back." Sly remarked.

"I'd agree with that, but we don't know much about his Masters of Doom." Ratchet added. He was clearly very best as he took a seat in the couch and started to fall asleep.

Sly, still staring out the window, clenching his cane, was having flashbacks.

When he fought Shadowis, the excruciating pain he felt from his power was unlike anything he felt before,

He then turned and approached to where Clank and Bentley were still having their serious scientific discussion.

"Hey... Clank, was it?"

Clank nodded, "How can I help you?"

"You're pretty much a fast computer and can search up anything, right?" Sly asked.

"Yes, is there anything you want to search about?" Clank politely asked.

"I need you to search me anything on a certain man called Shadowis." Sly requested.

"Searching: Shadowis." Clank went through every single data he could find with his data logs.

"Search result: 0%." Clank answered.

"What? You can't find anything on this guy?!" Sly exclaimed.

Bentley spoke his opinion, "That's pretty bad for someone whose literally a Supercomputer times a hundred."

Clank mentioned he searched over 1 million times just to find out about Shadowis.

"You mentioned Shadowis before in our meeting with Jak and the others. Could you describe him for me, maybe that could factor different search results." Clank mentioned.

"He's about as demon-looking as they come. He has a long tail, pointy ears, sharp nails, red/black eyes, red/blackish skin." Sly described.

"Still nothing." Clank told Sly, who was looking bewildered at this.

"Nothing?!" Sly exclaimed again. "You can't be serious?!"

Ratchet slurry talked in his sleep from the couch, "He-ey, keeeeep iiit dowwwwn..."

Bentley suggested something else with Clank as Sly ran out of ideas.

It was going to be a long day for Sly.


[With Jak and Daxter; Bazhar]

Jak and Daxter were walking down the street, they had communications on with Torn and the rest of their pals trying to find out what's going with the Masters of Doom.

"Shouldn't we work with the other heroes on this mission?" Daxter suggested

"This 'Shadowis' scumbag that took on the thief on Earth is very powerful. Torn said that there was an informant nearby here that could tell us more about him." Jak mentioned.

As they walked down, a figure in a cloak was following them, about 500 meters away.

Jak and Daxter entered the store that looked weird and shady.

"Red flags are going off here, Jak." Daxter said with confidence, but deep down he was scared.

"Enough." Jak feeling annoyed by the ottsel.

The place was dusty and definitely needed reconstruction in some parts. There were nice-looking food though.

A door opened from the back and entered an old man with a long-beard. "Hello," he said with a deep voice, "how can I help today?"

"I think you know who we are. Torn sent us to talk to you about Shadowis." Jak informer the situation.

The old man's serious face turned into shocked. He looked around hyperactivly and asked I anyone was following them.

They both shook their heads.

The old man sighed and started to suggest them to come inside his room behind the cash register.

As they did that, when they entered to his room, Daxter started coughing really bad. The smell was a mix of poop and other terrible stuff. Jak was holding his breath as he, too, couldn't stand this smell.

The old man apologized and said he couldn't afford someone to clean. He tried offering them a job but they declined.

"Ah, I see. So, you want to go straight to business. Ask right away."

"What do you know about Shadowis and his Masters of Doom?" Jak asked in a serious tone.

"Masters of Doom, huh? Is that who he's working with now?" The old man shook his head. He continued "There's a lot of criminal syndicates across from Kras City and others that work with the Masters of Doom selling illegal weapons to each other. Even rare Precursor ones."

"Such as?"

"Artifacts that range back to the time of Mar. Shadowis is a name mentioned by these other criminal syndicates that work with the Masters of Doom to keep the other criminal gangs in fear and in check. Shadowis himself is rumored to be a legend. Some say he's from outer space. Others a demon created by the Precursors to hunt down the Dark Makers. Some say Shadowis is Dark Eco incarnate. The truth of him, however, is prolonging and confusing. Other criminal gangs say he's a myth for placing fear against them and those who defy those specific criminal gangs that work with the Masters of Doom end up...not being alive..." he emphasized it with a little fear in his voice.

He continued "The Masters of Doom are a force to be reckoned with. You, heroes, and your heroism better be careful. I once heard of a story of how Shadowis took out an entire army of a million men with barely a scratch on him."

Daxter gulped as he hears this information.

"Is that all?" Jak asked to see if anymore info could be said.

"Unless you want to hear more horror stories and rumors, your best luck of finding out more info is through a guy named Uoi. He lives on the Far East of this planet. Some say he's dead, others say he's still alive." The old man suggested.

"Uoi, huh?" Jak processijg the info given to him.


[Outside of the store]

The cloaked figure approached it and pressed on the wrist gauntlet to become invisible.

The figure entered the store with ease and into the room where Jak and Daxter were.

Jak thanked the old man as he and Daxter were about to leave, but out of nowhere the old man was shot in the head.

Daxter screamed as that happened and Jak pondered around looking for the killer.

One powerful punch to the face, pushed him out of the room, outside of the store, and landed onto the streets.

Jak, still dazed, by the punch, groaned.

Daxter being on his side, tried to motivate him to get up and fight the guy who killed the old man.

That one punch created a huge dust storm around the area, people were running away and screaming from such danger.

The cloaked figure turned off the invisibility from the gauntlet and revealed himself to Jak and Daxter as the dust cleared.

"Who are you?!" Daxter shouted at the cloaked figure, trying to be brave.

"You may call me, MX." He introduced himself and was ready to attack.

Jak, instantly, transformed into Dark Jak.

MX laughed as he sped up to Dark Jak, going in for another punch.

Dark Jak, extending his claws and Dark Eco, dashed towards MX.

The two powers collided creating a massive shockwave and pushed both fighters away from each other.

Daxter, not trying to get involved, didn't know how to contact the other heroes. He was getting stressed by the very minute.

Dark Jak raged as did the MX figure and both dashed towards each other.

MX was a much more skilled fighter as he gave Dark Jak a barrage of punches. Dark Jak was pushed and used one of his claws to stab into MX's chest. He didn't do so effectively and was starting to rage even more.

MX then roundhouse kicks Dark Jak to the face. Dark Jak grabs the leg and spins him around like a wheel, only to throw MX across the city.

MX crashes into a nearby building making a huge hole as Dark Jak leaped high enough to get into it with his arms forward like a feral animal and tackled into MX.

They were rolling on the floor, arms pushed against one another as people were evacuating the building.

MX tried to kick him off, but Dark Jak wasn't going to let him. They were face-to-face and Dark Jak was raging hard. He almost bit into MX's neck, but MX stopped and grabbed onto his face.

Dark Jak scratches the arm, causing MX to bleed heavily, and scream in pain.

"Damn you!" He shouted.

Dark Jak only roared and tackled MX into another room. He blocked a punch from MX by holding the fist and started to crush it deeply.

MX screamed in pain.

Now resorting to his legs, MX roundhouses, side kicks, and even hook kicks Dark Jak. They weren't strong enough as it only made Dark Jak even angerier than before.

Dark Jak decided to use his Dark Bomb and it crushed he entire floor they were on and into the next.

It also pushed MX into a nearby wall which cracked and fell apart causing him to fall like a piece of paper.

Dark Jak was breathing heavily as he approached MX's almost injured body and continuously rampaged on it. He scratched him with his claws to the point where MX appeared unrecognizable and he roared.

He took heavy breaths as MX looked like he was done with fighting. He raised his hand up and said "Please...have mercy..."

Dark Jak was about to strike him again, but he calmed down and turned back into regular Jak.

Jak took heavy breaths and laid on his knees. He covered his entire face to calm himself and he lowered them to see the damage he's done to the building and to MX.

"You..." MX could barely talk.

"You...are..." he started to cough, "a monster..."

Jak stared at him and thought to himself, I'm not a monster.


[Back at the apartment complex]

Everyone was tired at this point and they were getting nowhere.

"How can one man, one being, erase his whole existence in the entirety of the galaxy?" Sly placing his thumb and index finger on his snout.

"I don't know about that. Don't worry, Sly, we'll find him." Murray said, while eating some food he doesn't recognize.

"That's what you think, pal. Whoever this Shadowis is, clearly doesn't want us to find anything about him." Sly remarked.

A noise could be heard as someone entered the apartment. It was the blue-haired girl from before, Keira.

"Guys, you got to help!" She exclaimed.

Ratchet shot yo from his nap after hearing that, "Whoa! What's going on?!"

"It's Jak! He's gone berserk with his Dark form!"

Dark form? Both Bentley, Sly, and Clank wondered what this woman was talking. Resorting to asking questions later, they left the guest room to go help wherever Jak was.


[With Daxter]

"Jeez, it's a crisis here!" Daxter yelled, looking at how much that fight caused. He needed to find Jak quick before things get out of hand.

Everyone was running in his way and he needed to get to Jak immediately.

He flashed to every single moment with his time with his best friend, since their misadventures to Misty Island, to getting to the future, to defeating Baron Praxis and Kor, to their time in Sparagus City, and much more.

He muttered under his breath, "Can't lose you, like last time." Stopping in his tracks he saw a huge hole in a nearby building.

"That must be where he is." Daxter cheered, hoping his friend is still alive.


[With Ratchet, Clank, Sly, Bentley, Murray, and Keira; Air Train]

It took courage to explain this as Keira told the rest of the new people she just met about Jak and his power to transform into Dark Jak.

Murray commented "It sounds scary and awesome at the same time. Can he control it?"

Keira paused to think about certain times Jak has told her that his Light Eco Powers counteract the Dark.

"It's complicated." She replied to Murray.

He really is strong, Ratchet thought. He then asked "Have we arrived to the sight?"

Keira turned to see the Freedom League soldier piloting, saying they're gonna land.

They exited the air train only to see a lot of destruction.

"Jak..." Keira muttered under her breath.

A familiar voice called out to Keira. It was Daxter.

"Dax!" Keira called out.

Daxter approached them with quick speed and stopped. He needed to take breaths as he was running for so long.

Keira wanted to ask about what happened with Jak, but Dax answered all of her questions right away.

After minutes of explaining about how Torn sent on them on a mission to find info about the Masters of Doom and Shadowis only then to be thwarted by this mysterious guy called MX and how Jak transformed to Dark Jak and fought him to the death.

Daxter gestured to huge hole in a nearby building and said that Jak could be there

They did all of this damage..., Sly looked around seeing all the destruction around him looking as if huge Kaiju from Japanese films from Earth were here.

They got the air train again and travelled to where the huge hole Daxter mentioned.

As they arrived, the door opened and they saw a lot of destruction inside the building.

"They really went all out." Ratchet commented, awed by Jak's power.

They saw two figures on the floor one was Jak, the other they didn't recognize and he was pretty beaten badly.

Daxter pointed out that was MX.

Keira hurryingly went to Jak and hugged him tight. He was tired and sleeping, due to him being Dark Jak drained him a lot.

Bentley investigated the area and looked at MX. He saw the symbol, purple dragon on his open bare chest which was bleeding out heavily.

"I've seen that symbol before." He said under his breath.

"Let's take you, home. Jak." Keira said almost looking like she was going to cry.


I'll end it off there, and tell what do you think about my action scenes. Need improvement? It's good? Etc.