I realized something.. Sean's and Hosea's deaths are suppose to be very hard to Sarah Amber. But I didn't really develop them. There deaths don't really have a effect, hell this whole story feels kinda rushed.. So I need to interrupt the story a little.. Furthur develop these characters.. And maybe Dutch..

I'll start with Sean MacGuire, a fan favourite..


Sarah and Arthur meet Charles, Javier and Trelawny outside of blackwater. They find Sean being held by a team of bounty hunters, but Sarah doesn't see him, just taking their word for it. Javier says Blackwater is too hot and has pictures of them all, so they have to keep away from the town itself.

Arthur tells Charles to go up to the higher part of the cliff and provide cover fire. Charles goes to do so.


Trelawny distracts too guards by pretending to be a lost soul looking for help. Arthur and Javier stealthily kill the guards with knives. But when trying to sneak their way past others, they get spotted and a gunfight ensues. Sarah manages to pick up a repeater carbine, as Arthur, Charles and Javier use Whinester rifles. So does Charles.


Once defeating a wave of men, Charles Smith rejoins them, and they run to the camp. Finding a bunch more men.

"God damn army of these bastards, how much is Sean's bounty!?" Arthur cried, reloading behind from some logs.

"Maybe we should turn him in ourselves." Charles joked. Sarah next to him, shooting a guard before ducking back down. Both of them behind a large fallen tree.

"Still time." Arthur replied, continuing to shoot.

Sarah advantages ahead Arthur and Charles cover her before she ducks behind another fallen tree. Shooting one gunman who's sniping from a small watch tower. Sarah shoots him in the head and the corpse falls down to below, nearly hitting her. Which she mocked herself for.

Javier is on the other side of the camp, so he's the only one not covering her.

Sarah spots a man hanging upside down down by a rope tied to his leg.

'that must be him.' Sarah thought, and shot the rope, freeing him.

The man had long messy red hair and was heard groaning to himself. Sarah heard enough to notice he had a thick Irish accent. Which she was slightly surprised by.

The ginger didn't seem to notice her. Or was too dizzy to say anything. Either way, Sarah was okay with not getting a thank you. He didn't need to.

After the bounty hunters retreat. Sarah's guess was proven correct. Cause Arthur cuts free the red haired man, but doesn't help him up. Sean has to pick 'himself' up.

"Hey, how about a hug Arthur? A warm embrace for a lost brother now found?" Sean MacQuire asked, Arthur laughed.

"You know Sean, Nothin' means more to me than this gang. The bond we share. I would kill for it. I would happily die for it. But above all that, I would have easily left you here to hang if Charles hadn't stopped me." Arthur replied.

"Ohh, I don't a word of that Arthu-"

"Get him out of here." Arthur said,pushing Sean to Charles and Javier.

"You're a great man Arthur Morgan. A great man!"

"Would you shut up already." Arthur groaned. Making Sarah chuckled quietly to herself. She liked him so far.

"Let's get back to camp." Javier said.

"Sarah, you mind checking Micah and Lenny? They're in Strawberry." Arthur asked, getting on his horse.

"Sure." Sarah replied, watching them ride off.

Sean (riding on the back of one of their horses, voice slowly fading off): I imagine you all missed me a lot, but fear not. The joy's back in your lives fellas.


Sarah finally arrives at the Hangover camp wth Lenny and Micah, it's already nightfall by this time, she sees Sean making a drunken speech. Micah, Lenny and Sarah arrive at the camp at Horseshoe Overload, they see everyone celebrating Sean's return, and he's making a drunken speech. Sarah smiled, admitting to herself 'I like him'.

This being Sarah Amber's first actual time seeing the camp, Dutch Van Der Linde ends up giving her a tour, introducing her to everyone. Including a sarcastic introduction to the camp prisoner, Kieren Duffy, who's tied to a tree. He says Kieren is a member of the rival gang. To O'Driscoll's. Led by Colm O'Driscoll, Dutch's rival and former partner. Next he introduces her to the camp donation box. Dutch said if she's gonna join them, then part of the deal is, she has to give money whenever she has any to spare, as it'll go to camp supplies and the such. "everyone has to do their part," he says.

Before than however Amber is allowed to join the welcome back party of Sean MacQuire, who himself is drunk the entire night. Having loud anf obnoxious sex with Karen Duffy, where he basically cries and apologizes for not doing good. And than spends the remaining night loudly singing drunken songs, keeping Sarah up all night, along with most everyone else. Bill Williamson even throwing a bottle to shut the drunken kid up. Which doesn't even succeed and only futher encourages him. Unlike Packie, Sean has a very strong Irish accent, as already mentioned.


Sarah and Sean don't interact much after that, though one morning has her waking up and him greeting ''welcome back English.'', already drunk again.

Not til the train robbery do the two actually interact properly. John and Arthur invite her and Charles to join. But unfortuntely so does MacGuire, who constantly talks the along the way over, never shutting up and annoying everyone. Other than Amber who seems to be amused by him.

During the heist itself Arthur and John rob the passengers while the other two check the back, but Sean is knocked down by a guard and Sarah has to kill them all by herself while he picks himself up.. Taking his time about doing so.

After that things only get worse as they get ambushed by cops, who John later notes showed up way too soon. But they all escape.

Still needing money, John leads Arthur and now heals up Sarah into stealing some sheep, afterwards Arthur and Sarah meet Dutch in a bar at Valentine. But Dutch's name suddenly gets called out. It was Cornwall, that guy they robbed in the beginning. He had his men capture John and another member of the gang, a german man, Leopold Strauss.

By the time Dutch and the two come out, Cornwall himself is nowhere to be found. Dutch pretends that he is not Dutch Van Der Linde and goes on about them having mistaken him for somebody else, giving Arthur time to go into deadeye, shooting the men holding John and Strauss. Thus resulting in an epic gunfight. Sarah pulls out her modern Heavy Pistol no longer having to hide it, firing at the caught of lawmen before leaping herself into cover. Where she rabs out her Repeater Carbine. Arthur pulling out his Whinester rifle.

Before they clear the area, Strauss is shot in the arm by a stray bullet and Dutch shoots his way over to him checking on him.

As more start arriving Dutch and Sarah carry a wounded Strauss over to the horses as John and Arthur cover fire. Admittedly shortening the battle the gang escaped. But even then the area is still too hot.

The group ends up moving to a new camp. An area right near a nice lake. Not too far from the town of Rhodes.

Arthur, Sarah, and Hosea head over to Rhodes and see Trelawny got himself arrested, Dutch possess them as cops. Giving them all fake names and they help the Sheriff, Leith Grey with some escaped bounties and in return Leith releases Trelawny.

Dutch continues to pose himself, Arthur, and Sarah as cops. Even adding Bill Williamson to the pack. Arthur has a bad feeling about this. But Dutch says sometimes "hiding in plain sight" is the best course of action.


At the new camp Sarah and Sadie go on a shopping trip at Roades, but are ambushed by a gang and Sadie all too eagely begins a gunfight, once returning Sean and Sarah end up going on a small heist to get more money for the camp. Admittedly her first time actually alone with him. But they get along as well as Sarah would have expected.

Sean approaches the house they need to rob, posing a lost soul before suddenly shooting the guard. Resulting in a gunfight, but this was expected and both make short work of it. And keeps the last one alive who tells them where the money is. Sean lets him go after.

"You sure about that kid?" Sarah asked. Sean being only in his early 20's. Maybe 19.

"Yeah, there was no need to kill him." Sean said as Sarah splits the money between them. Sean also finds a Double Action revolver hidden in the house and replaces his standard Cattleman for it.

Sarah asks if Sean and that Karen girl are together, as she saw them making out earlier. Sean says it's on and off, though Karen is the only girl here who could match him beer for beer.


A few days later Hosea and Arthur are introduced to the Braitwaits, the rivals of a law group, the Greys, Dutch has been pretending to help. Katherine Braitwaight has Sean and Sarah destory Leigh Gray's feilds. During said mission she actually begins to see him like a little brother. As his immature personality is actually quite charming. He even asks her out but she turns him down, being with Tommy.

Arthur meanwhile gets kidnapped by the O'Driscos but escapes, by the time he recovers he and Sarah go meet Sean, Micah and Bill at Roades.

"There you two are." Micah said when Arthur and Sarah arrived.

"Yes, yes, so what's going on?" Arthur asked, and the gang began walking through the town. Bill Sarah holding Bolt action rifles. Sean holding a Double Barrel over one of his shoulders. Arthur has a Whinester rifle.

"It's Sheriff Grey, he asked to meet with us." Bill said.

"After the fields, are you crazy?!" Sarah cried out as quietly as she could.

"They don't know we had anything to do with that." Sean insisted.

"Yeah, they think it was Catherine. And Dutch said we were to keep on working with them until we find out where they're hiding that gold." Micah replied.

"Yeah, I know these Grey boys, and they..." Bill started but is interrupted,

"Wait, hold up." Arthur said, putting his hand in a stop motion, they all do so.

"Something don't feel right about this." Arthur said, noticing how the town was unusually silent and empty.

Sean laughs and turns to him from a few feet ahead.

"Something doesn't feel right, I could tell you tha-"

Out of fucking nowhere, Sean MacQuire is violently shot in the head, which makes Sarah scream in fright. Bill pushes her into cover, but for his efforts, he is shot in the kneecap and falls over.

"Everyone get down!" Arthur cried, ducking behind a tipped over stage wagon, the same one Sarah's behind. Micah pulls out Double action revolvers. Despite it all, Micah does prove to be a badass, he easily and effortlessly kills 4 Greys, including the sniper that got Sean in less than a minute, and then jumps behind the same cover.

"I can't believe you shot me, you bastards!" Bill cried angrily.

"Are you okay!?" Arthur cried.

"I'm fine!" Bill cried annoyed.

"They killed Sean! The bastards!" Sarah cried angrily, firing off the modern pistol she no longer has to hide. Unwittingly quoting South Park, which might make the line funnier than intended.


The gunfight leads Sarah, Micah and Arthur into hiding in a now empty saloon. But the wounded Bill is nowhere to be seen.

"How the fuck did you not think this was a trap Micah!" Sarah cried angrily, firing her Bolt rifle from a window killing some of the enemies on the roof.

"Watch the temper little lady." Micah teased.

"My friend is dead, no I will not!"

"And where the fuck is Bill!" Arthur cried, firing his Whinester from another window.

"Who needs him." Micah said running back outside, killing the remaining men himself, except the last one which Arthur shoots clean in the head.

"That's all of them." Sarah said, reloading his Bolt Action.

"Not all." Micah said.

"Sheriff Grey." Arthur said dryly.


"Sheriff Grey! You gotta get a hold of this town! It's going to hell!" Micah cried, as the three approached the Sheriff's office. Bodies everywhere.

Sheriff Leigh Grey (from inside his building): Who you think you are!? Some dumb trash from God knows where.. So dumb to think we don't know what you've been doing! This is the Grey's town, always had been, always will be!

"Only Grey's we see left. Are you!" Sarah cried.

Sheriff Grey: Want us to come out!? We're coming out!

Sheriff and his 3 remaining men hop out. Leigh Grey reveals to have Bill hostage.

"Put down your guns!" Leigh cried.

"Don't do it!" Bill cried, seemingly willing to die.

"You know we can't do that, you put the gun down Sheriff!" Sarah cried.

"I'll blow his brains out-"

Suddenly Arthur kills Sheriff Grey in deadeye. Micah kills two in a row, Sarah kills the last one with her Bolt Action rifle.

"Shit!" Bill cried in disbelief.


"He was a good kid." Sarah said, kneeling down to the dead Sean, closing his eyes. But also taking the money from his wallet. She figured, might as well. He won't be needing it.

"Well how the hell was I to know." Bill insisted.

"Let me think, they set us up once before. They didn't like us, we destroyed their fields, shall I go on!?"

"Be easy Morgan. He was out finding a lead the same as you. I've been with you, what, 7 months now? And all you ever do is complain, except when it's your goddamn fault." Micah replied.

"You don't know what you're talking about. You don't give a fuck about anyone but yoursel-"

"Arthur, Micah, please.. Can we not right now." Sarah said quietly.

"Fine.. Bill takes the boy, buries him somewhere.. Micah. Best you and I don't speak for a while." Arthur said.

"Whatever you say, tough guy." Micah chuckled. Picking up Sean's dropped double barrel and putting it on Micah's horse in case he ever needs it.


Best I could do.. Who you want better developed next..

Hosea Matthews

Kieren Duffy

Lenny Summers