Zeke POV
I rub my hands together, to try to stop them from shaking too much from nervousness. They're about to show our rankings for stage one. I glance over at Four and he gives me an encouraging smile, I returned it back to him, well attempted to. I was too worried about being kicked out and becoming factionless. I shudder at just thought of having to leave dauntless and my family.
Suddenly the sound of loud footsteps and heavy panting coming from the entrance. "We're here! We're here! Whew, made it just in time!" When I realize who the voice is coming from, I'm almost afraid to turn around. But when I finally do, I found out that I was right, and I was really hoping that I wasn't.
"I win!" Tris exclaims to Uriah, before both of them finally have enough energy to look up. When they do, they realize that everyone's staring at them, and Uriah starts blowing kisses to everyone, before Tris grabs his hands and holds them down.
"Umm, excuse me, but you're not supposed to be here." Amar points out to them.
"We know, we know", Uriah replies back, "but we couldn't miss the rankings of Zekey-bear's first stage of initiation. Please Amar."
"And we won't make any noise at all", Tris adds. Yea right, I think to myself. Amar thinks about it, but in the end, he's a nice guy, so he lets them stay, unfortunately.
Tris and Uriah quickly run over to sit next to me, and basically squeeze me off. Amar flips the board around and shows us the rankings.
Four
Eric
Zeke
Lauren
Rachel
Michael
Alex
Shauna
Adam
Fred
Throughout the room I can hears cheers and murmurs of disagreement, but the loudest one was coming from beside me. "Congratulations Zeke, you're not dead last!" shout Uriah and Tris, then to show me their excitement, they hug, slash, tackle me.
I would never admit this but I was really worried about not making it in. Dauntless has one of the hardest initiations, so becoming factionless is that much more likely. I've never been much of a softy, but I wouldn't possibly be able to bare being away from my family. But I guess all is well, for now.
Tris POV
I wake up in the middle of the night, and just lay there not knowing what to do. When suddenly the door creaks open and a figure walks in. I quickly turn over, and pretend to fall asleep.
The figure walks over to Uriah first, and says something too softly for me to here. After the figure is done, it starts walking towards me. I consider punching him or her in the face, when I feel a pair of lips touch my forehead. Then the mystery person whispers "I love you Tris", then walks away, closing the door.
My last thought before I fall asleep again is I love you too Zeke.
So I tried out a new POV this chapter hoped you guys liked it. What POV would you guys like the next chapter to be? I love having your guys' input, it's really helpful.
