Hey everyone, glad to see you all again and I'm glad to be bringing you another addition to the thrilling story we've all come to love. I have been crazy busy lately and I know I keep promising updates soon, but hopefully this time I'll be more free to bring you the updates and keep my promise. Now for a couple review answers.
Also I will be putting up a pole on my page, because I've decided to save the Naruto dbz idea for another day. I've been recently reading a lot of really good multi bloodline Naruto stories and really wanted to take a crack at it. I'm thinking about making it a "Neglected Naruto" story as well due to there not being enough of those that are very long out there, but that's up for grabs. Anyways I'll have the pole up not long after I post this chapter so please vote away. (No extra voting to all you cheaters out there * Threatens them with Gai-sensei strip tease genjutsu*) Anyways, onto the story.
Ahead of time warning, I will be cutting this chapter a bit short cuz to be honest. The finding Tsunade arc, while it was one of my favorite because it introduced the badassery that is the Rasengan, I just feel it's been done so much that just about anyone could recite it with their eyes closed. Yes I'll do a bit more of it but I won't be going super in depth because I'm really more interested in progressing further along with more pressing matters. Plus I kinda gave myself a deadline to finish this and I've WAY exceeded the allotted time frame. So don't flame me but I'm only really going to do the attempted abduction in this one and then make the next one longer.
Now to deal with a few reviews
Jayne D'Arc: Well I don't see any politeness from you, and if you don't like the story then don't read it. But I'm not going to take critique from someone who spells bastard wrong and hasn't written their own story and instead challenges others to do it for them, so kindly take your review and stuff it. I've made it very clear that if you don't like the story then don't read it. Have a nice day.
Kuroi: It will be explained during the chapter lol
SPark681: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, it's nice to know that I have been giving good content honestly.
The Beauty: Yeah, sorry about the harem thing, I wasn't really able to pick a set pairing so I've kinda been bemusing myself with the possibilities.
Dark Drawer: Glad to hear it, like I said I enjoy knowing that I have fans who like reading this, knowing it is what inspires me to continue updating.
Now, with the shoutout/ answer section taken care of, how about we jump to the part I'm sure you're all skipping this to get to XD
Naruto Reborn: Sasuke Uchiha
Chapter 5 page 2
Ami stood in the door looking at the two people standing before her, one of them being a shorter adult male with black hair that framed his face. He had pale skin and painted fingernails, aside from that the only thing she could really see about him was his black eyes, with the rest being covered by his black and red cloud pattern cloak. His partner was a much taller female with deep blue skin and a very interesting hairstyle, with the left side being cut pretty short and the right being long and brushed over her left eye. (1) She was quite pretty aside from the slightly insane gleam in her eyes that made her a bit scary, though Ami with a sleepy expression etched on her face simply could not find herself caring any less even as the black haired one began to speak.
"Well hello there, Ami Uzumaki, now if you would be so-" The male didn't even get to finish his sentence as Ami spoke.
"The Pervy Sage isn't here right now and I'm definitely not interested in whatever it is" And with that the door slammed in the two's faces, leaving them both standing there wide eyed.
"Did that really just happen?" The shark lady asked while turning to her partner.
"It would seem so" Came the reply.
"... Does she not know who we are?"
"I assume not, considering"
Without further question the female of the team wailed the door with her foot, causing it to swing open with enough force to dislodge one of the hinges, leaving the door swinging on an angle before it once again closed, partially.
"... THAT'S IT!" Came the female's voice again before the door shattered on impact from the wrapped weapon on her back. The now deeply annoyed girl pointed at Ami, who stood there in shock and fear. "You, Jinchuuriki, here, now, leg chopin time!"
"Calm yourself Kisame, we have yet to see if she will come of her own accord" Spoke Itachi calmly, before a smirk came to his lips. "Unless you plan to admit a door got the best of you"
"... Did you just make a joke? Is the world ending?" Came the reply from the newly named Kisame.
But before Itachi could even answer there was a shout from the end of the hall
"I've finally found you, you murdering bastard! And now I'll have my revenge!"
A Few Moments Ago
Naruto was seeing red, he couldn't understand what came over him as he ran into the small town. The only thing on his mind before he lost it was Itachi, and then everything became a blur to him. Even now in the back of his mind he could see what was happening, he could feel it, but it was like being a passenger in his own brain. Watching as his body moved without his accord.
-Is this how Sasuke has felt this whole time, his subconscious mind being buried beneath mine?- Naruto asked himself as the voice of his inner demon reached him.
-Kit we have a problem, that damned Uchiha brat somehow bonded with that cursed seal and is now not only fiddly drawing its power but my own chakra as well. That's how he wrestled control away from you, and if we don't get it back we may be dealing with even worse consequences!- Kurama called, trying to get his container to snap out of this daze he was in.
Naruto on the other hand was currently feeling pretty out of it, but Kurama's voice did manage to snap him to reality a little bit. This of course brought him to realize that he was now standing at the edge of the hall and looking straight at none other than Itachi Uchiha.
Present Time
Before Itachi could comment on the fact that his little brother had shown up Sasuke spoke again, black flame designs beginning to spread over half of his body as he did.
"Now Itachi, I will avenge the clan you murdered!" The raven haired boy spoke while violet and crimson chakra began to swirl around him, causing Itachi's eyes to widen.
"My my, you seem to have come across a new power, little brother. But how is it you've come to harness demonic chakra?" Itachi asked, immediately recognizing the demonic presence of the Kyuubi's chakra.
At this point was when Kisame spoke up "You didn't mention that your little brother was a Jinchuuriki there Itachi, but if that's the case then why are we after this squirt?" She asked, drawing an annoyed yell from Ski.
"This is a new development to me as well Kisame, but it seems we will need to capture them both…" Was the answer from the stoic Uchiha.
"Which one do you want?" Kisame asked as her hand moved toward the sword on her back, the psychotic gleam in her eye just shouting how badly she wanted to cut someone.
"I think it is time for me and my foolish sibling to have a little family reunion" The ever calm Itachi spoke as Kisame seemed all too happy at this and turned to the smaller female, raising her hand to grab her blade as Ami backed up. As this happened Itachi began making his way toward Sasuke, who in turn began doing a series of hand signs that Itachi faintly recognized from his days in the Leaf.
-Damn, so Sasuke is able to see my memory just like I can see his. This could be a problem- Naruto thought as he continued to try regaining control, even as Sasue called out the name of the technique.
"Chidori!" The younger Uchiha shouted as lightning crackled in the palm of his hand, beginning to charge at Itachi while raking his jutsu across the wall.
"So Kakashi taught you his lightning jutsu did he? But do you really think you can even hit me with it, foolish brother"
As he drew in close Itachi brought his hand out and tried to catch Sasuke by the wrist, but to his shock his brother passed straight through him. Turning around he managed to jump away from the strike that nearly put a hole in him, his eyes still wide after what happened.
-Genjutsu?- He thought to himself as he swung his brother around by the wrist and kicked him away, back into the wall hard enough to fracture it a little.
Sasuke on the other hand hit the wall hard and coughed up a bit of saliva and blood from the impact, quickly beginning to pull himself to his feet. Before he could get too far though he was grabbed by the throat and slammed back into the wall, gagging on his breath he tried to claw at the arm of Itachi to free himself, only to receive a hard knee to the gut that keeled him over in pain.
Itachi watched as his younger sibling remained curled over, vomiting up a bit more spit and blood from the knee, but Itachi wasn't about to wait for him to recover and leaned down, grabbing Sasuke by the hair and lifting him up.
"It seems whatever power you've been tapping into has made you stronger, but you don't seem to have control over it. Foolish little brother, you still don't have enough ha-" He was interrupted mid-sentence when a punch to the chest sent him reeling back as he dropped Sasuke to the ground.
Said boy fell to his feet and hunched over slightly, his hair masking his face from view as he began to chuckle a little. Lifting his head he looked at Itachi with his sharingan burning brightly, all three tomo spinning as he began the signs for Chidori again, but Itachi was not going to let him get off another shot and charged forward quickly. Before Sasuke could finish the last sign he felt a fist collide with his stomach, causing him to yet again double over in pain before a kick caught him in the chin and lifted him from the ground. He didn't even get a second to fall to the ground as he was again grabbed by his throat by the older Uchiha, who slammed him into the wall hard and pinned him there.
-This is bad, what do we do Kurama?- Naruto mentally asked, trying to see if the fox had any ideas for regaining control and hopefully getting out of this situation. There was no reply from the fox as just before they could act Naruto saw the one thing he was hoping not to.
"Now foolish little brother, let's remind you of just how weak you are" Itachi spoke as his sharingan slowly spun and turned into the Mangekyou Sharingan, and then the world faded away.
Meanwhile
Ami watched in terror after dodging another swing from the shark woman's large wapon as Sasuke looked into the eyes of his brother, not moving at all before he suddenly began to scream in pain and terror.
"What did you do to him you bastard?!" Ami shouted out in horror as she watched her friend writhing on the ground in pain, trying to run to him only to have her path intercepted by Kisame again. Her worries grew even more when Sasuke's screams suddenly stopped as he then lay still, his eyes slowly drifting closed as Ami again tried to get to him, only to be knocked back by a kick from the ever in the way shark
"I wouldn't worry too much about him girlie, cuz right now you're dealing with me" Came the voice of Kisame as she grabbed Samehada once again and swung at the young Uzumaki.
Ami herself tried to cross her arms to block the incoming strike, knowing she had no way to dodge as she waited for the pain.
Only it never came, instead she heard metal clashing and a grunt of exertion.
Opening her eyes she saw the shocking sight of her teammate's back, Sasuke facing away from her and holding the massive blade back with a pair of kunai. He seemed to be struggling slightly but somehow he kept the blade from coming down on them both. Looking back to where he previously was she saw that he had indeed moved, and even the older black haired guy was wide eyed seeing this.
"Sas...uke?" She spoke softly, almost inaudible. There was no reply as she realized something was off about him, the way his shoulders slumped, his head hung ever so slightly and despite holding the large blade he seemed almost… relaxed?
"Itachi, did this kid just stop my blade… without opening his eyes?!" The shark woman almost shouted out at her partner, who seemed equally shocked at this.
Indeed the boy stood there, eyes closed and holding twin kunai above his head to prevent the blade from falling. But that wasn't even the most shocking part, no, that came when he dropped both of the knives and instead placed his hands on the wrappings of the sword, and pushed.
The force of the push was enough to lift the blade and cause Kisame to stumble slightly, which left her wide open for the kick that followed to the gut. Now it wasn't an incredibly strong kick, but it did hurt enough to double over the female long enough for one last surprise. A good strong knee to the face was just enough to send her reeling back and cause her to release the blade momentarily to grab her face.
At this point Itachi snapped out of his stupor and joined the frey, dashing forward and attempting to punch his younger sibling. Said boy didn't even turn toward him and yet somehow leapt up, twisting his body around the attempted attack and tried to send an upside down axe kick at the elder Uchiha's head.
The kick was rather easily blocked, but it was still quite surprising that Sasuke had managed to dodge the punch, especially so acrobatically. Though it was at this point that Itachi got a look at Sasuke's face and managed to put two and two together.
Twisting his hand he latched onto Sasuke's shin and attempted to send another punch at the boy, who again managed to twist himself out of the way. But this time Itachi had planned for that and swung his sibling, using his already pinned leg to slam him into the wall before grabbing his throat and shoulder.
"Now now little brother, fighting while your mind sleeps isn't fair" He said while beginning to squeeze hard on Sasuke's should, causing multiple cracks, pops, and the sound of a bit of skin tearing. This of course quickly brought the young raven haired boy painfully back to reality as he again began to yell in pain.
Itachi's words cause Ami to go wide eyed yet again, Sasuke had somehow escaped whatever his brother did to him and came to her rescue on instinct alone?
Before they could continue further though the entire hallway began to change, becoming a strange fleshy mass that looked like the inside of a large animal. This development caused Itachi to drop Sasuke as he turned to see none other than Jiraiya the Sanin standing at the edge of the hall, an unconscious woman slung over his shoulder as he spoke confidently.
"I have to hand it to you, distracting me with a woman placed under a genjutsu was a good plan. But now the legendary Sanin Jiraiya is here to save the day!" The white haired man called out while doing a heroic pose.
Now Itachi was strong and he knew it, but after using the Tsukyomi already he knew even with Kisame here they would be hard pressed to fight Jiraiya and then escape with Ami. So instead he quickly gathered up Kisame and her sword before the two of them ran down the hall with Jiraiya hot in pursuit.
However before the Sanin could manage to catch them they turned a corner, and when he rounded the corner soon after he found them gone and only a black flame as the indication that they had blown a hole in the wall.
Jiraiya quickly sealed away the flame for later study and then made his way back to examine Ami and the younger Uchiha.
-This just got a lot more complicated- The elder ninja thought to himself as he sighed.
And that's where I'll cut it for now, I'm very sorry to all of you who expected me to do a longer chapter. It's been hard to Keep up lately and like I said I missed my previous deadline so I really wanted to get this chapter out there. Plus thanks to a particularly nasty review, I felt the need to speed up production a bit more to a dress the issue (You know who you are)
Sombra's hair from Overwatch
