Hello readers,
I was initially going to do this later this month after I finished the next chapter, but because of the tragic loss of Alan Rickman (aka Severus Snape), I decided to do it today.
I've spent the last few months studying for finals and finishing my semester strong, dealing with summer internship applications, and in my spare time reviewing and rewriting this story along with others.
Nothing major has been done, just a few plot-holes fixed and a few new features added.
I recommend rereading the entire story from chapter 1. It's been a while, so it may help in remembering what happened and also because a lot of new features have been brought through.
I especially advise you reread chapter 4. There is a critical new character introduced that becomes crucial later on in the story.
Some new features to look out for:
-Jeff has a NOSE!
-BEN has severe hydrophobia
-Toby stutters when excited or nervous
-Some new minor characters and character development in the Disney Arc
-Some minor edits to the glamours
-More explanation on Sally's existence
-L.J. has a "pocket dimension" feature and a serious side. Also, more backstory on his interdimensional origin
-Slight change to the Michelle story in Chapter 3
-Major Change to the investigation in Chapter 6
-Implied character prescription drug addiction
I've also cleaned up the AN's in each chapter, getting rid of old messages and making them more appealing.
I am overwhelmed by how many people enjoy the story and I hope to keep you all entertained by my work.
Happy 2016.
Sincerely,
The Smiling Crow