oneshot summary: A Mary Sue is supposed to be the perfect female, with power, grace, beauty and charisma. In fiction, yes they are. In reality, not really. This is how a Mary Sue(she will be named Yui in this story if she ever appeared beyond this chapter) will find her life in the Naruto world.

Warning: this could qualify as a "Downer Ending" and could contain character bashing and deaths,and possible adult/sexual themes (spanking) and exaggeration of some situations/concepts/tropes, could also have a positive/negative version from a Naruto character that you dear reader either love/hate, and you can include Breaking The Fourth Wall as well. Read at your own risk!


Mary Sue? Not So Much! The Epic Fail Of An Overrated Heroine!

Star-Vader Omega Glendios:"This oneshot is more like different parts/ideas of the Mary Sue cliches that will be heavily deconstructed. All those parts are not necessarily related to each other, and... the world of Mary Sue wil end! [Ultimate Break:World End!]"


Part 01: Appearing in a forest:

Star-Vader Omega Glendios:"This part is a deconstruction and a realistic take to how anyone, male or female(need to be more Politically Correct here!) (I won't make a Gary Stu chapter) would react to being thrown in another reality."


'YES!' Yui, a normal and PLAIN and NORMALLY ATTRACTIVE and with NORMAL bust, waist and hips (seriously what's with all those 'the most beautiful woman in the world' cliche, there are like, more than 3 billion women in the world, and somehow all those who are thrown in another reality are most of the time bunch of bombshells with figures that somehow all other females- in a world where being attractive is something akin to a game trait that could be acquired with no problem or minimal effort-would kill for? Please, cut this author a break) woman screamed in her mind, she was sucked by the tv into her favourite anime show, found herself in a forest, and she couldn't be any happier. Now she would become the best kickass kunoichi, surpass all those bitches, namely Sakura and Ino, and have the undying love of her cute and sweet fans especially Sasuke and Naruto!

She started standing only to hear a growling sound behind her. She turned around only to see a big tiger behind her, with said tiger raising his claws to maim her!

Fear gripped her - like any NORMAL person being thrown in another place they didn't see or visit before and put in a dangerous and deadly situations, really, just watch the faces of those being put in death traps in the Saw horror movie series - and moved her body and ran like no tomorrow, only to be terrified as the tiger was easily catching up to her. Obviously it would catch to her, let alone the fact that this tiger wanted to use her as food, but Yui, differently to the tiger didn't have any chakra which automatically made her MUCH weaker than even a Genin with low chakra capacity, add to that the fact that she lived in a world that was mostly sheltered and peaceful so even her physical abilities were NOT in any form equal to Any inhabitant who at least made an effort to at least train a bit.

She tried, oh how she tried to 'summon/awaken her hidden power' but she kept failing miserably because being thrown in another world does not necessarily mean an automatic power-up or gainig a game-breaker ability. It's pretty possible it would be like swimming deep in the ocean with goggles and oxygen bottles, as just being there doesn't give you the ability to swim as fast as fish and the likes of the water creatures. Being REINCARNATED could have gave her the potential to use chakra but let's face the facts: If reincarnation was true then there is always the possibility that other people were also reincarnated which means that there's no guarantee that she is 'The Chosen One' to unite the world, save it or the likes, and let's not forget the possibility of being reborn with physical or mental problems.

She kept running in fear for her life, tears running on her face and sweating from fear as well running, and in this life and death situation, she understood one thing the most; She wasn't a heroine, a villainess, or even a normal and random character in a fictionary show; She is nothing more a woman who was separated from her family, her freinds, and for all she knew she is declared missing/dead in her original world, what with the whole different flow of time between realities and the causality and the Relativity Theory.

She now had to deal-hopelessly- with the fact that she is nothing more than a defenseless sheep in a world where people here kill others like nobody's bussines, where death, torture, experimentation, wars, anarchy and rape happen on a daily basis, add to that the fact that this world's inhabitants might not even speak english or japanese, or any known language in her world at all.

Yui didn't know for how long she was escaping from the tiger (her new nightmare). But she swore in her mind that she will never wish to be put in another reality. If this is just the Naruto world that is always about adventure and hope, and it's this bad, just how horrible other anime worlds could be behind the scenes? Especially worlds that purposely include horrifying situations or ones that could be interpreted as nightmare fuels?

She suddenly fell on the ground, unmoving, her body simply couldn't handle anymore strain, after all, even with chakra there is no way for a civilian that never trained to take that much stress, and no matter how much of a Determinator someone could be, there are limits to anyone that cannot be broken no matter how much you try.

She felt despair and hopelessness filling her. This is not a happy story, not for her. No Plot Armor for her to be saved, and no Deus Ex Machina either. And even if she somehow managed to escape, or the tiger left her, she would have to deal with food, shelter, and even if she managed to secure those things, there is always the chance that another predator would attack her. Either way her chances of survival are slim at best and they're already still decreasing they might as well be an Absolute Zero.

Just one of the countless mooks and useless characters that could easily be taken from this world without any care, that's who she was in this reality. She smiled a hollow smile at that thought.

Yui looked around her with great effort but she couldn't see the tiger, she didn't have time to sigh in relief though as she felt a weight on her back. She turned her head with difficulty and she saw the tiger that was hunting her.

'Impossible...No,no,no,no,NO NO NO NO NO! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!' those were her last thoughts as the tiger slashed her head, killing her instantly, her face frozen in an expression of pure horror with eyes wide in fear and despair.


Part 02:Stop your Bratty attitude you Weirdo!:

(Star-Vader Omega Glendios:"This is how the children-who know each other- will act when a Mary Sue who doesn't have the Plot Armor tries to act like the boss of the class and annoy other classmates. This will be a Mary Sue Bashing story.")


Yui smiled.

It was the theam placement day at the Academy and she turned 12 years old this year and yes she was reincarnated this time and she will gain all she wants!Sadly for her she was born a civilian.

What? Did you expect her to be born as some kind of an Uchiha/Uzumaki/Hyuga/Senju combination with all affinities and all possible bloodlines and abilities that existed and those that did not exist yet?

If so then you dear reader are in the wrong story! And honestly there were probably millions of pregnant females in this world anyway, so the chances that she will be born with some kind of overpowered ability is very slim at best.

Yui entered into the classroom, and most children ignored her (males) or glared at her(females) or chuckled at her wondering wether Hinata will deal with her (males and females).

Personally, Naruto was more liked than her because his antics were at least amusing and his ability at making plans on the fly were things that teachers appreciated. Now if only they could have made his talents and attitude selective to target those who hurt the economy of Konoha and stop him from his vandalism from the beginning...

Yui ignored them, after all there is no way that they don't like her and want to befriend her(keep dreaming little girl), they're simply playing hard to catch!

She went without care to our duck-butt haired resident, who in all honesty would rather fight with our favourite blond.

"Hi Sasuke-kun!"she cheerfully exclaimed.

Sasuke looked at her annoyed. Why would she bug him while she could bother Naruto was beyond him, oh right..Naruto made it clear that he is interested in Sakura and that he also doesn't like her, even though Yui most likely ignored his rejection.

"Leave me alone." he bluntly said. Seriously why the heck is she even bugging him anyway? He had seen her bugging Shikamaru, Kiba and Shino and many other male clan heirs. But she completely ignored his warning, after all Miss Perfect is a friend to anyone and no one could escape her charisma!

She obviously forgot that if Naruto AND Hinata disliked her, someone who they kept learning with as a classmate then she definitely is not charismatic or sweet or attractive pesonality wise, or at least is unable to act the part.

The fact she is acting like a slut because of how much she bugs her male classmates (heirs mostly) and keeps trying flashing them aside, she also didn't have any female friends because of her bratty attitude and her ignorance about her mistakes. Sasuke, while not exactly friends with naruto, he at least respect the fact that they're rivals somewhat, and he also has known other people in Konoha. Naruto himself has a friend/brother in Iruka, and acquaintances in Kiba, Chouji, Shikamaru and Shino. And he's a good friend with Sakura and Ino,and sometimes talks with Hinata.

It was one of the few good results of Yui's useless actions, as when she started at the academy, she started antagonizing almost everyone(she kept talking about being a protagonist and everyone else being nothing more than a bunch of NPCs and beneath her notice even though no one understood her) and kept bugging the girls, especially Sakura who she kept insulting by saying that she is 'a flatchested slutty bitch with an unreasonably big forehead'.

First of all, the flat chest insult is completely inaccurate, since Sakura was OBVIOUSLY 5-6 years old at that time, therefore she won't have some kind of a bombshell for a chest until she is at least 14 or older, genetics could also be included in the growth formula.

Secondly, the 'slutty bitch' comment is, from almost all her classmates' viewpoint is hypocritical since Yui keeps trying to seduce the male heirs, and kept ignoring everybody else.

Finally, the 'forehead' comment while true but it was also unnecessary.

What really changed things from the supposed future was the fact that she started her acts from the beginning, and thanks to that the girls didn't like her first, and since Yui started antagonizing Sakura along with the others from the start, the girls felt that they should unite against such a threat, helping Sakura from being bullied by the mad girl.

And her extremely annoying acts of 'love' for the males angered everyone in her class something fierce, which caused the girls to believe that she was a bad example of a kunoichi, so they trained harder to make sure that they aren't such a poor excuse for a kunoichi.

Also, because Naruto already had a crush on Sakura he was quite annoyed and angry at Yui for her insults and at some point screamed to her in front of the whole class that Sakura is very pretty and that her forehead is very charming and attractive.

Sakura nearly fainted from the embarrassment and happiness at that declaration. She couldn't stop blushing and being very embarrassed when the other girls teased her about her 'blond knight' though.

Sakura befriended Naruto thanks to him standing up for her, and Ino and Hinata came along, and Shikamaru and Chouji followed the wave. And thanks to that Naruto didn't feel to overdo it with his pranks, and he had also trained more seriously, which helped him graduate without worrying about the Clone Jutsu.

He still was tricked to steal the forbidden scroll by Mizuki though so he knew About the kyuubi.

They also trained together in groups so there was no real problems with teamwork. Except Yui who didn't care about the opinions of the 'NPCs'.

Even Sasuke and Shikamaru trained with them, if only so Yui won't bug them all the time.

Unfortunately for Yui, she took what she deserved last year when she wanted to fight Hinata for Naruto's hand(yes she was dumb enough to ask a 11 year old child's hand) and failed for few reasons.

First, they're children so no one is going to take the bet seriously(real fact).

Second, Hinata was far from being the shy girl she was at the beginning of the school, the effect of having emotional suport from Naruto, Ino and Sakura (people who most of the time wear their hearts on their sleeves and are pretty vocal and confident) and the rest of her classmates giving her a nice confidence boost to fight without fear, and even if she wasn't confident, as long as the opponents are not too high leveled, just one juuken strike to her enemies is capable of defeating or weakening them.

So even if Hinata won't be able to defeat her cousin Neji any time soon, defeating one little brat is simple and easy enough.

Third, Hinata became quite annoyed when Yui kept insulting her by calling her a bimbo whore.

Seriously, she barely shows anything of her body with her clothes and her breasts were NOWHERE that big enough to be insulted like that!

On a side note, Naruto, the crazy and imaginative one in the class theorized that there might be another reality where Yui's wild imagination was a fact and Sakura outright exclaimed about what kind of reality where she, Ino, Hinata or any girl for that matter will be that desperate to sleep with a guy and Shino feeling left out simply pointed at Yui and laughter erupted in class.


Star-Vader Omega Glendios who at that time were watching/reading/writing/recording the events shook their head at the sad fact that this is how many other 'realities' were becoming these days.

Just give your 'Protagonist' a game-breaker ability and all women/guys in their dimension, or any dimension for that matter will want their babies and become a bunch of psychotic nymphos for them, or if they didn't and the guy/girl wanted them, well it seems that the 'It's Not Rape If They Enjoyed It' phrase is some kind of a universal concept in those realities. Of course we all take it as some kind of epic seduction or a black comedy rape, oh well!


Anyway back to the story, oh yes, so Hinata 'fought' Yui in the training field that saturday (the students don't stay anymore than 3 hours instead of 5 and they didn't have much study material that week) at 8:00, with predictable results.

(Flashback)

"You remember the rules; only when your opponent forfeits you win! And the winner can punish the loser with anything as long as it isn't slavery, doesn't cause permanant damage or takes up a lot of their time. BEGIN!" shouted the female teacher Amai Keiko(OC for female-female battles in the academy and another teacher for seduction and 'female' arts), even though she could already see the winner, especially with the rule that Yui decided on. Hinata simply went with that since there is no disadvantage to her.

Yui didn't bother trying to look into her opponent's stance or discern her style, since she obviously 'knew' all about the 'bimbo' then she will definitely win!

She rushed at Hinata blindly, using her fist to punch directly without any plans, after all she won before the battle began.

Hinata simply sidestepped to the left, and touched her extended arm using juuken, making that arm useless.

Yui screamed from pain as she didn't expect miss Shy Girl to directly attack her without care.

Hinata looked at her and smiled 'gently' and said "Had enough? You seem hurt" No doubt being with a bunch of clever and devious people was more effective on her personality than what any one thought.

"Not even close! When this battle ends the loser will be very sorry!" Yui backfired.

Hinata shrugged, then quickly appeared on her side with a kawarimi and hit Yui's other arm, her legs, and stopped attacking, with her right hand just about to touch Yui's heart.

The entire exchange took less than 5 minutes.

Said girl was frozen in place. She tried to understand what happened but couldn't do that.

Hinata sighed "Just give up, you lost. And if you continue trying you'll only embarrass yourself even more."

Yui ,even though she was unable to use chakra or move her limbs, was too stubborn for her own good and shook her head vehemently"I won't accept anything more than my victory!"


Star-Vader Omega Glendios shook their head and they could already see the reader's reaction.

It never ceased to amuse them how every time a 'hero/protagonist' says such lines like the ones that Yui just said, almost every one will be enjoying how much of a 'badass/awesome' they are but the 'villain/antagonist' gets ridiculed or insulted for saying/doing the same lines or acts.

"Oh dear readers there will be a (MINOR SPANKING SCENE) read at your own risk! And as you already saw, Naruto characters are OOC, so don't complain to me about how I portray Hinata or tell me that she won't do that or that she is too nice to hurt someone, especially if you are also another 'god' in this multiverse we call (fan fiction . net ) and turned your Hyuga Hinata/Naruto and any version of him/your OCs into some kind of a bombshell/hunk who started giving sexual/ whatever service to your protagonist/dimension's characters even before she/he is 10 years old or turned him/her into some kind of god(dess) who with a wave of hand could kill all the bijuus combined along with the insane cheat-code named the Jyuubi, permanantly that is, and yes I've seen such dimensions. And remember, children can be very cruel. And so am I! That's why I made the Mary Sue without any of the usual powers and charisma she normally has. Without a 'god''s favouritism, she is useless." Star-Vader Omega Glendios told.

"And a warning: NEVER mimic/ copy/ try to do what's going to happen in this scene to ANY child, that's child abuse by our reality's standards. I should warn because no one knows if a child who is too smart for his own good would read this! And I am overdoing the whole thing!"


Yui shook with anger. How could she ever lose!

"I won't give up! As long I don't forfeit I haven't lost!"

"A smarter person would have given up by now."Hinata looked smugly at her. "But since you want to be humiliated this much I think there is no choice, and the loser will feel very sorry indeed" she smirked at her opponent.

"W-What are you talking about?!"Yui screamed in anger mixed with fear.

Hinata slowly closed in, making sure to scare Yui by looking as evil as she could. Yui managed to stop herself from forfeiting, even though it was probably better for her if she had just forfeited.

She was directly in front of her and quickly gagged her by using a piece of cloth that she took ftom inside her jacket (ninja are pragmatic), making Yui unable to speak clearly to make sure that she won't be able to forfeit.

"MMMMM!"

"I wonder what she is planning to do now." Ino thought out loud and the rest were sharing her thoughts.

"Well then, you are completely unable to escape, not with you bound and your chakra sealed anyways." Yui felt worried in front of Hinata's nonchalant voice.

"Just before,you said that you won't lose as long as you didn't give up."Hinata kept talking "But you really should have made the losing condition simpler and easier to acheive. That way I wouldn't have had the chance to do this to you. Now you have no one to blame but yourself."

Hinata then used her byakugan to make sure that she won't move any time soon, afterwards she quickly returned to the classroom.

"Oh, I think that someone will be very humiliated before school ends" Naruto pointed.

Hinata quickly returned with a chair in her hands and spoke politely to Keiko "Teacher, can I get permission to do what I should to win this fight?"

Keiko sighed, she KNEW that something like this could happen in a kunoichi's life, as slim the chances were "You are permitted Hyuga, but before that."

"Listen to me! All boys are to return home, girls may stay if they want! If I see a boy here I'll put them at detention!"

"Eeehh!? Why teacher? Please I want to see!" Naruto (he is still innocent, his Sexy Jutsu aside) was the loudest while Sasuke, Shino and Shikamaru either knew or didn't care so they excused themselves quickly.

"Well, for one, it's something that only females may see without any problem and if you boys wanted to watch then I would have to give you the same punishment your classmate is going to get." Keiko lied through her teeth, after all she can't tell the boys' families that their children had just seen a bare-bottom spanking and that she allowed them to-that and the girls might have taken such a punishment at some point, after all not all of-, and she saw that they believed her lie and went home. Naruto also went home after Sakura promised to tell him if it wasn't very embarrassing.

A minute after the boys left Hinata went to Yui -who now understood what would happen to her and was shuddering and screaming uselessly through her gag- and picked her up with one hand and dragged her to the chair. She sat on it and had Yui put on her knees.

"I told you before, you should have forfeited when you had the chance." Yui was terrified by now and she couldn't escape.

"And even if you somehow managed to take off the cloth and forfeited, I could easily use your punishment to do what I am about to do, to you, either way you lose. You have no choice other than taking what I am going to dish at you. And since you enjoy insulting us girls for being 'slutty', then let's see how 'innocent and childlike' your underwears are."

Hinata then swiftly took off Yui's pants showing her black lace panties. Hinata raised an eyebrow at her choice in underwear.

"Ha! she kept insulting us for wearing normal or ninja clothes while she is the one wearing a perverted underwear! what a hypocrite!" snorted Sakura.

"So true, forehead!" responded Ino with the other girls agreeing to them.

Keiko felt a headache coming to her 'Maybe I should have tried more to convince her to have me interfere if things became too bad, but then again maybe she would learn something from this? I can only hope...'.

Everyone (females) looked back as Hinata raised her hand and...

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

Spanked Yui, hard, and forcefully (without juuken naturally, she just wants to humiliate the brat, not cripple her permanantly).

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

Hinata alternated between the cheeks, making sure to give both of them the 'attention' they deserve.

Yui was screaming even though her screams and yells were muffled by the gag. 'I should have been the one humiliating and spanking her, not the other way around!'

"Feeling sorry?" Hinata looked at her face, only to see Yui's eyes glaring at her. "Hmmm, I guess not."

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

By now, Yui's cheeks were turning quite red -those in her back because of the spanking and those on her face because of embarrassment- and tears were falling from her eyes.

"You know?-SLAP!-" Hinata started saying. "You should have-SLAP!- listened to me-SLAP!- and forfeited-SLAP!- when you-SLAP!- had the chance!-SLAP!- Now I can-SLAP!- keep doing this-SLAP!- as long as I want-SLAP!- and you-SLAP!- can do nothing-SLAP!- to stop me-SLAP!- or save yourself!"

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

SLAP!

Yui's ass was taking now a cute shade of red from how hard the spanking was. 'No, no more, it hurts! it hurts a lot! Just stop!' she thought, crying while being spanked.

Even in her previous life she was never severely punished by her previous parents and definitely not spanked.

After few more minutes Hinata stopped her hand, rubbing it on Yui's ass.

"Now Yui-chan, had enough? Just nod if you agree, if you don't well I can keep this for hours. Take you choice."

Yui nodded quickly "Good! But beforehand I'll have to warn you about your punishment for losing and this is non-negotiable, not to you anyway." Hinata smirked evilly at her.

Yui's heart dropped.

"You will be forced to to stop annoying the class for a whole week, or I will tan your rear again." Hinata's face was qute devilish.

"And trust me, I can."

Yui gulped. It seems that there's no escape from this.

(Flashback End)

That humiliating episode of Yui's idiocy aside, things returned to normal just after a week or so, much to Naruto's and the others' annoyance. Obviously she just was too scared of being dealt with like that again, as she just finished her punishment' condition and then returned to her original unbearable personality.

"Silence!" the sound of the teacher Iruka stopped the murmurs of the graduated children, and fortunately stopped Yui's hopeless advances on Sasuke.

"Team placements are:(the same canon teams)" he said.

"Teacher! what about me!? Why aren't I on team 7?!" Yui exclaimed, as she didn't hear her name.

"Well Yui-chan, since you didn't try to make an effort to befriend your classmates and that you also are actually an extra student so you will be on the list for the reserves. As for not being in team 7, the team is already filled with 3 genins and a jonin. We can't put you in a completed team after all." Iruka said.

"NOOOOOO!" Yui miserably screamed. Naruto snickered at her. "We were destinated to be a team." she said unhappily.

"...NO! I won't accept this!" muttered Yui.

(9 months later (I think it should have passed that much time at least, we all know that anime doesn't take the conept of time very well, just watch Detective Conan, even after what should be at the very least two years IN THE SERIES IF we take every case as a one-day situation, he is still in the first year))

Sasuke was having lunch with his team, tired as he was after the damn Oto-Suna invasion.

Orochimaru was killed in the fight between him and Hizuren as when Orochimaru was distracted in one of the more intense battles he had, Naruto -who woke up before Kakashi approached him to tell him to stop Gaara- appeared above Orochimaru's barrier (he used shadow clones to not get burned by the barrier) and summoned Gamabunta, right above Orochimaru who wasn't capable of escaping in time and his entire body was crushed to death (no matter how strong you are you still need your head and heart to live as long as you are a human, right?), the barrier being destroyed by the big toad's weight.

"Hey guys, did you hear about what happened to Yui after the invasion?" Sakura asked.

"Oh yeah, she tried to kill Ero-sennin after the fight and got stripped from the ninja ranks and was jailed for her troubles." Naruto responded.

"Couldn't have surprised me." Sasuke was uncaring.

(meanwhile in the T&I)

"Is this true, Inoichi? This seems too farfetched than possible." Hizuren asked the head of the T&I department. The report he just read about what the yamanaka's jutsu found in the imprisoned mad girl's mind is... disturbing, to say the least.

"Yes! Hokage-sama!" responded the blond man.

Hizuren rubbed his head preparing for the coming headache.

"A whole different reality where we are nothing but just an imagination. Talk about impossibility come true." Shikaku added his opinion.

"I am more worried about those 'alternate realities' of our world and our... alternate personalities in them." Hizuren said honestly.

"I'll just show you with my jutsu, and it's better that way as I still can't believe it."

"Please do, Inoichi" the Hokage ordered.

Inoichi did so, and the three watched both fascinated and disturbed about some of the 'realities' that Yui knew of, disturbed especially of the ones where Naruto ends up being tortured just for the hell of it, let alone where he, as a male or female ends up being raped and broken just to make him/her kill anything that moves in their sight.

Hizuren was quite baffled about how out of character his versions are in those, ones who wallow in self-loathing, and ones who make such situationd happen while smiling in their hearts, and some who are so nonchalant that they allowed OROCHIMARU to kidnap him just because it would be safer that way. Pretty crazy he can only say.

The other weird ones where those, as they understood, with a ridiculous 'pairing' like those with Hashirama and Madara.

Shikaku snorted at that. If that was ever true in their world then it would be the day the Nara males would start training like Might Gai.

Inoichi was more worried about the Ino Naruto pairing. Nothing personal to the boy (he really respects him) but NO ONE WILL TOUCH HIS SWEET PRINCESS! Not on his watch! His wife though...

"What should we do with her then?" Shikaku asked in all seriousness.

"I think the best option is we take all the information needed, and then... Take care of her." Hizuren answered them.

"Not to mention, things are already different than that 'Canon' she knew by a lot, the fact that Orochimaru died while you lived Hokage-sama, and that Naruto's relation with his team is more stable than what she knew." Inoichi added.

"The informations she has about those Akatsuki guys and Danzo's activities is one hell of a knowledge though, no doubt they will be useful in the future." Shikaku stated.

"I'll call Jiraiya and tell him about this, and we must bring back Tsunade ASAP as well, not with what could happen to her if that 'Fanon' is anything to go by." Hizuren said and promptly sunshin'ed out, leaving the two men to deal with the unconscious girl.


"WHERE THE HELL AM I!"

The 'woman/girl' who was once known as Okino Yui found herself in a place where all colors were everywhere, and she couldn't find her way out of this damned place!

She remembered the fact that she was killed by that Inoichi guy after they invaded her head.

How she hated it!

"Well, well, well, what do we have here?" a voice resounded from every direction that has the human look everywhere futilely until a figure appeared.

A woman who looked 20 or so, has a long red hair and eyes, a good figure that was complimented with what appears an armor that showed her curves and didn't hide her abdomen and legs (the image of this story).

What worried Yui was the void of black that was behind her and the red aura around the woman's figure.

"W-Who are you?!" Yui asked with fear.

"I am who dragged you here, or the Naruverse in general, and my name is... well I am not exactly Star-Vader Omega Glendios, after all this for is just an Avatar I use in this realm, call me Illusion, as I am an entity who doesn't actually exist." the now-named Illusion said smiling.

"And, I have no need for you anymore, now disappear!" Illusion said nastily as Yui's body began being disintegrated and being sucked into the black vortex behind Yui.

"W-Wait a minute! What do you mean with this?!"

"Your entire lives were nothing more than an imagination that I, that we created, pages and words written just for our and their entertainment! We also were the ones who had you humiliated by your classmates. Not that our entire universe is actually real mind you, but don't worry because even if we were deleted, we'll stay with them forever~!"

Yui watched in muted horor herself being absorbed into the -in her mind- instoppable insane woman, becoming part of her, forever.

THE END.