OMSC. I was just reading through my past chapters. I have terrible grammar. XD.
Anywho... I feel bad for not updating... So here's another chapter!
Oh, and if I contradict myself at all, sorry. I'm really bad about that stuff.
And guess who it is... SHYPAW. MY STARCLAN I'M AMAZING. Following plan. XD
AshfurTheBroken: I think your fanfic will be awesome! And... FLAGZ. (I'll explain this soon.)
Solomon7: Thank you for telling me. I will now force them to have more interactions. *Volepaw groans in the background* And, Lionblaze and Cinderheart already have kits... With names... Hollykit is one of them though... And I will use the other names as well. About the prophecy... Hehehe...
Thunderandshadowcats: I know it took a long time. D: I AM SO SORRY. I wanted to update sooner, but then we went to California for a while... And yeah... (My stupid computer broke...)
So about the flags... I am going to make flags for some of the characters in my fanfiction. You get one vote per flag. A new flag will come out every three/five chapters. Maybe.
Candidates for a flag are:
Volepaw
Lightpaw
Eaglepaw
Shrewpaw
Darkpaw
I will add other characters later.
Me: *spots Tallstar in Starclan* *Drags him over*
Tallstar: *Hisses* Who are you?
Me: OMG! HAI! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! *hugs*
Tallstar: Oh... Um.. Thanks? *squirms*
Me: :D
Tallstar: O_O
Now, onto the story!
Shypaw's P.O.V
Shypaw sat at the edge of camp, eating a rabbit. She had just finished training with Harespring. He was a good mentor, meaning he trained her without wasting anytime talking.
Two moons had passed from her first gathering. Two moons since her last meeting with Flamepaw. She began to remember that night when she heard yelling.
"Get away from our camp!" It was her brother, Smokepaw.
"Never!" That time it was Swampaw, her other brother. They came tumbling over. She jumped up as they ran over her rabbit, completely destroying it.
"Smokepaw! Swampaw!" They stopped in their tracks. "You just ruined my rabbit!" "You two should know better!" They looked down at their paws as Shypaw scolded them. She was known to have a temper.
"Now no one gets to eat it!" She flicked her tail as she stalked away.
"Hey!" Lightningpaw sprinted towards her. Shypaw sighed. Windclan had the most apprentices, yet Lightningpaw was the only other she-cat. Well, there was Silverpaw.
"I say what your littermates did there." "The mouse-brains." Shypaw looked over the ginger she-cat. Shypaw never really wanted to be friends with her. But then, Lightningpaw still tried. Shypaw guessed it payed to have the prettiest apprentice in the clan as your friend.
Smokepaw and Swampaw drooled over her whenever they weren't playing. Snakepaw and Shadepaw too. Only Icepaw, Lightningpaw's brother, didn't pay attention to Lightningpaw. He always sat alone in the shadows. Staring at Shypaw.
"I guess. They're pretty stupid. The only other thing they know how to do is moon over you." Shypaw spat out the last sentence.
Lightningpaw pouted. "Not all the toms like me. You're pretty too!" She sounded genuine, but Shypaw wouldn't have it.
"The only one that doesn't moon over you is Icepaw, and he's your brother!" She growled, "And I'm not pretty. No could ever like a cat with one blue eye, and one red."
Lightningpaw was about to say something else, but Shypaw had already stood up, and was bolting straight out of camp.
"Shypaw!" Shypaw heard her mother Nightcloud come out after her. She knew if she kept running, she would get a lecture from her later, so she stopped.
"What's the matter?" Nightcloud stopped beside her, and licked her between her ears.
"Nothing." the black she-cat pretended. "I was going for a walk."
"Are you sure?" Shypaw could tell Nightcloud didn't believe her.
"Yes."
"I worry about you. You seem so lonely all the time." Nightcloud looked at her with concern.
"I'm not! I have Silverpaw!" Silverpaw was the only other she-cat apprentice, and she was a medicine cat. Shypaw had yet to hear her say anything.
"I know but," Nightcloud trailed off.
"Can I go on my walk now?" She asked.
Nightcloud nodded. "Be careful."
Shypaw trotted away, then looked back, and saw that Nightcloud had trotted back into camp.
Then she ran.
She ran all the way to the Shadowclan border. She nearly crossed it but stopped in time. Shypaw stared across. I wonder what Flamepaw is doing.
She followed the border until she reached the end of the clan territory. Then she walked a ways until she reached an abandoned Twoleg nest.
It smelled strongly of Flamepaw. Too strongly.
She padded in.
"Hi, Shypaw."
Omg! Cliff hanger! Who is this mysterious cat? What is Shypaw going to do!
Once again, sorry for not updating. *skillfully dodges thrown fruit*
Could someone tell me who's mentoring who? I kinda forgot, and am too lazy to read through the chapters again.
*gets hit in the head with a potato*
*dies*
R.I.P.
Pandyrockz
Was hit in the head with a potato.
