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Howdy there! I'm back lol!
'As far as storylines, there are many stories that start off with premise like this one (though not many of this particular one), but it is what you do with that premise that makes the story yours. People can't own an idea, only the execution and setup of a body of ideas. Don't feel bad about using it, so long as you don't steal word-for-word the story of someone else. I would recommend you change the summary to take out your worries over premise stealing.'
Reading this made me feel better...guess I wasn't really thinking straight since it was 3:01AM when i wrote the first chapter XD...
Holy cow...there are reviews for this story already? This made me so excited I abandoned building my competitive Pokemon team just to read what you guys reviewed lol
Oh crap. who was I building around? Haxorus?
I use far too many elipses
What can I say? I'm Pokemon Trainer Red
I'm kidding, yeah I use too much of those dot dot dot that I need to tone it down a little. Perhaps think of this as an assignment that I need to pass up to my professor?
Nah, that makes me stressed out.
But let me get this outta my chest before starting actually.
I'm always nervous when I post a new story or chapter, what the review will be like, how people react to it, are the reviews positive or negative? In the past, people would laugh at my stories, Tear my ideas to pieces, talk trash about it, stuff like that. That's why now, I'm always worried about how people react to my stories
But when a friend introduced me to this website (cus he knows my love for making stories), I was..well pretty nervous. I decided to give it a shot with a digimon fanfiction, with my first 4 fanfiction being Digimon
After posting them up for a while, I started deleting them because of my doubt that people would like it, this isn't good, it's not good enough..The only one I didn't delete was Despair Rising. Which I gave up on because of this doubt
But reading reviews from my stories from Despair Rising to the Doraemon fanfictions, I started to have a boost of confidence...
UNTIL MALAYSIA BANNED THIS WEBSITE!
But I came back after a year since then and here we are.
Seeing reviews about my stories just made me feel better, and I think the recent reviews on this story just broke the wall I built between me and my passion to write stories.
People would talk trash about my stories but I have you guys to let me know that there are still people who like my stories.
I think you guys can see why Tails is my favorite character based on the first chapter
So with that..I just want to thank you all for sticking around...(- Just trying to trigger a certain reviewer of mine with those Elipses)
ZZZOOOOOOOMMMMMMM
'"Darn it! Where could that Egghead be?"
A certain Blue hedgehog stressed out as he ran all over the place,sure he had defeated Eggman but that does not mean that will put a stop to the mad scientist's evil plan. He had been searching all night, never once stopping. There was a villain on the loose, a villain who kidnaps little creatures and turn them into robots for his sick ideals. Sonic was sure he damaged that hover thing beyond repair so that he couldn't escape.
But he managed to escape anyway!
Once the sun started to rise, Sonic finally stopped. sighed as he found himself where he was sure Eggman crashed landed. Now that there was some light, perhaps he can finally use his brain to think for once and search for clues.
And that's when he found a black scorch mark on a grassy area
Yup..Eggman was here alright...
He decided to examine the mark closer until his eyes feel on a small cave,which he did not notice in the dark night sky not to far away...perhaps Eggman was hiding in there? Sonic made haste for the cave, hoping to find Eggman hiding inside the cave.
But to his disappointment. The cave was empty
But the cave was not entirely empty, Sonic squinted as the light from the sun shined into the opening. What Sonic saw in the cave completely baffled him
Drawings of what seemed to be mechanics and inventions littered the walls and floor of the cave, Sonic decided to step inside for a closer look and examined each and every drawing. Inventions seemingly complex were detailed in every sheet of paper. Sonic whistled, impressed by someone managed to think of inventing and drew it in complete detail
This could be Eggman's drawings
But Sonic knew that it wasn't. For one, The paper was very, very stiff. Must've been here for ages. Plus,it couldn't be Eggmans because as smart as he is, Eggman can't possibly come up with many inventions in just one night.
So that means, there was someone who was just as smart..or perhaps smarter than Eggman...
Sonic grinned, He wanted to meet this person. He could use a mechanic to fix his Blue Tornado, That thing has been rusting up near the ocean and it could use a polish
But then Sonic frowned, Had that person been living in this small cave for the rest of his life?
He had to meet this person...He didn't know why...but he needed to save him..
But then the possibility of Eggman being here and had kidnapped this person came into mind...the pieces started to line up, Eggman crash landed here, met this person and forced him to fix his hovercraft thing and escape..
All the more reason to find that Egghead.
Eggman hummed to himself as he ordered his robots to make final touches to the empty room, After making sure the room was sparkly clean, He walked back to where he parked his Egg carrier, inside...a certain two tailed fox was soundly asleep
"Tails..wake up"
Tails sat up groggy, his back was killing him because he slept inside the carriers cramped space, Eggman held back his laughter at the sight of the tired fox.
"The room is ready" Eggman said as he beckoned the fox to follow him. Tails blinked again and rubbed his eyes, yawning, he jumped off the carrier and looked around the place, The place looked like a lab. No duh. He followed Eggman as the doctor guided him to the empty room.
"This is where you shall be staying from now on..It's not much but i hope you like it" Eggman said as Tails examined the room, It was not huge but was roomy...The room had a bed in the corner with a desk near the window.
"Thanks Doctor..." Tails thanked
"Feel free to rest up Tails, We'll be working tommorow and I don't want my assistant falling asleep on the job" Eggman said as he walked away slowly, it took a while for Tails mind to process on what the doctor said to him
"Assistant?" Tails asked, Eggman only turned and gave him a grin as he continued to walk away. Tails smiled as he made his way towards the bed, finally relieved to be sleeping on a proper bed than on solid rock.
Once Eggman was faraway, He let out a laugh. Tomorrow will finally be the end of Sonic the Hedgehog
But he'll need some shut eye first.
"These inventions are...complex" A green crocodile said as he analyzed the drawings that littered the floor and walls of the cave.
"No..complex is an understatement" The purple ninja of the Chaotix said as he looked through each and every drawing "These invention sketched here would take months of planning, and that's with about 6 people working together"
"Are you Serious?! So you're saying that there's someone out there smarter than Eggman?!" Charmy, the youngest in the group exclaimed in surprise as he gave Espio another sheet of paper
"Yes...There's a possibility.." Espio said as he examined the sheet of paper that was given to him
Sonic raised an eyebrow, he had sought help from the Chaotix, thinking their detective skills are able to find any clues about the location of the missing person However, After a while. The Chaotix decided to give up. "That's what I figured, I was hoping you guys would know how to search for him or her." Sonic said as the Chaotix exited the cave
"Forgive us Sonic...But there just isn't enough clues for us to find this person" Espio said "But I do know this, If Eggman did kidnap him or her..He could be inventing something even more deadlier than we ever faced"
Silence fell upon the group at the possibilities of Eggman creating a deadlier machine to wipe out everything in it's path. Espio suddenly broke that silence "We'll continue to investigate here, we'll contact you if we ever find anything."
"Alright, Thanks you guys" Sonic nodded as he ran towards the jungle, hoping to find more clues
"Sonic really seems determined to find this dude or girl. I think this is the first time he was serious with something." Charmy pointed out as the Chaotix continued to work
"Agree...he seemed..stressed.." Espio said
"Could it be...a girlfriend?" Vector gasped
"No way. We all know it's Amy" Charmy chimed in "...Or..could he be cheating on Amy!?"
Both Vector and Charmy gasped and discussed the possibilities as poor Espio merely face palmed and sighed
"Ugh...i work with idiots."
Tails woke up hours later, it was already 5:00PM. But he wouldn't start working until tommorow. He was so excited he couldn't sleep properly. He decided to start working on some ideas, perhaps referring back to his older drawings for references.
Oh silly him, He left his drawings back at the cave.
He couldn't let those drawings go to waste..it took him several days to do one sheet! plus, Tails was sure that some of his sketch would impress the Doctor as he had yet to show his inventions to him. Decided not to wake the doctor from his sleep, He decided to go back by foot, hoping it was not too far away.
"Hmm..maybe I could give this a try?" Tails thought to himself as he looked at his two tails,He's been trying this out in secret. Hoping that he would find some use with his two twirling them like a helicopter rotor. Tails finds himself hovering in the air, surprised that it even worked on the first try "It worked!" he cheered as he took off from the base
Tails found himself landing just outside the cave, Tails breathes in as he went inside. Taking as many drawings as he can..He looked around the cave one last time, knowing he won't be coming back to it. But something felt off...his drawings seemed to be disorganized from when he left. Then suddenly it clicked, he realized that someone must've been in his cave. He needed to get out quickly, He still needed to grab few more things and that's when he heard voices outside. Panicking, Tails took as much as he can and darted away to a nearby bush
Peeking over the hedge, He could see a purple chameleon, A Crocodile and a bee. Weird...He quickly darted back down the bush,avoiding sight as much as he could.
"Got any clues?" Tails could hear a light,squeaky voice ask
"No...nothing...whoever lives here mus-" Another voice, sounding a bit deeper paused.
"What's wrong Espio?" A raspy voice asked
"Somebody was here...The drawings are a mess"
Tails felt his heart beat skip a beat as the trio frantically searched around. He knew he needed to run fast. Just when he was about to turn away, A twig snapped under his shoes..
Snap
Tails let out a gasp of surprise, which attracted the attention of the Chaotix "There!" Espio pointed in the direction of the bush
Ahh yes..the typical twig snapping under your shoes to give away your location...I hate my life.. Tails thought to himself as he quickly made a dash for it
Sonic woke up from his little nap. Rubbing his eyes and groaned. That dream again.
He dreamed that he helped a yellow fox. The fox had two tails and they went on adventures together. Taking on Doctor Eggman and for the first time..Sonic felt like he had a family...A little brother who he could trust on...
Why did it hurt when he knew he wasn't real?
His communicator started beeping. Sonic looked at who was calling...and his eyes widened. It was from Espio..
"Hello?"
"Sonic..we haven't found something. But we found someone. Some drawings are missing and we suspect he took them. We're currently in pursuit of this yellow fox and we could use your help.""
Sonic's heat skipped a beat...a yellow fox? Could it be? his guts tightened with anticipation as he stood on his feet.
"Thanks Espio, I'm on my way."
That's it!
I'll be updating soon! so staytuned
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Ja-Matane!