The Return of the Betrayed Guardian

by Knight of Kanto

Years ago Ash was Betrayed by those he trusted. Now with a tournament about to start Ash returns under the name of Takeo Hayashi to make his former friends pay and to prove that he is one of the greatest Pokémon trainers of all time. However old enemies lurk in the shadows waiting for their opportunity to get revenge. Will Ash prevail or will he fail?

9. An Excellent Guest Reviewer

Sorry for another non-chapter upload but I want to give a huge thanks to guest reviewer who left a very well written review. I'm extremely glad that he wrote that as it displays that there are indeed good guest reviewers and I really hope that he or she will log into the site and message me as you are the kind of person I want to chat with. Please check it out, it is rather long but a very well written review - although warning there are spoilers in the review.

Also to the touchy abusive guest reviewer I deleted your incoherent ramblings, it was actually very difficult to read due to misspellings, crap grammar and a lack of coherent sentences. I know for a fact that my 7 year old cub scouts could write something better - Also can someone tell me what the hell 'constructive flames' are? Those things surely contradict one another.

Once again thank you to the guest reviewer and sorry for another non-chapter, work has already begun on chapter 7 so I hope to have that uploaded asap. Thank you all for following this story and I hope you continue to enjoy it.