Alright, so I'm back and hopefully better than ever, I have been reading many other fanfiction stories and mine doesn't seem to quite stand out in the crowd . I don't know how many of you will actually read this but I strive to better my writing/typing skills and hopefully update quicker. I'm not going to make any excuses or any promises so I'll just do what I'm here to do and that is , to hopefully write a good story.
Naruto and Sasuke stopped at their hotel room door, each with a girl slumped over their shoulder, after a few seconds of Naruto fumbling to get the key out of his pocket they walked into their temporary home
Within initial arrival they were greeted with the aroma of fresh laundered sheets and bleach, the walls were lavender and in the middle of the room sat two queen sized beds both staring at a large entertainment system fixed with a 60 inch flat-screen
"We should have just left them in the dirt" Sasuke said with annoyance
"Heh, well unfortunately it's too late" Naruto replied
They dropped the girls onto one mattress and proceeded to unpacking
"I'll tell you what though , this room is very basic but elegant I like it" Naruto said whilst walking around
"Since when were you into home design? If I recall correctly you used to live like a grade A slob" Sasuke said with a small albeit smug grin
Naruto frowned "You know I could care less about your opinion"
Naruto and Sasuke finished unpacking and turned to look at the unconscious females on the bed
"I would like to go sightseeing but I'm afraid of leaving these two and coming back to everything missing" Sasuke said as his one good arm started to glow green
He poked each girl in the forehead with a chakra powered finger and gave a crude stare as they stirred awake
Both girls groaned a little as they sat up and took in there surroundings until there eyes stopped on Naruto and Sasuke
"So, you two fully awake?" Sasuke asked
They both nodded with nervous looks
"Good" Sasuke said smiling as his eyes transformed into his rinnegan he then grabbed their shoulders and teleported out of sight only to return alone a few seconds later
"So where did you bring them?" Naruto asked
"Back where we found them of course" Sasuke stated as-matter-of-factly
"I was at least going to explain why they can't just marry random guys simply because of their strength" Naruto shrugged "but oh well"
Sasuke sighed as he walked into the bathroom
"Damn" Sasuke thought to himself "only a walk in shower huh? Maybe they have hot springs"
Naruto lied down on to one of the beds and started to flip through channels with the remote
Sasuke walked out of the bathroom "Oi naruto"
"Yeah what is it?" Naruto asked not taking his eyes from the TV screen
"Didn't you hear me earlier? I said I wanted to go sightseeing" Sasuke stated
"So go" Naruto said simply
Sasuke gave an irritable sigh as he dashed towards the unsuspecting Naruto and slapped the remote out of his hand
"What the hell?" Naruto raged
"Now isn't the time to be lazy Naruto" Sasuke calmly said though a slight tinge of annoyance was present as well
"Fine, it's not like there was anything good on anyways" Naruto said getting up
And with that they left towards the downtown city market, hitting a few tourist attractions on the way.
The smell of food and perfume teemed the air as they walked through bustling streets filled with beautiful women and strange street performances. There were also a multitude of stores for every accommodation, many included bright neon signs, along with a dozen night clubs this place is the perfect get away .
One specific night club caught Narutos eye however it was a big green lit up buliding with music blasting inside
Sasuke looked over at Naruto "you're not really going in there, are you?"
"I don't know..I mean, I've never been in one" Naruto said eyes glued on the security blocking the front door
"And you're not going in one tonight either let's go" Sasuke said as he tried walking away, but Naruto caught him by the arm and dragged him to the front of the 300 foot line , which consisted of 90% male populace
"Naruto what the hell are you doing?" Sasuke growled still being dragged
"Relax I just want to try this new jutsu" Naruto said smiling mischievously
They stood right in front of the security guard who stood at an incredible 6'9 with arms the size of tree trunks he gave Naruto and Sasuke a quizzical expression as they walked up
"May I help you?" The security asked
"We're looking to enter" said Naruto still smiling
It was the guards turn to smile, a mocking smile
"Sure why don't you two go jog to the back of the line , and when you make it back up here I might let you in" he said smiling triumphantly
Naruto put his hand on the guards shoulder making him stiffen up, causing everyone in the line to gasp
"Listen" Naruto started "Me and my friend are just two handsome men looking to enjoy themselves, so why don't you let us in without any bullshit.. huh?" Naruto finished hand still clad on the other man's shoulder
To everyones surprise the guard stepped aside and allowed them entry
Naruto smiled in victory and walked in with Sasuke following
"What was that?" Sasuke asked
"Mind manipulation" Naruto replied
They walked further as the music got louder, dozens of people were on the dance floor while many just sat at the bar or booth.
Naruto took in the sight of flashing lights, also people drinking and dancing some even doing both at the same time
Sasuke made his way to an empty booth with Naruto close behind. Sasuke turned and faced Naruto with an evil grin
"Since you were the one who dragged me in here your buying the drinks" Sasuke said before sitting down
"Whatever" Naruto growled as he made his way to the bar but not without receiving seductive stares of women and even a few men on the dance floor
"Two bottles of sake" Naruto said handing cash to the bartender
Out of the corner of Narutos eye he saw the same two girls from the forest except they were dressed up with makeup on . After Naruto received his bottles he made his way back to his booth , slapping away frisky hands
"Our friends are back" Naruto said putting the sake down
"I know" sasuke said "and they know we're here as well"
"In fact here they come "said Naruto without looking in their direction
"Yep" replied sasuke
The girls reached the table and sat down next to their preferred men
"I didn't think you were the clubbing type" the girl with brown hair said
"I'm not" Sasuke replied shortly
"I'm hanaku and that's my cousin ishiki" the brown hair girl said pointing to her blonde teammate who was currently trying to lean really close to Naruto
"Sasuke uchiha and Naruto uzumaki" Sasuke introduced "Now that you know our names will you go away?"
"Why so hostile?" Hanaku asked
"Listen!" Naruto said speaking up "we know what you want but unfortunately we're already married" Naruto said pushing the girl off of him and flashing his wedding band
Both girls went wide eyed and then slunk in their seats with sad expressions
"Figures" ishiki said with irritation "every hot, strong guy on this planet is taken"
Naruto gave ishiki an sympathetic look
"Look..I've been meaning to tell you this earlier" Naruto flashed sasuke an angry look "but you can't judge a guy just by how strong he is, if you want marry someone you need to find the right one and get to know them better and develop actual love, it doesn't just happen"
Both girls smiled gently and stood up
"You're right, but we will never forget you and all that you've done for us" hanaku said determinedly
They both walked out of the club with smiles on their faces and new dreams
"What a couple of wack jobs" Naruto said rubbing his temples
"Yeah let's just enjoy this relaxation time because it might be our last " Sasuke said filling two saucers with sake and handing one off to Naruto
"Cheers!"
Naruto awoke with a light headache and nausea and saw sasuke passed out right next him (with clothes on thank god)
Naruto got up and went to the coffee maker, once the the aroma of coffee filled the air the uchiha stirred and got up and walked towards the kitchen where Naruto was in the midst of pouring a mug
"Pour me some too" Sasuke said tiredly
"First you kiss me , then you sleep in my bed" Naruto chuckled "You're really starting to make me wonder sasuke "
"What! I'm pretty sure you were the one that fell onto me you homo" Sasuke rebuttaled
"Why were you in my bed then?!" Naruto shouted
"How the hell am I supposed to know" sasuke retorted angrily
"You know if dog wasn't in love with Lina I would hook you two up" Naruto said humorously
"NARUTO!"
Kiba was walking towards shinos house when something or rather someone caught his eye
"Oh please don't be that Anbu guy" kiba inwardly groaned
Much to his horror it was
"Good god What!" Kiba said annoyed
"I am determined to make you accept that you're gay kiba" dog said
"What the HELL makes you think I'm gay anyways?" Kiba asked frustrated
"Bu-"dog was cut off
"Kiba!"
"Oh god kill me now" Kiba said
"Hey kiba" said Hana inuzuka
"Hey sis" Kiba said defeated
"What's my little brother up to today, other than hanging out with his little boyfriend" Hana giggled madly
Dogs face brightened up "so you are gay!"
"NOOOOO" Kiba screamed while his chakra flared madly
Alright guys a little taste of my newish style of writing trying to keep it original and not too trite like always leave a review and read onnnnn
