Hello, folks, I apologize for not updating my story, as I was extremely busy with the life. At right now, I am free for a while, so I am working on third chapter (also I'm also updating chapter 2.5 for prowler work as one or two reviews suggested, as I forgotten on how UNSC works with new territory, so they usually send prowlers after it, so I'll include that to gather information during a week before meeting with System Alliance.)
Also, I have decided that I don't need to include SPARTAN-IIs to this fanfiction, as I believe that they are much needed in UNSC territory, so I decided that I will be using some of SPARTAN-IIIs like Rosenda-A344 and some of sensible SPARTAN-IVs like Thorne and others. Sound good enough? If so, let me know.
Furthermore, I have reviewed all reviews from numerous folks, I realized that they are right, I need to work on my grammar mistakes, so I will be updating it consistently as soon as I find a proper beta reader. And for that reason, I'm actually deaf, so it makes sense that ASL is my first language while English is my second language, as most of deaf people aren't known for having superb grammar skills, probably average at best or less, depending where they have received their education from. I have gotten education through primary school, not deaf institutions where they are known for providing lower levels of education due to misleading belief that deaf people wouldn't able to achieve this higher level of education.
So again, forgive me for that grammar errors that you may find in my fanfiction where I will do my best to fix it and provide it to beta reader in future to ensure that it does not happen again. Please notify me if you notice any more errors. I'm more than happy to hear your criticisms and hope to improve my fanfiction overall.
EDIT: I am considering about adding one SPARTAN-III to Shepard's team during ME 2 (of course, UNSC will recognize that Collectors are serious threat and also want to watch the Cerebus, so I think Rosenda-A344 (its fate is unknown which I can use it for character and story development) which she is perfect for this mission as IIRC, Rosenda was there to replace Emile if there is counter-insurgency missions, which I think it is perfect for Shepard's mission. Since she is blank state, which I can freely make story from it after all.