I'm starting to feel that I screwed up on this story, not because the concept is shitty, but because I fucked up the execution. I could redo this, but do you want me todo so? Comment in the reviews.
For the record, this is the first fanfic I ever wrote and published anywhere. I won't not redo it if you want me to do so. A poll will be up in a few days about it.
Thank you
Seiichi Yotsuba
