**Author's Note**
I'm sorry I haven't written in a while :( please don't be mad :'( I was going to upload this on Christmas day...but for some reason I couldn't log into my account? Did anyone else experience this? I even tried from multiple devices, but still failed to log in... thank god when I tried today it worked! :D sooo here's chappy 9 enjoy my lovelies :)
Oh .. and Merry late Christmas ! :) hope you all enjoyed your holiday spending time with the family and sharing laughs and what not! :)
~KP
Lana's POV
"Let me go!" I demanded looking into his mysterious goggles. He released only one arm to pull his goggles off, reveling his shiny silver eyes. This was probably the closest I've ever gotten to observe his eyes, let alone him. I gazed at his eyes in amazement as he looked back into mine with a softened expression.
I've never seen Riddick express himself this way towards me... or anyone…he was so calm, but he always carries his signature mean smug look on his face which makes everyone around him either piss their pants or uncomfortably awkward.
Riddick's POV
She looked at my eyes in awe as I stared back into her deep chocolate brown eyes. Her eyes had a sparkle to them, and in the light her eyes looked light brown…sometimes it even had a hint of hazel in them.
'Great she's makin' me go soft…why am I like this around her? Why do I want her so much? Why do I lose control?!' I yelled at myself. Just then I took another whiff of her scent. She was curious about me, unsure, but she was defiantly attracted to me…she was aroused weather she wants to admit it or not…and…and…she…was a virgin?!
Lana's POV
It felt so right to be in his arms, but it was wrong.
'He's a criminal, a murderer. I-I can't' His eyes went from being soft to shocked.
"What?" I whispered, then he smiled a menacing smile.
'What just happened?' I thought, I started to become uneasy and finally gave a good hard push making him slam into the wall behind him, creating a loud bang that vibrated through the ship. I turned and continued to tug on the light cords slowly making my way back to the center of the ship. Moments later we were joined by Boone, Aisha and Johns.
"What happened?" Boone asked.
"Nothing" I blankly replied, not wanting to make eye contact I kept my eyes on the cords, continuing to rip them off the walls.
"Something must've happened. We heard a loud bang." Aisha snapped crossing her arms, giving Riddick a dirty look.
"Sis please just drop it." I answered. The light cord got caught and wouldn't budge making me frustrated. I looked up at them to see Riddick watching me; he approached me and took the cord from my hands. He gave them a tug and ripped it off the wall making all the holders that kept it in place pop off. Then he turned to face me, handed me the cord and smirked.
"Okay…I want you stayin' away from my lil' sis" Aisha growled poking at Riddick's chest. Riddick glanced over at me then slowly walked away. I could've sworn I thought he was gonna snap at Aisha…but he didn't?
'I wonder what he's thinkin' about. He seemed so mysterious and I can't believe he didn't snap at her.' Boone walked away joining the others while Aisha and Johns stayed behind.
"So what happened?" Aisha whispered.
"I already told you. Nothing happened." I replied annoyed at her. She was persistent and she's gonna keep at it till I spill the details I just know it.
"Come on, I'm your big sis' I won't tell…besides Johns can't even hear us." She smiled helping me collect and wrap the cords.
"I just fell back into the wall that's it." I lied hiding my face.
"Bull" she replied looking dead at me.
"Look me in the eyes and tell me." She demanded with her hands on her hips. I could tell Johns was eavesdropping as he inched closer and closer to us.
'Great' I rolled my eyes.
"I just fell alright" I replied trying to look at her with a straight face but failed miserably.
"Then why are you blushing?" she asked smiling. Right then and there I felt my face turn red hot, and all she did was smirk.
"Wait…you guys didn't do anything you're not supposed to do…did you?" she asked worried.
"N-No I swear no." I defended shaking my head for more emphasis.
"Good and it better stay that way." She warned walking away.
'Yes mom' I stood there in silence thinking about what had happened between me and Riddick.
'He seemed nice…like he actually cared, but…Urgh' I shook the thoughts out of my mind to be face to face with non other than Johns.
'Great alone with this psycho control freak?' I huffed rolling my eyes at him.
"What do you want?" I hissed, when he pointed his tactical light at me making me squint.
"I want you stayin' away from him, that's what I want." He answered. I was pissed at this point he doesn't have a say in what I can and cannot do, I've only known him for hours and he thinks he owns me?
"Alright boss man." I replied sarcastically walking away, but he grabbed my wrist and pulled me back having me slam against his chest. His face was just inches away from mine. I shook my arm loose and gave him an angry look. He smirked.
"What do you thi-"he…he's kissing me?! My eyes grew wide as he tried to push his nasty tongue into my mouth. I bit down on his lip hard, and he finally pulled away.
"Ow!" he screamed, and I gave him a good hard slap across the face which created an echo throughout the ship.
"Bitch!" he screamed as he raised his hand only to be thrown back by Boone.
"You stay away from her! Didn't I warn you last time not to touch her?" Boone angrily screamed in his face. He was truly the best big brother/father figure to me. He walked over to me and pulled me into a protective hug.
"What happened? What did he do? Are you okay?" he asked worried as Aisha, Fry, Jack and the other approached.
"Nothin-"
"He kissed me! That bastard!" I screamed trying to attack Johns, but failed because Boone was holding me back, Jack looked at me and started to giggle.
"Woah woah woah clam down." Boone spoke.
"What was that rumble we heard through the ship?" Aisha asked curious.
"I slapped him" I smirked calming down in Boone's arms.
"That was you slapping him?" Boone asked raising an eyebrow surprised.
"Yeahhh" I replied with a sly smile making him and Aisha burst out laughing.
"That's just awesome…I'm just upset I missed it." Boone chocked out between laughs releasing me. My eyes caught Riddick's gaze as he smirked from behind the crowd.
Riddick's POV
'I'm pissed I missed it too' I smiled. I gotta hand it to her she was one tough chick, smacking Johns like that. I can't believe thats ass whip kissed her…well then again its Johns I'm talking about.
"Fucking bitch" Johns growled walking past everyone, giving me a dirty look.
'If he touches her again I swear I'm gonna rip his head off' I growled. Everyone started to slowly regroup at the base of the ship.
Lana smiled again..a wide smile showing off to her sister and Boone...that's the first time I've seen her smile with twinkles in her...wait are those faint dimples!? I eyed her real quick...those were dimples my eyes widened.
'Stop being a bitch and walk away' I turned and left.
"I'll be runnin' about ten paces ahead. I want light on my back but not in my eyes" I announced to Fry who followed me around I held my arm out to block the light from the cutting torch that Paris was holding up.
"Riddick?" Fry asked in a faint voice.
"Mmm?" I grunted turning around to face her, she blushed looking away. Looks like Johns ain't the one with the charms.
"I can trust you right?" she asked looking at my eyes with the same expression Lana wore before.
"With?" I grinned and she blushed again.
"Getting us back...I know you're not a bad person...just misunderstood." she spoke turing her back to me.
'What trick you think you're playin'?' I didn't answer forcing her to turn around to look at me again, she studied my face to find the slightest hint of emotion, but I won't crack. She stood on her toes leaning in towards my face...but I didn't move.
'Testing me?' I tried not to smirk. She gave up and started rigging up her tool belt as she followed me around like a lost puppy.
"Like I said ten paces..." I turned the corner to see Boone's arm wrapped around his girl Aisha.
"Oh and...check your cuts. These bad boys know our blood now." I warned walking past Jack. The warning was meant for her, it was "her time" and the scent was strong. If I can smell her so can they, they were gonna go off on her smell now and hunt us down. Poor kid. Fry followed me around everywhere, and finally handed me her tool belt that she rigged up with flashlights strapped onto it I strapped it onto my back sliding the main door open having Fry and Paris hover behind me.
Lana's POV
"Hey kid what's wrong?" I asked worried. He was playing with a flashlight in his hand by putting it under his palm and seeing his hand glow red. He looked scared and it looked as if something was bothering him.
"Nothing" the kid replied quietly after thinking it out. He looked at his hand and it looked like he was about to break into tears I patted his back and gave him a hug and reassured him that everything was gonna be okay and that we'll make it. We have to make it.
Riddick's POV
Imam and his remaining two kids tagged along with Fry and Paris. We gazed out at the open together.
"Are we actually going to do this?" Paris asked.
"We stay together. We keep the lights burning…That's all we gotta do to live through this thing" she cold heartedly replied walking back into the ship.
"What's your input on this Riddick?" Boone asked walking up and standing beside me, he didn't smell of fear. That's what the military does to you.
"You wouldn't want my opinion" I answered looking at the creatures roaming around in the darkness.
"Sure I do" he insisted crossing his arms.
"Plan's crazy, might work, might not. If it does it'll be at a cost." I simply answered.
"I feel the same." He agreed walking away sighing. I looked back at him and saw him giving Lana and her sister a hug each. I know he's smart and he know what's coming, he knows half of us won't make it. He's making the most outta these little moments he has left with them, knowing that they're gonna try to be heroic in getting everyone safely to the skiff. He grabbed his girl and planted a kiss on her, Lana smiled at them and then sluggishly walked away.
Lana's POV
"Are you ready Johns?" I heard Fry call out.
'I don't think anyone is' I looked at the ground. Sure I was in the military, and sure we Marines are supposed to be tough skinned, but the truth is…everyone breaks down at some point. I admit that I've never served the front lines, maybe because I'm a wuss…well I guess it's true. The only ones that have served on the front lines were Boone and Aisha…after she switched from her mechanics field of course. I'm only an MP and to be honest I'm doing everything I can not to break down, or have tears roll down my cheeks. I gotta be strong I need to stay strong.
'Most of us won't even make it to the skiff alive, and even if we all do make it there safely, the skiff won't hold us all. It only has room for a pilot, a navigator and six passengers. There were eight adults and counting the three kids that equaled out to eleven passengers, I don't know how we're gonna make it' I grieved.
"You give him the cells…and the ship…and he'll leave you all out there to die. He'll leave all of you" I heard Johns voice from the upper level. I stood next to the stair case Fry had climbed to get to Johns, and started to eavesdrop on their conversation and I wasn't the only one that was "tuning in" on the conversation. I looked across the ship to see Riddick standing by the open door with a tool belt strapped onto his back which was equipped with shining flashlights. He looked in my direction focusing on the conversation Fry and Johns were having and why wouldn't he? They were talking about him.
"I don't get it Johns. What is so goddamn valuable in your life that you're worried about losing? Is there anything at all? Besides your next spike?" she hissed at him before angrily walking back down the stairs. I stumbled to get away so she won't think I was eavesdropping...like I always do...I stood near the open door putting an arm up against the metal wall.
'Just be cool' I thought then looked at Riddick who played a smile on his lips seeing me scramble to get away. I smiled back.
'It was a nice gesture wasn't it? Wait! Why do I care what he thinks?'
Riddick's POV
I stepped out of the container and looked over my shoulder at the group behind me. It was my job to lead them to the skiff...but will they make it? is the question...
"Stay close" Imam demanded the group and we were off.
**Author's note**
What?! Johns got to kiss Lana first ? You guys thought it was gonna be Riddick huh? Judging from the last chappy huh? Don't lie I know you thought they were gonna kiss ;) But Lana is a tough chick just look what happened to Johns .. she bitch slapped his ass! Imagine what she would've done if it were to be Riddick ;) Oh and shat is going on in that boy's mind ? seems like he's plotting something o.O Mwahahahah ! (evil laugh)
Sooo we're nearing the end of the movie ! I've tried to stick to the original with my characters in the plot...I've always wanted to find a story where the characters didn't instantly fall in love and started making out and what not...that doesn't happen in real life? Well its not something that Riddick would do...would he? ... I just imagine him...either killing the girl that pounces on him...or...just go with the flow... lol
Sooo I'd like to thanks everyone that followed or favored my story and of course...My reviewers ! :D
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I do plan on writing a sequel so keep your eyes peeled! not literally...that would be bad... D: lol anywayss I've been having sort of a writers block moment and that's why its been taking me so long to update... I'm sorry :(
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~KP ( I feel like Kim Possible ... coz our initials r the same lmao XD )
**SPOILER**
In The sequel I'm gonna explore more with my character... and you'll learn things about her...like why is she afraid of a relationship? Why doesn't she trust so easily? And what about family? Ooooo and her past will come back to haunt her! and Riddick...what's he gonna do? ...
DUN DUN DUNNNNN!