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It was the early day in Retroville. It was warm and the sun was pretty bright. Normally you'd see kids playing outside on a warm sunny day, but for a certain boy genius along with his twin sister and their friends that wasn't happening. The four were sitting on the grass leaning against a fence. Sheen had one of his Ultra Lord action figures in hand.
Sheen held the figure up panting a little as he spoke. "Ultra Lord's log, trapped on the planet of incredible hotness. Water gone. Ultra Lips chapped. Can't-hold-on-much-longer aaaaaaah." Sheen said as sweat dripped down his brow a little. Sheen began to lean on Jimmy. Jimmy grimaced as he tried to get away from Sheen not wanting his body heat or sweat anywhere near him. This only caused Jimmy to end up in Carl's space.
"Ah, Sheen, Sheen please it's too hot. Don't make us hurt you." Jimmy told his friend annoyed as he pushed him away. Sheen just laid on the grass and didn't say anything. Penelope on the other hand was holding a baseball cap fanning herself, but it wasn't making much of a difference. Retroville was in the middle of a heat wave due to it getting closer to summer. Carl panted a little before speaking up.
"Jimmy I'm dyin' please tell Goddard to share." Carl complained. Not too far from where the four were sitting Goddard was under a tree shaded from the sun. He was casually sipping from a can of oil and a robotic arm sticking out of his back held a personal mini fan which kept him cool. Goddard walked up to Carl letting him have some air. "Hhm if only there was a thermodynamically efficient way of cooling off." said Jimmy.
"I wish we had a swimming pool." Penelope muttered. The boys nodded in agreement. Suddenly there was the sound of shouting and laughter which startled the four. Wondering what all the noise was about they climbed up onto the fence looking into a backyard revealing the source. It was Cindy Vortex and Libby Folfax.
Penelope almost couldn't believe it. She blinked only to realize her eyes were correct. Cindy and Libby were both wearing swimsuits and swimming in a pool. The two friends noticed they were being watched. "Hi guys someday, huh?" Libby asked.
"Yeah sure, if you, like yunno dyin' and stuff, all hot." Sheen replied. "Well I think it's wonderful!" said Cindy. "You guys wanna come in?" Libby asked. The four looked at each other nodding in agreement and smiling at the offer. "I guess if we have to." Carl said a little shyly.
"Well yeah I wanna come in." said Jimmy. "The water does look nice." said Penelope. "Sure yeah!" Sheen said with a little excitement in his voice. Cindy glanced at the boys before speaking up. "Wait a second, I think you forgot one thing, Libby." said Cindy.
"What's that Cindy?" Libby asked. "They have to admit that girls are better than boys in every way ever in all history and forever in the future." Cindy replied. Penelope's eyes widened. 'Leave it to Cindy to come up with ways to humiliate my brother and our friends.' Penelope thought shaking her head. "Uuuuuh." Carl and Sheen said in unison as they considered it.
"Yeah why not hey man." said Carl. "Okay yeah sure." Sheen added. Jimmy and Penelope couldn't believe their ears. "No no no hold it, you guys!" Jimmy cried. The four climbed back down onto the grass.
"Listen don't degrade yourselves." Jimmy told his friends. "Why not? It's okay Jimmy really it's hot." Sheen replied. "You really want to embarrass yourself in front of Cindy and Libby?" Penelope asked. Before Sheen could answer Jimmy spoke up. "Look it I can fix this! I can, it's only hot weather." said Jimmy.
Sheen fanned his Ultra Lord figure. "Okay well I better apply more sunblock." Carl said pulling out a light blue tube of sunblock. "Oh look it's SPF 50. Hm-Says for fair to albino skin." Carl pointed out as he read the label. Jimmy smiled as he began to think of an idea. Jimmy grabbed the sunblock out of Carl's hands.
"Sunblock! Carl!" Jimmy said with eagerness in his voice. "What?" Carl asked. "You're a genius." Jimmy gently replied. "I am. I-I am?" Carl said surprised. Penelope looked at her brother having an idea of what he was going to do.
Later the four were down in Jimmy's lab. They watched a robotic claw that held the tube of sunblock over a rocket from behind a safety glass window. The claw squeezed the tube dumping it's contents into the rocket. "W-well I know I'm a genius Jimmy, but what exactly did I come up with again?" Carl asked confused. "Implementing your sunblock idea Carl! Listen if SPF 50 can shield your skin from the sun's rays, than this quantumly enhanced SPF nine thousand should shield the entire town!" Jimmy explained as he worked the controls in front of him.
The robotic claw sealed the top of the rocket shut. A device lowered pointing itself at the rocket firing quantum energy to enhance the sunblock. "Oooh, right w-wa, just like I planned." said Carl. Goddard whimpered as the device did it's work. "Don't worry boy it's just sunblock. What could happen?" said Jimmy.
Penelope gave her brother a thumb up. Jimmy pulled a lever on the control panel. The rocket began to rise as it prepared to launch. Outside in the backyard of the Neutron house Hugh was sitting out on the patio with a cup in hand. He also wasn't wearing any pants due to the heat outside.
"Oooooh boy, now once the heat flashes and nausea subside, I'm good to go!" Hugh said as he leaned back in his chair. Hugh didn't notice the roof of Jimmy's clubhouse open and the rocket rise up. It was then that Hugh turned to see the rocket launch up into the air. Hugh stood up in shock as he watched it fly off. There was a bright flash of light in the sky.
The lights color changed to orange then to purple and then it turned neutral. Hugh squinted pulling his glasses up as he tried to verify what he was seeing. The rocket had punched a hole in the clouds. The clouds began to thicken. Carl, Sheen, Jimmy and Penelope walked outside just in time to see snow start to fall.
Jimmy stood proud with a grin on his face. Penelope along with Carl and Sheen looked on in amazement. "Jimmy! You did it! You changed the weather!" Carl cried happily. From the patio Hugh stared at the sky in disbelief. "Oh, the intense UV radiation has made me delusional!" said Hugh.
Hugh put his finger to his lips and began making noise as he moved his finger up and down. "I'm a monkey!" Hugh cried. Jimmy, Penelope and Sheen looked at him a little concerned. Carl wasn't paying attention as he was occupied with catching snow with his tongue. "Oh-Kay...let the games begin!" said Sheen.
Soon all of Retroville was covered in snow. It was a beautiful sight. Jimmy, Penelope, Carl and Sheen were at the top of a snow covered hill sitting on a sled. "Ready guys?" Jimmy asked. "Yup." Penelope replied. "Alright!" Sheen cried.
"Hee-yeah! Cool!" Carl said excitedly. Jimmy pushed the sled forward a little. The sled started going down the hill. "Yea-" the four cried. However sliding down the hill was short lived due it not being much taller than them.
"We need a bigger hill." said Jimmy. Penelope nodded in agreement. Later on Hugh gathered up some snow forming it into a snowball and was about ready to throw it when a snowball hit him in the eye. "Alright, I'm gonna getcha gu- oh." Hugh chuckled as he was hit in the other eye with another snowball. "Woo! Look at this! Look at this!" Jimmy cried.
Jimmy, Penelope along with Carl and Sheen were laughing and cheering as they made snowballs which were dumped into Goddard's open back and fired out of his mouth. "Yeah! Woo-hoo!" the four cried. "I'm gonna getcha!" said Jimmy. "Hehe I'm loving this!" Penelope shouted. "Heh we turned you dad into-" Sheen was saying as Hugh was pelted with more snow balls. "Okay Goddard." said Carl as he dropped another snowball into Goddard.
Goddard fired again. Penelope laughed a little as she looked at Hugh. He was covered from head to toe in snow making him look like a snowman. "Mm cold." said Hugh. At the Vortex household Cindy was oddly still in her cool swimming pool. Cindy shivered as she felt the cold air against her.
"Hh-how sssad Nnnneutron can't have a good t-time unless he ch-ch-changes the weather. Isn't that sssad Libby?" said Cindy. However Libby didn't answer her. Cindy turned her head only to see Libby wasn't in the pool. "L-L-Libby?" Cindy asked wondering where her friend had gone. Back with Jimmy, Penelope and co. Libby was having fun throwing snowballs with them.
She beamed Carl in the face with a snowball knocking his glasses a little catty-wonk. "WooHoo! I gotcha! Yeah!" Libby cheered. Jimmy threw a snowball at Sheen which hit him in the temple causing him to lose his focus. Penelope threw a snowball at Jimmy, but it hit his hair. Jimmy looked at Penelope who smiled at him a little sheepishly.
Later on after a long day it was time to get some rest. One of Jimmy's bedroom windows started fogging over with ice. The boy genius himself was settling into bed with Goddard. He had a grin on his face. Goddard opened his chest showing his monitor to Jimmy.
The outside temperature was displayed on the monitor. "20 degree's huh? No problem boy, the sunblock should dissipate in a few days for once everything turned out perfect." said Jimmy. Jimmy laid down on his pillows with his arms behind his back. Jimmy fell asleep the moment his head hit the pillows. Little did Jimmy know things were not perfect as the temperature displayed on Goddard's monitor started dropping rapidly until it read 10 degree's.
Goddard hid the display whining as he did so. Jimmy was going to be in for a rude awakening in the morning. Outside Jimmy's window the snow steadily fell. Morning soon came. The ice on Jimmy's window was thicker and if one were to look out they would barely be able to see there was a lot more snow.
Jimmy woke up still in his longed position, but as soon as Jimmy opened his eyes he felt extremely cold air against his skin. Jimmy hopped up rubbing his arms trying to keep them warm. "Leaping leptons! Goddard what's the temperature?" Jimmy cried. Goddard displayed the temperature on his monitor for Jimmy to see. Jimmy's eyes widened at what he saw.
"Minus thirty? Oh no!" Jimmy said shocked. Jimmy's bedroom door opened and Penelope came running inside wearing a hat and gloves. "Jimmy! I think we've got a problem!" Penelope cried. Jimmy got up off his bed and went over to his window. He wiped away some of the fog covering it.
Jimmy peeked out the window frowning a little which deepened as he looked out. "I must have made a tiny miscalculation." said Jimmy. Penelope walked up to her brother peeking through the glass as well. She gasped at what she and her twin were seeing. The snow outside wasn't just covering the grass anymore it was covering half of their house.
Thinking fast the twins quickly went to the lab with Goddard in toe. Down in the lab a pair of sliding doors opened for the twins. The two slipped on some ice on the steps sending them flying slamming into the wall. Goddard leapt down running over to the twins with Carl's bottle of sunblock in his mouth. Jimmy and Penelope were splayed upside down against the wall furthest from the door.
Goddard handed the sunblock to Jimmy. "Carl's SPF 50." said Jimmy. Goddard barked in response causing Jimmy to cover his ear with his free hand. Jimmy looked at the back of the tube hoping to find out if any of the sunblock's ingredients were the cause of the problem. Jimmy found a warning on the back.
"Warning do not quantumly enhance contents may cause second ice age." Jimmy read aloud. Penelope almost couldn't believe her ears. Jimmy huffed he was not happy about this. "They really otta put something like that in bold print!" said Jimmy. "Yeah." Penelope said nodding her head in agreement.
Goddard licked Jimmy's face. Jimmy needed to figure out how to reverse this weather and fast. A little later Jimmy and Penelope were back in the house. The two were sneaking around. They peeked their heads around the dinning room doorway.
Jimmy and Penelope looked around for any signs of their parents. Hugh and Judy were nowhere to be seen. "It seems quiet. Maybe Mom hasn't noticed weather yet." Jimmy said softly. "I hope so." Penelope replied. The two silently crept over to the front door.
Jimmy was about to open the door when Judy's voice boomed through the air. "J-J-James Isaac N-Neutron!" Judy scolded. Jimmy and Penelope turned around to see their parents in front of the stairs. Their mother was not happy. Hugh and Judy were shivering and shaking from the cold.
"Haven't we warned you about t-tampering with the structure of a chaotic system?" Judy demanded. "We- I-I-I forgot!" Jimmy sputtered a little. "Now Jim-eh this is serious it's so fffffreezing! Eh- part of your mothers hair chipped off." said Hugh. The twins looked at their mother a little perplexed, but then they saw it. Part of the right side of Judy's hair was jagged and shorter than usual.
"Of course it's nothing we can't even out with a little chisel here-" Hugh said stroking Judy's hair a little only for a chunk to accidently snap off with a loud clack. Judy cried out in anger and glared at Hugh. Hugh hid the chunk behind his back. "I hope you know h-how you're g-going to re-reverse this! This! This!-" Judy scoffed. "This -eh- bad weather thingy." Hugh cried gesturing with the hair chunk.
Judy glared at him again causing him to realize what he was gesturing with. Hugh hid the hair chunk behind his back again embarrassed. "I do! I will! I mean I-I'm-" Jimmy sputtered before Judy cut him off. "Honestly J-Jimmy! No heat! No power! No appliances! How will we live? What will we wear?" Judy cried. "I'm sorry Mom, I'll find a way to fix things I promise." Jimmy told his mother.
Penelope looked at her brother and their parents sympathetically. She couldn't blame either of them. Jimmy didn't know about the warning on the bottle. Neither did he mean for any of this to happen. As for their parents they didn't know what to do and were probably even scared.
"There see butter biscuit? Eh- Jimbo's gonna find a way to fix it that's all. In the meantime, we'll just have to adapt to this hostile, savage environment." Hugh assured his wife. The sound of a horn going off was heard coming from outside. Hugh then grabbed a crude looking spear. "I gotta run me and the other dad's are off to hunt caribou. Spotted a big heard up on Abner Boulevard. Gotta keep fresh meat on the table buh-bye!" Hugh said cheerfully. With that Hugh took off out the door.
Jimmy and Penelope stood in the doorway as they watched their father leave. "Holy Heisenberg Goddard, Penelope it really is a second ice age!" Jimmy cried. "Oh, I just hope no one else figures out this was my fault." Jimmy added. "Hopefully Carl and Sheen don't say anything." Penelope muttered a little worriedly. Unfortunately later when Jimmy and Penelope went to school which surprisingly wasn't cancelled they were greeted by angry kids the moment they walked into their class.
They all got up and started shouting things at Jimmy. Some were even yelling at Penelope demanding to know why she didn't talk any sense into Jimmy. "I didn't do anything!" Penelope snapped. This only earned her glares from her classmates. "Oh thanks for telling everyone Sheen!" Jimmy said a little annoyed.
"Well I didn't know it was a secret." said Sheen. "Um- I sorta told some people too Jim. Peer Pressure." Carl confessed. As Carl spoke Miss Fowl walked in with a determined look on her face. She stood in front of everyone before speaking. "Now, now children. Time for study group." Miss Fowl told her students.
"Okay, who has any ideas how we can escape being-BRWAA destroyed by the freezing glacier that used to be Retroville?" Miss Fowl asked. Sheen stepped forward. " I know, the glacier is obviously angry with Jimmy if we feed Jimmy to the glacier maybe it'll be placated and depart from us!" Sheen suggested. Penelope shot Sheen an angry glare. "Ah She-en!" Jimmy shouted.
"Aw come on Jimmy I'm just trying to be productive." said Sheen. The other kids however seemed to like Sheen's idea. "Yeah!" the kids cried. "Sacrifice!" said Nick. "Sacrifice Jimmy!" Butch shouted. Penelope almost couldn't believe everyone.
"Are you guys crazy?!" Penelope yelled with an angry look. "Children, children please- brwaaa my goodness we can't let a little nippiness turn us into a pack of primitive sub-humans. We must hold on to our dignity we must stand direct- brwaaa, look the world in the eye and say-" Miss Fowl tried to explain, but Nick pulled out a thermometer. Miss Fowl looked at it. The temperature was dropping down past negative 40. Miss Fowl pointed before speaking again.
"Take boy to glacier." Miss Fowl said with a monotone. Penelope's eyes widened. "Yeah! Get his sister too!" the kids shouted. Jimmy and Penelope knowing is was best to get going while the getting was good bolted out of the classroom. The other kids started following after them.
Penelope glanced back slightly gasping once she did. "Jimmy they're gaining on us! We can't outrun them on foot!" Penelope cried. They needed to get away and fast. Jimmy's face suddenly brightened up. "Goddard!" said Jimmy.
It didn't take long for Penelope to realize what Jimmy had in mind. The two having finally made it to the exit pushed the doors open as they ran. Jimmy and Penelope could see Goddard waiting for them. "Goddard snowmobile mode!" Jimmy shouted. Goddard barked and transformed into a form resembling a snowmobile.
The twins hopped onto the mechanical canine and took off down a snow covered hill which put some distance between them and the kids chasing them. "I don't like it boy, Penelope, colder it gets the more people revert to their primal instincts we may not have much time before it becomes irreversible!" Jimmy cried. Penelope knew this was very true given how their teacher and classmates behaved. "This is bad news for Retroville." Penelope softly told her brother. Jimmy glanced at his twin for a moment.
Jimmy and Penelope continued to ride Goddard through the snow covered town. Meanwhile elsewhere in Retroville Hugh was hunting with a man named Sam from the Candy Bar and another local man. The three stopped for a moment. "One called Hugh, we have hunted since the sun was high, still we have spotted no prey." said the local man. Hugh noticed something moving off in the distance through the fog.
"Shh, looks like we got us a buck." Hugh whispered. Little did Hugh know what he was seeing in the fog was really his children riding on Goddard. Hugh's companions gasped. "No wait it's a buck fifty." said Hugh. Jimmy noticing their father slowed to a stop.
"Hey it's dad. Hey Dad!" Jimmy cried. Jimmy started waving his arms to try to get Hugh's attention. "Oh, look at the antlers on him. Ooh, there's gonna be caribou chili tonight guys!" said Hugh. "Uck-luck-luck-ya! Uck-luck-luck-ya! Ooooooh Caribou!" the three chanted. The three began to stomp forward towards them.
Jimmy realizing their intentions grimaced and started driving away. Penelope looked back a little her face paling as she did. The three men kept chanting as they continued to stomp towards them. Jimmy noticed a nearby snowdrift. Thinking fast Jimmy drove towards it hiding behind it.
"Ooooooh Caribou!" the three chanted. The twins and Goddard didn't make a sound as Hugh and his companions passed by not noticing them. "Pst hey Jimmy, Penelope." came Carl's voice from nearby. Jimmy and Penelope turned to see Carl standing by what appeared to be an igloo. He waved at them.
Carl then gestured for the two of them to come inside. Jimmy and Penelope glanced at each other for a moment, but quickly decided it was better than being outside. With that they hopped off of Goddard, walked up to Carl and entered the igloo. Jimmy and Penelope noticed Carl was holding two ice pops in his hand which was a little strange given how cold it was. There were even boxes full of ice pops inside.
"What is this?" Jimmy asked looking around. "Yeah Carl. Let us in on it." Penelope piped in. "Ye-ha this is the lair of the Carl clan. Pretty sweet huh?" Carl replied with a snort. Jimmy and Penelope looked at Carl a little perplexed. "Carl clan?" Jimmy asked.
"Uh-huh, this weather's perfect for big-boned people like me. And soon the hunters will move on then we of the Carl clan will emerge from our long sleep. And the land will belong to the hefty's!" Carl explained. "Long sleep? Yo-you mean hibernation?" Jimmy asked. Carl shoveled a popsicle into his mouth. "Uh-huh and that's why I'm bulking up on carbs. Cause I'll have to feed off the extra weight until the spring! And when I emerge, I will be fit! Strong! And my sunburn will be gone!" Carl said posing. At the mention of Carl having sunburn the twins were a little confused.
"Sunburn? But I thought you had on SPF 50?" Jimmy asked. "Yeah. I could've sworn you did too." Penelope said nodding a little in agreement. "Well I must have sweat it off. Hey, I'm a real good sweater." said Carl. At that moment a thought struck Jimmy. "That's it! Your brand of sunblock isn't waterproof it dissolves with water. Carl you're a genius!" Jimmy cried with a smile on his face.
Penelope grinned this was good news. "Haha tell me something I don't know." Carl said snorting at the end of his sentence. Jimmy, Penelope and Goddard with this info left to go get some water. Later the three were hiding behind a snowbank. Hugh and his companions walked by chanting.
Uck-luck-luck-ya! Uck-luck-luck-ya! Uck-luck-luck-ya! Uck-luck-luck-ya! Uck-luck-luck-ya! Uck-luck-luck-ya!" Hugh and his companions chanted as they passed by. Once they were gone Jimmy, Penelope and Goddard raised their heads a little to make sure they were gone. Jimmy and Penelope looked at Goddard. "No time to lose boy, we gotta find some water." Jimmy said with a hint of worry. The next thing the twins knew they were riding on Goddard again searching parts of the city for water sources.
Jimmy drove Goddard up to a fire hydrant. There was water coming out or rather frozen water. Jimmy pulled out a wrench and tried hitting it, but to no avail. They made their way to Cindy's house hoping to get some water from her pool only to find it was frozen. Goddard tried scratching the ice with his claws, but all Goddard managed to do was leave thin scratches in the ice.
Cindy oddly was in the pool sticking out of a hole in the ice with a tube around her keeping her afloat. "Do you m-m-mind Neutron? I-I'm t-tttrying to enjoy my p-po-ol!" Cindy said with a hint of annoyance as she shivered. Penelope rolled her eyes. "Cindy get out of there before you get sick or worse!" Penelope snapped. Penelope pulled out her spare hat and gloves then tossed them over to Cindy.
With one option left the twins went home. Jimmy grabbed a bucket, went to the kitchen and placed the bucket in the sink. Hugh and Judy were both sitting at the kitchen table eating big chunks of meat. Penelope watched her brother from near the table. Jimmy was about to try to turn the faucet, but Hugh having noticed him spoke up. "Don't waste your time sport! All the pipes are frozen solid." said Hugh.
"Sweetie eat your caribou before it turns hard and icy. The same goes for you too Penelope." Judy told her children. "Mmhm." Hugh agreed. Jimmy knew he couldn't just give up. Jimmy closed his eyes and clenched his fists. "Come on, think, think, think!" Jimmy said as he began to think hard.
Jimmy remembering what Carl told him earlier about sweating off his sunblock quickly came up with an idea. "Brain Blast!" Jimmy cried. "Of course, perspiration! With all of it's high oil and sodium content, it doesn't freeze as fast as ordinary water! But I'm gonna need plenty of sweat." said Jimmy. Penelope grinned her brother was going to save Retroville. Later on Sam, Carl and a policeman Officer Tubbs were gathered in the living room of the Neutron house.
The three of them were standing in small tubs that were all hooked up to a collector. Jimmy stood in front of the three. "Gentlemen! I've selected the three of you. As you are the most likely candidates in town who's girth will provide the maximum probability of intense perspiration!" Jimmy explained to them. Carl looked around excitedly hopping up and down in his tub slightly. "Miss Fowl?" Jimmy said turning his attention to his teacher.
Miss Fowl stood in front of a drum with drumsticks in hand. "Hayahooo bwaa!" Miss Fowl cried. She began pounding on the drum chanting rhythmically as she did. The three men began to jog in place in the tubs soon Sam and Officer Tubbs began to sweat like crazy, but Carl was having a little trouble. "It's working!" said Jimmy.
The sweat being gathered in the tubs all began to flow through pipes connected to a giant spray bottle outside in the backyard slowly filling it. The bottle had two bands of red on the top and bottom interrupted by a thicker band of blue. In the center of the bottle was a yellow atom logo. The bottle also had two words written on it that read sweat spray. There was also a giant ladder with a diving board attached to the end behind the bottle.
Sam, Carl and Officer Tubb's kept jogging in place. The two adults were covered in sheets of their own sweat, but Carl was pretty dry. Carl stopped when he noticed he wasn't sweating. "Uh I-I'm just not sweatin'." Carl complained. "Don't give up yet Carl!" Penelope told her friend.
"Come on Carl you can do it. The whole towns depending on you, you'll be a hero!" Jimmy encouraged. "Really? Okay." said Carl. Carl took a deep breath then started jogging in place again. "-Eeeeeeeeeeeehyeyeegagaee-" Carl still wasn't sweating, but Carl wasn't going to give up this time and started moving even faster really pushing himself. "-Aheeehhehahaha whoo hooho." Carl panted, but kept jogging.
Soon Carl began to sweat as much as Sam and Officer Tubbs. Everyone cheered for Carl. After a little while there was enough sweat in the spray bottle. Everyone as in Penelope, Judy, Hugh, Sheen, Carl, Sam, Officer Tubbs and Miss Fowl all gathered out onto the back porch of the Neutron house. Jimmy hopped up onto the diving board.
Jimmy jumped up and down on it before jumping onto the spray bottle. A large mist of sweat was released from the can and into the air. The group got a whiff of something in the air began sniffing the air and themselves. Unfortunately that something or rather the sweat from the bottle stunk. "Ew." Everyone grimaced.
Not long after the mist was released into the air the clouds cleared allowing sunlight to beam down. Everyone cheered glad that Jimmy's plan worked. "Yeah alright!" Hugh approached Jimmy. "You did it child of she who is my woman. Now you've given us the gift of the sun." said Hugh. Jimmy sniffed before replying.
"If only I could give these guys the gift of roll on deodorant." said Jimmy. "You can say that again." Penelope told her brother as she pinched her nose. Carl, Sam and Officer Tubbs sniffed themselves. "Whoo. Uh, does anyone have a scented towelette?" Carl asked. It would be safe to say that Jimmy learned an important lesson about messing with the weather and probably wouldn't be doing it ever again.
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