So, I have been writing Ocs for a while and I have learned a lot from my mistakes and successes. I am pretty proud of this idea, that a friend helped me make. I am putting this on here for suggestions, ideas etc... or just a like or dislike.
Please be kind if you have any suggestions...I really am proud of this. This is for a Naruto story.
Descendant from civilian people kidnapped from Cloud during war so she is dark skinned.
No ROMANCE, too overdone period but especially for female naruto characters.
No ninja background at all.
No bloodlines
Smart
Aims to be great
Can Heal, but is not her focus. Why not learn to heal, it was so useful!
Sealing as a focus, it was to powerful.
On a team without focus, this is a cause of deep frustration.
An orphan from Kyuubi which plays part in her drive.
Serious.
Doing it for money and pride and a desire to be the best to prove worth.
Jack of all trades with a focus on sealing and taijutsu ( Mix of Tsunade and Jiraiya for powers )
Fire for affinity
Learns to sense but not a natural sensor
Bo staff as a weapon.
Summoning? Unsure, maybe Chameleons?
Ruthless but not over the top. She is not Orochimaru!
Hates her classmates for taking being a ninja so poorly, without seriousness. Respects Shino and Sasuke who do take it seriously.
Has no friends as she is too dedicated to being a ninja.