Fox Sin: The Movie - The Two Heroes
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Bo Ruth Baker: First things first this is not an attack or a flame. I enjoy your guys' story. Also sorry if this is a bit of an essay. That just proves your story is worth the review. First of all, I LOVE the idea for this story, hell I just love the idea of Deku having Bans abilities. It's an epic and original idea. I like how you've kept Bakugo mostly the same but also made him tolerable (Not easy to do). And replacing Mineta with King is just gold. Your story is nicely paced, skipping things we have all read a thousand times already and getting to the meat of the story without seeming rushed. *Audible sigh* I always hate this part. My criticisms. I understand King blaming Deku for her death. But if she was revived than his issue shouldn't be that intense. The art scene felt very forced and unrealistic. I understand adding a sex scene(they are teens after all). Deku/Ochako falling in love should have been more original, it felt like you copied and pasted the scene right from Sins.( I know you guys can do better) Deku vs Shoto. I feel like Deku went from super powered to dead tired in two seconds, as far as I know Ban's weakness doesn't hit him that fast. I know Ban's power has weaknesses but when you add OFA and his desire to win for Ochako he really should have came out on top. Some things that bothered me were the author's choice. Falling in love at 8, yes I know we all had crushes, but love is totally different. Maybe having her die at like 14 and entering U.A. 4 years later would have made this more believable. However it's technically fantasy so that one can slide by. The random character/ quirk shoutout by Mic and the openings don't really work. Every time I see one it jars me out of the story. Plus it gives you a false word count (which I really rely on. I'm a fast reader and only read stories over 100k) Finally if you have an issue with people don't bring it up in your AN's it comes off as petty and make you seem like assholes. (I'm not saying you are) Sorry for the essay but I hope you found this helpful. Have yourselves a good day and I hope to see more
Dragon Emperor0: We appreciate your honesty and your constructive criticism. It really does mean a lot, especially when you bring up some decent points. However, there are a few that we should probably offer counter arguments to. (Though this in no way is meant to discredit your honest critiques).
ThermalsniperN7: Let's start with the art scene. To be quite perfectly honest it was a chapter we did off the cuff as a sort of filler chapter. So we didn't really put too much thought into the nitty gritty of it. And like we told the last person who said something about it: You can't win 'em all.
Dragon Emperor0: Next is the usage of SDS plot lines and elements. We decided to take this route because we felt it was more authentic to the two source materials. Additionally it just seemed like a good vessel for conflict and catalysts of character arcs. Then there's the part about having the childhood crush thing. Like you said it was mainly an author's choice thing so there's no right or wrong there.
ThermalsniperN7: Lastly there's the part about Izuku losing to Todoroki due to Ban's weakness. Sorry for the way it turned out, but we were trying to make the defeat seem viable enough for it to fit given the criteria laid out by the SDS wiki on Ban's absorption powers. As for Mic's shoutouts, we tried making them work, but it fell flat on its face, so we stopped those.
Dragon Emperor0: We hope these help you understand our POV on the subject. And one more thing, calling out trolls and warning other authors about said trolls is not the same as being petty. But, I can understand how we came off as such.
Sweet Kagamine Kiss: I do enjoy reading this. It's one of the few stories that keep me still to FFN even though I no longer write on here (I'm on AO3 full time now) because of recent spew of Anonymous commenters just slinging verbal abuse and cyberbullying me
Dragon Emperor0: Thank you for your support and thank you for sharing your story in the PMs. I hope you will do well, and I'm sorry you went through all that.
ThermalsniperN7: Yeah. The fact you went through that is appalling.
Ohma flame: well. Time for Izuku to just lose his organs over and over again. Wolfram may not kill him, But Izuku will still get heavily fucked up
Dragon Emperor0: Assuming Izuku doesn't fuck him up first.
ThermalsniperN7: So true.
: All might told him that he was going to teach at UA to find a successor, he shouldn't be that surprised to see him
Dragon Emperor0: He's an All Might fanboy, what'd you expect?
ThermalsniperN7: It's like learning that the singer of your favorite band is becoming your new musical teacher in school.
Dragon Emperor0: Is that a School of Rock reference?
ThermalsniperN7: No. I never even watched it.
Dragon Emperor0: Missin' out dude...
SuperShadic2002: Before I went on a Hiatus thanks to life being absolute bullshit and consuming literally all my spare time...and my cat being a fatass and wrecking my computer...I put openings in a couple of my fics, and you know, it was like the sky opened up and fired a lightning bolt at my face for it, so I get it. One 'Considered By A Lot Of Haters To Be ''Shitty''' author to another, not a lot of people understand how much stress we get put through, contending with our own lives, as well as trying to get chapters out that everyone can enjoy. They don't really understand how hard it is, and it sucks. That's not to say that there aren't people who don't, and I'm so thankful for my own people, who reassure me that I'm doing fine, because believe me, my anxiety has been through the roof thanks to it, but still. I'm pretty sure you two get the idea
Dragon Emperor0: Ya know that reminds me. Are you the same Shadic who wrote the Fossil Fighter's story "A Master's Story"? Been wondering that for awhile now.
ThermalsniperN7: Yeah. Let us know
JustAnGhost: Honestly the people being toxic are idiots, it's your choice whether or not to do anything here. Please ignore them, they aren't of any importance
Dragon Emperor0: Done and Done already. Thank you for the advice, kind sir.
ThermalsniperN7: What he said.
Harleking31: Weeee! Movie time!
Dragon Emperor0: Best remember to pop, butter and salt some popcorn, get a drink and some candy. You'll need it.
ThermalsniperN7: We hope you like what we have planned.
Guest: Typically I don't get involved with the reviews or anything of the sort. However, I do have to say that this story is actually pretty good! Overall, this story is well written and relatively unique. While, yes this story has it's issues; the quality of writing has improved as well as the flow of the plot. I have read many, many different stories and this particular one is one that I remember. The grammar is pretty good, as is the plot lines and the characters, but if I were you, I would double and triple check for any plot holes or inconsistencies before posting. In regards to the Haters... Don't react harshly. It just gives them ammo to spit back at you. That being said, don't ignore what they say. Even some of the harshest reviews could serve to better the story development. Just don't take the harsher criticisms to heart. Thanks for the amazing story and best regards.
Dragon Emperor0: You see? This is exactly what I'm talking about. Honest, kind, to the point and offers some actually good advice. Why can't we get more reviews like this? Seriously, the ones that usually try to give us 'critiques' are usually just pompous jerks, like that guy who complained about the Openings.
ThermalsniperN7: A bit harsh near the end there, buddy, but I get it. We really need more like this. It'll make life easier. No need for people complaining about small stuff.
Dragon Emperor0: No kidding. Plus, this chapter is going to be the mark of a big turning point for Izuku as a character in this story. Won't say why, but it does have something to do with Purgatory and the creation of his Sacred Treasure.
-Izuku's dreamscape-
"Deku… I love you." Ochako said in a loving tone as she leaned down to kiss her lover as their naked bodies pressed against each other.
"I love you too, Ochako." Izuku replied just as lovingly as he caressed his childhood sweetheart's body. The two then closed their eyes as they kissed with full passion, their bodies intertwining and glistening with sweat as they began to make love.
-Back to reality-
However the shaking of the boy's shoulder caused him to snap back to reality, just as his wet dream/flashback to the night he took his girlfriend's virginity was getting good.
"Young Midoriya, wake up." All Might said as his pupil finally woke up. The Fox Sin groaned as he straightened up, an irritated look on his face.
"Seriously, All Might? I was just about to get to the good part of a very good dream." The boy yawned as he rubbed his eyes.
"I think I know just what kind of dream you were having based on your face while you were sleeping." The man deadpanned. "But enough of that. Look out the window. We're almost there." He added, prompting the Immortal to look out the window and grin upon seeing their destination in sight.
"Holy shit!" Izuku gasped as he saw the movable man made island forest of I-Island come into view. "This is gonna be totally awesome!" He grinned.
"Nice to see you're excited. Glad I invited you." The man chuckled.
"Yeah, speaking of which." The scarred teenager stated. "Why me of all people?" He asked.
"Don't think twice about it. The invitation was clear; I'm allowed to bring anyone I want as my guest." The currently lanky man said, waving off the concern.
"But still, wouldn't that mean a family member or—" Izuku started to say his mentor held a finger in front of his face.
"I think you're forgetting that we're bonded together by something far thicker than blood, Young Midoriya." The man said. "We both share the bond of One for All." He added.
"Right." The boy nodded with a smirk. It was at that moment that the pilot made an announcement to them.
"Attention passengers. The plane will soon begin its descent to I-island." He said as All Might got to his feet.
"This is going to be a pain." He said as he buffed up. "In order to keep up my appearance I need to maintain my muscle form constantly." The hero continued as they disembarked.
As the two got off the plane, both in their hero costumes, they were scanned by security as they were brought forth by a sideways escalator.
"So, what can you tell me about this place?" All Might asked, wanting to test his student.
"That's simple. The whole island was made so the world's greatest minds could come together for quirk research and the creation of new support items." Izuku began. "They made it mobile to keep all their research safe from villains, and it's got a security system matching the one at Tartarus Prison. No crime has ever been committed here." He added.
"Way too much information, but I guess I should have expected that." The symbol of peace chuckled as they reached the main area where there were attractions galore. "Here quirks can be used freely, so there's bound to be a lot of demonstrations happening."
"Wicked." The boy grinned before All Might was suddenly recognized by someone. "Oh shit." He groaned as he jumped back as a crowd gathered.
(Later)
"Well, I certainly wasn't expecting to be stopped for quite a while." The man missed as he wiped away some of the many lipstick kisses on his face. "At this rate, we might be late." He added.
"Late for what, exactly?" The Immortal asked with a raised eyebrow.
"Why to meet a very dear friend of mine who I haven't seen in years!" The man told him. "In fact his daughter should be headed here to meet us as we speak!" He added.
"Okay… Does he know about One for All?" Izuku asked.
"No he doesn't. He doesn't know about me passing it on to you, either." The No. 1 hero replied in a hushed voice. "Danger tends to follow those who are aware." He added.
"Right. The fewer that know, the better." The Fox Sin nodded. It was at that point they heard a pogo stick heading their way, prompting them to look and see a blond and bespectacled teenage girl hopping toward them.
"Oh! There you are, Uncle!" The girl said as All Might turned around and caught her. She looked to be about seventeen and had a curvaceous figure similar to Ochako's but a rack that seemed to be close to an F-cup, two cups larger than Momo's.
"Friend of yours?" The Immortal asked sarcastically as his mentor hugged the new arrival.
"Ah, right. This is Melissa Shield, daughter of my old friend, David Shield." The man said, gesturing to the girl.
"Shield? As in the David Shield? Are you fucking kidding me?!" The Sin of Greed exclaimed in shock as his eyes went wide.
"Yep!" The blondie chirped happily. "Oh, are you one of Uncle Might's students?" She asked curiously.
"Yep. Name's Izuku Midoriya of UA's hero course." He nodded. "Otherwise known as the Fox Sin of Greed." He added.
"Oh, the hero course?" Melissa asked as she walked around the boy a bit. "What kind of quirk do you have?" She asked.
"Regeneration, and it makes me near immortal, too. I can even regrow lost limbs." The green haired boy explained. "I also have a power stealing quirk." He added.
"Sounds like you're a powerhouse." Melissa commented. "Hm… The costume is cool, and it certainly suits you." She noted. "But I don't see any support items."
"I'm actually trying to find someone who can make me one." The Sin replied.
"Oh? Maybe if you talk with my dad, he can come up with something for you." The teenage scientist replied.
"Ahem. Melissa, shall we get moving?" All Might spoke up.
"Oh! Right!" The girl nodded as she led them away.
(Later)
Later on the three came to David Shield's lab, where he was just leaving. But as soon as he did, he was met by Melissa, Izuku and All Might in the hall.
"Melissa, what's- wait, All Might?!" David started to ask before registering that his old friend was right in front of him.
"Ha ha! Dave! Great to see you again old buddy!" All Might laughed as he ran to his friend and hugged him.
"Hey! Don't call me that! I already feel old enough ya jerk!" Dave laughed as the two gave each other a fist bump.
"You do have a point!" The man exclaimed before calming down. "It is good to see you again, my friend." He told him.
"Agreed. I've missed you a lot." The scientist nodded.
"Young Midoriya, let me introduce you to someone truly incredible." The Symbol of Peace said as he looked at his grinning pupil.
"No need. It's hard not to know of such a truly great man." The boy stated before bowing. "Izuku Midoriya, Fox Sin of Greed at your service, Mr. Shield." He added.
"A pleasure to meet you, young man." David nodded. As they introduced themselves, All Might let out a slight cough.
Noticing this, Izuku turned to Melissa. "Hey, Melissa, mind showing me around the expo? I'm really interested in seeing it." He stated.
"Oh, of course. Right this way." The girl nodded as they left.
"Sam, you should take a break, too." The brown haired scientist said to a man behind him as he left as well, leaving the two alone.
(Elsewhere)
Meanwhile, with Izuku and Melissa, the girl was showing him around the expo and the Immortal was letting her take a look at the blueprints of the support items he had in mind.
"Wow, a four-sectioned staff that draws out your maximum power without injury. I gotta admit, I've never seen a request like this before." The girl admitted as she looked at the blueprints for said item. "And this time acclimation wristband and environment suit totally looks like something me and my dad could whip up." She added.
"Awesome." The Sin of Greed nodded.
"So, Izuku, how did you get your title as the Fox Sin, anyway?" The blondie asked.
"It's due to the greed I put on display. Don't get the wrong idea, though, money isn't what I care about." The Immortal explained. "That's just one form of greed. The greed I have is associated with my heart's desire." He continued.
"Really?" The bespectacled girl asked. "Is it someone special to you?"
"Yeah, my… Girlfriend, actually." He nodded, scratching the back of his neck.
"As, that's sweet." Melissa smiled. 'So he has a girlfriend, that's a shame.' She thought to herself. Unbeknownst to the two, it seemed that they had visitors.
"Yeah. Like how you want to make your dad proud by improving your skills in science. I need to get stronger so that I can protect those I love." Izuku nodded.
"... Looks like you're having fun, Izuku." Ochako said from behind them, causing the boy to tense up as they turned around, feeling the murderous intent from her. Which was hidden by a smiling face.
"Now Ochako, are you gonna believe what you see, or what I tell you?" The thief questioned nervously as he looked at his girlfriend.
"That depends on what you say." The gravity girl replied, still murderous.
"Friend of yours?" Melissa whispered nervously as she licked at Ochako.
"This is my girlfriend, Ochako Uraraka." Izuku whispered back. "And she's the extremely jealous type." He added right before he noticed Momo and Jiro standing there too.
"You seem to be having a good time, Midoriya." The rich girl commented.
"Yaoyorozu?" The boy asked in surprise.
"Midoriya, I heard everything." The rock girl commented as her earlobes defied gravity.
"Of course your earlobes prove to be the ultimate spyware, Kyoka." The Immortal sighed.
"So? Care to explain who this is?" Ochako questioned her lover, as she took a book she had and was ready to smack someone with it.
"Oh this is Melissa Shield, the daughter of a friend of All Might's." The Immortal explained, before walking over to Ochako and took her hand and interlocked their fingers and made her put the book down before whispering to her. "And don't worry, I told her I'm taken." He continued. "So stop that~. There's no need to be so jealous." He added, which caused Jiro to blush. "You're the only woman for me, Ochako. I love you, you know that."
"I love you too, sweetie." Ochako whispered back. This made Jiro's ears turn red as Melissa took note of the situation.
"I have an idea! Let's go get some tea at the pavilion." She offered, which made the tea and mochi loving girl perk up.
"Yes!" Ochako exclaimed.
(Later)
Izuku sighed in relief as the girls talked amongst themselves. "Crisis averted." He sighed as he slumped back into his seat.
"Thank you for waiting." A familiar voice said as a drink was placed in front of Izuku, causing him to look up.
"Wait, Kaminari?" He asked in minor surprise.
"Taida? Is that you?" Ochako asked, noticing her brother in a waiter's outfit.
"Oh hey, sis." The Grizzly Sin said as he floated on his usual pillow.
"When'd you guys get here?" Jiro questioned.
"We heard the café here needed some extra wait staff, so we decided to sign up for work since it meant a free trip to the island." Kaminari explained.
"Plus making some extra cash doesn't hurt either." Taida shrugged. "... You guys are short a few girls, am I missing something?" He asked.
"I was wondering about that. Where are the rest of the girls?" Izuku asked curiously. It was right about this time that Iida came zooming in at Mach speed, almost knocking over Izuku's drink.
"Why are you two slacking off?! You signed up to make extra money, but you don't even want to work for it?!" The Class Rep questioned as he slid to a halt.
"Uh, have you met Taida?" Izuku deadpanned.
"Iida?! You're here too?!" Ochako questioned in surprise at the unexpected entry.
"Yes! I was invited to represent my family." Iida nodded.
"Oh." Everyone nodded.
"I wondered if you'd be here." Momo commented. "I was invited because my father happens to be a shareholder in some of the expo's sponsor companies." She continued. "It's fun, seeing the preview." She added with a smile.
"She had a few extra plus ones, so we gambled for them." Jiro added, remembering when she and Ochako beat the rest of the girls at rock-paper-scissors for the chance to be at the expo.
"Yeah, the others are here too, they just can't see the expo yet." Ochako nodded.
"Ah." Melissa nodded. As they continued to talk, an explosion came from the distance.
"Oh Jesus. What was that?" Izuku questioned as everyone got up. As they got to the source, they found themselves in an arena.
"With a clearance time of thirty-three seconds, he's in eighth place!" A female announcer exclaimed as some dust cleared to reveal one Eijiro Kirishima standing on top of a giant rock.
"Kirishima, too?" Izuku got out in surprise.
"Is he from UA, too?" Melissa asked.
"Yep. Same class as us, too." The Immortal nodded. Then more explosives went off. "Oh shit." He said as Bakugo started clearing the course at blinding speed.
"Fifteen seconds! He's in first place!" The announcer exclaimed. Katsuki smirked as he walked off.
"Hey Bakugo, check it. Midoriya's in the stands!" The redhead exclaimed, causing the Pomeranian to look up and see his rival giving him a two-fingered salute with a grin, causing him to smirk.
"Yo! Midoriya! You gonna give it a shot?" Kirishima called to the immortal.
"Is that even a question?!" Izuku laughed as he leapt over the rails.
"Knock 'em dead, Deku." Bakugo told his rival with a grin.
"Get ready to eat those words." He nodded as he twirled his replacement staff and started stealing strength and powered up to full cowl. "Here we go: Crazy Hunt!" He yelled as he pulled himself towards the robot foes as fast as a person could blink.
"Whoa! Look at him go! I can't even see him right now!" The announcer exclaimed in amazement. Just a moment later, it was over. "Wow! A time of 7.25 Seconds! First place!" She added.
Izuku panted as his muscles tensed after he finished the course, steam covering his body as his regeneration kicked in. "Okay, twenty percent is a bit overkill, make sure not to do that again." He sighed.
As he walked back up to the stands, he sat down and tried to give his body a break while Ochako and Iida were beside him. Melissa seemed to regard him with intrigue, noting that what he did looked similar to All Might's prowess.
"Is everything okay, Izuku?" His girlfriend asked.
"Yeah. Just overdid it a bit. I'll be fine after a bit of rest." The Immortal replied as his body healed itself.
"But still, that was an impressive showing, Midoriya." The speedster commented.
"I honestly didn't expect to be able to beat Kacchan's score." Izuku chuckled.
"Yeah, yeah. Shut up!" The explosive teen barked at them before more rumbling was felt, causing them to look at the arena and see Todoroki freezing the entire mini-mountain solid.
"Holy crud! This gentleman just beat the course in five seconds!" The announcer exclaimed. Much to Katsuki and Izuku's chagrin.
"We should've seen that coming…" The Fox Sin grunted.
"No shit." Katsuki grunted in reply.
"Another one from UA?" Melissa inquired.
"Yep." Momo nodded.
"Wow. Your class is amazing." The bespectacled blondie commented with a smile. "You're all going to be such great heroes." She added.
"Thanks." They all smiled.
(Later)
Meanwhile back at the cafe, Taida and Kaminari were both sleeping against each other, both completely wiped from their shift. The Grizzly Sin snoring loudly as a snot balloon blew in his nose.
"Hey, guys! Wake up!" Jiro barked as the others approached them, snapping them awake.
"Huh?!" Taida yelped.
"Wha-!" Kaminari yelped as well.
"You two look wiped." Izuku commented.
"Yeah… It was exhausting." Taida nodded.
"I'm proud of you two, you've certainly made UA proud." Iida added as Melissa handed them two slips of paper.
"What's this?" Kaminari asked.
"Invitations to tonight's big expo reception party later tonight." Momo replied with a smile.
"A party, and you're asking us to go with you?!" The two boys gasped tearfully before they hugged Melissa. "Thank you!" They cried.
"Aw, you're welcome." The bespectacled blondie giggled.
"I've heard there will be quite a few pro heroes attending the party. It is imperative we don't tarnish UA's reputation." Iida declared. "We'll change into our formal clothes and go together as a group. Everyone meet in lobby seven of the central tower at six thirty P.M. sharp. Don't you dare be late." He continued.
"I'll be coming with bells on Iida, don't worry." Izuku told him with a thumbs up.
(Later)
Later on, Melissa led Izuku to her lab where the boy marveled at her awards. "So why is it you gave up on being a hero?" Izuku asked.
"Well, thing is I don't really have a quirk." She replied.
"Really?" The Immortal asked. "... Ya know, sometimes I wish I was quirkless." He sighed.
"Why? It's far from ideal." The girl remarked, surprised by Izuku's words.
"Because when I got my quirk, someone I loved died." The Fox Sin responded.
"... Oh… Um, if I'm allowed to ask, who was it?" Melissa asked, shocked and a little horrified by his words.
"Don't worry, it's okay." Izuku told her reassuringly. "And as for who, it was Ochako." He added, much to the girl's confusion.
"But… I saw her alive for the whole day. How is that possible?" She inquired, her confusion very apparent.
"A villain resurrected her to further her own plans." He explained. "She had a soul conjuring quirk." He added.
"Oh… I'm sorry." The girl said as she looked around. "But you know, being quirkless has let me focus on being a scientist. In fact it's helped me develop this." She continued as she showed him a wristband made of red metal. "Try it on." She told him.
"Alright." The Immortal shrugged. He then put it on, noting that it fit nicely. "Okay, now what?" He asked.
"Press the button on the back." Melissa instructed. Izuku did so and the band suddenly started wrapping around his forearm and becoming a gauntlet that looked like it was made of red metal bands.
"Interesting…" He noted. "What's it do?" He asked.
"It's called the full gauntlet. It's a prototype of a support item that can help power types expend more power without injury. By my calculations it should be able to handle 100% of Uncle Might's power at least four times." The blondie explained.
"Are you serious?" The Fox Sin asked as he looked at the gauntlet in disbelief.
"Yep. And I want you to use it. I saw how you were holding yourself back, and then there's those scars…" She nodded.
"The scar on my neck is actually from something else, but thanks." He told her. "I'll be sure to put this bad boy to good use, and if you manage to get my items made, I'll be sure to keep it a secret." He added.
"Sounds good." The girl smiled before Izuku's phone rang.
"Hello?" The Immortal asked.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING, MIDORIYA?! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE HERE TEN MINUTES AGO!" The voice of Iida yelled, obviously peeved. Izuku looked at a clock and cursed when he saw that it was six-forty.
"Shit." He growled.
(Later)
Later on Izuku finally made his way to the meeting spot, dressed in a red pinstripe suit with a black interior and lapels, a purple shirt, and a black tie. Lastly he had a silver fox pin on his lapel as well.
"Sorry I'm late… Guys, where is everyone?" The Sin of Greed asked, adjusting his cuffs a bit as he walked.
"They're not here yet. Does a meet up time mean nothing to you people?!" The blue haired speedster questioned. It was at that moment another elevator opened up, revealing Ochako in a cute pink dress, black stockings and black high heels. Her accessories were a white rose hair clip and a pearl necklace that looked really sexy on her. Taida was there, too. He was in his waiter outfit.
"Sorry, I had trouble getting ready." She said, Izuku just looked at her and could feel an arrow go through his heart. She looked so gorgeous!
"I'd say you taking your time was a good idea. You turned out really good." The Fox Sin commented, causing his girlfriend to blush. Another elevator opened up, and out came Momo and Jiro.
Momo was in a green dress and had her hair in her usual ponytail held by a formal looking hair clip.
And Jiro was in a pink and purple dress with stockings, a small hat and even a leather jacket. It really fit her punk rock motif. It also seemed to impress Kaminari in particular.
"Sorry for the tardiness. Jiro's feeling shy." The rich girl said.
"Whoa…" The human Pikachu gasped as Jiro came into view, his cheeks turning a tinge of pink like bubblegum.
"This is fancier than anything I've ever worn before. It feels like a costume." The rock girl admitted.
"I think you really look amazing in it. You should be proud of yourself." The electric boy said with a thumbs up, causing Jiro to blush.
"Kaminari!" She gasped in embarrassment.
"Smooth Pikachu." Izuku smirked, right as Melissa joined the party in a blue dress and wasn't wearing her glasses.
"Oh good. I thought I'd missed you guys." She said as she walked up to them.
"Looking good, Melissa." Izuku smirked as he gave her a thumbs up. "Now, where are Kacchan and Kirishima?" He wondered.
(Elsewhere)
"Moron, you sure you know where we're going?" Katsuki questioned, dressed in a red shirt, purple vest with roses on it, black pants and shoes. As well as a purple fedora.
"I'm pretty sure we are." Eijiro replied, dressed in a black suit with a maroon tie.
"Pretty sure?" The blonde questioned with an eye twitch, making the blockhead chuckle nervously.
(Elsewhere)
Back with the others, they were headed to the party when the alarms suddenly went off and everything on the island started to go into complete lockdown.
"Huh?" The group uttered as they looked around.
"This is an announcement from the I-island security system." An automated voice said. "We have received a report that an explosive device has been discovered somewhere on the I-expo grounds. I-island will now be on high alert mode." It continued.
"What? Then why is everything locking down? That isn't what protocol calls for." Melissa said, which made Izuku's gut twitch.
"I got a bad feeling about this, guys." The immortal stated.
"You're not the only one, Midoriya." Momo nodded in agreement.
"As a precautionary measure, all of I-island's main buildings will be sealed off." The voice continued as shutters were deployed, much to the student's growing concern. Shoto decided to see if he could call anyone, but found that his signal was blocked.
"I've got no service." He reported.
"Shitopia, now we're screwed." Izuku cursed. "... We need to figure out what's going on, come on guys." He told them as he got up.
"Where are we even going?" Iida questioned.
"To the party since All Might's there." The Fox sin replied, which got some relieved sighs. "Melissa, is there a way for us to get there since the elevators aren't working?" He questioned as he looked at the quirkless girl.
"We can use the emergency stairs. That will at least get us close." She replied.
"Sounds like a plan." The Sin of Greed nodded before turning to everyone else. "Let's move!" He ordered as they started running.
(Later)
On the roof, the kids reached the party and saw that people dressed in tactical gear and a guy in a metal mask had everyone pinned to the ground, including All Might.
"Shit. Not good." He cursed quietly before looking at Jiro. "Jiro, I need you to get your jack ready. We need to assess the situation." He told her.
"How?" She questioned.
"All Might's the most likely to spot us. I'll get his attention with my phone's light." Taida explained as he got out his phone and started using its flash to get the symbol of peace's attention.
All Might was quick to notice the light and look up, seeing the kids. Izuku then started signing for him to tell them what was going on.
"Hope you can hear me. Some villains have taken the tower." The man began quietly to avoid drawing attention. "They've taken control of the security system and now the entire island's population is being held hostage, including the heroes at this party. It's too dangerous. Run away from here as fast as you can." He continued. When he finished, Jiro retracted her jack and looked at the Immortal.
"It's bad, Midoriya." She reported gravely. As the group reconvened Iida was the first to speak up and voice his take on the situation.
"We heard All Might's orders loud and clear. He's our teacher, so we should obey his wishes and leave this place as soon as we can." He told them.
"And what? Hope the villains will stay true to their word and leave once they get what they want?" The Fox Sin questioned. "Come on, Iida, use your brain. As soon as these bastards get what they want they'll probably kill any loose ends to avoid getting tied up with complications or leaving witnesses." He continued. "At this point running isn't an option." He added.
"As much as I'd like to agree with what Iida's saying, Midoriya's right." Momo nodded reluctantly. "We might still be students, without hero licenses, but we're still in the same danger as everyone on the island." She added.
"Escaping won't be easy though, the security here is like Tartarus Prison. So it'll be next to impossible to just break out." Melissa noted.
"So we'll take down the villains who are manhandling the security." Izuku stated. "And to make sure we don't get skull fucked, we should do this stealthily. Provided these dumbasses don't wise up to it." He added.
"Are you sure this is wise?" Iida questioned, his voice conveying a smidgen of nervousness.
"Like I said, hiding and running are no longer an option. So we need to deal with these fuckers before they deal with us." The boy replied. "Or else we're all fucked." He added.
"... I know where the security system is." Melissa spoke up. "It's on the top floor of this tower. If these villains managed to take control of it, then it's likely that the authentication and password have been disabled. We can likely restart the system ourselves. All we need to do is stay off their radar until we reach the top floor." She explained further.
"Then we should hurry and go now. We shouldn't stand around when we could be helping people." Ochako said firmly, causing everyone to turn to her in surprise.
"Ochako?" Izuku asked, surprised by her firm voice.
"I refuse to sit around and be helpless, especially since we can actually try and do something! What matters is that we're helping people, even if we're not real heroes!" She declared passionately. Izuku smirked at her as he got to his feet.
"Now you're thinking the way I do about things!" He told her. "Come on! Let's save this island!" He added with a grin.
"Whoa whoa, hold it guys. Haven't you remembered anything from the USJ? What if things go sideways?!" Taida questioned, raising a rather valid point.
"Then we'll adapt. Come on King, we can do this!" The Immortal told him.
"Plus, Tsu might be really impressed with ya buddy." Kaminari said, nudging his friend a bit.
"U-um…" The Grizzly Sin stuttered.
"I'll tag along, too." The fire-ice user spoke up as he stepped forward.
"As soon as it looks like a situation where we have no chance of winning, I'm taking all of you back." Iida states. "If that's something you can agree to, then I'll go as well."
"Me too." Momo nodded.
"Count me in." Jiro added.
"If Jiro and Iida are up for it, then so am I." Kaminari nodded as well.
"This is nuts… Alright, I'll go. I can apply first aid in the event anyone is injured." Taida sighed before nodding.
"That'll be helpful." The rock girl nodded.
"I'm going, too." Melissa said.
"Melissa, no. You can't come with us without a quirk." Izuku denied with a shake of his head.
"Do any of you know how to operate the security system?" The blondie retorted, causing them to realize that they had no idea how to work the security tech at all. "Then that part is settled. I'll help you guys get everything going." She added.
"Why do I feel like this is going to go sideways?" The Immortal groaned.
(Later)
After laying out their plan, Izuku and the others went back to where the party was, and All Might was quick to notice. Though he didn't like the look on his pupil's face.
'Oh no, I know that look!' The man thought to himself.
'I know what you're thinking.' Izuku thought as he looked into his mentor's eyes.
'Don't! It's too dangerous, even for you!' The man thought as if they were having a telepathic conversation.
'I've gotta do everything I can to help!' The Immortal thought with a determined look.
'Young Midoriya…!' All Might thought, moved by his successor's spirit.
'It'll be alright! Just watch!' The Fox Sin thought as he left.
'He's not leaving.' The No. 1 hero thought as his body started to steam. 'I should be furious that he won't heed his teacher's wishes…' He continued to think before he grinned. 'But that would be a lie! If he didn't act now, he wouldn't be my successor!' He thought as he stopped steaming. 'I'll just have to keep up this form, and have faith that they can get out of this situation on their own!' He finished mentally as Izuku regrouped with the others.
(Later)
As the kids ran up the stairs they kept finding that the building had a seemingly endless number of stairs—and by the time they reached floor seventy, Taida decided to ask the important question about their destination.
"How high does this place go? He asked, glad that he could float right now.
"Up to two hundred floors." Melissa panted as she tried to catch her breath, much to everyone's disbelief.
"Great, and on top of that, the route's blocked." Izuku sighed, pointing at a barrier in their way.
"Breaking through will probably alert the villains." Melissa stated.
"How about we go through here?" Taida asked, pointing to a door locked by a keypad.
"Yeah, I could short out the system and we can use it as a shortcut without alerting anyone." Kaminari nodded, electricity coursing in his hand.
"Hey, good thinking Kaminari!" Ochako said.
"Wow, who knew the moron would have a good idea for once." Jiro said in surprise.
"Hey, I can be smart when I want to be!" The electric boy retorted indignantly before he proceeded to short-circuit the locking mechanism without triggering an alarm. "Okay, we're good." He said as the door opened.
"Alright everyone! Move out!" Izuku told the gang as he took off his sport coat and activated the Full Gauntlet.
"Right!" They chorused as they started running.
"Hey, what is this place?" Izuku asked as he looked around, noting the abundance of plants.
"It's a plant factory. The effects of quirks on fauna are studied here." Melissa explained.
"Wait, everyone stop!" Jiro spoke up as she got in front of everyone. "Look! The elevator is coming up!" She said, pointing at the elevator.
"Crap! I thought we didn't trip the alarm?!" Kaminari questioned.
"Did The villains find us?!" Taida questioned.
"No. It's probably just a patrol. Everyone, hide!" Izuku exclaimed as everyone hid behind a bush. The doors opened and three men walked out, one being short, another being lanky and the other looked like a steampunk robot.
"Hey! We can see you, stupid kids!" The lanky guy yelled.
'Shit!' The Fox Sin cursed inwardly, about to stand up when another voice spoke up.
"What did you say, bastard?" The voice of Bakugo shot back. This made Izuku's eyes widen as he peeked through the leaves and saw his rival and Kirishima standing there.
"What're you even doing here?" The shorter guy questioned.
"That's what I'd like to know, too." Katsuki growled as he started stomping towards them.
"I got this." The redhead told his friend before stepping forward. "We were trying to find our way to a party here and got lost. Can you point us in the right direction?" He requested.
"They got this high up looking for reception?" Taida whispered in disbelief. The three villains looked at each other before the lanky one's hand opened into a webbed mit.
"Don't lie to us or you'll regret it!" He yelled as he sent some sort of wind attack at the two. Right as it was about to hit, Todoroki was quick to block it with some ice.
"Wait, isn't this…" Bakugo trailed off before looking in the direction it came from.
"Todoroki?!" Kirishima said as the others came up to them, right as the third villain jumped over the ice wall and landed behind the girls.
"Hi! My name is Pump!" He said in a voice that sounded like a squeaky bicycle wheel. "Will you be my friend?" He asked as he held his arms out as spikes came out of his body.
"Not a chance!" The Pomeranian barked back. Todoroki glanced at the others before he focused some ice under them.
"What are you doing?!" Izuku questioned as he and the others were raised to the next level.
"The three of us can keep these guys busy! The rest of you continue on!" The two-toned boy exclaimed. However, as the ice pillar went up, Pump started climbing it after the others.
The three tried to stop him, but the other two villains attacked them first, sending Kirishima flying and putting the other two on the defensive.
"Kirishima!" Bakugo yelled, worried for his friend.
"Dodge!" Shoto shouted, prompting the bomber to instinctively jump out of the way of an attack from the lanky villain. The two-toned boy then sent a wave of ice at him, only for him to dodge before the two teens stood back to back against their opponents.
(Elsewhere)
Meanwhile with the rest of the kids, they burst through to floor ninety and were able to proceed onward, but were suddenly stopped when Pump managed to capture the girls. His needles managed to prick them and somehow paralyze them, much to the boy's shock and horror.
"Shit!" Izuku cursed as he glared at Pump.
"You'll be my friends, won't you?" The robotic villain asked, the vibrations of the needles making the girls involuntarily nod. "You will?! Yay!" He added as he was about to hug and skewer them, when the girls started to get pulled away by an unseen force, and his needles were forcibly pulled out.
"Alright, punk. I think it's time you learned why pissing off a fox is a bad idea!" Izuku growled as he cracked his knuckles. The boys quickly got the girls away.
The two then charged at each other as Izuku pulled out his staff and started using fox hunt to grapple Pump before beating him with it like they were nunchucks, while Pump did a headstand spin kick. Then Izuku grabbed him with the chains of his staff and slammed him around before double kicking him into the ground and onto his back.
"What's the matter? Aren't you supposed to be strong?" The immortal questioned condescendingly.
"Y-y-you're so mean~!" Pump cried childishly as he got up.
"Don't let your guard down!" Melissa told him.
"Huh?" The boy asked before one of the robot's needles got him in the shoulder. "Oh come on." He groaned as he tried to pull it free before he became paralyzed. Pump then brought the immortal towards him.
"My needles can paralyze the souls of anyone they touch." He grinned. "You'll be my friend, right? And you know what friends do, they hug!" The bot exclaimed before he squeezed Izuku and skewered him with his many needles. "Well, order up!" He grinned.
"Oh no, Izuku!" The blonde girl gasped.
"Hey~!" The fox sin grinned as he revived, shocking Melissa.
"Wait… Huh?!" She asked intelligently, unable to come up with a better question.
"He's immortal." Kaminari whispered.
"Huh? But your body's full of holes, how are you alive?" Pump questioned before Izuku got his arms free and wrapped them around the robot's waist.
"Man, you really don't know when to shut up, do ya?" The Sin of Greed growled as he started squeezing with 15% of One for All. "You wanted a hug, right?!" He snarled before Pump's back suddenly snapped in two with a sickening sound, killing him instantly.
"That was… a whole new level of disturbing." Melissa commented with a large shiver running up her spine. Izuku then dropped Pump as he walked over to them.
"The way's probably blocked. Got any ideas on how we can get around it?" He asked Melissa.
"Wait, look up there!" Jiro said as she pointed to a small air duct. "Where does that lead?" She asked.
"I think it runs under the maintenance room for the sunlight system." The blondie replied. That's when Iida had an idea.
"There's probably an emergency ladder inside, right?" He asked.
"Yeah, but it's a manual release, so someone would have to be inside to release it." Melissa explained.
"Now who do we know who could fit inside a cramped space like that?" Kaminari asked before everyone looked at Taida who was sitting on his pillow.
"Me? Are you nuts?!" The fairy king hero exclaimed.
"You're our best chance, king." Jiro told him.
"Come on bro, you can do it!" Ochako added.
"Are you even aware of how high up we are?!" The short boy questioned before his electric friend came to his side.
"Think about it, Taida. If you do this and Tsu finds out, she might take you on a date." Kaminari said with a grin. The thought was enough to give the Grizzly Sin courage.
"Alright, I'm on it!" He nodded. A few minutes later, he was flying up the outer wall on his pillow, and it was the thought of dating Tsuyu that spurred him on. "Don't worry, Tsu, I'll save everyone if it's the last thing I do!" He exclaimed as he transformed his weapon into its spear form and started air surfing to the top.
Back with the others, the ladder was let down and everyone went up quickly and found Taida waiting for them with a very smug look on his face. "That's right, who da man? Who da man?" He laughed.
"That was amazing work, Taida. I expected nothing less from someone like you." Melissa praised with a smile.
"Aw shucks, twernt nothing." The fairy king chuckled as they kept moving. Though as they did, they found that the doors kept opening, which was odd since they hadn't reset anything yet.
"What's going on? Did they lose us?" Kaminari wondered.
"No. It's likely they're leading us somewhere." Iida said as they reached a power station, which was full of security drones.
"It's a trap!" Izuku exclaimed.
"Looks like they've realized who we are." Taida noted.
"Which means we have no reason not to show them what we can do." Momo said as she created the same insulation sheet she made at the USJ.
"Agreed." Iida nodded. "We'll proceed with plan A." He added as he looked at Kaminari. "Are you ready, Kaminari?" He questioned.
"Hold it guys." Izuku said. "Those drones are supposed to be just like the ones that run prisons. If we use Kaminari we'll expend too much of his power." He added.
"That's right." Melissa nodded. "If you have another plan, use it." She added.
"Alright, then. Plan B it is. Midoriya, let's go!" The speedster exclaimed.
"Right." The immortal nodded as he twirled his weapon. "Fox Hunt!" He exclaimed as he started swinging and destroying robots left and right, which allowed them to enter a server room where hordes of the same drones started pouring in.
"Chastiefol form two!" King said as he snapped his fingers and his spear's second form started swarming the robots and destroying them.
"Full Gauntlet, thirty percent!" The Fox Sin yelled as he punched the ground and sent more flying. "Ochako, Melissa, come with me! The rest of you try to find another route!" He called as he destroyed a barrier for them to go through.
"Be safe, Midoriya!" Jiro called as she fired a cannon Momo made.
(A few minutes later)
As everyone ran out towards the next area and found that it was covered in turbines. "This must be the turbine area." Izuku noted as he turned to Melissa. "Is the top much farther?" He asked.
"Not much, but if we go inside, there will be more drones waiting for us." The blondie replied. "Ochako, your quirk can make things weightless. If you use your quirk on us, you can send us straight to the top." She added.
"Yeah, I can do that." Ochako nodded. "Melissa, hold onto Deku." She told her.
"Right." The blonde nodded as Izuku put his arms around her waist. "Oh! You sure are muscular." She noted in surprise.
"I'm taken, remember?" Izuku reminded her.
"I know. I'm still just a teenage girl, remember?" She replied, sarcastically.
"Touché." The Sin of Greed said as they floated upwards, only for the drones to literally break the door down.
"Huh? Ochako, deactivate your quirk and get out of there!" Melissa called in alarm, Izuku himself being very concerned for his girlfriend.
"I can't! If I do that, you won't reach the top!" The brunette called back.
'Dammit! Come on, move faster!' The immortal thought as he grit his teeth in frustration. Right as the drones were about to reach Ochako…
BOOM!
Katsuki arrived with Todoroki and Kirishima in tow. Izuku and Melissa looked at him in relief. "DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!" He yelled as he blasted the robots out of the way and Shoto froze them.
"Thanks for coming, guys!" The gravity gal sighed in relief. "I used my quirk on Deku and Melissa. They're on their way to the top!" She added.
"Good to hear!" The two-toned boy nodded. "Now you can help us stop these things!" He added as he sent out another wave of ice.
"Whoa!" Izuku exclaimed as the turbines blew them away. "Todoroki! Help!" He yelled.
"I got you!" Shoto called back as he knocked a turbine loose and blasted it with fire, causing the wind to send them flying upwards.
"That did it!" Ochako exclaimed with a smile. As the two flew towards a wall, Izuku readied his leg for a kick.
"Alright, St. Louis SMASH!" He yelled as he delivered a 100% roundhouse kick to the wall, shattering it and allowing them to land but destroying his right leg.
"They got in the tower! Release!" The gravity controlling brunette exclaimed as she released her quirk, restoring the duo's gravity.
Melissa groaned as she sat up, and her eyes widened when she saw Izuku's mangled leg. She would've panicked, but she saw that it was regenerating.
"Well, that was a rough landing." The immortal commented as he sat up. "You good?" He asked his blond friend.
"Yeah, just some scratches." The blonde nodded. Right as they were about to get up, a pink haired villain with swords for arms suddenly attacked them. However, when he tried to slash Izuku, he only managed to rip his shirt.
"That was a two hundred and fifty million yen shirt." The boy growled as he looked at the man. "Do you have a death wish or something?" He questioned.
"Shut it kid!" The man yelled as he stabbed the Fox Sin in his chest and through his back, blood trickling from Izuku's mouth as he went limp… before he suddenly looked up at the man and gave him an evil smirk. "W-what the hell?!" He stuttered, feeling a chill run up his spine.
"You can't kill me, fucknugget!" Izuku yelled as he dragged himself close to the man by grabbing up his arm and moving closer, before he delivered a hammerfist to his head and sent him crashing into the floor.
As he discarded his ruined shirt, Izuku soon noticed the horrified look on Melissa's face as the hole in his torso slowly sealed up and let off steam.
"I guess the guys didn't tell you that my quirk also earned me another nickname: Izuku the Undead. I've died more times than probably the entire population of this world's cemeteries." He said nonchalantly as he popped his back and charged up with Full Cowl at 8%. "What so many people dread their whole lives I experience on a biweekly basis… At this point it's just an annoyance to me." He added with a sigh.
"I… Oh, I think I'm gonna be sick…" Melissa groaned as she held her stomach. Izuku then turned to the stairs and gestured for her to follow. He then started jumping around at high speed and nailed one guy into a wall with a kick while decking the other down the stairs, their bullets not piercing his skin due to his regenerations from earlier.
The two then continued on to the top floor, where Izuku saw Sam and Dave inside the vault trying to do something. But what it was, he couldn't tell from their current position.
"What are they doing?" The immortal wondered. "Doesn't matter, we need to get in there now." He said as he turned to Melissa, who nodded as they entered the vault, where Sam was walking back with a briefcase.
"The villains are holding things down, just like you planned!" Sam said happily, causing the two teens to pause in shock. This made Izuku twitch, planned? What was he talking about?
"Finally, I'll get back what's mine." Dave said as he looked inside the briefcase and revealed some sort of head gear. However, before anything else could be done, Izuku used Snatch to grab the case from the two and bring it to himself. And the glare he was sporting on his face was murderous, like he was five seconds away from shirking his ideals as a hero to beat them to a pulp.
"Papa… Was… was this whole thing all you're doing?" Melissa questioned, sounding like her whole world was about to crumble. Dave shouldn't bring himself to look his daughter in the eyes.
Izuku opened the case and looked at the headgear inside. "A quirk enhancing head piece? That's what all this is about?!" The boy growled as he closed the box and threw it on the ground. "What the actual fuck is your problem?!" He yelled.
"The professor was only trying to get back what was stolen from him!" Sam spoke up, but he shrunk away when Izuku glared at him.
"Stolen, or locked away for the world's safety?!" He seethed.
"You don't understand! That device was meant for All Might." Dave explained. "His quirk, it's—." He tried to continue.
"Disappearing, I know." The Sin of Greed deadpanned. "What you don't understand is that it's disappearing because he passed it on to me!" He added without thinking, to overcome with rage to pick his words.
"Wait, what?!" Melissa questioned with wide eyes, causing the immortal to realize what he said and curse under his breath.
"Fuck, cat's out of the bag." He muttered. "That's right. I'm his chosen successor." He nodded at her. This made Dave's eyes widen in realization.
"Toshinori told me that his quirk was made to fight All for One, someone who could take and pass along quirks. Don't tell me his quirk can do something similar?!" He gasped.
"That's One for All, a stockpiling quirk that grows in power as it's passed along. It belonged to All for One's little brother, the first user, and I'm the ninth." The immortal nodded. "So I hope you're realizing that you just made a huge fucking mistake." He added. This made Dave look down, knowing how true his words are. He went through all this trouble for nothing.
"Do you have any idea how much danger Deku and his classmates put themselves through?!" Melissa shouted angrily at her father.
"Obviously not, otherwise he wouldn't have gone through with something like this for some stupid trinket." The green haired boy said as he kicked the briefcase at Sam and hit him in the shin with it, right as the leader of the villains walked in.
"It was just supposed to be an act!" Sam tried to retort before the leader spoke up.
"That it was." He said, getting everyone's attention. "But the real act was pretending we weren't criminals." He added as he placed his hand on the wall and caused a large rectangle of metal to hit Izuku and flatten him like a pancake.
"IZUKU!" Melissa yelled in horror. In spite of the teenage immortal facing death regularly, she had no clue if he could survive getting flattened. Seconds later the pillar shattered as Izuku used 50% full cowl on himself and broke himself free, but he was full of holes.
"Not bad kid, but let's see you deal with this!" Wolfram said as he made a rail try and grab him, but the Sin of Greed dodged it with ease, the villain not noticing his wounds healing. "What?! How are you able to move with those wounds?!" He yelled.
"Huh? What're you talking about? What wounds?" The boy asked as he looked at his healed body. "Here's the thing pal: there's only one wound on me, and that's this one right here, got it?" He continued as he pointed at his only scar on his neck. "Though you could say that wounds I get from 'that guy' are kind of a special case, I guess." He added with a shrug.
"And you think you're some kind of big shot with that quirk of yours, kid?!" Wolfram questioned.
"Think? Nah. Know? Oh hell yeah." Izuku grinned, though that soon turned sour when he saw Sam walking over to Wolfram with the briefcase. "What the fuck are you doing?" He growled.
"Fulfilling my own plan!" The assistant shot back. Dave's eyes widened in shock.
"You… you were going to hand it over to them?" He uttered.
"You just let our sponsors take our work, if I hadn't done it, my entire career would have been a waste of time." Sam snapped. This made Izuku start foaming at the mouth, remembering how Ochako nearly died twice tonight, and this guy was more concerned about his stupid career?!
"Thank you. Here's your payment." The metal bender said before shooting Sam in the shoulder, much to Dave's shock.
"W-Why?" The man stuttered.
"Simply put, you served your purpose." Wolfram said as he was about to shoot Sam in the head—before a black and green energy cloaked clawed hand suddenly slammed his face into the wall.
"W-what?" Sam uttered before looking at the hand's owner and widened his eyes in shock when he saw an angry looking energy kitsune standing there with a snarl on his face.
The energy cloaked figure roared as he started beating Wolfram over and over again, before the villain forced him off and started trying to shoot him, but the bullets just crinkled up and fell on the ground like little balls of lead.
"Dammit!" He cursed before he used his quirk to make metal pillars smash into the angry boy.
"Melissa! Quick! Turn off the security system! if All Might can get here, he can help!" Dave said to his daughter, who was frozen in fear at what she was seeing. "MELISSA!" He shouted, snapping his daughter out of her fear stricken state.
"Huh? Oh! Right!" She replied before making a run for security control. Izuku roared as he burst out of Wolfram's hold again, and this time it could be heard throughout the tower.
(Elsewhere)
In the lower levels, all of class 1-A had to cover their ears as they heard Izuku's infuriated roar. They all looked up toward the top floor and wondered what had happened.
"Fuck. Sounds like someone pissed Deku off good if we're hearing that again." Bakugo noted.
"Wait, you mean he's going berserk again?" Ochako gasped, remembering what everyone told her when it happened during the USJ attack.
"Yes." Shoto nodded. "This means that someone is either going to die… or wish they did." He added gravely.
(Elsewhere)
Meanwhile at the reception, All Might broke free and was headed to find Izuku and the others, right as he heard a roar that made the veteran hero's blood run cold.
'I know that roar… Young Midoriya, what's gotten you all riled up?' He thought before his phone rang. "Hello?" He asked as he answered the device, in which Dave spoke on the other end.
"All Might, I need you to get up here quick! Izuku's gone berserk! I've got Melissa handling security, so you should have a clear way up!" He exclaimed.
"I'm on my way, Dave! Hang on!" The man said as he hung up and started running.
(Elsewhere)
Back with Izuku, he was chasing after Wolfram who was hopping into a helicopter with his goons to get away with the quirk enhancer, however, before they could fly very far, the enraged Fox Sin jump at such an incredible speed that he crashed through the aircraft and caused an explosion. However the impact also had the added effect of also knocking the boy out of his rage form due to the impact and explosion.
"Deku!" Melissa cried as she ran out of the elevator and to the Fox Sin's side.
"Oh… that hurt." The boy groaned as he slowly sat up. "What the hell happened?" He asked, noting the current look of things.
"You went berserk and fought the villains after you got angry." The blondie explained shortly right as All Might appeared.
"That again? Damn, I thought I got a handle on that." The boy said as he got up and turned to All Might. "All Might, one of the villains has Dave's invention. It can enhance a person's quirk to unbelievable levels without drawbacks." He explained to his mentor as Wolfram came out of the wreckage of the helicopter.
"Is that so?" The Symbol of Peace questioned as he glared at Wolfram.
"Damn right it is, and here's what it can really do!" The villain yelled as the headset activated. This caused him to be able to manipulate every bit of metal that was around him to an insane degree, creating some sort of giant Eldritch abomination mech suit which he used to grab Dave and also Melissa.
"MELISSA/DAVE!" Izuku and All Might yelled in unison.
"Now I'll crush you, with everything I've got!" Wolfram yelled as he started striking at them with everything he had, blowing them both back and causing Izuku to get pierced in the stomach.
"Son of a bitch!" The immortal cursed as he ripped himself free. This assault kept going for several minutes before Wolfram's attacks were suddenly halted by walls of ice, explosions, punches and kicks that shattered every construct that got near them. It was the others, and they were running support!
"Status demotion!" Taida yelled as he snapped his fingers, causing many of the constructs to fall apart. "Status promotion!" He added as he made rust on some of the metal spread of a third of the giant heap of mangled ore, which made that section disintegrate into dust. He then started to concentrate as he readied his next attack.
"Thanks King!" Izuku called as he started running towards his foe. All Might did the same, but as he broke towards Wolfram with a Carolina Smash, the villain wrapped him up in cables and grabbed his throat as his muscles started to grow in size!
'What the…?! Where did this strength come from?!' The No. 1 hero thought in surprise as he gritted his teeth.
"Surprised? Don't be. This little quirk was a gift from your old nemesis, All for One. He helped us get here." The metal user said, causing the man's face to contort in shock.
'What?! All for One is behind this?!' He thought.
"Oh yes. When he got word of what's going on here, he wanted to aid in the fall of his nemesis." Wolfram chuckled evilly. He then grabbed All Might by the throat with one hand while the other went to his injury and squeezed it, causing the man to let out a pained yell.
Hearing his mentor's cry of pain, Izuku jumped into action and started using fox hunt to slash apart everything in his way before breaking the chords holding All Might. Both men landed on the ground as the boy turned towards Taida, who was now floating beside a fully transformed Chastiefol in its Release: Sun Blade Spear form. Its most powerful form.
"Now, King! Let 'em have it!" The immortal yelled.
"Choke on this, you bastard!" The short boy yelled as he hurled his spear at the villain, who created a metal shield to protect himself. The spear then collided with the shield and created a huge cross shaped explosion that seemed to stretch up into the sky, but as it cleared, Wolfram was still standing, only being halfway damaged.
"You stupid… little… shits!" Wolfram yelled as he sent dozens of metal pillars at All Might, Izuku and Taida, who all did their damndest to avoid getting hit.
"Damn it! We gotta put this guy down, before he destroys the whole island!" Izuku growled.
"Then I believe it's about time we pushed beyond our limits. And show this vile villain the meaning of UA's famous catchphrase!" The Symbol of Peace said as he started charging up.
"Right behind you!" The Fox Sin exclaimed as he, too, charged up.
"Let's go!" All Might exclaimed as he took a runner's stance.
"Yes sir!" Izuku replied before the duo charged, dodging and smashing their way through all the metal pillars sent their way. The others watched with hopeful expressions as the two charged forward.
"DEKU-KUN!" Ochako yelled out encouragingly.
"Hit that guy so hard his head spins around, Deku!" Katsuki added.
"You can do it, Midoriya!" Iida, Kirishima and Kaminari called.
"Win this for us, you two!" Taida added.
"Get him All Might!" The girls yelled.
"Don't lose to this guy!" Shoto yelled.
Spurred on by the encouragement of their loved ones, Izuku and All might pulled out all the stops. Izuku coursed 100% of One for All all over his body and his entire being started to crack and rip under the strain, but regenerated just as quickly and became stronger. Kicking a giant cube to pieces both student and teacher ran beside each other on equal footing as they jumped up, right as Wolfram was about to crush them with a titanic sized cube.
"It's time." All Might said.
"To go beyond our limits, and save our friends!" Izuku added as they both cocked their arms back.
"I'll kill you both!" Wolfram yelled as he three the cube at them, and was met with the fists of the two powerhouses.
"Double Detroit SMASH!" They yelled in unison as they punched the cube together, resulting in a power struggle with student and teacher pushing together against one villain. As per the laws of science, the superior force of All Might and Izuku one out, destroying the cube and stunning Wolfram with the backlash, giving the two an opening.
"Now to deliver the final blow! Go Beyond!" Izuku yelled.
"Plus ULTRA!" He and All Might roared as they punched the villain so hard that it caused an explosion big enough to rival a hydrogen bomb, surely killing Wolfram on impact.
(A few minutes later)
As the dust settled, Izuku groaned as he rose from some rubble and held his head.
"Fuck, that was intense." He groaned as he got up. Not a moment later, Ochako came out of nowhere and tackled the boy in a hug before she kissed him on the lips, which surprised Izuku with how unexpected it was. But it also shocked their classmates, save perhaps Taida and Melissa—who was being patched up by a shocked Momo—to a great degree.
"You did it, Izuku! You saved the island!" She exclaimed gleefully.
"Yeah, Ochako. We all did." The immortal nodded as he pet his girlfriend on the head.
"W-wait a minute! When did you two get together?!" Kirishima questioned. This made the two tense up as Izuku facepalmed, realizing that yet another cat had been let out of the bag.
"Today is just not my day…" The boy groaned. "We've been a thing since the final exams Kirashima, stop making a big deal out of it!" He called.
Meanwhile with All Might and David, they looked at the kids with smiles on their faces. They were glad everything had worked out at the end of this dark night.
"So that's the future, is it?" The brown haired man mused.
"Indeed it is." The No. 1 hero nodded in his true form before he frowned. "I heard quite a bit from Melissa. Is it all true?" He asked.
"Yes… I'm sorry, Toshi. I was just so afraid of what would happen if your light disappeared… that I lost sight of the big picture." The scientist said as he looked at the kids as Ochako and Izuku gathered everyone in a group hug with Melissa in the center. "Of all the light that you left behind, that will become brighter when you're gone."
All Might put a hand on his shoulder. "I understand, old friend. Please don't beat yourself up over it." He said as the two looked at each other. Dave saw how All Might's recovered physique looked like a more average built version of his young self. If only older.
"I'm just glad that it's all over now." Dave sighed as his fatigue caught up with him.
(A couple days later)
A couple days passed and David of course was going to spend the next year in prison for aiding a villain attack, but luckily due to All Might's vouching he was able to continue his work. Right now Izuku was visiting him in prison and was showing the man his blueprints for his support items.
"So, what do you think? Can you make some stuff like this for me once you get out?" The immortal asked. The scientist looked at the blueprints for a moment before nodding.
"Yes. I can easily manage these." He replied. "Though Melissa will most likely be the one to build them or send the parts to UA to be assembled since I'll be… here." He added. Izuku smirked as he got up.
"Then try and get them to me as soon as possible. However that turns out to be." The boy replied. "And thanks, this is really going to help me a lot." He added.
"What exactly do you have planned for the wristband and the suit, if I may ask?" Dave inquired.
"Let's just say it's beyond insane and leave it at that." Izuku replied cryptically before leaving.
And with that, Izuku Midoriya went home, where he would find a mother and loving girlfriend waiting for him. Which was good in his opinion.
Dragon Emperor0: And there, after two days of writing we finally did it. The first movie of the Fox Sin story so far. And it turned out pretty good if I have to say so myself.
ThermalsniperN7: Yeah, I second that. This was NOT without its pains, though. We had to watch this movie as we wrote this giant chapter, and I had to watch it on a browser that was prone to crashing on my XBOX… And that's not even including that break we took on Friday since everything just felt off then.
Dragon Emperor0: Luckily though it'll be awhile before we have to take an undertaking like this again so we'll have plenty of time to recuperate. Also, this will be the last chapter of Fox Sin for a bit since we'll be putting it on hiatus until we can get Uchiha: Reborn, White Snake, Venom, Serpent Sin, and Saiyan Pride all caught up to their own versions of the movie. So once that's all done, season 3 of Fox Sin will begin posthaste.
ThermalsniperN7: We have quite the undertaking ahead of us, so putting this story in the backseat is a necessity for us to focus on the others. We hope you enjoyed this chapter because, to us, this was a pretty big task.
Dragon Emperor0: But that being said it was fun to write. Anyway guys, see you all after the hiatus in season 3!