"Talk"
'Thought'
*Action*
"YELL!"
"Skill/ Techniques"
"Demon/Beast Talk"
'Demon/Beast Thought'
(Please pay attention to (') and (") it's hard to notice sometimes.)
(For this chapter, I change the reading style from Script to Basic Novel style for testing, and Orochi is just the nickname Kenshi gives her, not her full name)
Kyo blinked a couple of times and found himself in a dark space.
"Oh... Not again..." Kyo growled in frustration. He found himself in a familiar space, but this time there quite different it was a slimy and smelly space.
"Uh... The smells... Where am I?" He pinches his nose with his right hand and makes a ki ball hovering on his left palm. His Ki ball is enough to light the whole space as he realizes that he is stepping on the purple slimy meat-looking floor and around him also the same purple slimy meat-looking wall. The young Saiyan can see the meat tunnel walk straight through, but before he can walk, he hears a voice.
"Why do you look so much like him..." Kyo turned his attention toward the voice as he saw the same female he saw before he knockout.
"O-Orochi-chan." When he said her name, he gasped in pain and clutched his head. Orochi narrows her eyes as she walks closer.
"How do you know the nickname he calls me?" She said in a cold serious tone. Kyo saw her pull a sword that came out from her cleavage, at fist; he wonders how she managed to hide that sword in the first place, then seconds he knew his life was in danger, so he ignored it. Orochi points the sword toward Kyo as she asks again. "Answer me, brat!"
Kyo noticed she was furious as Kyo tried to ease the pain in his mind and talk to her. "I-I didn't know, but something that happens months ago makes me remember the past." Kyo didn't want to tell her whole story, as he knows she might be an enemy, but his mind tells him she is the person he knows and somehow loves?
"That wasn't good enough! How you look like him! How do you know my nickname? How do you even have his voice! And what you mean by you remember the past!" She attacks Kyo as the young Saiyan dodges the sword slash. Kyo's single hand backflips as he fires his Ki blast at The snake lady.
Orochi cuts the Ki ball into two as she goes faster with her attack.
"Wait! Why did you suddenly attack me!" Kyo said as he managed to pull his kunai and holds it on his right arm as his left hovering Ki blast makes the space light.
"You can't fool me! I know you are from Nakamura! Only Nakamura can use KI!" She points with her sword to Kyo Ki's ball.
"Huh? Wait, you know about my power?" Kyo asks her, as Orochi smile as she stands still. "Why I'd know? Kukukuku..." She said, and She closed her eyes as tears down from her face, and she tightened her grip on her sword, and she continued. "because one of your clans KILL MY LOVER!"
In shock, Kyo remembers what caused Kenshi's death, Kyo saw a blue hair man, same as Taros use self-destruct to kill four Sannin and Kenchi are the one who protects three Sannin with his Susanoo body. Still, the explosion is too great. Even his Susanoo can't hold the damage. Everything turns black and white as Kenchi roars, and everything turns into a white scene.
Kyo is down to his knees, panting as now he knows how Kenchi get into that situation.
"I was happy when I heard Narakamura got massacred and the last Nakamura also died 7 years ago, but it seems like I was wrong... you Nakamura should not exist in this world." She said with venom as she glared at Kyo. Kyo felt it hard to breathe as he felt he suck poisoned air.
"Y-You... wrong I'm not Nakamura, I'm Uchiha!" Kyo said as he tried standing to stand. His Sharingan is active as he looks at Orochi with a glare. The snake lady is shocked at this when she looks at Kyo Blue Sharingan.
"How you have that!" She said as she threw her sword toward Kyo, aiming at his head as he managed to dodge the sword in time. Orochi makes a hand seal. "Formation of Ten Thousand Snake!" Thousand snakes out from her arms. Kyo makes a Ki blast and blasts all the snakes away, but he is suddenly down to his knees, panting for air.
"Kukuku, It looks like the poison air finally takes effect." She said with smirks at Kyo as she walked closer to Kyo. "But It will be such a waste to let you die here... I want to make you suffer by watching everyone you love die." She said with a smirk and continued her word. "See you again, Kyo Uchiha, or may I say, Nakamura." She walks closer toward The young Saiyan as Kyo stands right in front of her with his hair slightly spiked up.
"I'm not Nakamura; I will not let you Kill my friends! and remember my name I'm Kyo UCHIHA!" Kyo scream top of his lung as he transforms into Super Saiyan. Orochi is very shocked at this. She felt powerful energy come from Kyo as she decided to leave right away. Kyo notices that the snake lady is being swallowed by the meat floor, and Kyo let his aura fire freely to prevent poison air near him.
Kyo floats in the air as he charges his Ki blast and fire to the nearby meat wall, slightly affecting the wall. 'The wall is tough... I need something more powerful.' Kyo thought as he down back on the meat floor.
Kyo stands still as he slowly raises his right arm and opens his palm while his left arm is on his waist with a tight fist. A sparkle of tiny light starts to getter on his open palm, and his right arm glows bright blue. Kyo closed his palm, and his hand glowed even brighter, and lightning danced around his right arm. Kyo changed the potion of his right arm to his waist as his left arm in the sky.
"Thunder Crusher!" Kyo screams and smashes the top ceiling meat with power on his right arm while flying out of the meat space.
As Kyo named the power Thunder Crusher, there literally a thunder strike out from his hand and straight into the Sky.
On the night of Konoha, everyone in Konoha looked at the Sky as they saw Thunder straight up into the sky. Some of them got scared, and some had a question in their head.
Back to Kyo, he floats in the air, and he is panting heavily. He is still in his Super Saiyan form. But suddenly, he powers down and crashes to the ground and falls unconscious.
Kyo felt someone hold his head as his name was called countlessly; as he slowly opened his eyes, he saw Naruko, Sasuki, and Sakura right in front of him. The girls hug him with tears in their eyes.
"N-Naruko-chan... Sasuki-chan?" He turns his head to Sakura as he sees she has short hair. "Sakura-chan? why do you have short hair?" He slowly sits up as Naruko, and Sakura supports him as Sasuki says. "Well, we lost to snake lady and Sakura, the only one who awakes. She covers us while we are both unconscious."
"Wow, really?" He said in amazement and stopped for a second as he continued his word. "Wait! you three getting attacked by the other team?" Kyo asks in worry as he receives a nod from the girls, and Sakura says to him. "N-No worries, Kyo-kun. It's just hair. I managed to defeat two of them thanks to Naruko, Sasuki, and Kakane-sensei trained me to become truly Kunoichi for two months." Kyo sighs relief, and he asks. "What about the last member of the team?"
"Sasuki is the one who stops the last member..." Sakura's head is down as she remembers Sasuki helped her defeat the last member, but it didn't look pretty; she remembers Sasuki has a black flame mark covering half of her body, and Sasuki beat the hell of that guy.
"Is something wrong, Sakura-chan?" Kyo asks her.
"Is something I want to show you, Kyo." Sasuki is the one who speaks this time, and Kyo asks. "What is it?"
Sasuki shows him a mark that she gets from the snake lady, and she tells Kyo how she acts when she tries to protect Sakura, and Sasuki honestly felt disgusting to herself to act that way.
"Sasuki-chan... you still you remember that, and if you are out of control, I will be there for you and the two of you." He said with a smile that made the girls blush.
Kyo looks at his surroundings and notices he is in between dead giant snakes while he lies in the middle on a piece of snake meat.
"How long have we been in the forest of dead?" He asks the girls and stands up on his feet with the girl's support, and Naruko says. "Three days... we are looking for you all this time... until last night we saw the light straight through the sky and we know that is you."
"And we found you here, middle of a dead Giant snake," Sasuki said with a relieved voice, and Naruko said. "We still have the scrolls, and we have to go middle forest building fast as we could, or they would let us in."
"Yeah, you're right... let's go then." Kyo said as he and the girls ran to the middle of the forest building.
•Time Skip•
Hinata and Ino, with their team, are at the entrance as they are waiting for team 7 to arrive.
"Are you sure they gonna be here?" Kiba asks the girls as they glare at Kiba.
"Kyo is not with them when we arrive to see them," Shino said to everyone nearby him.
"True, but Kyo are not that weak to be defeated." Shikamaru is the one who is saying this with his hand crossed back his head while Choji just eating his snack.
"Trust me, and team 7 will be here," Hinata said with hope while she held her hand together.
Then they heard an announcement.
"Team 7 from Konohagakure pass first round!"
Hinata and the others looked at the entrance to see Naruko, Sakura, Sasuki, and Kyo step into the building. Other Ninja villages all focus on Kyo and his team.
•To be continue•
(That is a wrap for chapter 24 in Basic Novel style. Tell me, how is it?)
(Orochi's full name is the same as the canon name Orochimaru only Kenshi calls her Orochi-chan.)
(Orochi really thinks Kyo is from Nakamura but her theories are wrong when Kyo transforms into Super Saiyan)
(And hey, I notice... 30% of you didn't read fully for every chapter, and that is quite sad for me... but hey, I can't force you to read it fully every chapter Hahaha)
