Good'ay, im back! i apologise for such a wait, ive gone back and fixed small parts of the other chapters and am working on a new story as well as a new chapter. the new story is something short i came up with in english class (ironically). I would love it if you were to shoot me a pm for anything you want added to this story or the one im currently working on. i changed the old chapters a lot admittedly, the first chapter now has 1274 words and the second has 1155 words! not gonna lie im proud of that, you can probably see how my writing has improved and i would appreciate any and all reviews.