Story Reflection Notes 2:

When I began writing the next chapter, I had hoped to write a murder scene, which would have involved Koffing bombs and sticky Grimer bombs.

I felt that was a bit much, and I really didn't have it in me to write it.

This is a story of what could have been.

Also on that line of thought I was originally considering having a Ivysaur with a Chimchar like condition, and Iris to obtain an Eevee that would evolve into a Slyveon. The latter was canned because Serena has one in canon, and the former would come out of left field in my opinion as a solution to the problem in the chapter.

Would I have been better to use them instead of what I did?