I'm gonna take a while for the next chapter because some rather important stuff happened in my life. So I thought I'd give you a small QA.
Will he be a poison specialist?
Yes, indeed. He will specialise in that typing.
Why Weedle?
That one was random. Before we rolled Weedle, he was going to be a generalist, but since we rolled that one, I thought: Might as well since I like the typing.
By the way, when I say random, I mean it. Nearly everything was in that pool, including Pseudo-Legendaries and Starters.
Will he get *insert pokèmon name here*?
I don't want to actively spoil too much. So I won't. Some stuff is already planned, some I will make up as I go.
There are some hints for future members already scattered is all I'll say.
The system is kinda tacked on even though it's in the name, why is that?
It feels that way because David feels that way. He knew about the system from the start of his life. But it didn't give him an easy childhood, it didn't make him a genius or anything like that. What he has, he worked for himself.
He is reluctant to suddenly rely on some 'Deus ex Machina', but he still uses it to provide his family with the best ways to grow. He will grow more comfortable with using it along the line.
Your grammar is crap, why?
Well, English is my second language. Except for the bare bones learned in school, I taught myself and it shows. I am trying some apps to help me with making my chapters more readable. If you have any suggestions, please let me know!
Now to the reason I even wanted to publish something like this. The dear guest, who decided to really let loose. Look, I get being angry that something isn't the way you want it to be. But this definitely isn't the way to go about it.
What you are doing here doesn't help you, it doesn't help me and if I had a more delicate disposition, it might obliterate all my motivation to continue this story.
Lots of promising, still learning authors had their motivation for writing dampened by destructive comments like this, hidden behind anonymity. This isn't constructive criticism.
It's an abrasive attack. You didn't even give me a way to have a proper dialogue with you. I'm all for learning to write better through criticism as failing, standing up and doing better than before is the way to truly internalise what you learned.
But do try to stay civil. Lots of writers on this site are youngsters trying their hand at a new hobby that may grow into something more. If you phrase the problems you have with a story like this, it may cause those potential writers to abandon something, that might have brought them and their future readers joy, and I hate to see that happen.
Sorry for the lengthy rant. I really dislike it, when someone doesn't even bother to log in and just starts to spout stuff like this.
See ya hopefully soon, till next time!