So here I am again. I try to update as much I can, but this is my first fic an therefore I´m lacking of experience. If someone could be my Beta-reader I would be grateful.
I also wanted to say that I will try to make this story a little bit darker than canon. Don´t misunderstand me Naruto is a great Anime, but it´s a Ninja World. As I was younger I liked it how it was, but now I search for more mature things. I don´t think I´m the only one who thinks that way. Probably I will kill even some of the Main Characters for the Wow effect. They are Ninja, not Samurai. They should be dark and morally Grey. I also will make some characters a bit stronger (or much stronger). I mean look, in the beginning it was said that Minato was the strongest, smartest etc. But then later in Shippuden, they pushed the Senju Brothers to a height in power, Hashirama was able to toy with the Nine bijuu and in the fight against Madara they forged a new Landscape.
And look at Kakashi. First he was introduced as a really strong shinobi. Then against Orochimaru and Itachi he was defeated, really fast. This was to give the viewers an effect of "WOW, they are so Strong". But later we got the infos that Kakashi is a real prodigy, Genin with 5, Chunin with 6 and Jonin with 13 all without Sharingan.
It was said that his father was stronger than the three Sannin, so why shouldn´t he? And in the Novels, after the war, he trained hard enough to surpass his war arc self (not DMS) and he invented various Jutsu, few strong enough to impress the Third Tsuchikage, who saw the Power of Madara and Hashirama in they´re Life time. He was a genius but in the beginning they were downplaying him to show us the antagonists of the series, to impress us. I mean I like Itachi and all but we can´t overlook the genius and potential power of Kakashi.
CRUDEN: First of all thank you for the pointers. I updated the third Chapter, I will try not to make the same mistake again. I appreciate the help.
PrudishSet: Well I consider it, I didn´t decide yet which of them I will make a girl. But I think you´re right in the tone of the story it could be interesting to make Sasuke a girl. The thing with the Harem, I still didn´t decided yet, but I will think of your thoughts. And the thing with Pītā´s Face... well let yourself be surprised.
I do not own Naruto or Spider-Man
Chapter 4: All beginning is...
Tick. Tick. Tick. The clock ticks relentlessly in the room where Pītā sits. A man with a scarred face, a bandana on his head and a headband with a Konoha emblem sits in front of him and looks him in the eyes with a blank face without a word accept.
Pītā is getting a little nervous and wants to say something to lighten the mood.
"Nice weather, isn't it?" How are you?" the boy starts to babble. Ibiki just looks at him and then calmly says, "Pītā Pāka member of the main family of the Shukeikō Clan, only known survivor of the massacre ordered by the Mizukage. Is this information correct?"
Beads of sweat form on the young spider's forehead, it's as if the tension in the room has increased so much that not even a wind chakra induced blade could cut through the tension. He nods once and answers "Y-yes that's right".
'Huh it is so hot here, if they hadn't at least built a window or some other kind of ventilation here, but NO prisoners don't deserve something like that. And then I have to wear clothes made of moose fur, which doesn't make it any easier in the heat. (gasp) I should have listened to Ma and found something thinner.' the thoughts of the soon to be Shinobi showed that he didn´t take the interrogation serious.
"So tell me kid, what were you hoping to come to Konoha for?"
"umm so I..uh (clears throat), my ka-san told me to come to Konoha no matter what. Buuuut me and her got separated on the way here. So I tried to survive in the wild and noooow here I am. Hehe", Pītā tried to downplay the situation, mainly to calm himself down and let his interrogator make a mistake.
"So you're telling me a five-year-old CHILD survived a year in the wild, absolutely alone, unaided?", you can see how Ibiki raises an eyebrow and looks at the boy skeptically.
You don't come to the job of director of the Konoha Torture and Interrogation Force to believe every lie that comes along.
Also, it is incredible that a child could exhibit this level of maturity, lack of trauma, and lack of intelligence. The only ones known to have such intelligence at that age are Minato Namikaze, Orochimaru of the Sannin, Kakashi Hatake, and Itachi Uchiha.
"(mumble) eight months"
"What?"
"(clears throat) It was only eight months and not a whole year. And I never said I was alone. I was only alone for a week and a half. After that..." Pītā breaks off, knowing full well that the story about wild wolves to live is unbelievable.
"After that WHAT?" Ibiki won't give up. Right now the conversation seems to be going somewhere and he knows from experience that the critical point of an interrogation is getting closer and closer.
The last member of the Shukeikō clan slowly begins to feel the pressure on his psyche. 'Father didn't prepare me for that'
Perhaps very intelligent for his age, time without human contact left its mark on the boy.
His assessment of the current situation was not only completely wrong, but he also doesn't know how to answer correctly without looking like an idiot.
"I, er... was... taken in by wolves. Hey don't look so skeptical, I don't know what exactly happened myself. But I've lived, hunted and eaten with them for the last few months." After an incredulous look from the Jonin, he almost desperately tried to convince him.
"Please, sir, I have nowhere else to go. I've read that Konoha is known for its teamwork and philanthropy towards the shinobi. That's why Ka-san said if we have to flee, then to Konoha. I don't want to ...ending up as a kind of emotionless pupet."
Tired, the spider makes a last desperate attempt. He knows Konoha is his only and last hope.
Just as Ibiki is about to say something, the door opens and an old man dressed in a red and white robe enters.
The man is about 5.3 ft by 5.4 ft tall (approx. 1.63 m) and had wrinkles on his face and yet a kind of... Authoritarian aura about him.
One look at him and Pītā immediately knew who it was. This is Hiruzen Sarutobi the Professor, Third Hokage and known to his enemies as the God of the Shinobi.
"I'm sorry, Ibiki, for the interruption, but I have something to discuss with the boy. Tell me, what was your mother's name, little Shukeikō?"
There is a heavy silence in the room. Pītā does not understand what is going on. Not only is the legendary ninja's voice incredibly soft and pleasant, but the tone of his voice was incredibly friendly.
"Um your name was Mari, Mari Teresa Pāka, uh sir?" the boy answers uncertainly. 'I hope I didn't say anything wrong. What if? What if they want to kill me? Or make me a pointless weapon? Or...'
"So you are HER son." Pītā's tirade of thoughts was interrupted by a whisper from the Kage. The old veteran looks up and looks deep into Pītā's eyes.
"Tell me young man, do you want to be a shinobi? If so, do you swear an unyielding allegiance to the village?", a voice so incredibly soft and yet so powerful, commanding and authoritative.
"..."
"Do you swear to fight, kill and die for Konoha?"
Pītā starts sweating so much he could have just jumped into a river. His face slowly fades a bit, he gets more nervous and his body starts to produce adrenaline.
His instincts as a spider and those he has acquired in nature scream at him to be alert.
And yet he doesn't feel like he's about to be killed by the old man.
"Y-yes, I swear to s-serve Konoha."
Stuttering and shy, he looks at the professor. He doesn't seem to fully understand the situation yet. But he knows one thing: he doesn't want to experience life as a non-Shinobi. Now the Shukeikō have their pride too.
The third looks him in the eyes with a deep, soul-stirring look. He feels as if his whole life were open, before the eyes the elderly and yet so dangerous man before him.
"In that case, welcome to Konoha, my boy."
The old man's face, once so serious, now wears a heartwarming and kind smile.
"Hokage-sama do you think that would be right? He's young yes, but could still be a spy for one of our enemies." anxiously questioning his leader's decision.
The aged shinobi veteran just says with a reassuring hand gesture, "Don't worry Ibiki, I know this young man. Or rather, I know the young man's mother. Mari saved my daughter Kohana's life and I vowed that one day I would repay her for that deed become."
Ibiki seemed to calm down after his Hokage's reassurance, but was still wary. Something about the boy's eyes made him uneasy. As if there was something lurking behind the facade in the depths where nobody could see.
Something dangerous, deadly... something animalistic.
"Pītā my boy, did your mother tell you to deliver a message? Something to say to me or to another Konoha nin?" Hiruzen talked calmly to the boy.
Hearing this, Pītā began to move. The two men in the room gave him a confused look as he started to roll up his sleeve.
He placed his right index finger on the middle of his forearm. Suddenly, a comical design appeared on his hand, it appeared to be made out of Tine.
He directs some chakra into the Fūinjutsu and then a Black Scroll appears in a puff of smoke. He hands them to the Hokage without a word.
Hiruzen reads the scroll through briefly. As he reads, his eyes begin to widen, almost imperceptibly.
Then he looks at the boy again and starts to smile.
"Well it seems you have a birthright to become a shinobi of Konohagakure. Now there are just a few formalities left to clear before we can officially welcome you to Konoha."
"W-wait a minute, w-what does here gebutsrech mean? Er-h Sir, what do you mean, am I related to a Konoha shinobi? Am I related to you? Or..." the last sentence questioned in a whisper, no, he shoots at the Kage.
"Ha ha ri quiet. First things first. No, you are not related to me. You are not old enough, no, not strong enough to bear this name. After all, you bear his name. But understand this name Pītā, you may never tell anyone else, not until either I've given you the okay or you're at least as strong as a jonin. Got it?"
He looks the boy in the eye. Pītā slowly nods "Oka- (clear throat) Okay."
"Well in that case Neko could you get the boys a place to stay for the night and some clothes?"
Suddenly a female Anbu appears out of nowhere. 'I didn't even sensed her, how is that possible?' the boy was confused despite his natural ability to sense chakra, he couldn't sense her.
It seems its skills are too untrained, too inexperienced with shinobi, to perceive The Black-OPS version of the ninja. Or they have a super-secret technique to simply be perceived by sensors.
"Hai Hokage-sama as you command. Come kid."
A little unsure for a moment, Pītā pulls himself together and stands up. "Hai, I'm coming"
Two hours later he was lying awake in bed, freshly washed from a forced shower, reflecting on the day.
His two comrades were put in cages to be checked for illnesses and health status, with great protest.
'What a day. I'm interrogated, the Hokage knows my mother, my friends are locked away, and I share my name with my great-grandfather. Well all in all not a bad first day in my new home.'
This was it. I hope you liked it and I hope this will work on.
Name meanings: Takeru: Warrior
Chikumo: Tousand Clouds
Kohana: little Flower ( I choose this name for his daughter cause it is simmilar to Konoha)
Till next Time.
