Author's note: I am NOT a very good writer, so please give me constructive criticism, and not non-constructive criticism.
CHAPTER ONE: INTRODUCTION BY SHU
A village torn apart by war. I am Shu, from the village of the Kolau wilds. Our village has been battling with the village of Kolau mountain ridge for ten years now due to an ancient deal being broken by the Kolau mountain ridge village's leader, Jaw-Long Chen. Jaw-Long had broken an ancient war treaty between our two villages, and, as such, started a new war. He was ferocious, and he claimed land occupied by wilds farmers by slaughtering the inhabitants in cold blood. My mother, the leader of my village, fought back. After these ten years of war, my mother, Pei-Ling Jin, wished to make peace with Jaw-Long and his village. Jaw-Long has accepted, and we will be meeting soon...