Naruto & Total Drama Island Xover

by AlucardDHellsing

After the Fourth Shinobi War Naruto is Transported top the Total Drama and falling directly into Chris lap who was in the process of writing the script. Not letting this opportunity get away from him he invites Naruto to the show. Only after he figure out his own problems and where the hell is he. Harem

5. Chapter 5

Update to let you know I'm back!

Hey guys, sorry for the super late update, but as I said in, I think chapter 2 or 3, that I'm working with the government so my updates are going to be random at time. But then again it has been a year plus so sorry. I'm not leaving is story behind because I've been wanting to write it for like four years and I'm now just doing it. So, I'm picking it up again.

Thank you all for the comments so far as well as the follows and favorites, I promise to keep up the good work.

Harem for Season One-

Gwen

Izzy

Katie

Lindsay

Courtney

Side pairings-

Eva and Duncan

Cody and Beth

Bridgette and Geoff

Owen and Sadie

Leshawna and Harold

You can be asking why I'm doing this type of harem and it's because there are is a girl that leaves TD and doesn't come back, It's Katie. With Katie leaving it opens up a new slot for some girls when it comes to the next season, which is TDA, which is where I plan on adding Leshawna (maybe Eva if Duncan breaks up with her). I'm sorry for those Leshawna fans that want her now, but she's going to be a tease in season one until she figures out herself that she likes Naruto too (season 2), for now she's just helping the other girls get with him.

There are a few people who are asking for more girls to be added and I respect your enthusiasm for all the girls to be with Naruto, but I want to keep it clean when it come to the harem so it allows me to focus on each girl before I make the harem bigger. It my first story and I want to be able to handle it before adding more fuel to the fire. It might look weird, but trust me I have 4 pages of 4x4 quad notebook paper filled up with details and events that I'm trying to hit before the campers are voted off so it doesn't seem to rushed.

For now, I will be keeping the side pairing and I will try to add dialogue for building their relationships. I do plan of adding Bridgette to the harem but that is later down the road since her relationship allows me to not focus on her and Naruto, but that doesn't mean ill add some internal turmoil when it come to her choosing which guy.

Yes. There will be lemons, not this chapter, but in the future.

I'm happy that there are no flames as of yet, I think at least I know some are inevitable, but I keep my fingers crossed as of now. Only thing I got so far was that I keep calling Heather a "White girl" when she is Asian ethnicity. I try to go for only Leshawna calling Heather a "White girl" because I don't remember Leshawna ever calling Heather Asian when they fight each other. If I mistakenly calling Heather a "White girl" out of context then I'm sorry and I'll go back and try to find it and fix it.

A review named Mothefcking Oak informed me that I should get a Beta sometime soon so now I'm in the air looking for a Beta, I don't really know what a Beta does beside reviewing the story before its posted to see any grammatical errors. If so then I'm looking for one because I know I mess up. (I just went back and fixed a few in the last chapters)