Hi.
Author's notes:
NEW for story "Duel": I am sorry: I do not know why the phrase "as in the ancient theater" became "as in the old theater." I returned the right phrase.
Notes for this story ("The Relationships"):
As for the other/another (second) version of the title of this story:
Well, when I was writing the story, I thought about her first. But then I have the variant that you see. Why?
I thought that the word in the title, the first word in my annotation, word in displaying the genre would give an understanding of the ambiguity/(that is, not unambiguity).
But apparently, not everyone understood.
And I do not refuse the variant of the name of the story which you see in the stand of the fics.
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What do you say about the story of the defeat of general Laguna? I invented it.
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The word "wherefore" is an adverb, in the meaning "why".
A word "bout", which does not have the meaning of a "fight".
The word "talk" in the meaning "conversation". It is noun.
The word "Premises" in the meaning of "room", not service room.
NEW: I added forgotten 2 words in sentence near to end of text of second chapter. "in library"
_The second chapter/continued_
She was looking down at the two guys standing in the arena.
His opponent on the right side (of the arena) was strong, but she wouldn't say that he would win 100 percent.
She was confident in her training of him [it is Jaune].
And though she agreed to the training, but told Jaune that he would take over the organizational issues, and she would agree or reject them.
And now (she) was looking at the collision under her eyes.
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Unlike Weiss, who had apparently now found out about his training and now, unlike her, not calm and not confident.
After his series of sword swings and [his] glance in their side.
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Looking at the guy crowding his opponent, Blake pondered.
It was curious to help him get closer to the other girl.
Though, wherefore so...
And although they did not agree on some topics – he did not like her gothic novels, the rest of the time, they saw each other without training meetings – it was in the...
And although she agreed…
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She knew where to look for him – in the library.
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Later, when they met…
"Excuse me," he said to her, "could you help me?"
"What?" Blake raise her eyes at him.
"I don't want to ask Pyrrha about training ... additional... main..."
"M?" She looked at him a little surprised.
And then on the book that he was holding in his hands... an old one, written more than a hundred years ago. The cover said that this book was about etiquette.
And if she understood everything correctly…
"Okay…"
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His look at the end of the bout told who he was looking at – and she understood it.
Although, later, when he approached them, asked them, and her opinion, too, about the bout that had taken place. Expecting for an answer.
And the words of [Weiss] girl...
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She didn't want them to be seen.
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His look, when she was in conflict with Weiss – he didn't expect it. When the six of them, without them not-a-pair, were in the city.
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And he after talk with that girl in library, their dialogue she saw a little and did not hear him. Blake decided not to reveal her presence in the premises, as like those workouts back then, because she didn't want them to be seen.
But she won't make assumptions for the future…
Looking at the departing whitish dress of a [short girl]…
_The End of the story_
No, the book that Jaune showed Weiss wasn't about etiquette.
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