You're all probably disappointed at the fact that I posted this just so I could tell you that the first chapter is going to get only a minor rewrite. And when I say a minor rewrite, I mean I'm only going to add some new dialogue, add some new scenes, fix any misspellings I can find, rewrite some scenes, rewrite some dialogue, remove some dialogue, and possibly change William and Maxwell's designs.
Now I know I said last chapter that I would be focused on writing the first chapters or prologues for new fics, and well... I kinda got tired of brainstorming, and decided to just quit and use Through The Door's "short hiatus" as a break...
I'm sorry.
I am so, so very sorry for most likely wasting your time like this. It's just... I feel as though I didn't do a good job writing chapter one. I feel like it was rushed, or something. When I was still writing "Into the Unknown", I felt so exited to post it, like I just couldn't wait to post it. Even after posting it... I was still debating over somethings, and then I thought...
Did I make any errors?
Did I type something I shouldn't have?
Did that one part in the story sucked?
Did I make any incompetent mistakes?
Did I do it right?
I'll get to the point now. I want to make some final changes in the first chapter. Not only that, but I won't be making any other fics until this one is finished. I am going to put all of my free time, energy, motivation, heart, soul, blood, sweat, tears, and focus in this fic alone.
On a side note, Malory S. Nocturne,if you ever find yourself reading this, I just wanted to thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about this fic through the review and private messages. It means a lot, especially since I'm still new to writing.
Other than chapter two is in pretty shitty progress, I don't have anything else to say. Good day, (or night), to you. Toodles.