Here's chapter 1, hope you enjoy it


Standing on top of a building there was a young man with a armored jumpsuit with an orange helmet type of mask 2 katatnas on his back along with an M9, an 2 pistols two the sides of his hips, and 3 kunai in the front base of his jacket, which all the outside of him looks like.

Lincoln/Orange hood: (breaks 4th wall) soooo telling from the description you must know what deep shit I've been living right well not fully but you can see that my appearance is alot of business is alot of history, and I know what your thinking "How could I ever gone this far for someone like" - ...well "like I was" well simple to know we have to Wined up time a little bit...

4 years ago

During the events of making the case

Clyde: You can't get pulverized, Lincoln! I'd never be able to find another best friend!

Lincoln: You won't have to. After I win the trophy on Friday, I'll just delete the video.

Clyde: [hugs his best friend] Just in case...we had a good run, buddy.

Lincoln: Don't worry, Clyde. My sisters will never know.

[But just as he opens the door, to his and Clyde's dismay, their luck doesn't go so well, because his sisters are right there, and they are incredibly furious. Lori is holding her cell phone with the video on it.]

Clyde: They know.

[The sisters rant about Lincoln's video.]

Lincoln: Wait, wait, wait! Let me explain!

Lori: [angrily] "You've got exactly three seconds before we pulverize you!"

[Lynn cracks her knuckles, obviously for pulverising Lincoln and Lisa starts a stopwatch to time Lincoln's very limited time and gives Lincoln a suspicious look.]

Lincoln: There was this video contest at school and I really wanted to win!"

Lola: You showed my sleep face for some stupid CONTEST?!

Lincoln: "I just wanted a trophy to put in the case like you guys!"

Luna: [angrily] You think you deserve a trophy for that, bro?!

Lincoln: No. I don't deserve it. Look! I'll delete the video!

Lucy: Too late, Lincoln. The damage has already been done.

Lynn: [upset] You made me look like a fool!

Lucy: [also upset] You made me look like a freak!

Lori: [incredibly embarrassed] You made me look like I fart! And for the record, it was these shoes! See?" [while trying to make it look like they were making the farting noise but fails] "Of course it's not working now."

Lincoln: Lori, I'm sorry! Wait!" [chases after his sisters, trying to apologize to them]

[Clyde leaves nervously and closes the door]

Lincoln: Luna, let me explain!

Luna: [drowning Lincoln out with heavy metal frustration] "Can't hear ya, bro! [slams her door]

Lincoln: Leni! Lori! I'm sorry!

Lori: You literally disgust me!

Leni: "Yeah!" [Stupidly walks into the wall and gets dragged in by Lori.]

Lincoln: Lola! Lana! Please!

Lola: You're uninvited to my birthday party FOREVER![slams the door]

[Lincoln sighs and Lana opens it which he thinks she will forgive him.]

Lana: I wanna slam it, too! [does so]

Lincoln: [knocks on Lisa's door] "Lisa! Lisa?" [Lisa slides a note under the door.] "Vengeance shall be mine." [turns to Lynn and Lucy] Guys, come on! I'm your brother!

[Lynn growls in fury]

Lucy: [coldly] I have no brother! [starts to close the door then opens it] I know I say that a lot, but this time...I mean it. [slams door]

Lincoln: Luan, you gotta help me! I was only doing what you said!

Luan: You broke the unspoken rule: never post a video without the person's permission!

Lincoln: Why didn't you tell me that?

Luan: Because it's unspoken. [she closes her eyes and angrily and despondently slams door]

Lincoln: [sighs sadly] How am I going to fix this? Well, goodbye, trophy. [deletes the video]

Computer: [DELETED]

Lincoln: "Well, HamstaCam, looks like you win."

[Extra footage of HamstaCam shows the hamster slipping out of his wheel and getting sprayed by his drinking tube.]

Lincoln: I don't get it why cant I achieve just one thing, even with a reward and in the process I mess us stuff up with my family, just like I've been messing up in the beginning before trying to achieve anything the Tv, sweet spot, the chore chaos, picture chaos, the green house project and now this [saying while looking down] ...teh "MAN WITH THE PLAN" [mockingly]what a joke I can't even make my family rely on me for once without screwing anything up[intill an Idea raised up in his head] maybe it's better off for this family without a brother or son.

After that the boy went back to his room and got all the stuff he needed except for bun bun for some reason but there was a resson why he left him behind, then as soon as he got all of his things and started to leave while his sisters were still in there rooms still angry at him that they wouldn't even notice what he would be doing or plan to be doing.just leaving him devastated by walking along the hallway way to and down the stairs while he went into his father's room and stole some money from his own personal savings bank and going into the kitchen to get some food, then after as he was all set he was starting to leave opening the front door noticing his pets were doing there random usual stuff that they always do but as much as he wanted to say goodbye he couldn't because he felt like it wasn't worth it but he still gave a little smile. Then as soon as he is walking out with his stuff about to leave the neighborhood he looks back one more.

Lincoln: Well it's been great with you all while it lasted, but now you become even greater and I hope you all have a more peaceful life, and sorry mom and dad that the mid early bird is leaving the nest too soon, but this is what I decided, and lily this breaks my hart the most but please forget me and act like I never existed to you at all because you might not because of how extremely young you are, but if you do please forget me you have 9 sisters that you can rely on[sadly] while I'm dead weight but I hope you grow up to be what you desire that makes you happy and most importantly be better then I ever was and I'll miss you baby sis.[while shedding a tear he turns around start's to walk a little before turning around again one more time] goodbye loud family and I hope you all have a nice life now that a failure is gone. [while walking away].

5 hours later after dawn

At night we see Lincoln loud walking of the depths of royal woods

Lincoln: [heavy breathing] heeeeh huhhhh heeeeh huhhhhh heeeeh huhhh heeeh gease where am I, I know I'm not and royal woods for sure obviously but where am[takes out his phone for gps] ok now where am- oh no that's not good ughhhh dang it it's dead huhhhh I didn't think a motel would be this far [sighs] what do I do now.

While Lincoln was walking there a car following on the side of the road.

Man in car: Boss I found a kid just wondering on the streets out at nightclub in the middle of nowhere and he seems to be carrying luggage with him as well.

Mystery Boss: huh? Kinda sounds like a runaway.

Man in car: looks so.

Mystery boss: hehe kids these days well if thats there wish lets grant it to them, in a different way that it is.

Man in the car: sir?

Mystery boss: carl you know what to do.

Carl: wait sir slow down you don't actually mean this right? He's just a kid.

Mystery boss: yeah I know but it's in my nature to teaching especially young folks a lesson.

Carl: but we never did this to a child before sir.

Mystery boss: I know but times have changed buddy, so now no more talk just get it done.

Carl: yessir.

Lincoln: Ok let's just keep going and see what we can find if I don't get there[starts walking while his stomach growls] man I'm hungry [growls again] ughhhhh should've at least bring more food instead of a sandwich and bag of chips[sighs]

While Lincoln was still walking straight after where he was before BOOM!!!!!!! A straight shot went straight through Lincolns head leaving him on the streets Dead


I know crazy right, tell me how this beginning part struck to you guys and If you would like to give me any Ideas or any changes that You that's better that I don't be free to, but intill then sit back the story hasn't began just yet.so anyaway take care and see you next in the next chapter.