chapter 1 „the start„
A beautiful day in foosha village,people walking around,kids playing,pirates in a bar,wait pirates in a bar,why would there pirates in a bar.
Oh look one of them is talking to a kid.
the kid has black hair, a red shirt,blue shorts and a scar under his left eye.
-ha,i told you it wouldn t hurt,said a kid that was almost crying.
-hahahaha,laughed a red haired man with a straw hat on his head.
-And you said you want to be a pirate,you re almost crying.
-You re too young and weak,said the red haired man.
-Oh c mon Shanks,don t be so mean,the life of a pirate is very fun,said the rest of the men in a chor.
-You re not helping guys,said the man now called Shanks.
-Come on just take me with you,said the kid with stars in his eyes.
-No Luffy,I can t its too dangerous,said shanks.
-Then train me,shouted the kid called Luffy.
The men in the bar just looked at a dumbstruck Shanks.
-Well. .No,said a staggering Shanks.
-I think that s a good idea,a fat man with a white and green shirt,white pants,goggles and a piece of meat in his mounth
after thinking about it,Shanks said.
-Alright,but yu ll be put trough hell.
Luffy was a bit startled but accepted the offer.
Shanks started to write the training for Luffy occasionally asking him he was sure wanted to go with them,suddenly the doors of the bar are broken out of their hinges and almost hit one of them
a man was standing there,looking kinda cocky.
the man suddenly spoke -i want 10 barrels of booze,and quick I don t have time to waste!
The woman behind the bar known as makino being afraid told him -I m sorry,we are out of booze,you can come back tomorrow tough.
-So what are they drinking,water?asked the man in the doors.
-Sorry man,that s because of us,we just partied all night,said Shanks excusing themselves.
as Shanks said that the man pulled a bounty poster with the name "Higuma the bear"
bounty:8.000.000 berries
-See this,the now named Higuma said,I have an 8.000.000 berries bounty on my head not like you,you crappy pirates as finished talking he picked up a bottle and broke it on Shankses head,seemingly strangling the crew,as Higuma left the crew broke out in laughter
-Talk about lame,one of them said.
-He got you there boss,another said.
-He thinks he s soo cool for doing that,another one said.
As the crew commented on it Shanks himself was dying of laughter.
Suddenly Luffy added his two cents screaming at Shanks and his crew -Why are you laughing!Are that much of some losers,why didn t you do anything!
-Luffy,interrupted Shanks,there is no reason to get mad over a bottle of booze.
Said Shanks meaning to calm down the situation.
-There is,Luffy added,you re making yourselves look like fools!
-Oh c mon,Shanks said,We pretty much don t care. -Ok,ok,I l let it go,said Luffy finishing the argument.
-Good,Shanks said,now we re gonna leave for maybe 10 years.
-Whaaaaaat!,Luffy yeld, 10 years!
-Yea,yu ll be 16 by then right?,Shanks casually asked.
-Well yea but its way to much,Luffy said.
-So what giving up?,asked Shanks mockingly
-What no way!I m not giving up perfect pack up we re leaving tomorrow.
-Alright I m going,said Luffy leaving the bar,
-Yeaa whatever but dont pack stupid things,shouted Shanks, -Yeaa okay and thank for the food!,shouted Luffy,a confused shanks ask-shouted at Luffy -what food?
the fruits in the chest tough they tasted horibly and I felt like I almost died in the inside!,responded luffy,
A pale white Shanks asked his crew to look in the now opened chest,to their fear the chest was empty.
Shanks runned as fast as he could to catch up to Luffy,when he cached up to Luffy he grabbed him and took him back to the bar.
-luffyyy!do you konw what you just did?!,half asked half shouted,
-What?,Luffy calmly asked,
-You just ate 2 devil fruits!
-And?
-What do you mean „And„ first of all you lost the ability lo swim second you almost died and third you ate our treasure!
-Whaaaattt?!,asked a horrified Luffy,NOOOOOO!
-But at least tell which ones I ate!
ate the mera mera no mi and the moku moku no mi,said Shanks.
-Well at least their not weak,I think,right?,asked Luffy.
-Yea well for that we ll dubble the training,said a furious Shanks.
-Ok,sorry alright,Luffy said excusing himself.
(A/N) so Luffy will be way more op than the original,way smarter,more serious and would have way more crew members and more will have another d.f. still very similar to the moku moku and Ace will have the gomu gomu I ll skip the alvida arc since its boring AF ;)
TIME SKIP 10 YEARS :)
Coby locked at the three incoming marine ships in fear.
-Luffy I think we sould go! As they jumped on a moving boat with a orange haired girl in it -For now at least,replied Luffy,,
Oi,what are you doing, are you crazy!,the orange haired girl shouting at them
-N0 but we needed a way out,sorry,replied Coby As they were floating away Coby asked the girl,
-H-hey miss,can y-you tell us your n-name?
The girl looked at them for a while and then replied,
-Nami. the now known Nami took a better look at the two and then her eyes widen.
- Y-you re the D-double devil,said the girl looking at Luffy,y-you have a 59.000,000 berries on you head.
-So do you have a problem with me?,asked Luffy in rough voice,
-N-no I don t.,replied a scared nami.
-Good cause I would hate a lady such as you to hate me.
-So,Nami,are you a navigator?,asked Luffy.
-Y-yes the best o-ne yu ll see in a while.,said Nami with a little confidence,
-Oh really,just so you know,I ll hold you to that.
-Alright,replied Nami hoping she wouldn t disappoint him.
-So how much till the next island?,asked Luffy,
-one hour and a half.
TIME SKIP
As they reached land and looked around to see a village
-So Coby you wanted too be a marine right?
-Yea,why?
-Come with me then,said Luffy.
-A-alright,accepted Coby,
As they walked away to the marine base in the center of the island,Nami took another boat and left the island as quick as she could When they got close to the marine base Luffy asked
-So Coby,who is the captain on this island?,asked Luffy,
-Oh he s captain Morgan,said Coby innocently,
When he finnished saying the last two words everyone in hearing reach jumped up,falled down,scared out of their minds.
A confused Coby asked himself why would that happen at the name of a marine.
-Well Coby let me tell you something,said Luffy,in this world there are bad pirates and good marines right?,asked Luffy,
-Yea,responded Coby.
-Well there are some exemptions there are also good pirates but there are too many exemptions in the marines case cause the marines have their power go to their head thinking that can t be caught doing illegal activities,being arrogant and I hate those people one of them is the captain of this marine base
As they reached the gates they peered through seeing a green haired man with a white shirt,black pants,boots,and a dark green bandanna wrapped around his head the man was on a cross and seemed starving
-Who is that?,Luffy asked,
-t-that is p-pirate hunter Z-zoro,said a scared Coby -Is he a good swordsman?,asked Luffy,
-Yea he is the best one I ve ever seen,answered Coby,
As Coby looked to Luffy he wasn t there instead there was only smoke the smoke was a little red as the smoke got through the gates the smoke reformed into luffy
Coby and Zoro were looking in shook on what they ve just seen.
END CHAPTER 1