Authors note
Hey yall i would love to say that this story finally hit over 500 hits! hooray
Thanks to this I've decided to make this chapter extra long well longer than usual as there will be longer chapters in the future but this is the longest so far
Also, this is when the story finally gets darker like we are going to begin to get into some dark shit here (at least to me)
I wanted to make this a dark story from the start instead of it being a lighter fic
Finally, I wanted to say I've taken heavy inspiration(well not really but I'm taking inspiration for the story tone) from Digimon tamers its also where i got takatos name as a homage to the protagonist of tamers
actually, i wanted a lot of takatos development to be based around the digimon casts development from adventure and tamers as they were issekaied and spent a little bit trying to figure out the world and then focusing on their goal
Anyways, as always thanks to my beta reader Anon2619 for making sure this chapter wasn't a grammar catastrophe
Disclaimer I do not own naruto if I did I wouldn't kill Konan, Neji, or Obito but instead, I would have killed other characters instead
And i stretched out the word count enough
chapter 4 begin
1 year later
–journal page 1,095–
It has now been officially three years since I was revived and a year since I unlocked the sharingan.
Also, a year since I met Hana and it's been fun having a friend honestly. It's been far better than being alone except for Kakashi.
She was, well, an Inuzuka, so she was brash and loud but I didn't mind as she was a great friend and sparring partner.
Then, there is the Academy. After 6 months, I realized that we were being fed propaganda about Konoha being the best and kindest village... which was true to some extent, but it was very exaggerated. The teachers never told us about Konoha's wrongdoings and then there are times when bad things were made out to be heroic and morally okay, like how Minato Namikaze massacred over a thousand Iwa shinobi. I get that Iwa is Konoha's enemy, but still, it's morally wrong to kill over a thousand people and have the event made out to be some sort of party.
Also, the teachers sabotage students that don't give in to the indoctrination and they don't help them at all. Thankfully, I learned that the easy way. When a student who was an Uchiha called out the teacher on the indoctrination, suddenly, he became second to last in class for a week, until he "suddenly" stopped believing he was being indoctrinated.
I always acted as if I listened to the lies as I didn't want to lose out on important knowledge Kakashi wouldn't teach me. Its been like this since after the first week of the academy and after the year, most if not all, of the kids in class (except for me) got fully indoctrinated, but sadly I still was indoctrinated a little bit and, well, while I planned on being a loyal Konoha shinobi anyways I'm assuming all of my thoughts weren't mine. So, sadly, I had the misfortune of being compelled to be loyal, but also I know that Konoha isn't so squeaky clean after all.
Also, today is the day Kumogakure is coming to make a "peace treaty" with Konoha but thanks to foreknowledge I know that they're here to kidnap Hinata Hyuuga. Unfortunately, I couldn't do much to help, but I could be there and try to help without being seen, which while hard can be done.
Speaking of Kumo, we also learned that they had a reputation for failing to kidnap kids from other villages, which really makes you wonder why Minato would be so stupid as to make an alliance with them, but to each to their own.
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"I'm telling you, Mizuki has a crush on Tsubaki-chan," Hana gossiped to me throwing a punch at my face.
"And why should I care?" I asked, dodging the very fast punch with my sharingan activating and me trying to kick her away.
"Because its blackmail material since the prick is scared of asking her out," the girl laughed grabbing my kick.
I gulped this was bad news (at my leg being grabbed, not the blackmail, I loved that part). "Well, that's great and all but why would anybody need to blackmail the prick," I said, before getting thrown like a rag doll away.
"Because if we need the blackmail we can actually use it against him," she said, grinning since Mizuki was an actual piece of human garbage with an ego the size of a mountain.
"Fair enough, but still there's nothing we could get from the shitbag, all he does is whine, bitch and moan about those weaker than him whilst sucking the dicks of the strong," I said recovering from my predicament, groaning in pain.
"Haha, your right but still it'd be nice to see him squirm," she said, laughing at the creative words I used to describe Mizuki and laughing at my pain since our spar ended.
"I would love to see that now but still it's better to wait until later," I said, nodding sagely.
"Fine, but still we have it," Hana said, disappointed at me for not wanting to use the blackmail now.
"Yes, we do, but were going to use it when Mizuki decides to be a bully again, oh yeah thanks for breaking his nose," I said, with a little appreciation at the last part.
"Fine, also it was my pleasure to do it, " Hana said, grinning at the memory of breaking Mizuki's nose.
"So did you hear about Kumo trying to make a "Peace treaty" with Konoha?" I asked, wanting to hear my friend's opinion.
"Yeah, I don't trust the fuckers though," Hana said, remembering times she was told that Kumo tried to kidnap members of her clan.
"Me neither, I think they're after something, maybe the Sharingan or Byakugan," I said, knowing Kumo might try something because of my foreknowledge.
"Or one of the other clans Kekkei Genkai," she suggested.
I realized she could be right, Kumo might try to go after a Nara, Yamanaka, Akimichi, Aburame, Inuzuka, or any one of the smaller clans in Konoha with a bloodline.
"Damn, your right but they also could kidnap a Senju kid too," I said.
"True but they'll fail as always," she howled.
"Maybe so, but they will try again, I just know it," I said, just believing that they will try to kidnap a bloodline that day. "So be prepared in case they try to kidnap one of your clansmen," I said, actually worried for my only friend in this world.
"You too, the bastards might try to kidnap an Uchiha and since your the only one outside of the clan they'll go for you," she said worriedly, since Kakashi wasn't always around and I was still a young child.
"Don't you worry about me if one of them goes for me, I'll escape," I said confidently, since I learned the hiding like a mole jutsu and shunshin.
"Still be careful," she said, as she left the training ground we were in.
"I will don't ya worry, bye," I said waving as usual as she waved back and left.
'Hm, Kakashi's out on a mission today and Hana is right they might go for me too since I'm the only Uchiha not in the clan compound,' I thought, ignoring the glares i was getting from the civilians.
You see, since the yondaime announced that the Kyuubi attack was caused by Madara, the civilians and a lot of shinobi distrusted and actually outright hated the Uchiha clan since they believed the Uchiha clan caused the Kyuubi attack. So they treated most Uchiha as devils, like the worst of the worst kind of people, although they loved Shisui and Itachi since they were kind people who helped people a lot and Shisui was an awesome shinobi. But anyways they glared at me and treated me like Naruto in part one. And most of the kids and class disliked me and other Uchiha particularly me though since I was the youngest and one of the weakest in the class since i was physically weaker than the rest of my classmates.
I did make another friend. Iruka Umino although he was friends with Mizuki, he still befriended me and even though he was being pressured by our peers, he still never once was a prick to me or other Uchiha unless they were assholes and even then he wasn't what most would call mean.
"You're not welcome here, Uchiha scum!" a random person shouted at me for simply walking by.
I flipped him off. "Fuck you too!" I shouted back in my child-like voice.
Honestly, I was impressed with Naruto for dealing with this shit, but worse for so long. It really was telling about his will since he never had a friend until he had Sasuke and he never had anybody to help really; meanwhile, here I was already flipping off people after only two years and I have Kakashi, Iruka, and Hana, but Naruto was hated by all and still became ninja Jesus. It really makes Naruto more impressive knowing he dealt with worse than this and still became the kind and sympathetic person he was.
Also, it really makes me sympathize with the Uchiha more too. They are one of the founding clans of Konoha yet get treated like this? It was some grade A bullshit right there.
"Ah, yes home sweet home," I said, getting back to the apartment I shared with Kakashi.
I made sure I was late getting home just to make him know what he was doing to others. Yes, Kakashi finally became chronically late to pretty much everything.
"You're late, Takato-kun," Kakashi said.
I grinned. "Sorry nii-san it's just I crossed paths with a dozen black cats so i had to go find a four-leaf clover and take the long way around," I said, my grin only growing larger.
Kakashi eye-smiled. "Well, could I see the four-leaf clover?" he asked, eye smiling.
"Uhh," i replied intelligibly, my grin dropping quickly.
"Well, that's three extra laps around Konoha for you," Kakashi said sadistically.
Kakashi was only recently starting me on this hellish training, after I told him to get a life one too many times and he finally grew a backbone.
"Although I'm very proud of you for that wonderful excuse, remember I'm the master of tardiness," he said proudly.
I groaned. "I guess I'll start on those laps around Konoha."
'"Sure, but you'll miss dinner," he said worriedly.
"Thanks for your concern, nii-san but i can always eat a ration bar after I get back," I said, secretly thankful that Kakashi cared as usual.
So Kakashi set me on my way to run around Konoha three times which would set me going well into the night.
4 HOURS LATER
"Well, fuck, I really didn't think this through," I said, running by the Hyuuga compound now witnessing Hinata Hyuuga get kidnapped. 'Fuck, fuck, fuck what do I do,' I thought, watching the man run away. Fear filled my heart remembering my death indirectly because of a robber, but remembering what I was supposed to do helped calm me down. 'Okay, if I can't do this, I can't ever have the courage to stop Madara,' I thought, pulling out a kunai. 'Well here goes nothing.
I threw eight shurikens at the man and did some hand signs "Fire Style: Phoenix Fire jutsu," I whispered the second fire jutsu I knew with fire enveloping all the shuriken.
I then used the "Earth Style: Hiding Like a Mole jutsu" to hide underground to hopefully catch the man off guard.
The man got singed a little bit by two of the fireballs burning off his mask and one of his gloves in a lucky hit.
"Shit," the man said making a dash for the gates of Konoha and I was getting ready to fully rise from the ground and stab the man with my kunai, but before I could do anything I saw Hiashi Hyuuga.
"Oh shit," I muttered, seeing how this could go wrong and it went wrong in the worst way possible and I couldn't do anything about it.
"2-palms!" Hiashi shouted, hitting the man and the bag on his back on accident...
"4-palms!" Hiashi shouted, hitting the bag more than the man...
"8-palms!" Hiashi shouted, hitting the man more and more instead of the bag.
"16-palms!" Hiashi shouted, this time hitting the bag all 16 times.
"32 palms!" Hiashi shouted, hitting the man and bag equally.
"EIGHT TRIGRAMS 64 PALMS!" Hiashi shouted, hitting the bag all 64 times before the man fell onto the ground and the bag became blood-soaked by both the man's blood and..
"H-Hinata..." Hiashi uttered, seeing what he had done without thinking.
He then picked up the bag with his daughter inside and opened it and I also saw the contents of the bag and it wasn't pretty...
Hiashi started sobbing uncontrollably when he saw his daughter covered in blood but still breathing but it was slowly dying down.
"I have to get you to the hospital," Hiashi said, giving orders to branch members to get the Hokage that I faintly heard and ran off to the hospital.
'That shouldn't have happened... it shouldn't have happened at all...' I thought distraught, 'it was because of me, Hinata might die because of me,' I thought, running away from the scene. 'If I had just let events play out that wouldn't have happened...
Minato pov
'It was a long and stressful day but I did it, the paperwork is finally over, I can go home now. I thought happily, since I could go spend time with my son that was until...
"Hokage-sama!" A Hyuuga branch member shouted, distressed.
I looked up and saw it was Hizashi Hyuuga holding the Kumo ambassador... 'This can't be good,' I thought.
"What happened?" I asked, worriedly since this could mean the new peace treaty that was just established could be over now.
"This man tried to kidnap Lady Hinata," Hizashi said, concern in his voice.
I groaned, I knew this was a possibility, given Kumo's reputation, but still it's hard to believe they would try this on the literal day of the establishment of a peace treaty.
"Anbu, get me Inoichi and Ibiki!" I shouted, I knew this was going to be a long night.
"I see, tell me everything," I said to the man after Anbu arrived and left.
"This man came into the Hyuuga compound and kidnapped Lady Hinata, but nobody noticed until my brother heard fireballs and came out to check what was going on, then he saw a man with a bag and he struck him and the bag but the bag took most of the hits," Hizashi said.
I groaned. "So the bag... was hinata... and Hiashi accidentally used jyuuken on his own daughter," I said, getting a headache whilst feeling sorry for my friend. "Is she okay?" I asked, concern laced my voice.
"No, she isn't, my brother took her to the hospital we aren't sure if she'll make it," Hizashi said, sorrow for the potential loss of his niece. That's when Ibiki and Inoichi arrived at the hokage's office.
"I need you to interrogate this man and leave him alive," I said, before I realized I needed to explain why. "He tried kidnapping the Hyuuga heiress," they nodded and left.
I then sighed, this was definitely going to be a very, very long night.
Takato pov
It was another day at the academy, the weight on my mind was heavy. The thought that I might have caused Hinata to die, caused me to think I was weak since I could have done something more than shoot fireballs.
"Itachi Uchiha vs. Takato Uchiha," the teacher called out.
"Kick the emo's ass," Hana howled, rooting for me to kick Itachi's ass.
Hana was the fastest in our class and I was the second, but speed isn't everything, Itachi and Mizuki were fast and strong and also cunning... that's why i couldn't ever beat Mizuki and that's why I can't beat Itachi 'I'm weak'.
I activated my sharingan, I needed it to even touch Itachi. Itachi hasn't even unlocked his Sharingan yet and he's most likely going to graduate soon.
"Please let's do our best," Itachi said, fan girls cheering them on, thankfully I never had any. "You have my utmost sympathy," I said, referencing the fangirls.
"Thank you, they aren't pleasant," Itachi said, entering the interceptor fist opening stance.
I entered a bastardized version of the stance.
"You know your footing is wrong and your hands aren't in the right position," Itachi pointed out.
"I know but this works better for me," I said.
"Okay," Itachi said, rushing in to attack, throwing a punch at my face.
I saw the movement in slow motion, but my body couldn't react in time and I got hit in the face, but I recovered with a groan and blocked a kick that Itachi aimed for my ribs with my arms which hurt.
I then grabbed one of his legs and tried to kick his stomach but he grabbed my leg.
"We are in quite a predicament," Itachi said.
"Indeed," I said trying to headbutt him but Itachi grabbed my head. 'I'm outclassed,' I thought whilst breaking out of Itachi's hold and he punched me away, my Sharingan deactivating.
'I really couldn't do much against that man but still, I could have helped,' I thought remembering last night.
I then tried to kick Itachi again. Itachi dodged it and he retaliated by kicking my solar plexus, almost sending me flying out of the ring.
'No, I won't lose so easily, I might be outclassed in strength, but I'm faster,' I thought, gaining newfound determination.
I sped towards Itachi with newfound determination and speed. I aimed a kick at Itachi which he blocked, making him wince. He punched me away, freeing his other hand and making me wince.
'That was my best kick,' I thought before realization hit me. 'Wait if Itachi is this strong, I couldn't have done anything to help other than that fireball,' I realized.
'I'm still faster and with my sharingan, I have hope,' I thought, activating my 1 tomoe sharingan.
"I see you reactivated your sharingan," Itachi said.
"Indeed I did, now I'm going to kick your ass," I said my newfound confidence giving me enough hope to beat Itachi.
"Itachi raised an eyebrow whilst everyone except Hana, Iruka and a few of the civilian kids laughed at the
notion.
I sped in towards Itachi in a blur getting behind Itachi, literally kicking his ass and then punching his back.
"Told ya so," I grinned.
"I see you're better than before," Itachi said recovering and rushing back in and kicking me up into the sky punching my face and solar plexus then jumping up into the air and kicking me out of the ring.
I flipped and landed on the wall sticking to it like spider-man.
"You win," I said in a defeated tone, whilst the kids looked on in utter amazement at me sticking to the wall. 'I'm going to need to get stronger, I think I'm going to seek out Might Gai later,' I thought.
"How are you doing that?" Mizuki asked, in jealousy and awe.
"Oh..." I started. "I'm using chakra to stick to the wall," I finished.
"Wait, how can you do that, that's advanced stuff?" the teacher asked.
"Kakashi-nii-san taught it to me a few months back," I said.
All the kids started yelling, asking to learn it too...
Then, there was a long impromptu lesson to learn how to stick to walls.
Chapter end
I feel like that's a nice place to end the chapter
well i know Takato got over his guilt fast but he will still have effects from it and his fight with Itachi
Now what happened to Hinata well we will find out later
Also, what did you think of me using minatos pov i hope you all enjoyed that
Also can yall actually start leaving reviews?
Honestly, I'm really proud of this chapter its long has tons of character interactions and i tried something new
Second to last next chapter is when shit will hit the fan
finally, i was up writing this chapter since 3 am and its seven thirty-six now so this is the longest I'm willing to make this chapter
question of the chapter do you want me to continue to write in other characters' povs?
Anyways stalkwalker out see ya dattebayo
Ps with this chapter this story has hit over 10k words in only 4 chapters this story is already going far better than my last attempts so thanks to all of you who read this story
And there we go i stretched out the word count even more