It Only Takes One

by Sage of Prophecy

(Re-written) The Fourth Great Shinobi War is Won! Though... at what cost? They know damn well what the cost was... my sister. You're all so damn lucky, I never did this for you, it was only for her. Then I get thrown into this world, I want to live a normal life. Live peacefully, but I was dragged from my world, forced to do this crap. Then... I met you. Naruto x ? ? ?

2. Re-Write

Okay, so I'm getting DMs and a review that made some points. Though the reviews seemed to have the right mindset of what they were trying to convey. I think it's rather a good point to make, so, I'm probably going to go back and RE-WRITE the first chapter once again. However, I need to add more story context. Like why the hell did Hiruzen arrive late, then why did Tsunade and Jiraiya so happen to conventionally be there.

The two that had good points were God of Wind 200 and darkimortal. I would have liked to DMed Darkimortal, but he doesn't have his DMs available. So there's no way I can get any more feedback. I think they both make valuable points, and I need to add more to show why Naruto came to be the way he is now. So, regardless, I think what they said was right, so, I'm going to keep re-working this story till I can fill those plot holes.