Inspired by Aragorn II Elessar's Bully Maguire fics.

I found Ms. Marvel average, not great but not outright horrible unlike Loki, FATWS, WandaVision or What-If either, it felt more like for younger audience like kids and teenagers than for me and at some moments it could've used better writing but Kamala was a decent character even though the storyline was a bit loopy for me. I thought Cleary was a jackass in No Way Home but Deever here was worse and at least Cleary had some morals like respecting people in the mosque unlike Deever and her agents and Cleary had her relieved of duty for her and DODC agents storming into school and chasing innocent kids and shooting at them, while they were non-lethal rounds, the threat upon a teenager life still stood.

Disclaimer: I do not own Marvel Cinematic Universe.


Kamala in her Ms. Marvel costume had convinced Kamran to stop his havoc and helped him control his powers as Kamran stopped glowing with his powers as the barrier Kamala had formed then dissolved, with the civilians, police and DODC still surrounding them outside Coles Academic High School.

DODC operatives with agent Sadie Deever in charge were about to take Ms. Marvel and Kamran in, when the police and civilians began blocking their path.

"Stop right there."

"Step aside!"

"She just saved our lives!"

Drive That Funky Soul plays

Deever, the agents, Kamala, Kamran, Zoe, Bruno, Tyesha, Amir, Yusuf, Muneeba, Sana and the civilians looked in confusion at where the music was coming from.

"What is that?" Deever wondered, when Bully Maguire walked in, shaking his hips and spinning around.

"Where the hell did he come from?" One of the DODC agents wondered.

"Sorry I'm late, it's a jungle out there." Bully Maguire said before eying Deever. "That's a cute outfit! Did your husband give it to you?"

"Get him out of here." Deever said, annoyed, when she grabbed Bully Maguire by his shoulder and Bully Maguire narrowed his eyes at her.

"Take your hand off me." Bully Maguire warned.

"Unless you want to be arrested for helping rogue Enhanced—"

"I missed the part where that's my problem." Bully Maguire interrupted her and Deever fumed.

"Last warning." Deever said.

"You're trash." Bully Maguire said as he whipped his head and hair stood for a moment.

"Get him!" Deever yelled, having enough of it.

The agents tried to apprehend Bully Maguire who slid down the pavement, dodging as they tried to catch him but ended up hitting each other.

"Stings, doesn't it?" Bully Maguire taunted before he gave Deever a nasty smirk that unnerved her, wondering what was he up to. "Now dig on this."

Deever and everyone then looked up to see Kamala jump and float away, while Kamran teleported himself away as people cheered at Ms. Marvel's escape.

"See ya, chump!" Bully Maguire said.

One of the agents handed infuriated Deever a phone and Zoe, Bruno, Tyesha, Amir, Yusuf and Muneeba applauded.

"Yes?" Deever asked.

"Don't say anything, don't do anything, just get out of there. You went against my orders publicly and then you attacked a bunch of kids in our name and you know what that means?" Cleary growled and Deever paled and gulped. "Yes. That means that you're relieved of your duty. A unit is coming to fix your mess. Get out of there. Now."

Deever fumed as she hung up, looking humiliated, while people cheered.

"You want forgiveness? Get religion." Bully Maguire said.

Deever glowered, humiliated, while people cheered but she was not going to give him a satisfaction of whining. Deever put on a straight face and gestured, deciding to leave the scene with whatever little dignity she had left. "Team, go out!"

People cheered at Ms. Marvel and Bully Maguire, who danced his way out of the scene.


Not sure if I did Bully Maguire right but Deever got hers. While Cleary was a douche in No Way Home, at least he was respectful to people in mosque, a Muslim equivalent of a church, unlike Deever and the agents, when they were looking for Ms. Marvel and Cleary was not going to chase and attack innocent kids in school, even though the agents were using non-lethal measures.

Bully Maguire is a bit tricky to write for me though, so I hope I did him well.

So, what do you guys think?

Please review and let me know if you have enjoyed this one-shot.

With regards

Bl4ckHunter