LaCuevademigustos- Yeah, B kinda needed to go, but i like that Dawn is on The case. I always cuestiones why she didnt opose to Scott acusations.
Hepefully, that means she Will last longer.
The Max/Scarlett Alliance is born And that could mean trouble.
Also, thank You for making Jasmine refer to Sammy by her name, it always pissed me of that she still called her Samey.
Me- Yeah out of everyone on the Maggots. It just made the most sense.
That's also something I noticed. Even though her and Sammy are friends, she still called her Samey. I wanted to fix that.
Cody Fanatic- Cameron should've exposed Scott but I'm glad he didn't as he's my second favorite Gen 2 character. B leaving is fine for me, after all he hardly does anything of impact. Also will you be doing Skave?
Me- Funny enough I have a good idea on the elimination order this time around. But I'm not 100% sure on the pairings I'll do for this story. I just figured I'll write and see what clicks.
Dunsparce519- Yeah, B is a tricky character to write, since he doesn't speak at all. But at the very least, he (along with Dawn) helped reveal Scott as the villain more than in canon. I can't wait to see the tensions between Scott and Dawn.
And it looks like the plot between Amy, Samey and Jasmine is going pretty smoothly. I wonder how you'll work it out. Keep up the good work.
Me- Scott and Dawn interactions are fun to write.
amit avrashmi- Good job, liked to see more of sky's competitive nature come in here, also wish to have Rodney and amy out as soon as possible can't stand them that much unless there is a drastic change for them like the change Rodney have in the fiction of pahkihtio with my unique plot or pahki-2 amy
Me- Thanks. I've been trying to write Sky being hyper competitive without making her too much of a jerk. So I'm glad that's going well.
Jss2141-It seems Fang has a new target but is mind controlled now. Poor sharky.
Me- Poor Fang indeed.
lordgemini- - Spoilers incoming –
Ok, nice episode. Could it be that the Mutant maggots are the new toxic rats? We will find out, but meanwhile, we have some interesting relationships.
Scoot is looking for the immunity idol, we found Owen as an intern and Topher going all fan mode with him (I loved that scene.) Jasmine is growing closer to Sammy while also starts to antagonize Amy.
Then Chris calls everyone for the challenge. It's the same as in the Ice, Ice baby episode, first climbing the mountain with Eva (as a guest) throw them ice cubes. In this one, Rodney shows he is not a good leader. Max and Scarlett become closer, inventing a machine to control animals, Jo starts her rivalry with Brick, and also her feud with Anne Maria. Sky also proves she is one of the best physically, and B invented something to win the challenge.
Also it was nice this was the reason why Scott decided to eliminate him.
The fortress snow battle happens in a similar way but not the same. We don't have that Scott and Dawn interactions, but Amy takes control of her team, and it's sad but they win (now she will think it was for her leadership.) Scarlett uses his machine to control Fang (who now hates Max), and he goes to steal the maggot's flag. Scott, as in canon sabotages his team and frame B, but this time Dawn supports her friend. (Cameron not supporting them for fear was a nice detail.)
In the end B was the one voted off, I thought he would so it wasn't a surprise. I like how Owen was bald after eating the toxic marshmallow (poor Owen.)
Next time it will be an important one, if the maggots lose again, it's official, they are the new toxic rats, and this time it will be either Scott or Dawn going home if the rats lose, I still think it will be Dave or Amy (I feel lucky after guessing B). Good episode
It was morning time and a couple days after B's elimination. On the girls side of the Rat cabin. A certain songbird was singing as she brushed her hair. She didn't realize it was annoying her fellow bunkmates.
"Is E-Ella singing again?" Sky asked as she yawned
"Y-Yep." Jasmine said
"That tears it!" Sugar said as she got out of her bed
She marched over to where Ella was standing and snatched the hairbrush from her hands.
"Sugar?"
"Shut up! Shut up! Shut up!" Sugar yelled "If I gotta listen to you sing one more time. I'm gonna go crazy!... well crazier. But you get my point, now beat it!"
Sugar shoved Ella to the ground and got back in her bed.
"Good night ya'll." Sugar said
Sky and Jasmine got out of their beds to help Ella to her feet.
"Are you okay?" Sky asked
"I-I'm fine.." Ella said sadly "I think I need some time to be alone.."
Ella ran out of the cabin crying. Jasmine and Sky glared at Sugar.
"She was a bit annoying." Jasmine said "But you didn't need to be that harsh with her."
...
"Are you giving me the silent treatment?!" Jasmine asked angrily
Jasmine walked over and saw that Sugar was already asleep.
"Huh." Jasmine said "She's a fast sleeper."
"Sugar's Confessional"
"I can put on a nice girl act for the cameras."
"But if you interrupt my beauty sleep then you're gonna get to see the real me. And it ain't pretty, not one bit."
"Ella's Confessional"
"I'm not very well liked at school because of my.. strange habits. Such as singing and cosplaying."
" I just hope that it doesn't cause me to become an outcast here..."
"I know! I'll write a poem to Sugar later and apologize! Then we can all be friends."
Ella arrived at the Mess Hall and sat down to work on her poem.
"Sugar, a sweet treat that anyone can eat." Ella said "Hmm.. too cheesy."
Ella thought about how to start her poem. Owen entered the Mess Hall carrying a giant crate.
"Oh. Do you need some help with that?" Ella asked
"T-That would be nice.." Owen said as he was out of breath
Ella helped Owen push the giant crate to the kitchen.
"What's in this thing anyways?" Ella asked
" A mutant turtle." Owen said "Chef wants me to make soup out of it."
" Turtle soup sounds delightful!" Ella said happily
"It is pretty good." Owen said "My mouth's watering just thinking about it."
Owen began to drool from his mouth.
"You got a little something on your face." Ella said as she took out a handerkerchief
"Oh thanks." Owen said as he took it and wiped his face "I never got the chance to ask but what's with the princess getup?"
"I'm just cosplaying my favorite Disney movie princess." Ella said " I wore this when I auditioned to help me stand out. I guess it worked since I'm here."
"That's awesome! I love Disney movies." Owen said "And cosplay's like putting on a Halloween costume right?"
"Sort of." Ella said
"I might try it when I get back home." Owen said as he chuckled
"I can't wait to see it." Ella said as she smiled
Ella waved goodbye as she went back to work on her poem. Owen smiled and waved back.
"These newbies are actually pretty cool." Owen said to himself
On the guys side of the Maggots cabin. Cameron had woken up and got out of his sleeping bag.
"Cameron's Confessional"
"I'm used to sleeping in my bubble back home. But I was able to re-create the experience by using my sleeping bag!"
"What an adventure!"
Cameron slipped out of his pajamas and put on his clothes. He headed towards the door and opened it. Only to unleash a high pitched scream. His mouth was immediately covered by the person at the front door.
"Do you wish to wake up the entire cabin?" Dawn asked
Cameron shook his head. Dawn released her hand and Cameron sighed.
"You scared the daylights out of me.." Cameron said
"I apologize for scaring you." Dawn said "Now can we speak outside?"
Cameron and Dawn stepped outside the cabin and sat on the steps.
" I don't need to read your aura to tell you're pretty intelligent." Dawn said "So I'll cut to the chase. I want to team up with you to take down Scott."
"I'm flattered that someone wants to team up with me of all people." Cameron said "But why? Wouldn't a physical threat like Vito and Lightning be more useful?"
" They both believe in Scott's lies." Dawn said " I need someone whose smart enough to not fall for his crap and that person is you."
"Oh okay." Cameron said "But were both so little and fragile. Can we really take down a big guy like Scott?"
"We can try." Dawn said
Cameron nodded as Dawn stood up.
"When I was doing my daily meditations, I saw Scott leave the cabin." Dawn said "Let's follow his aura and see what he's up to."
Dawn walked away as Cameron followed her.
Scott was doing his daily search for the immunity idol. He noticed since Chris released that crazy shark on them yesterday. There's been all sorts of weird creatures popping up in the forest. He made sure to stay away from them as he searched.
"I'm starting to think there isn't an immunity idol." Scott said
Scott continued to look but unbeknownst to him he was being followed by Cameron and Dawn. After a while Scott called it quits and headed back to the cabin. As he walked up the stairs, he tripped and fell. He groaned in pain as he got up but he was able to notice something.
"Wait a damn minute..."
Scott crawled underneath a tiny space in the cabin and reached out to grab something. He stood up and looked at the immunity idol.
"I found it... I finally fucking found it." Scott said happily "YES!"
Scott realized he was shouting and it was better to keep his voice down. He stuffed the idol in his pockets and went inside the cabin. Cameron and Dawn gasped as they hopped out of a bush.
"Why are so many good things happening to him?" Dawn asked "Karma must be on vacation right now."
"Perhaps." Cameron said " But we can still work around this. The immunity idol doesn't mean he's invincible forever."
"You're right." Dawn said "We should keep an eye on him during challenges too. To make sure he doesn't try anything."
" Cool." Cameron said "Say Dawn... does this make us friends?"
" Hmm I suppose so." Dawn said "Were working together towards a common goal."
"Yes my second friend!" Cameron said happily "You should sit with Zoey and me during breakfast."
Cameron grabbed Dawn's hand and headed towards the Mess Hall.
Cameron and Dawn entered the Mess Hall to get their breakfast. They sat down next to Zoey who was engaging in a conversation with Brick.
"Hey Zoey!" Cameron said
"Hey Cam." Zoey said "and Dawn?"
"She's my new friend." Cameron said
"Well any friend of Cam's is a friend of mine." Zoey said as she stuck out her hand
Dawn shook Zoey's hand.
"Likewise." Dawn said "I've been wanting to talk to you for a while now. Your aura seems so interesting."
" Oh." Zoey said "Is that a good thing?"
"Depends on your perspective." Dawn said "Your lonely childhood must've been hard but it helped shape you into the person you are today. So it could be a good thing."
"L-Lonely childhood?" Zoey asked "Who told you that?"
"Your aura did." Dawn said "I also know you hate jocks because the ones at your school tease you."
"Okay!" Zoey said " I'm gonna go. Cam can you come with?"
"Huh?" Cameron said
Zoey stood up and dragged Cameron off to the side.
"That was creepy." Zoey said "I don't know if I wanna hang out with her."
"Dawn? She's pretty off-putting I will admit. But she's just as much as an outsider as you and me." Cameron said "Outsiders stick together."
"Okay there's a difference between a outsider and a freakshow." Zoey said " I hate jocks but I understood why they bullied some kids."
"Zoey! That's not a nice thing to say." Cameron said
"Sorry. Too harsh?"
"Definitely." Cameron said "Can you give Dawn a chance? Please?"
Zoey sighed.
"Fine..."
"Zoey's Confessional"
"I'm not saying Dawn is a witch but she might be a wizard."
The campers had finished their breakfast and followed Owen to their designated challenge area.
"Welcome victims to the hilarious obstacle relay race of hilarious hurts." Chris said
"Excellent name choice Chris." Topher said
"Thank you Topher." Chris said "Each player will take on a different obstacle. The first one is a greased log over a thorny bog. Followed by a nice run uphill with tons of cannons waiting to shoot at you. If you manage to survive that then it's a zipline down the cliff. Which will lead you to the greasy tubes."
"How much grease well we be dealing with exactly?" Dave asked
"Shush!" Topher said
" Go shush yourself." Dave said "Grease is a slimy gateway into germ-ville."
" It'll be a lot of grease Dave." Chris said
Dave winced and gulped.
"As I was saying. The next part of the course is the bouncy butts then you'll be facing the greasy tires and greasy wheelbarrow race." Chris said " After that it's a climb down a greasy wall. The final part of the obstacle course is the grand slam. Manage to complete that and you'll win the challenge."
Scarlett counted with her fingers and then raised her hand.
"Yes Scarlett?"
"You mentioned nine courses." Scarlett said "That isn't enough for everyone here. So will some of us not be participating?"
"I was just getting to that." Chris said "Due to the big cast size, not everyone will be able to compete in this challenge. Toxic Rats you need to choose three people to sit out. Mutant Maggots you need to choose one person to sit out. I'll give you all a minute to decide."
"Cameron." The Mutant Maggots said in unison
" I can't really disagree with your decision." Cameron said
"Hit the bench, sha-nerd." Lightning said
Cameron sighed as he headed over to some bleachers. The camera panned over to the Toxic Rats.
"This challenge has dirty and gross written all over it." Amy said "So I'm out."
"As much as I don't like you." Jasmine said "You are pretty athletic. We need you in this challenge. The weakest physical players should sit out, which would be Scarlett, Max, and Dave."
" I have no disagreements with your logic." Scarlett said
Dave ran up and hugged Jasmine.
"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Dave said "I really did not wanna do this challenge."
" I don't wanna do it either!" Topher said "I can't have disgusting grease splashed on my face! Please Jasmine!"
Jasmine looked down at Topher and Dave who were practically begging her to let one of them sit out.
"I'll flip a coin okay." Jasmine said "Heads or Tails?"
"Heads." Topher said "This pretty face has luck written all over it."
Jasmine pulled out a coin from her pocket and flipped it. It landed on heads.
"Yes!" Topher said "See ya losers!"
Topher walked over to the bleachers and joined Scarlett, Max and Cameron.
"Just try to do your best." Jasmine said
Dave nodded hesitantly.
"Now who wants to do what course?"
"I'll take the first one." Sky said "I wanna get us off to a good start."
"What do you think I should do Amy?" Rodney asked
"Take the cannons and I'll do the zipline." Amy said " There's something I want to talk to you about."
Rodney smiled and nodded.
"Rodney's Confessional"
"Ever since deciding that Amy is my dream girl. I've been super nice to her."
"Maybe all my hard work is finally paying off."
"I'm pretty good at crawling so I'll take the tubes." Shawn said
"Why are you good at crawling?" Dave asked out of curiosity
"I'd tell you but then the government would wipe my mind."
"Okay.."
"I can do the bouncy butts." Sugar said
"Ooh I'd like to take the course after Sugar's!" Ella said
Sugar glared at Ella who casted a smile at her in return.
"I don't wanna take the last course and have all the pressure on me.." Dave thought to himself
"I'll take the wheelbarrows." Dave said
"Nice." Jasmine said "I'll take care of the wall. Which leaves Sammy with the Grand Slam."
"R-Really? Y-You want me on the last course?" Sammy asked "W-What if I screw it all up?"
"You'll never know unless ya try mate." Jasmine said "You'll have the support and encourage of everyone here."
"Ahem." Amy said
"Well almost everyone here." Jasmine said "C'mon guys. Sammy.. Sammy.. Sammy."
The others began to join in the chant except for Amy and Rodney.
"O-Okay I'll do it." Sammy said as she smiled
"Atta girl!" Jasmine said "Now let's hop to it like kangaroos!"
The Toxic Rats ran over to each course they selected. The Mutant Maggots were still strategizing.
"If Short Girl is going first then so is Lightning." Lightning said "I need to redeem myself and beat her."
"Whoa Captain Meathead." Jo said "I decide what order we go in. Lightning, Dawn, Zoey, Scott, Anne Maria, Vito, myself, Brick and then Sam."
"So I'd still be going first sha-anyways."
"Yeah but it sounds better when I say it."
"Why do you want me to go last?" Sam asked
"You're the weak link Couch Potato." Jo said "You need to prove yourself out there or I'm voting you off."
"I-I thought Cameron was the weak link.." Sam said as he chuckled nervously
"At least the kid is smart." Jo said "You're just a smelly ball of dough with ears."
"Smelly?!" Sam said "Gamers are athletes too and I'll prove it to you."
"Sam's Confessional"
"In retrospect, I probably shouldn't have said that."
Every obstacle now had two people standing in front of it.
"Ready.. set..." Chris said
Chris blew his airhorn. The sound startled Sky's pig as it ran away in fear.
"Get back here!" Sky said as she chased after it.
"Ha! Prepare to lose to the Lightning."
Lightning tugged on the pig using the leash, but it wouldn't budge.
"Stupid pig." Lightning said "I'll just have to sha-carry you."
Lightning picked up the pig and made his way to the log. He had trouble walking up due to the grease and was slipping. The Toxic Rats pig ran onto the log and Sky tried to push it up. The pig ended up farting in her face.
"Ew..." Sky said
Sky managed to push the pig as she jumped onto the air and landed on it. She slid across the log and bumped into Rodney.
"What was with all the weird jumping." Rodney said "Are you a ninja?"
"It's gymnastics." Sky said "Now go! We have the lead."
Rodney picked up the pig and made his way to Cannonball Alley. Lightning was still on the greased log, trying not to fall.
"Dammit! I did not lose to her again!"
Lightning's concentration slipped and so did his body as he fell on his crotch. The camera zoomed out to show Chris and Chef laughing at Lightning's pain.
Lightning crawled on the ground and pushed the pig to Dawn.
"You should get some ice for that." Dawn said
Dawn touched the pig to get a read on its aura.
"Strange I can't seem to find your aura..."
"Sha-hurry.." Lightning said in a high pitched voice
Dawn ran with the pig into Cannonball Alley. The cannons started firing, Dawn was running behind Rodney for cover. Rodney was trying to dodge the cannonballs while running uphill. Eventually one managed to hit him in the face. He fell over with a large thud. Dawn snuck by him and made it to the top.
"Thanks Dawn." Zoey said "Oh and..um.. I'm sorry for calling you a freakshow earlier."
"Water under the bridge." Dawn said " I've been called worse."
Zoey began to strap herself to the zipline as Rodney slowly made his way to the top.
"Move it mumbles!" Amy said
Rodney pushed the pig to Amy. She kneeled down and whispered something into his ear. He nodded and she smiled darkly.
"Perfect.." Amy said to herself
Amy strapped herself onto the zipline and slid down. She saw Zoey already down and unstrapping herself. She leaned forward and tackled Zoey as she fell down.
"Ow.." Zoey said
"Thanks for being my human airbag."
Amy stood up and handed the pig to Shawn.
"Good work out there." Shawn said "You could seriously survive a zombie apo-"
"Shut up." Amy said
Shawn got the memo and went inside the tubes. Zoey walked over and handed Truffles to Scott.
"Were not in the lead... good." Scott said to himself
"Did you say something?" Zoey asked
"Uh.. nope." Scott said awkwardly
Scott quickly ran into the tubes. Shawn was able to find his way out and handed the pig to Sugar.
"Aww he's a cute little fella." Sugar said "Imma call him Grease Pig."
Sugar gripped onto the pig and bounced across the platform.
"Ella catch!"
Ella wasn't paying attention and Sugar fell into the mud.
"Ooh are you taking a mud bath?" Ella asked
Sugar growled as she got up and chased the pig around. Scott made it out of the tubes and began to pet the pig.
"Ahh that's a nice little piggy."
"Give me the pig bozo." Anne Maria said
" Piggy want a belly rub? Okay."
Scott began to rub the pig's belly as Anne Maria rolled her eyes. She sprayed Scott in the face and took the pig. Anne Maria bounced along the platform and landed right on top of Vito.
" If you wanna touch the Vito you gotta make an appointment." Vito said as he winked at her
" Duly noted.." Anne Maria said as she blushed
"Anne Maria's Confessional"
" He's hot, I'm hot. I'm from Jersey, he's from Jersey."
"Were practically made for each other."
Vito helped Anne Maria up and took the pig.
"It was nice talking to ya." Vito said "Maybe we can-"
"Stop flirting and run Vito!" Jo yelled from the wheelbarrows
"Sheesh." Vito said "Keep your sweatpants on."
Vito ran across the greasy tires while holding onto the pig. Sugar was finally able to make it across the bouncy butts.
"Sugar may I have the pig please?" Ella asked
"His name is Grease Pig!" Sugar said "And I'm keeping him..."
Sugar checked to see if it was a guy or not.
"Her. I'm keeping her!" Sugar said
"Maybe I can just piggy-sit?"
"No!"
"Hey there little girl or fella. If you came over here it'd be mighty swellaaaa!" Ella sang as she walked over to the tires
Grease Pig jumped out of Sugar's arms and into Ella's.
"Sugar's Confessional"
"That girl is seriously working my last nerve."
"The last girl who pissed me off was little Susie Q at the Middle School Beauty Pageant. She called me a fat pig so I "accidentally" pushed her off the stage."
"Hope your leg is feeling better Susie." Sugar said in a condescending tone
Sugar laughed out loud after saying that.
Ella danced along with the pig across the tires.
"Good work Ella!" Dave shouted from the wheelbarrows
She didn't seem to be in a rush however.
"A little faster would be nice."
As Ella continued to sing and dance, a loud airhorn could be heard through the loudspeaker. The loud noise startled the pig and it ran away.
"Why did you do that?" Ella asked
" I know World Tour was really popular but there will be no singing required this season." Chris said through the loudspeaker "NONE."
Vito ran past Ella and delivered Truffles to Jo.
"Yes!"
Jo dumped the pig onto the wheelbarrow and started running. Ella tried to calm down the pig without singing but nothing was working. Scarlett got up from the bleachers and handed Ella a bag.
"What is this?"
"Pecans." Scarlett said "Pigs love them."
"Ooh thank you Scarlett!"
Ella hugged Scarlett as she started using the pecans to lure the pig to the wheelbarrow. Ella picked up the leash and tried handing it to Dave.
"Could you at least clean it first?" Dave asked
"I'm afraid I don't have any cleaning products on me."
Dave groaned as he grabbed the leash and started running as fast as he could. He figured the sooner this was over with, the better. He was starting to catch up to Jo which didn't go unnoticed.
"Have a nice fall clean freak."
As Dave got closer, Jo used one hand to shove him. He was caught off balance and slipped face first into the grease. She laughed as she continued running. Dave slowly got up and realized there was grease all over his face.
"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" Dave screamed in terror "Hand sanitizer! I need hand sanitizer! And sand paper for scrubbing!"
Sky ran over and grabbed Dave by the shoulders.
"Deep breaths." Sky said "Breathe in... breathe out."
Dave's attention was now on Sky as he followed her advice.
"Sky's Confessional"
"My sister gave me the same pep talk when I was just starting out on Gymnastics. I figured it might be able to help him."
"Dave's Confessional"
"Usually I'd freak out way more than that. Sky has a surprisingly calm effect on me."
After a while, Dave regained his composure.
"Thanks Sky." Dave said as he smiled
"No problem." Sky said "Now hurry up Dave! We need to win this challenge!"
Dave nodded as he picked up Truffles, dumped them in the wheelbarrow and continued running. He was finally able to hand the pig to Jasmine.
"What took you so long?!" Jasmine asked "Brick is already climbing!"
" I told you I'm not good with this kind of stuff." Dave said as he shrugged
Jasmine rolled her eyes as she picked up Truffles and began climbing the wall. She was able to easily scale it and ran over to the final platform. There was two ropes at the end of the platform with a giant pitching glove in the center. Giant bats were placed around the pitcher glove.
"H-How am I supposed to hold the pig while I swing?" Sammy asked
"Oh you're batons won't be required for the final obstacle." Chris said through the loudspeaker "This one is all about pain."
Sammy sighed. She hesitantly grabbed the rope and looked at the pitcher glove. All of her teammates were watching her by the sidelines.
"Y-You can do this... Y-You can do this." Sammy said to herself
"If it were me we'd already have won by now." Amy yelled from a distance "Samey is such a slowpoke."
Sammy turned around and pointed at Amy.
"MY NAME ISN'T SAMEY!" Sammy yelled
Amy's jaw dropped. She didn't like her sister's backtalk. So she quickly tried to think of a way to get back at her. Tears leaked from her eyes as she latched onto Rodney.
"Samey what is wrong with you?" Rodney asked
"I told you that's not her name farmboy." Jasmine said angrily
As the Toxic Rats argued. Sam grabbed onto the rope and smiled.
"Here goes nothing hehe."
Sam swung across using the rope and managed to hit every bat before eventually landing on the giant pitcher's glove.
"This just in." Chris said through the loudspeaker "The Mutant Maggots finally win for once."
The Mutant Maggots ran over to pick up Sam and celebrate.
"Nice job couch potato." Jo said
"Hehe thanks." Sam said
Chris arrived at the Grand Slam.
"Rats wash off and meet me a the campfire pit in a hour." Chris said "Somebody's going flying tonight."
"I call first dibs on the shower!" Dave said as he ran off
"Sammy's Confessional"
"I signed up for this show to get away from Amy."
"She's not gonna ruin this for me like she's ruined everything else in my life. She's going down."
The Toxic Rats were waiting in line for a shower at the communal washroom.
"Sugar? I wrote you a poem if you'd like to hear it." Ella said
"I would not like to hear it." Sugar responded
"Are you sure? It might be really nice." Ella said
Sugar saw the piece of paper Ella was holding. She snatched it from her and ripped it up into tiny pieces.
"I don't like you." Sugar said in a harsh tone "Do I gotta get a tattoo of it on my back for you to understand?!"
"I-I just thought we could be friends.." Ella said
"I ain't never gonna be friends with a two faced pig stealing songbird!" Sugar yelled
"I-I see.." Ella said "S-Sorry for bothering you."
Ella walked away sadly as Rodney and Amy approached Sugar.
"We'd like to talk to you." Amy said
After washing up, Max was playing catch with a mind controlled Fang.
"You really seem to have grown attached to this giant carcharodon carcharias." Scarlett said
"What can I say? We have a special bond."
" Thanks to the mind control helmet."
"Pfft no." Max said "He'd still love me. Even without the helmet."
Max took the helmet off of Fang and it immediately tried to bite Max. Max ran away in fear as Scarlett pulled out a magnet. She pointed it at Fang as it trembled and scurried away.
"Thank you Scarlett." Max whispered
"Hm?"
"I said thank you."
"I can't hear you." Scarlett said with a smirk
"THANK YOU." Max yelled "Geez woman do you need a hearing aid?"
"No."
Scarlett pulled out a tape recorder and played Max saying "Thank You" over and over again. The two were quickly approached by Rodney, Amy and Sugar.
The Toxic Rats arrived at the campfire pit. Chris and Chef showed up with the marshmallows and toxic marshmallows respectively.
"Toxic Rats I gotta ask." Chris said "How does losing taste?"
"Not good." Rodney said
" I love to hear it. Now get to voting."
"Jasmine's Confessional"
"Goodbye and good riddance." Jasmine said as she wrote Amy's name down
"Sammy's Confessional"
"You've had this coming for years." Sammy said as she wrote Amy's name down
"The votes are in." Chris said "If I call your name that means you are momentarily safe."
"Dave!"
"Max!"
"Rodney!"
" Sammy!"
"Scarlett!"
"Shawn!"
"Sky!"
"Sugar!"
"and Topher!"
Everyone whose name was called ran up to receive a marshmallow.
"Which leaves us with Amy, Ella and Jasmine on the chopping block." Chris said "Amy you could be going home for bullying Samey."
"It's Sammy." Jasmine said
"Don't care." Chris said " Ella you could be going home because of your incessant singing and for bullying Sugar."
"What? I wasn't trying to-" Ella said before she was interrupted
"Shush! Finally Jasmine I'm not too sure why you're here at the bottom." Chris said "But you could also be going home."
" The toxic marshmallow of loserdom goes to..."
Amy and Jasmine glared at each other as Ella clasped her hands together for a quick prayer.
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"Jasmine!"
Chef threw the toxic marshmallow at Jasmine who managed to duck in time. Jasmine and Sammy's jaws dropped. Amy walked over to receive her marshmallow.
"Buh-bye." Amy said as she mockingly waved at her
"No this isn't right!" Sammy said " Jasmine's like the best person on our team! If anyone deserves to go home... it's me."
"No Sammy." Jasmine said " I'm not gonna let you do that. If you wanna honor my memory then you're gonna stay here and fight. Okay?"
Sammy nodded.
"Now come here ya kookaburra."
Jasmine hugged Sammy and was unknowingly squeezing the life out of her.
"J-Jasmine.."
"Oh sorry." Jasmine said as she let go "Guess this is it then. See ya guys around."
Jasmine waved goodbye and walked across the Dock of Shame.
"Amy's Confessional"
"I noticed Samey's boost of confidence has been coming from Jasmine. So obviously she had to go home. Getting Rodney, Max, Scarlett, Topher, Sugar and Dave's votes were easy."
"Now Samey can go back to being the spineless worm she's always been."
"Sugar's Confessional"
"I know Amy gave me this long boring speech on why Jasmine needs to go home. But no matter what I tried to do my hand would only write down Ella's name."
Jasmine sat in the Hurl of Shame with her team to see her off.
"Any last Australian words you wanna say?" Chris asked "Throw a shimp on the barbie? G'day mate?"
"How about piss off?" Jasmine retorted
"Eh not really funny." Chris said
Chef flung the catapult and sent Jasmine flying into the night sky.
"The Toxic Rats just lost a major power player." Chris said "Will they be able to survive without her? Find out next time on Total Drama Absolute Revenge!"
That was the fourth chapter of Total Drama: Absolute Revenge. If you enjoyed it then make sure to leave some favorites and reviews.
The first two eliminations were a bit obvious so this was meant to be like a shocking elimination. Hopefully I succeeded in that. Jasmine's elimination was also to show how Amy capable could be as a villain. She isn't gonna be a main antagonist but I wanted her to be more capable and strategic than her canon version.
On an unrelated note I've decided to scrap Dakota coming back as an intern. If she did it would more or less be the same as canon just without her turning into a mutant. And as much as I do like SamxDakota. I think it'd be fun to explore Sam's character individually.
Voting Results:
Amy- Jasmine
Dave- Jasmine
Ella- Amy
Jasmine- Amy
Max- Jasmine
Rodney- Jasmine
Sammy- Amy
Scarlett- Jasmine
Shawn- Amy
Sky- Amy
Sugar- Ella
Topher- Jasmine
Elimination Order:
Dakota-24th, B-23rd, Jasmine-22nd "The Outback Survivalist"