Cody Fanatic- Jasmine's gone huh, I guess there will be no Shasmine. Heh heh. Hopefully Sammy continues to stand up for herself. Is there gonna be a sequel to this?
Me- Rip Shasmine. I try to focus on one project at a time or I'll probably get nothing done. I'm not 100% sure if I'll do a sequel fic just yet. But I'll probably have a decision made when I finish this.
Lacuevademigustos-Jasmine was an absolute Swerve Elimination.
I don't really Know ir Youre are making Dave And Sky a couple here, but if thats The case, i like that Youre not putting it from day One.
Me- Cool. That's what I was trying to go for.
I don't wanna reveal anything just yet. But you'll have to read and see.
- Well bummer that jasmine is out but the chapter is still great
I also noticed some characters changes: like Rodney deciding to stick to 1 girl and Zoey not being as nice as Canon because let's face it Zoey would never call someone a freakshow or understand why people bullying others
But I'm still going to hate Rodney here, and it's not really clear for me why would Dave be OK with eliminate jasmine considering he is more level headed he would prefer to have her on than the likes of sugar amy and Rodney
Me- Not trying to hate on Zoey's character. But she did have a few instances in ROTI where she was a little judgemental. Like when she talked to Dakota and Dawn. I'm just expanding on that part of her character.
Dunsparce519- Okay, that elimination completely threw me off-guard! I'd thought Jasmine would last much longer but I would've never imagine her as the third one out. I guess that means Shawn/Jasmine is becoming more unlikely, huh?
And you did show that Amy is becoming more of an antagonist. And poor Rodney is under her nails, isn't he? I hope Amy gets hers soon. Maybe like in canon, maybe a different way, who knows? Anyway, keep up the great work!
Me-It all depends.
I always felt like Amy had antagonist potential.
Jss2141-Stay strong, Sammy! Stay strong!
Me- Sammy do be strong.
lordgemini- The episode was interesting, but the best part was the elimination. As you said it was shocking, but let's start from the beginning.
The episode starts with the toxic rats, Ella is singing, and Sugar pushes and insults her, making her cry, the other girls (Sky and Jasmine specifically) didn't like Ella's songs but didn't like the farmer's attitude either. Ella was crying at the mess hall where she met Owen, the intern, I love how he comforted her and gave her the idea of making up with Sugar.
Meanwhile in the maggots Dawn is more proactive trying to get rid of Scott. She made an alliance with Cameron and with him discovered the redhead farmer found an immunity idol. Cameron is happy he made a new friend and introduced her to Zoey, who is crept by Dawn's abilities.
Then we have the challenge. It's a Mix of the grease pig challenge of PI with the obstacle race from episode 2 of ROTI. There are 9 obstacles in total, and the team that reaches the giant glove first wins. I like how you mix these two challenges, it felt natural even if some teammates were left behind.
From the maggots Cameron is out of the game, while in the rats it's Scarlett, Max, and Topher. It's funny because I think this was the reason why Dave would vote like he voted in the end. The challenge starts, and everyone tries to manage their pigs.
Sky beat Lightning in the first challenge, increasing their rivalry. Amy plotted something with Rodney. Ella tried to be friendly with Sugar, and Dave had an anxiety attack, but Sky helped him to get a hold of himself. In the end it was Sam vs. Sammy, the twin gets distracted, and the gamer uses the chance to prove he isn't a load, getting the maggots first victory.
In the end, Ella found out that Sugar would never be her friend, and Jasmine began to rally her team to vote Amy. But in a shocking turn of events it was Jasmine the one eliminated thanks to Amy rallying everyone, I wonder how she managed to convince Toper? (or not, maybe Jasmine will return in the future, who knows?) now Sammy will have to defend herself and I thing Shawn will become closer to Dave, and maybe find a new flame.
Next episode, the maggots are in a nice position after winning the first event, so I think they will win again. The one going home is probably Sugar. I like how her plot with Ella developed, but I think it will also be her end. If the maggots lose, Cameron and Dawn may try to ally people against Scott, but with her immunity idol, the one going home can be anyone, like Zoey, Sam, or even Dawn herself. I wonder what will happen.
Me- Interesting prediction.
Benji the Monocat- You know, it's funny.. but I've always hated Amy
Me- Well Amy is a pretty hated character overall.
It was a couple days after Jasmine's elimination. Shawn woke up in the middle of the night and headed out of the cabin.
"Shawn's Confessional"
"I don't know what the hell happened man. It was supposed to be Amy going home."
" I feel like I can't trust anyone. Times like this is when I need an immunity idol."
Shawn was searching around in the forest for an idol. He checked every tree and bush he came across.
"Is that a Chinese Mulberry bush?" Shawn asked himself "What's this doing in Canada?"
The bush suddenly disappeared into the ground. Shawn saw this and screamed as he ran back into his cabin.
"S-Shawn?" Dave asked as he woke up
" Dave! Dude some crazy stuff is happening man!" Shawn said "I saw a bush disappear!"
"Sure.." Dave said "I don't care if you wanna get high in the middle of the night. But don't wake me up ok?"
" What?! I wasn't getting high!" Shawn said "I was looking for that idol! I need protection especially after what happened to Jasmine."
Dave winced at the mention of Jasmine.
"Dave's Confessional"
"Am I proud of voting off Jasmine? No."
"What else could I do? They didn't leave me with a choice."
~Flashback~
It was the day of Jasmine's elimination. Dave stepped out of the communal washrooms after taking a hot long shower. He was approached by Amy and Rodney.
"Dave just the guy I wanted to see." Amy said with a fake smile
"Amy just the girl I hate seeing." Dave responded
"I'll cut to the chase." Amy said " Join with us in voting off Jasmine and I can provide you safety next time we lose."
" What? Why Jasmine?" Dave asked "She's awesome."
"Oh my gag. No she is not." Amy said "She barks out orders all day and treats everyone like her slaves."
"You just described yourself."
"No I didn't!" Amy said "You better not piss me off."
"Or what you're gonna cheerlead me to death?"
Amy spit on her finger and wiped it on Dave's sleeve.
"AAAAHHH! Why did you do that?"
"There's more where that came from if you don't vote for Jasmine."
"Y-You wouldn't..."
Amy stuck her finger up her nose.
"Try me."
Dave's eyes widened as he took a couple of steps back.
"Let's not do anything hasty.." Dave said nervously "I'll vote for Jasmine. Scout's honor."
"Good." Amy said "See you at the elimination ceremony."
Amy and Rodney walked away. Dave immediately took off his shirt.
"I'm gonna go burn this."
~Flashback: End~
"About that.." Dave said
Dave noticed that Shawn was asleep in his bed now. He shrugged and went back to sleep as well.
Sammy woke up and yawned as she saw Jasmine's empty bed. She sighed as she got out of bed.
"Acting like a sadsack isn't gonna bring Jasmine back y'know." Amy said "At least now things can go back to the way they should be."
" No.." Sammy said
"Hm?"
"NO! I don't ever want things to go back to the way they used to be." Sammy said "I'm your sister not your slave."
" Don't talk back to me Samey." Amy said "I can make your life a living hell."
"You already do!"
As the twins argued, the confrontation got more physical as Amy got up and shoved Sammy. Sammy shoved back and the two were on the floor, wrestling and pulling each other's hair. Sky came back into the cabin after her morning run and saw what was going on. She ran over and separated the two.
"Stop it!" Sky said "This is not how teammates should behave."
"Tell Samey that!" Amy said "She started it!"
" You're a liar!"
" You're a witch!"
Sky stomped on Amy and Sammy's feet to get them to shut up.
"We lost our biggest powerhouse the other day." Sky said "We need to work together to win this next challenge. Can you two set aside your petty feud for the greater good?"
" If Amy treats me like an actual human being then I'm willing to be civil." Sammy said
"And I'm willing to stop once Samey realizes she's inferior to me in every single way possible." Amy said
Amy walked out of the cabin and slammed the door shut.
"Sky's Confessional"
"How could two siblings hate each other that much?"
" My sister and I had our fair share of fights but we never acted like that."
"Those two need therapy."
Chris had called the teams over to the challenge area by using the loudspeaker. The two teams arrived and sat on opposing ends of the logs, with a giant tv screen behind them.
"It's time we separate the brave from the liars." Chris said "The game is Truth or Scare."
"Bravo Chris." Topher said "Once again you've delivered the goods."
"Thank you Topher." Chris said, clearly annoyed with Topher's antics "Now then, every round a player is chosen at random. It also chooses whether you'll be doing a truth or scare. If you get a halo then you must answer a truth. If you get flames then you must do a scare. Whichever team manages to get the most points wins."
"What happens if we fail to do either one?" Scarlett asked
"I'm glad you asked."
Chef walked around and put metal collars on everyone's necks. Chris pulled out a remote and pressed a button. Several jolts were sent through the contestants body as they were electrocuted.
" D-Did you test these?" Dave asked
" I just did." Chris said "Now that you know how the game works. Let's get started."
The tv screen spun around and landed on Rodney with a halo.
"Rodney here is your truth." Chris said "In your opinion, rank the girls on your team from most attractive to least attractive."
"That's all I gotta do?" Rodney asked
"Yep."
"Dang I got off pretty easy." Rodney said " Amy, Samey, Ella, Scarlett, Sky, Sugar."
Rodney's ranking got mixed reactions from his team.
" Well I am the hottest so he's not wrong there." Amy said
"If you think I'm so good looking then why do you keep on calling me Samey?" Sammy asked
"Amy told me to." Rodney said "I thought it was just some funny little joke you two had."
" It's not a funny little joke." Sammy said angrily "It's a very hurtful name and I'd appreciate it if you didn't call me that."
"Oh.. I'm sorry then." Rodney said "Didn't mean to upset ya."
"It's all good." Sammy said as she shrugged
"It ain't all good!" Sugar said as she stood up "I'm dead last? You need to get your eyes checked mister!"
"Looks aren't everything." Ella said "The inside of a person is what truly matters."
"Easy for you to say Miss 3rd place." Sugar said as she glared at Ella " And you can cut the nice girl act out. Sugar's onto you."
"N-Nice girl act?"
"Ella stop bullying Sugar." Chris said "Now for truths we wasted no expenses in finding a lie detector."
A chicken entered the area and stood next to Chris.
" Meet Clucky the truth seeking chicken." Chris said "Picked him up at a carnival. He's able to sniff out truth and lies like a bloodhound. If he clucks then that means you're telling the truth. If he stays silent then you're a liar."
"Bawk-bawk!" Clucky said
"Clucky determined that Rodney is telling the truth."
The Toxic Rat guys and Amy cheered for Rodney as some of the girls chose to stay silent. The tv screen spun around once again and landed on Cameron with a flame next to it.
Chef brought in a silver platter and lifted it to reveal a tarantula. Cameron cringed in fear as Chef brought it over to him.
"Cameron for your scare you must pet the tarantula."
"W-Why did I have to get this one?" Cameron asked "I explicitly mentioned my arachnophobia in my audition tape."
"I know." Chris said as he smirked
Cameron raised his hand to pet the tarantula. He slowly reached over and recoiled his arm at the last second.
"I-I'm sorry guys.." Cameron said "I can't do it."
"Wuss." Scott said
"You'll get em next time soldier." Brick said as he patted Cameron on the back
The tv screen spun and landed on Scarlett with a flame next to it.
"Scarlett you will have to beautify a bear." Chris said "Using this make-up kit."
Chris handed Scarlett a make-up bag.
"Cosmetology is one of the few topics I have little to no knowledge on." Scarlett said "Well played Mclean."
Scarlett took the make-up bag and walked over to the sleeping bear.
"This shouldn't be to hard.." Scarlett said to herself "It's just art you put on your face."
Scarlett began applying the make-up to the bears face. After a few minutes she finished and woke up the bear. She handed the bear a mirror as it looked at it's new look. The bear smiled and walked away.
" The bear likes it." Chris said "The Toxic Rats earn another point."
The team congratulated Scarlett as the tv spun once again and landed on Topher with a halo next to it.
"Topher why are you so obsessed with me?" Chris asked
" I wouldn't say obsessed." Topher said as he chuckled "I'm just your average Total Drama fan. This show changed my life for the better and I only have you to thank for it."
...
Chris pressed the remote and The Toxic Rats were shocked.
" A part of me wishes that answer wasn't a lie." Chris said "But oh well."
"I-I was telling the truth!" Topher said "I really do admire you Chris."
...
Chris pressed the remote and the Toxic Rats were shocked once again.
"For the love of Aunt Betsy shut the fuck up!" Sugar said
Topher stayed silent and grumbled. The tv screen spun and landed on Zoey with a halo.
"Zoey would you say you like all of your teammates and enjoy being around them?" Chris asked
"Of course." Zoey said " I like everyone."
...
Chris pressed the remote and The Mutant Maggots were shocked.
"O-Okay maybe I'm not the biggest fan of Lightning." Zoey admitted
"Sha-what?" Lightning asked " Why don't you like the Lightning? I'm sha-awesome."
"You're practically the embodiment of everything I hate in a person." Zoey said "Cocky, Egotistical, Self-Absorbed, Selfish and Dumb."
"Looks like Little Miss Nice Girl has a mean streak in her after all." Jo said as she smiled
"Was that mean?" Zoey asked "Oh I'm sorry."
"Haters gonna hate." Lightning said as he kissed his bicep
The tv spun and landed on Sam with a flame next to it.
"Eat an entire stack of pancakes in just one minute." Chris said
Chef pulled in a cart with a plate that was filled with pancakes.
"You better get us this point Gamer Boy." Jo said "We need to catch up to the Rats."
"You could try encouraging him." Brick said
"I got this." Sam said
Sam turned to the pancakes with a determined look on his faces.
"Ready?... Go!" Chris said
The minute started and Sam immediately started scarfing down the pancakes. The Maggots cheered him on as he ate.
"10...9...8...7...6" Chris counted
"C'mon Sam you just have one left!" Brick shouted
Sam looked and saw one pancake left on the plate. He tried his best to hold back from puking.
"I knew Gamer Boy couldn't do it." Jo said
"It's not Gamer Boy.." Sam muttered "IT'S GAME MAN!"
Sam took the last pancake and shoved it down his mouth. He swallowed it and stood up.
" The Mutant Maggots finally earn a point!" Chris said "The score is now 2-1."
Sam smiled as he farted. His teammates recoiled in disgust.
"There goes the tiny amount of respect I had for you." Jo said as she covered her nose "Ugh."
The tv spun and landed on Max with a halo next to it.
"Max what do you fear most?" Chris asked
" I think you are confused Mclean." Max said "I am the EVIL villain of this cast. If anything, people are afraid of me."
"I don't even need the chicken to see that was a lie." Chris said
Chris pressed a button and The Toxic Rats were shocked. The tv spun and landed on Dawn with a flame.
"Dawn I hope you brought your appetite." Chris said "Because you'll be eating McRonalds."
Chef tossed a bag of greasy fast food at Dawn.
"Complete with Greasyburgers, Grease fries and a little greasy toy."
" You can't honestly expect me to eat this." Dawn said "I'm a vegan and McRonald's is an evil soulless company."
"It's just some stupid burger!" Jo said "Eat it or well get shocked!"
" No." Dawn said "Some poor animal was killed to make that atrocity."
Chris pressed the remote and The Mutant Maggots were shocked.
"I-If you don't want it then.." Sam said as he swiped the McRonalds from Dawn
" You're still hungry?" Cameron asked
Sam nodded as he chowed down on the McRonalds. The tv spun and landed on Brick with a flame next to it.
"Brick if you would stand up and follow Chef." Chris said
Brick stood up and followed Chef as he took him to a dark cave.
"So what's my scare?" Brick asked
"This!"
Chef shoved Brick inside the cave.
"Stay in the cave for the remainder of the challenge and your team earns a point." Chef said "Good luck soldier."
"Wait don't leave me here!"
Chef walked back to the challenge area.
"What happened to Brick?" Zoey asked
"You'll find out in due time." Chris said
The tv spun and landed on Jo with a flame next to it.
"I was hoping I'd get a scare." Jo said happily
Chris pulled out a frilly, girly dress covered in sparkles and glitter. Jo's jaw dropped as some of the cast mates laughed.
"It looks pretty." Ella said
"To earn a point." Chris said "You have to put this on and wear it for the remainder of the challenge."
"Hell no!"
"It's just some stupid dress." Dawn said in a mocking tone "Wear it or we will all be electrocuted."
Jo growled as she stood up and swiped the dress from Chris.
"Jo's Confessional"
"I do this only for the good of the team."
After taking a minute to change, Jo re-entered wearing the dress.
"I don't want to hear a word from anyone." Jo said
"That's two points for the Mutant Maggots!"
"Thanks Jo." Zoey said "I know this must be hard for you."
Jo scoffed as the tv spun and landed on Shawn with a flame next to it.
"Pick your nose and wipe it on the person next to you."
Shawn was sitting on the far edge of the log and saw the only person sitting next to him was Dave.
"Don't even think about it." Dave said
"Sorry dude." Shawn said " A point's a point."
Shawn started picking his nose. Dave's eyes widened as he stood up.
"S-Seriously don't.." Dave said as his face turned green
Shawn stopped picking and revealed a giant booger. Dave ran away in terror as he screamed.
"Only one shot..." Shawn said to himself "Can't miss this."
Shawn got his booger in place for flicking. He flicked it across as it landed on the back of Dave's shirt.
"I'm hit!" Dave said as he fell to the ground
"Woo-hoo!" Shawn said "Another point for us."
"Not exactly." Chris said "I said to wipe not flick. So no point for you."
"What? C'mon man that's total bull-" Shawn said before he was interrupted
Chris pressed the remote and shocked the Toxic Rats. The tv screen spun and landed on Dave with a halo next to it.
"Thank god.." Dave said "I've had enough disgustingness for one day."
"Tell us Dave." Chris said "Do you like anyone on the island in a romantic way?"
"Nope."
...
Chris used the remote to shock the Toxic Rats. Dave crawled back over to the log.
"Dude you never told me you had a crush on somebody." Shawn whispered
"I-I'm still in the process of figuring things out." Dave whispered back
"Dave's Confessional"
"In my audition tape, I promised to play ruthlessly and only have eyes for the money. Can't have any distractions."
" I don't care if she has dark silky hair, alluring eyes and a sweet smile. I'm not gonna fall for her."
Dave found himself blushing and sighed.
"Yeah I'm falling for her."
Rodney laughed as he slapped Dave on the back.
"Guess were more alike than I thought." Rodney said "If you actually manage to score a girlfriend we should do a double date."
"Sounds delightful." Dave said sarcastically
The tv screen spun and landed on Amy with a halo next to it.
" Amy do you actually love Rodney?" Chris asked "Or are you just stringing him along for a vote?"
Amy's eyes widened as she thought about what to say.
" The clock is ticking Amy." Sammy said as she smiled
...
...
...
"I love Rodney." Amy said unenthuastically
Clucky stayed silent and Chris pressed the remote. The Toxic Rats were electrocuted.
"Okay fine! I don't love him at all." Amy said " I just needed a big strong guy to do whatever I say and he fit the description."
"I thought we had something special Amy." Rodney said
"We've never even held hands." Amy said "I gave you no indications that I liked you and you still drooled all over me. It's not my fault that you're stupid."
Rodney gasped dramatically.
"Rodney's Confessional"
"Amy used me?"
Rodney slapped himself several times.
"Man up Rodney! Tears are for the weak..."
Despite his best efforts, Rodney started crying.
"Guess there won't be any double date then." Dave said
Rodney glared at Dave who quickly shut up.
"3-2. In favor of the Rats."
The tv screen spun and landed on Sammy with a halo next to it.
"Why do you think your sister hates you?" Chris asked
" I'm not exactly sure why..." Sammy said "She started acting cruel to me after this one incident. But that can't possibly be it."
"Spill the beans." Topher said " Might be good for ratings. Right Chris?"
"Yes Topher." Chris said as he frowned
"Sammy's Flashback"
It was during our sixth birthday party at Chonky Cheese. Amy and I both ordered our favorite food in the world, french fries. I admittedly thought the french fries were just for me. So I ate them all as Amy went to go use the bathroom. She was pretty mad when she came back.
"Y-You ate my fries?" Amy asked with tears in her eyes
" Yeah." Sammy said
Amy started bawling her eyes out as she threw a temper tantrum.
"I hate you Sammy! I hate you! I hate you!"
" Ten years later and still no apology." Amy remarked bitterly
"Y-You're joking right?" Sammy asked "A-All the bullying and hatred was over some french fries?"
" My fries! You ate them and never apologized for it." Amy said " I never forget grudges."
Sammy bawled up her fists in rage as she tackled Amy and the two started fighting once again.
"You're a petty monster!" Sammy said "I wish we never sisters!"
"Ditto you french-fry stealer!" Amy said
Chris was watching the whole scene while enjoying some popcorn.
"Shouldn't you be doing something?" Dave asked
"Shh." Chris said "This is getting good."
Sky and Dave ran over as they tried to separate the two. Sky took Sammy to one side of the log as Dave took Amy to the opposite side.
"This isn't over!" Sammy/ Amy yelled
" Bawk-bawk!" Clucky said
"Clucky determines that was a truth." Chris said
The tv screen spun and landed on Anne Maria with a flame next to it.
"Have Chef shave all of your hair off."
"Hard pass." Anne Maria said "Nobody touches the poof."
"Am I the only one who wants to win?!" Jo asked angrily
Chris pressed the remote and shocked the Mutant Maggots. The tv screen spun and landed on Vito with a halo next to it.
"Ooh this is a good one." Chris said
"Chris that information seems kinda personal." Chef said
"Relax." Chris said "Now Vito do you have Dissociative Identity Disorder?"
Vito was quickly filled with anger as he got up. Lightning had to restrain him from attacking Chris.
"You crossed a line Mclean!" Vito yelled " You're fucking dead, ya hear me?!"
"I need a answer Vito." Chris said as he smiled
"Fuck you." Vito said
Chris pressed the remote and shocked the Mutant Maggots.
"What's he talking bout Vito?" Anne Maria asked
"U-Uhh..." Vito said " We'll talk later."
"Vito's Confessional"
"Let's just say there's a reason I don't talk about it and leave at that."
Vito sighed.
"I guess there goes any shot of me getting with Anne Maria. She'll never like me now that she knows I'm a freak."
The tv screen spun and landed on Lightning with a flame next to it.
"Go the rest of the day without saying sha." Chris said
"Sha-easy!" Lightning said "Ah shit."
Chris pressed the remote and shocked the Mutant Maggots. The tv screen spun and landed on Sky with a flame next to it.
"Drink an entire jug of mineral water in one minute."
Chef handed Sky the jug.
" Your time starts now!" Chris said
Sky took as many small sips as she could. Her teammates groaned at her drinking methods.
"Hurry up foul creature!" Max said
"I can drink maple syrup faster than that." Sugar commented
" I'm doing my best." Sky said "Back off."
"I have an idea." Shawn said as he stood up
Dave immediately sat him back down.
" You've done enough weird stuff for one day." Dave said
Sky continued to drink but it was of no avail.
"Time's up!"
Chris pressed the remote and The Toxic Rats were electrocuted. The tv screen spun and landed on Scott with a flame next to it.
" Scott there are scares, scarier scares and then this." Chris said "Kiss a person next to you."
Scott looked to his left and saw Lightning.
"It's cool dude." Lightning said "Lightning don't judge."
Scott rolled his eyes as he looked to his right and saw Dawn.
"So it's either the mega jock or the weirdo?" Scott asked "What great choices."
"If you're too scared of kissing someone you can just say so." Dawn said
"Me? Scared? In your dreams Fairy Princess." Scott said
"Then why don't you prove it?" Dawn asked
"Maybe I will!" Scott said as he was started to get flustered
"Scott's Confessional"
"Why did I get stuck with this stupid kissing dare?!"
"The only advice Pappy gave me on dating was if you're ever in Holland. Go Dutch."
...
"Ohhhh. Now I get it."
Scott tried leaning forward to kiss Dawn. Dawn got tired of waiting and gave him a quick peck on the lips.
"Scott earns a point for the Maggots with a little help from Dawn!" Chris said "How do you feel Scott?"
Scott mumbled something incoherent as he tried to hide a dopey grin. The tv screen spun and landed on Ella with a halo next to it.
"Ella how do you really feel about Sugar?" Chris asked
" Even though we don't get along, I feel deep down Sugar is a good person." Ella said
...
Chris pressed the remote and shocked the Toxic Rats.
" You can lie to yourself Ella." Chris said "But you can't lie to Clucky."
" I knew it!" Sugar said as she stood up "I knew she was a fake nice girl and yall didn't believe me! Ha! Sugar is smart and yall are dumb!"
Sugar did a little jig to celebrate.
"What happened back there?" Sky asked
"I don't know.." Ella said "I've never disliked anyone before. So Sugar has to be my friend right?"
""Not necessarily." Sky said
The tv spun one last time and landed on Sugar with a halo next to it.
"Now were down to our final truth of the day." Chris said " This could very well determine who wins. Sugar how do you really feel about Ella?"
Sugar smiled as she pulled out a piece of paper from her pocket.
"I was inspired by Ella to make a poem of my own." Sugar said "Roses are red, Violets are blue, Ella is a no good-"
The rest of Sugar's poem was so obscene and offensive that it was bleeped out. Chris and the cast stared in shock as Sugar read her poem.
"The end." Sugar said happily "Man that was therapeutic."
"Bawk-bawk!" Clucky said
"Clucky determines that was a truth." Chris said
"Can we actually air that on live tv?" Chef asked
" I'll have the editors work around it." Chris said " The Rats are currently in the lead. I'll go check on Brick, if he completed his scare then that means we have a tie."
Chris and Chef walked over to the dark cave to check on Brick.
"Brick? You still there?" Chris asked
Chef walked inside of the cave and dragged Brick out. He was rocking back and forth as he sucked on his thumb. Chris smelled something and waved his hands.
"Ew why do I smell pee?!"
" I think Private Piss Boy is to blame." Chef said
" Well at least he scored a point for his team." Chris said
Chef and Chris walked back to the challenge area with Brick.
" Brick completed his scare." Chris said "Which means it's time for the timebreaker. Rats choose one member from the Maggots to compete. Maggots choose one member from the Rats to compete."
"Cameron." The Toxic Rats said in unison
Cameron sighed as the Mutant Maggots tried to strategize.
" We should send the scrawny germ kid." Anne Maria said "He freaked out over a booger and couldn't do a truth. We're set either way."
"That actually makes sense." Jo said "Nice work tan job."
"Chris we choose Dave." Zoey said
"Cameron and Dave please step forward."
Cameron and Dave got up and walked over to Chris. Chris handed them each a bag.
" When I say go you'll have to untie the bag and grab the remote inside of it." Chris said "By pressing the button you will shock the other team and win the challenge. Any questions?"
"Several actually." Cameron said
"I don't care." Chris said "Go!"
The two teams cheered for Cameron and Dave as they tried to untie their bags. Cameron was having trouble opening his, so he tried using his glasses to reflect off of the sun and burn the ropes. After a while Dave was able to undo the bag and grab the remote.
"Good work dude!" Shawn cheered "Now shock em!"
Dave was about to press the button and electrocute the other team until Cameron had an idea. He coughed loudly onto Dave without covering his mouth. Dave started to freak out about the potential germs. This gave Cameron enough time to burn the ropes and retrieve the remote.
" On the bright side the shock should probably burn all of the germs off." Cameron said
"Wait-" Dave said before he was interrupted
Cameron pressed the button and The Toxic Rats were electrocuted.
"Cameron wins the tiebreaker and secures victory for the Mutant Maggots!" Chris said "Toxic Rats, I'll be seeing you at the campfire pit tonight."
The Mutant Maggots ran over to congratulate Cameron. As the Toxic Rats were getting ready to leave. Sammy pulled aside Amy to whisper something in her ear.
As the Maggots were walking back to the campgrounds. Cameron wanted to use this opportunity to talk to Dawn.
"Um.. why did you kiss Scott earlier?" Cameron asked "I thought you wanted to take him down to avenge B."
" Cameron have you ever heard of the phrase." Dawn said " Keep your friends close and your enemies closer?"
"Of course that phrase was first said by the philosopher known as Sun Zhu."
"Well that is exactly what I'm doing." Dawn said " I can already tell Scott's feelings about me are beginning to change. And that will be his downfall."
"Y-Yeah that makes sense." Cameron said "I was worried you liked him or something."
"Why would you be worried about that?" Dawn asked curiously
"Uhhhhh... no reason at all." Cameron said "Actually think I have to go now. Bye!"
Cameron ran off in a hurry as Dawn chuckled.
Anne Maria and Vito sat on the steps of the Maggots cabin. Vito was trying his best to explain his condition to her.
"So it's like you have all these different people in your head?" Anne Maria asked
"To put it basically yeah." Vito said "I wasn't trying to keep secrets from your or anything. I just didn't want you to think I was a freak."
" Vito baby you're still the same tough greaser dude who looks totally banging." Anne Maria said "No disorder or whatever is gonna change that."
"You mean it?"
"Of course."
" I meant the part about me looking totally banging." Vito said flirtatiously
Anne Maria smiled as the two leaned closer. Some time had passed as Cameron made his way back to the cabin.
"That was a close one.." Cameron said to himself
Once there he saw Anne Maria and Vito holding onto each other and passionately making out.
"Them too? Is there anymore lovey dovey stuff I have to see today?!" Cameron asked himself
Cameron looked over and saw Lightning kissing his biceps.
"Sha-beautiful." Lightning said
Cameron screamed and ran away once again.
"What? Nothing wrong with loving yourself." Lightning asked "Sha-prude."
Chris had called the Toxic Rats over to the campfire pit for the elimination ceremony.
" Toxic Rats two losses in a row." Chris said "Who do you think is to blame for your collective failure?"
" It's pretty obvious." Sugar said as she jabbed a finger at Ella
Ella decided not to say anything.
"In any case." Chris said "It's time to vote."
"Ella's Confessional"
"Sugar made it very clear during the challenge that she hates me."
" I wish we could be friends. But sometimes you have to accept the fact everyone won't like you."
"In any case, I think I'll be voting for myself. My time on this show hasn't exactly been pleasant."
"Sky's Confessional"
"For our team to truly be effective we need to stop all this bullying and hated. Which is exactly why you need to go."
"Sammy's Confessional"
"I decided to take Sky's advice and call a temporary truce. I even apologized to Amy for eating her french fries. Even though she's extremely stupid for holding a petty grudge for that long."
"I think Ella's dealing with her very own Amy and I don't know if she can deal with it any longer. I wanna help her out.. if I can."
"Amy's Confessional"
"Finally Samey admitted she's a french fry stealing thief."
" I'll throw her a bone this one time and vote her way."
"The votes are in." Chris said "The following players are safe."
"Dave!"
"Max!"
"Rodney!"
"Sammy!"
"Scarlett!"
"Shawn!"
"Sky!"
"and sadly Topher is also safe."
Everyone whose name was called went up to receive their marshmallow.
"Amy, Ella and Sugar you're all on the chopping block." Chris said "Amy you played with Rodney's heart and treat your sister like garbage. Is that enough to send you packing?"
"Not really." Amy said "I don't think I did anything wrong."
"Ella and Sugar you two seem to have a feud of your own." Chris said "And it's ending tonight because one of you will be going home."
Chris tossed a marshmallow at Amy.
"The Toxic Marshmallow of Loserdom goes to..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."
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"Sugar!"
Ella gasped as Chef threw the toxic marshmallow at Sugar
"Excuse me?! You all saw how fake Ella is." Sugar said "She's supposed to go home not me!"
"All because Ella dislikes you doesn't mean she's fake." Sky said " I can't say I'm a huge fan of you either."
"Fuck you Sky. You wish you were as pretty as I was." Sugar said
"No I really don't."
"I bet it was you." Sugar said as she turned to Ella "You set this all up to take me out? I knew you were a no good-"
"I wish you the best of luck in whatever you choose to do with your life." Ella said calmly "Goodbye Sugar."
Ella turned away and headed back to the cabin. The others took her example and left the campfire pit.
"Where ya'll going?!" Sugar asked "I ain't finish speaking yet!"
Chef grabbed Sugar's arm and dragged her across the Dock of Shame.
Sugar sat in the Hurl of Shame as no one was there to see her go.
"Seems like you weren't very well liked huh?" Chris asked
"I think competitions shouldn't be based on points but rather on general awesomeness." Sugar said "Which means I should not be in this catapult!"
Chef flung the catapult and sent Sugar flying into the night sky.
"Thank you Chef." Chris said "The island is now 100% sugar free. What kind of sweet challenge do I have planned for next time? You'll have to stay tuned to find out on TOTAL DRAMA ABSOLUTE REVENGE!"
Here's the fifth chapter of Total Drama: Absolute Revenge. If you enjoyed it then leave a review and favorite.
Sugar was the one to go this time. I enjoy her character but I had the least amount of plot ideas for her. Onto the chapter itself. I wanted to take advantage of the truth or scare game to get Amy to reveal why she hates Sammy so much. I tried to think of a super serious reason. Nothing really came to mind. So I went in the opposite direction and Amy just hates Sammy for a very stupid and petty reason. Considering how childish and immature Amy is, I think it fits.
The second thing was to end this Sugar vs Ella arc. I've seen people say Ella should stand up to Sugar and yell at her like Lindsay did to Heather. I honestly can't see that happening. Ella's main flaw is that she's too nice of a person and people take advantage of it. So I don't think she'd suddenly grow a backbone out of nowhere and cuss out Sugar. As opposed to Sammy who has shown to be able to stand up for herself in canon. Sometimes the most mature thing to do is ignore someone and walk away from the situation.
Ironically I'm finishing this chapter the night of Thanksgiving. I hope everyone who reads this has a good holiday.
Voting Results
Amy- Sugar
Dave- Sugar
Ella- Ella
Max- Ella
Rodney- Amy
Sammy- Sugar
Scarlett- Sugar
Shawn- Sugar
Sky- Sugar
Sugar- Ella
Topher- Sugar
Elimination Order:
Dakota-24th, B-23rd, Jasmine-22nd, Sugar-21st "The Pageant Queen"