Cody Fanatic- And Sugar's gone and I'm okay with it. Amy hating Sammy for a petty reason does seem likely and it was funny so good job.
Me- Thanks. I find it funny how everyone was shocked and sad over Jasmine leaving but no one really cares that Sugar got booted. Tis the duality of man.
Dunsparce519- Another great chapter here! I agree that Sugar really earned her elimination, and I really liked how Ella managed to see that Sugar never liked her. And the reason Amy hates Sammy is because of something so petty is actually a good choice here, considering who Amy is.
So, Rodney sees through Amy's ruse, Dawn's working to get Scott gone by getting close to him, Anne-Maria and Vito are getting closer, and Shawn's noticing the weird stuff on the island. Can't wait for the next chapter to come.
Me- Thanks. In canon it felt like they were pushing how naive Ella could be. I could see maybe for the first two or three episodes. But I think by episode 6, Ella should've understood that Sugar hated her.
LaCuevademigustos- Ah, Truth or Dares, simple yet awesome for plot devices.
Shawn is now in the deep hunt for the Idol, Dave gonna give some good explaination after that, while also figuring out how yo confess his feelings.
The twins have achieve some temporal peace, And yeah, i agree, if You can't Think a deep, understandable And lógic reason for hate... Just make it a f*ing cartoon (which it is, but, a cartoon of the cartoon)
Dawn is playing her cards to take out Scott, And she might succed, And i can just imagine Jo face after seeing The dress. And Vito is now The center piece whit split personality? Well thats interesting.
Coming to The elimination, it was not soo sweet Sugar who got her just deserves after her constant BS. Bye bye. And yeah i kinda agree Ella wouldnt scream to her, maybe if they díd a afther Pahk season And Sugar would continue her bullying or actually play her frienship to take her out. Then, yeah i can see Ella just plain Slaping Sugar. Here... Not so much.
Me- A second season for the Pahkitew characters would be cool.
amit avrashmi- Great chapter, I agree that it's totally in character for amy to hate Sammy for something this stupid but I have a few suggestions for something serious like she being favorited by their grandparents or the darker one I have (also I have to say it's already used and it's from pahki2: back to Canada, where is their biological mother comit suicide and amy had to watch her do so while Sammy has no idea and amy despise how their dad new wife gives preference to Sammy because she doesn't know the reason for their mother death)
Me- Those sound like interesting reasons. I think it's possible that Amy could have a very serious reason for hating Sammy.
MemeKing the Third- Man, I really felt bad for Rodney after reading this. Hope he knows he'll eventually find the right girl. And I honestly liked your take on the reason the twins feud. Something as possibly childish and petty like eating someone's fries sounds about right.
Can't say im upset to see Sugar go. Was never really the biggest fan of her, and the elimination felt very satisfying, not gonna lie.
All in all, I can't wait to see the next chapter, and I hope you also had a nice Thanksgiving.
Me- Rip Rodney.
I'm glad a lot of people like the elimination lol.
lordgemini- - Spoilers incoming –
And the next episode is here, and was one of my favorites, the truth or dare challenge. I like a lot the way you make it and many of the decisions you take in it. Alos I guess the elimination again, wow :P. But let's focus in the story.
We start looking at the teams. Shawn is focused on finding the idol because he needs some kind of protection now that Jasmine is out of the game, but instead he discovers the island is a mechanical one, only that he hadn't realized it. He tells Dave but the germaphobe isn't still Shawn's friend, so he ignores it. Dave also feels guilty about voting Jasmine after Amy forced him.
On the girl's side, Sammy and Amy are fighting worst than ever, and Sky tries to get them working together, but it doesn't seem like that would work. Just at that moment Chris call everyone for the challenge, and OMG what challenge we had.
It was the truth or dare like in PI, including the collars that gave electric shocks when you lie or fail. I love how the truths advanced many of the plotlines, while the dares keeps things interesting.
On the Rat's side, Amy break Rodney's heart and accepted she was faking, this was hard for the big farmer. Sammy discovered why Amy hated her and was a fun and different way to do it, really cartoonish but works for me. Dave discovered he may have feelings for Sky. Sugar broke Ella's heart while Ella discovered she may not like Sugar that much. Topher showed his true colors, and he may not like Chris that much. Alos it was weird inthis universe Sky failed the water challenge, but it was also different, so I enjoyed it.
And the Maggot's also did a great job. Sam proved he was not a load for the team, even if he was disgusting. Zoey told Lightning she didn't like him which surprised everyone, because she is usually kind and friendly. But the most shocking was Vito, I didn't expect him having DID, but was a nice surprise, it's a great secret and really fit him.
My only wonder Is Dawn, I like your interpretation is strong-willed and more decisive than in the original show. But kissing Scott just to manipulate him seems like going too far. I hope she has other intentions besides what she told Cameron. Even if Scott is a bastard, no one deserves something like that (someone playing with your feelings). Even then I enjoy your Dawn a lot.
At the end both teams are tied and Dave confronts Cameron in the same tiebreaker as in the original, untie a pouch and shock the other team. Cameron uses Dave Mysophobia to beat him and get the win. Here I was afraid Dave was the one going
But in an exciting turn Sugar was the one voted out, thanks to her mean poem toward Ella. I like it, especially after the twin's truce. She was strong but unpredictable and was a problem for the teamwork, so it was the right choice.
For the next one I am cuorious about Dawn x Scott plot, what will Rodney do after being heart broken, what will happen with Vito, and of course, the elimination. This is a tough one, I think the Maggot's will lose, and Sam is going home. If it's the Rats again I think Rodney, Dave or Max are in more danger. Happy belated thanksgiving and hope to read you soon.
Me- Yeah the challenge was a good way to get several plots moving forward.
Yeah kissing someone to mess with them is pretty messed up. But the plot isn't over yet.
The guys in the Mutant Maggot cabin were peacefully sleeping until they heard a loud scream.
"D-Did my alarm clock go off already?" Brick asked as he woke up
The guys huddled around Sam who was frantically searching his bed.
"What's the matter soft-serve?" Scott asked
" My gameguy's gone!" Sam said
"You're not even supposed to bring video games here." Brick said "Maybe Chris took it?"
"I had this one well hidden." Sam said "There's no way Chris could've known about it."
"Maybe whoever took it was doing you a favor." Brick said "Video games are a waste of time anyways."
Sam gasped dramatically.
"How dare you!" Sam said "Y'know I'm starting to believe you might've taken it!"
"Sam calm down." Brick said "We can look for your-"
Before Brick could finish his sentence Sam rushed over to Brick's bed and started searching for his Gameguy. Brick walked over and pried Sam off of his bed.
"That's enough soldier!" Brick yelled " Give me fifty push ups! Now!"
Sam whimpered as he got on the ground and started doing push ups.
"Now that is how a man handles a problem." Lightning said "Nice going dude."
"It was nothing." Brick said " You haven't seen real discipline until you've gone to boot camp."
"C-Can I stop now?" Sam asked
"Negatory."
"Sam's Confessional"
"I feel bad for flipping out earlier but this is the longest I've gone without a video game. Eight hours, seventeen minutes and six seconds!"
"I think I'm starting to lose my mind..."
The guys at the Toxic Rats cabin were facing a similar problem.
"All in favor of smothering him to death with our pillows and making it look like an accident?" Max asked
...
"Dude what the fuck is wrong with you." Dave said
"Lots of things." Max said "But that's besides the point. Something needs to be done about him!"
Max pointed at a blubbering Rodney who was crying loudly in his bed.
"I forgot." Topher said "Why is he crying?"
"He was getting used by his crush." Shawn said "You were there when it happened."
"Oh yeah.." Topher said "Sorry I don't usually remember scenes involving the extras."
Shawn frowned at that comment.
"Well I remember this one time I had a crush on a girl at summer camp." Dave said "Then it turned out she had a boyfriend back home the whole time. I stayed in my cabin and cried my eyes out for like two days. I felt really better after that. So maybe he just needs some time."
"We don't have time." Max said "I want to go to sleep now!"
Max walked over and searched for stuff in his backpack. He pulled out an ant farm and dumped the ants onto Rodney's bed. Rodney momentarily stopped crying to notice the ants. He screamed as he rolled out of his bed and ran out of the cabin. Max and Topher laughed at him as he left.
"Look at his stupid face!" Max said as he laughed
"Rodney's Confessional"
"I've been trying to not let the Amy thing get to me. But it's hard man.."
"Everytime I try to forget about her. Memories of her start flooding back in. Her pretty face, her pretty hair, the way she would yell at me to do stuff."
"Oh Amy why did you leave me?!"
Rodney broke out into tears once again.
Owen was in the bathroom staring at himself in the mirror.
"I think this is the Anti-Balding cream Heather used." Owen said to himself
He tried putting it on his dry bald scalp.
"C'mon hair grow.."
Owen impatiently waited for his hair to grow back. The door opened and two black interns entered the bathroom. One was tall and lanky while the other sported a large afro.
"Yo Owen are you done cleaning the bathroom-" The large afro guy said before he saw the bathroom "Dude seriously?!"
"What?"
" You always slack off!" The large afro guy said angrily " Chris is gonna fucking fire us man."
"Beardo you need to relax." Owen said "I've been screwing up constantly and Chris hasn't fired me yet."
"Yeah because you're a Total Drama fan favorite and producer's pet." Beardo said "Were two nobodies who didn't even get accepted onto the show."
"The show missed out on having me." The tall lanky guy said "I was gonna dress up in a wizard's costume and troll everyone."
"Seriously? That actually sounds pretty funny Leonard." Owen said
"Finally someone who appreciates my genius!" Leonard said
"Okay were obviously not gonna get this done in time." Beardo said "We need a scapegoat to blame this on."
The door swung open again and a chubby white intern entered the bathroom.
"Yah my great great great great great great great great great grandmother invented bathrooms before her people just took a shit on the floor."
Beardo, Leonard and Owen all looked at each other with a devious smile.
The camera cut to Staci sitting in the Hurl of Shame.
"Yah I swear I wasn't on bathroom duty today!" Staci said "Please don't hurl me!"
"Owen told me you were and I believe him over you anyday." Chris said "So sayonara... whatever your name is."
Chris pulled the lever and sent Staci flying into the morning sunrise. Beardo, Leonard and Owen watched her fly off.
"Alright I gotta go start the challenge." Chris said "You three go do intern stuff or whatever."
The three nodded as Chris walked away. He used the loudspeaker to call all the contestants over for the next challenge. The two teams sat on a row of bleachers as Chris stood before them on a stage.
"Greetings fashionistas." Chris said "Your first challenge is something I like to call the Fashion Spectacular!"
" Fashion? Now were talking." Anne Maria said
"Waste of time if you ask me." Jo said
"So says the girl in men's prison sweats." Anne Maria said
"At least my skin doesn't look like a tangerine." Jo quipped back
The two girls glared at each other. Chris used his airhorn to shut them up.
" Each team will have to choose three models to dress up." Chris said "Once the time is up you'll be walking down the runway as you get judged by myself, Chef and today's classic competitor."
A TD classic competitor popped out of one of the suitcases.
"Ta-da!" Lindsay said
"Lindsay! You were supposed to wait for your cue." Chris said
"Sorry."
"Anyways your time starts now!"
The two teams ran on top of the stage to collect clothes, make-up and other accessories. Once they had that, it was time to decide who were going to be the models.
" Chris said we needed three models." Cameron said "So obviously we should go with Anne Maria, Dawn and Zoey."
"What do you mean obviously?" Jo asked " Why am I not an option?"
" Well...um... how do I put this nicely." Cameron muttered
"You're not really model material." Anne Maria said
Jo frowned as she walked back to the bleachers.
"Where are you going?" Cameron asked
"I'm sitting out of this lame challenge." Jo said "Call me when something exciting happens."
"Her loss." Anne Maria said as she shrugged
Anne Maria and Zoey started picking out what clothes they wanted to wear. Dawn was having a little trouble.
"Everything okay?" Brick asked
"Fashion isn't really my thing." Dawn said "Most of the clothes here are made from animal fur and I refuse to wear it."
"Hmm..." Brick said "Y'know I could try making you a dress."
"That would be most helpful." Dawn said "Thank you Brick."
"No problem!"
"Brick's Confessional"
"Ever since I was a boy, I've been interested in fashion."
"Not really something I'd admit around my military buddies. But I'm happy I can help out with this challenge."
"I have to be a model." Topher said "I was practically born for the role. Look at my handsome face!"
"I guess that's one person down." Dave said "We still need two more people."
" Ooh I wanna do it!" Ella said as she raised her hand
"And with me that'll make three." Amy said
" Actually I was thinking we could go in a different direction." Dave said "Sky's been doing great in challenges so far. So maybe it should be her."
"Me? A model?" Sky said "I don't know.. I've never really been into that sort of thing."
"I think you'd be great." Dave said "You already have the looks of a model."
Dave realized how that sounded and coughed nervously.
"What I meant was-"
Shawn pulled Dave aside to save him from further embarrassment.
"Anyways I wouldn't even know what to wear if I did do this challenge." Sky said "Just let Amy do it."
Rodney sighed loudly at the mention of Amy.
"Thank you Sky for having common sense." Amy said "Now time to work my magic."
Amy, Ella and Topher started picking out what clothes they wanted to wear. The others took this moment to relax. Shawn and Dave sat back down on the bleachers.
" Is Sky the girl you like?" Shawn asked
"W-What are you talking about?" Dave asked as he got flustered
" I noticed you start acting really goofy when she's around." Shawn said "I figured either you were in love or taken over by an alien parasite. The first option seemed more plausible."
"Great work detective." Dave said sarcastically "Do you want a medal?"
"Dude c'mon." Shawn said "Can't you just talk about it, instead of being all secretive?"
Dave was unable to come up with a response. Shawn scoffed as he got up.
"I thought we were friends." Shawn said
Shawn walked away from the bleachers as Dave sighed.
"Shawn's Confessional"
"It kinda irks me when people keep secrets. Why feel the need to hide something?"
"Eh whatever. I was better off alone anyways."
Some time had passed as Chris rang a buzzer, indicating the fashion challenge was done. The others sat down on the bleachers as the three judges sat at the judging table.
"Starting us off will be the Mutant Maggots." Chris said "Go in whichever order you like."
Dawn nervously stepped onto the stage wearing a dress that was entirely made up of leaves. She walked across the runway and sheepishly waved at the judges.
"What the heck is that? Did you just jump into a leaf pile and call it a day?" Chris asked
"Say what you want but I am proud to be wearing this dress." Dawn said
Chef and Chris rated her outfit a 2/10. Lindsay rated her outfit a 6/10.
"I would like totally wear it during the fall." Lindsau said
"Thank you Lindsay."
Dawn disappeared from the stage as Anne Maria was the next one to hit the runway. She was wearing leopard print pants along with a blue jean jacket over a purple top.
She walked across the runway in purple high heels as she was now face to face with the judges.
"How bout it? I look totally banging right?" Anne Maria said
"Totally! That's like a really cute outfit." Lindsay said
Chef and Chris gave Anne Maria a 6/10. Lindsay gave her a 8/10.
"Aw yeah! I got it going on."
Anne Maria tried walking back but tripped on her heels and fell off of the runway.
"Ouch..." Chris said "Zoey you're up."
Zoey was nervously standing behind the curtains in her dress.
"I shouldn't have done this.." Zoey said to herself "What if everyone hates my dress? Oh I'm way in over my head."
A certain ginger noticed Zoey's insecurities and walked up to her.
"Couldn't help but notice ya." Scott said "You're shaking more than a deer caught in headlights."
"Oh hey! I'm fine.." Zoey said "Just a little nervous is all."
"Can't blame you for feeling that way." Scott said "If you mess up this challenge that'll give us a reason to vote you off."
"R-Really?"
"Yep. That's a lot of pressure to be under." Scott said "Glad I'm not doing this stupid challenge."
Scott whistled as he walked away. Zoey was now more nervous than ever.
"Scott's Confessional"
"I figured it wouldn't hurt to steer Zoey in the wrong direction. I need my team to lose this challenge so we can boot Sam."
Scott pulled a Gameguy out of his pocket.
"Otherwise I stole his dumb toy for no reason."
Growing tired of waiting, Chef walked backstage and pushed Zoey. Zoey stumbled onto the runway wearing a 60's go-go dress with her hair looking similar to Jimmy Neutron's mom. She walked across the runway and stood in front of the judges.
"Pfft you look like my mom." Chris said trying to hold back laughter
He couldn't hold it in anymore and laughed at Zoey. Max and Amy joined in the laughter. Zoey's eyes began to tear up as she jumped off the stage and ran off crying.
"For making me laugh." Chris said "I'll give her seven points."
"That was like super rude Chip. Making girls cry just makes you look weak and insecure." Lindsay said
"Whatever." Chris said "Just rate the dress."
Lindsay gave Zoey a 9/10. Chef gave Zoey a 6/10.
"The Mutant Maggots earned a total of fifty two points!" Chris said "Will the Rats be able to beat that? Find out after the break."
Zoey was sitting on the steps of the Mutant Maggots cabin, crying to herself as she buried her face in her hands. Two interns passed by and noticed this.
"Should we do something?" Owen asked
"Chris told us not to interact with contestants unless it's an emergency." Beardo said
"I think that counts as an emergency."
"No it really doesn't."
Beardo kept on walking as Owen stood there. He picked up a flower off of the ground as he walked over and handed it to Zoey.
"H-huh?"
"For what it's worth." Owen said "I thought you were pretty cool."
"Y-you don't mean that."
"I do really! Your hair looks like red licorice and it makes my stomach happy." Owen said
"Thanks?" Zoey said, confused by the compliment
Owen's stomach began to rumble.
"Speaking of red licorice." Owen said "I'm gonna go get some. See ya."
Owen walked away as Zoey looked at the flower. She took the flower and put it in her hair. She smiled as she got up and walked back to the challenge area. Once back there, she saw the judges were looking at Amy's dress. She was wearing a long dark red dress with a rose pinned on her dress.
"Simple but I like it." Chris said
Chris and Chef gave Amy a 7/10. Lindsay gave Amy a 6/10.
"Um.. I beg your fucking pardon." Amy said "A six?!"
"Oh it was supposed to be a nine." Lindsay said "But for your nasty attitude, I'll keep it as a six."
Amy snarled as she walked off of the stage. Ella walked down the runway wearing a big poofy Disney princess dress with sparkles and glitter on top of it.
"Not digging all the sparkles and glitter." Chris said
Chris gave Ella a 6/10. Chef gave Ella a 9/10.
"I wish my dresses looked as good as that." Chef said sadly
"Aw Chef." Lindsay said "All your dresses are super cute."
Chef smiled as Lindsay gave Ella a 9/10.
"Thank you all so much!" Ella said as she took a bow
Ella happily skipped off the stage as it was now Topher's turn. He confidently strutted onto stage wearing a light blue tuxedo with a bright red bowtie. He made his way to the judges and shot fingerguns at them.
"Can't help but notice it looks oddly similar to the suit I wore at the Gemmy Awards." Chris said unethuasiastically
" I was inspired by your work Chris!" Topher said "You always had a great eye for fashion."
Chris yawned as he gave Topher a 4/10. Topher audibly gasped at this.
"The sucking up routine is starting to get old kid." Chef said
Chef gave Topher a 4/10. Lindsay tried to be nice and gave Topher a 7/10. Topher angrily walked off of the stage.
"Topher's Confessional"
"What the heck was that?! I've seen enough seasons of this show to know if you work that old bastard's ego then-"
Topher coughed and regained his composure.
"What I meant to say was I completely understand why Chris gave me a low score. I'll try to do better next time."
"The Toxic Rats win the first part of the challenge!" Chris announced
The Toxic Rats cheered for their three models.
"Is the second challenge fashion-related too?" Jo asked
"Nope."
"Phew.."
"It's a dancing competition!"
"I just had to ask.."
" The rest of you will also have to dress up as we will be having an elegant banquet later on tonight." Chris said " Each dancing duo will face off against another in an old fashioned game of musical chairs. The lteam that racks up the most points wins."
"Where will this banquet be held at?" Max asked
"The Mess Hall." Chris said "Were having the interns set up for it now as we speak. If there's no more questions, then I'll see you tonight."
"Wait I have a question!" Lindsay said "How do I get home?"
"Oh we have an all expenses paid trip for you." Chris said "If you'll just follow Chef."
Chef walked away as Lindsay followed him. Scarlett raised her hand.
"Yes Scarlett?" Chris asked
"Will we actually get to choose our partners?" Scarlett asked
"Of course not!" Chris said "You'll just go with the people you like and that would be boring. So instead, I will pick the duos."
Chris got a good look at everyone and made his decision."
"Scott and Dawn, Jo and Brick, Zoey and Vito, Anne Maria and Lightning, Cameron and Sam."
"Nuh-uh. You stuck my man with Princess Goody-Goody?" Anne Maria asked "I demand a do-over."
"I second that." Jo said "I don't wanna dance with Dampy Pants."
"I-It happened once!" Brick said
"Shush! There will be no do-overs." Chris said "Now for the Rats. Scarlett and Max, Sammy and Rodney, Dave and Shawn, Sky and Ella, Amy and Topher."
"Phew.." Amy said "I thought you were gonna stick me with some ugly loser like Max or Dave."
"Were standing right here." Dave said
"Okay and?"
" You have the rest of the day to prepare your outfits and practice your dance skills." Chris said as he walked away
Zoey and Vito awkwardly sat next to each other in the Mess Hall. Despite being on the same team for a couple of weeks now. The two never spoke to each other that much.
" Well this is awkward." Vito said to break the silence
"Sorry!" Zoey said "I know you'd rather be with Anne Maria."
"Yep." Vito said "Y'know.. I think I know a guy you'd get along with."
"Really?" Zoey asked excitedly "Where is he?"
Vito tapped his forehead. Zoey didn't understand what he was doing.
"I'm talking about one of my alters."
"Ohh.." Zoey said "So..um..do they just come out of thin air?"
"No." Vito said "In this specific case, you're gonna need to make me cry Red."
"What?! I can't make you cry." Zoey said "That's mean."
"Relax it'll be fine." Vito said
"If you say so..."
Zoey pulled out a book from her pocket.
"This is the saddest book I've ever read. It's a story about a couple who can't be together because of their differences." Zoey said "This should probably make you cry."
"Pfft. Vito ain't gonna cry because of some lousy book."
Vito snatched the book from Zoey's hands and began to read it. After a couple of minutes, tears began to leave Vito's eyes.
" H-How could Amanda just leave John like that?" Vito asked "He loved her!"
As Vito cried, a loud gasp could be heard. The alter got up and stretched.
"Man it's been a while since he's let me out." The alter said " I was starting to get bored up there."
"Hey! I'm Zoey." Zoey said as she stuck out her hand
The alter stared at Zoey for a bit, he was taken aback by her beauty. He snapped out of it and shook her hand.
"Mike..."
"It's nice to meet you!" Zoey said "Do you know what's going on?"
"Nope."
Zoey took the time to explain the challenge and what they had to do. Mike had a hard time concentrating on what she was saying.
"Oh..um.. sorry I zoned out for a bit." Mike said "What were you saying?"
"Seriously? I just explained it to you!"
"S-Sorry! I wasn't really paying attention..."
Zoey tried explaining it to Mike again as the latter dozed off.
"Zoey's Confessional"
"Mike's forgetfulness is kind of annoying."
"But at least he's easier to talk to than Vito."
"Mike's Confessional"
"Man I can't believe we actually made it onto Total Drama. That's so awesome!"
"And Zoey... I think she's the most beautiful girl I've seen in my life." Mike said as he sighed lovingly
" I just hope Vito hasn't taken her. He usually ends up dating most of the girls I like."
Dave was still at the stage trying to find something to wear for the banquet.
" Ew all of these outfits are so dirty." Dave said to himself
He picked up a baby blue tuxedo and sighed.
"I guess this will do.." Dave said "I'll probably have to disinfect it."
Shawn silently walked up to the stage and rummaged through the clothes. Dave decided to take this opportunity to talk to him.
"Hey.."
Shawn didn't respond.
"C'mon man don't be that way." Dave said "So I don't wanna talk about the Sky thing. Big whoop, I don't have to tell you everything about me."
" Usually friends can share things with each other." Shawn said
"We are friends. Girls are just a touchy subject for me." Dave said "I didn't think you would make a big deal out of this."
Shawn got up and walked towards Dave.
"Big deal? How do I know you're not hiding anything else from me? Are you an alien? An undercover spy sent here to track me?!"
"Calm down-" Dave said before he was interrupted
"ARE YOU A ZOMBIE?!"
"Shawn shut the fuck up!" Dave yelled "Look if I tell you something very personal, will you drop this?"
Shawn nodded.
" Remember that story about the girl from summer camp I told you guys earlier today?"
"Yeah what about it?"
" There's a part I didn't add." Dave said "After crying my eyes out, I was pretty mad and emotional. The next time I saw her... I dumped a cold bucket of water on her head in front of everybody. Everyone laughed at her, myself included as she ran away crying. I thought it would make me feel better but it didn't. I tried apologizing to her but she left camp early because of me. I've regretted my actions ever since."
"Well you may be kind of an asshole but at least you're not a zombie." Shawn said as he smiled "Thanks for telling me man."
Shawn hugged Dave who quickly pushed him away.
"A little warning next time would be nice.." Dave said as he brought out the hand sanitizer
Some time had passed as all of the contestants had gotten dressed and headed to the Mess Hall. Once inside they saw the tables were gone and replaced with a disco ball, a snack table and a bunch of chairs. Beardo was in a DJ booth with his equipment. Chris and Chef walked out of the kitchen wearing tuxedos.
"Welcome to the next part of your challenge!" Chris said "The first pairs competing against each other are... Sammy and Rodney versus Jo and Brick!"
The two duos stepped forward.
"Once the music starts you will have to dance with your partner." Chris said "When the music stops, you'll have to race to sit on the two chairs."
"Um.. what happens if two people from each duo sit on a chair?" Sammy asked
"Then we would have to go into a tiebreaker round." Chris said "But I doubt that will happen. Now hit it intern!"
Beardo began to play some music. Jo immediately grabbed Brick and began to slow dance.
" You're not allowed to enjoy this." Jo said
Brick nodded.
"M-May I have this dance?" Rodney asked nervously
"Uhh.. sure." Sammy said
Rodney took Sammy's hand and the two began to dance. Rodney accidentally stepped on Sammy's foot as she cried out in pain.
"S-Sorry! Uh.. lemme go get some ice!" Rodney said
Rodney ran into the kitchen to search for some ice.
"Rodney no wait!" Sammy said
The music stopped. Brick and Jo ran over and sat on the two chairs. Rodney ran out of the kitchen and poured a bucket of ice onto Sammy's feet.
" Brick and Jo advance to the next round!" Chris said
"Yes!" Jo said as she dropped Brick
"Do your feet feel better?" Rodney asked
"If by better you mean cold then yes." Sammy said
Rodney saw the glare Sammy was giving him and began to cry.
"Whoa! Um.. I don't think I said anything mean... did I?"
"It's not that.." Rodney said "Your scowl reminds me of Amy!"
"Sammy's Confessional"
"Someone saying I remind them of Amy is the last thing I wanted to hear today."
"Up next will be.." Chris said "Anne Maria and Lightning versus.. Sky and Ella!"
Anne Maria ran over to the DJ booth and handed something to Beardo. He decided to play it as the two duos stepped forward. WAP began to play in the background as Anne Maria and Lightning started twerking. The rest of the contestants weren't sure what to make of this.
"Should we?" Ella asked
"No." Sky said "Just no."
"What are you two doing?!" Chris asked angrily "You're ruining this elegant banquet!"
"Nobody wants to listen to that grandma music." Anne Maria said "This is the shit that makes you wanna bust down on the beat."
"I don't even understand what you just said."
The music stopped, Sky and Lightning sprinted over as they each sat down on a chair.
"Ha! I totally arrived here first." Lightning said
"No you did not." Sky said "I beat you fair and square."
" Well it looks like we'll be having a tiebreaker round." Chris said.
As the challenge went on, a certain individual snuck into the kitchen. He looked around and eventually saw a locked cabinet.
"Bingo.." Scott said
Scott pulled out a hairpin and began to pick the lock. He eventually opened it and grabbed a bottle of wine. He locked the cabinet back as he snuck out of the kitchen. As he did, he was met face to face with his partner.
"What are you doing?" Dawn asked
"Nothing."
" You should know by now that you can't lie to me Scott."
" You should know by now that I don't care."
Scott walked over to the snack table and waited to see if the coast was clear. Once it was, he poured the entire bottle of wine into the fruit punch. Dawn snatched the bottle from him.
"Tampering with the food?" Dawn said "I knew you were up to no good."
Scott eyes went wide. He realized he needed to figure a way out of this situation. He tapped Brick's shoulder and pointed at Dawn.
" Look Dawn is drinking!" Scott said "She's totally an addict."
"Dawn!" Brick yelled "That is totally unacceptable behavior!"
Brick dragged Dawn off into a corner and began to rant about how underage drinking is bad. Dawn tried telling him what really happened, but he wouldn't listen. Scott snickered as he could finally put his plan into action.
"Sky and Ella win the tiebreaker round!" Chris said
"Sha-damn! Why can't I beat you short girl?!" Lightning asked angrily
" Maybe I'm just a better athlete than you." Sky said as she shrugged
"Lightning's Confessional"
"No one is a better athlete than the Lightning! Short girl better watch her step."
"Our third matchup will be... Zoey and Vito versus Scarlett and Max!"
Some campers took notice of Max's unusual outfit. He had a black top hat and black suit on with a purple tie as he wore big mechanical boots.
"You may as well give up now." Max said confidently "With my super bouncy boots, there's no way you two will make it to the chairs before me."
Beardo played the usual music as the two duos danced. Scarlett tried her best to avoid being stepped on by Max's giant boots. Zoey was having fun dancing with Mike as he twirled her around.
"Pfft stop!" Zoey said as she laughed
"Okay. Only because you asked." Mike said
Mike let her down gently as the music stopped. Max pressed a button as his big mechanical boots lit up.
"Prepare to lose fools!"
Max tried to jump over to the chairs but ended up jumping through the roof and into the night sky. He screamed as he flew away.
" Hm. I think we miscalculated the pressure on the boots." Scarlett said "Good thing I didn't wear them."
Mike and Zoey slowly walked over and sat on the two chairs.
" That's two points for the Mutant Maggots!" Chris said "The Rats need this next point or they lose!"
Scott walked Sam over to the punch table as he handed him a glass.
"T-Thanks man.." Sam said " I've been feeling extra nervous about this whole thing. Usually I play some video games to warm up for the challenges. Now that they're gone... my hands feel so empty."
" You may not have any video games. But I know a game we could play." Scott said
"Really?! What is it?"
"I call it. Whoever Drinks the Most Fruit Punch Wins." Scott said "The title pretty much tells you everything you need to know."
"It's on!" Sam said excitedly
Sam took the entire bowl of spiked fruit punch and began to chug it down. Scott merely took a sip of his drink. After Sam finished drinking, he let out a victory burp. Scott waved his hand in disgust.
"Well look at the time. I guess it's my turn." Scott said " That was a fun game we played."
Scott walked away as Sam wallowed in his victory. He met up with Dawn as Beardo began to play some music. The two danced while glaring at each other.
"You won't get away with this." Dawn said
"But I already have." Scott said "And shouldn't you be focusing on the challenge?"
The music stopped as Scott pretended to trip and fall. Shawn and Dave raced over to sit in the two chairs.
"Dude we did it!" Shawn said as he stuck his hand out
"Yeah!" Dave said as he high fived Shawn
"Who do you think you're fooling?" Dawn asked "You obviously fell on purpose."
Zoey rushed over to check up on Scott.
"Oh my gosh Scott." Zoey said "Are you okay?"
"I'll be fine..." Scott said as he got up
Dawn rolled her eyes at this exchange.
"Dawn's Confessional"
"Sometimes I underestimate how naive my team can be."
" This is our final dance of the night! Whoever wins this round secures victory for their team." Chris said "Sam, Cameron, Amy and Topher. Please step forward."
The four who were called stepped onto the dance floor. Cameron noticed his partner wasn't looking well.
"Are you okay?"
"N-Never better.." Sam said
Sam's face was turning green and he was beginning to sweat. He wobbled over and grabbed Cameron.
"L-let's dance."
Beardo played some music as the two pairs began to dance. Sam's vision was getting blurry as he accidentally bumped into Topher and Amy.
" Hey watch where you're going freak!" Amy said "Scuff my shoes and you die."
Just as the music stopped, Sam's cheeks puffed up as he unleashed a stream of vomit. Topher quickly used Amy as a human shield as she was now covered head to toe in vomit. She let out a high pitched scream that hurt everyone's ears. Amy was about to head off to the bathroom until Topher grabbed her shoulder.
"What?!" Amy asked angrily
Topher pointed at the two chairs.
"Can't you see I'm covered in nerd vomit? I don't care about this dumb challenge." Amy said
"Well I do." Topher said
Topher grabbed Amy's vomit covered hand as he walked over and sat down on the chair.
"I'm not sitting down." Amy said as she pouted
" Why not? I'm sure you're great at sitting down." Topher said " And then I'll be able to see more of your beauty."
Amy wasn't sure how to respond to that and decided to just sit down.
"Toxic Rats win!" Chris said "We'll have an elimination ceremony as soon as Chef takes Sam to the medical tent."
Chef picked up Sam and dragged him out of the mess hall. The Toxic Rats ran over to congratulate Topher and Amy.
"Topher's Confessional"
"Heh. And they said my routine was getting old."
" Nothing works better than a handsome face showering you with fake compliments." Topher said as he winked at the camera
Brick, Dawn, Zoey and Mike walked over to the medical tent to see if Sam was okay. He was on a bed sound asleep.
"What happened to him?" Brick asked
" He's drunk as hell." Chef said "I don't know how but he's drunk as hell."
Brick immediately glared at Dawn.
"Do you have something to do with this?!"
"Brick I already explained to you what really happened." Dawn said "Scott-"
" I don't want to hear any excuses cadet." Brick said "You were caught red handed with the bottle. Now fess up or I'm voting you off."
" Y'know what. I don't care for your tone." Dawn said "And acting large and in charge doesn't change the fact you have a secret desire to be dominated."
"I...you... hmph!" Brick stammered as he walked away
"What was he talking about Dawn?" Zoey asked
"It's a long story.." Dawn said
Some time had passed as The Mutant Maggots headed over to the elimination ceremony. Sam who was still asleep was brought to the ceremony by Chef.
"Welcome Maggots. Your poor dancing skills landed you here." Chris said "Before the vote starts. Would anyone like to say anything?"
Dawn stood up.
"My team. I implore you all to rise up against the soulless sociopathic scoundrel hiding among you." Dawn said " If you want our team to thrive and grow then-"
"Okay time for the vote." Chris said
"You didn't even let me finish." Dawn said as she frowned
"Zoey's Confessional"
"Dawn told me that apparently Scott is the reason why B got kicked off and he's trying to do the same thing to Sam."
"I'm not really sure if I believe her. Dawn is nice and all but she also talks to animals unironically."
"Brick's Confessional"
"Your behavior today was inexcusable." Brick said as he wrote Dawn's name down
"And for the record, I do not have a desire to be dominated!"
" The votes are in." Chris said " If I call your name that means you're safe."
"Anne Maria!"
"Brick!"
"Cameron!"
"Jo!"
"Lightning!"
"Vito-"
"I'm actually Mike right now." Mike said as he interrupted Chris
" Interrupt me again and you'll get to see the inside of a catapult."
"Sorry." Mike said as he rubbed the back of his head
"and Zoey!"
Everyone whose name was called ran up to get a marshmallow.
"That leaves us with our bottom three." Chris said "Scott you've been accused of doing a lot of shady stuff. Could it be true?"
"A rumor is just a fancy lie." Scott said
" Sam you thought getting wasted was more important than doing the challenge."
Sam was still fast asleep as he snored.
"Finally Dawn. You may be the cause of Sam's turn to alcohol." Chris said "Good reason to send you packing."
Dawn decided not to respond to that.
"Now the toxic marshmallow of loserdom goes to..."
The camera turned to Dawn and Scott who were glaring at each other once again.
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"Sam!"
Chef threw the toxic marshmallow at Sam. It sat peacefully on his body as he snored.
" This would be a lot more dramatic if he wasn't asleep." Chris said "Oh well. I'm still getting paid."
Chris snapped his fingers as Chef dragged the unconscious Sam across the Dock of Shame.
Chef boarded Sam onto the Boat of Losers. His team was there to see him off.
" He's not taking the Hurl of Shame?" Cameron asked
" Nope. On the account he may drown and die." Chris said "We brought back the Boat of Losers for a special occasion."
"Bye Sam.." Zoey said as she waved
The Maggots waved goodbye as Chef and Sam drove away on the Boat of Losers.
" The gamer is out of the game!" Chris said "What games will we play next time? Stay tuned to find out on-"
Loud screaming could be heard as Max came falling down and slammed into Chris. The two groaned as the episode ended.
Here's the sixth chapter of Total Drama: Aboslute Revenge. If you enjoyed, then leave a review and a favorite.
To start things off. The challenge was obviously changed. For the modeling challenges, the contestants have to model instead of the mutants. I just thought it would be more interesting that way. And then for the second challenge was a good ol fashioned game of musical chairs. At the end it was Sam who left. He didn't have a lot of plot going so it felt like the right choice.
Beardo, Leonard and Staci made a cameo. Including them as contestants would just mean obvious fodder. So I thought making them interns would be cool. Beardo and Leonard are tweaked just a bit. Beardo's a lot more talkative and Leonard doesn't actually believe he's a wizard.
Originally I wasn't planning on including Mike. But I figured he could add some new drama and interactions. I wanna give him his own distinct personality. However I'm not sure what to do with that. I'll probably figure it out as I go.
Seeing as how I'm finishing this chapter a couple of days before Christmas. I wanted to wish everyone reading this a Happy Holidays.
Voting Results
Anne Maria- Sam
Brick- Dawn
Cameron- Scott
Dawn- Scott
Jo- Sam
Lightning- Sam
Mike- Sam
Sam- Didn't vote
Scott- Sam
Zoey- Sam
Elimination Order:
Dakota-24th, B-23rd, Jasmine-22nd, Sugar-21st, Sam-20th "The Gamer"