So another chapter! I really enjoy this a lot! We got some more bonding with Bluemom in this chapter and more cats talking. I want to give these cats personailty as well and not just make them background characters. There a part of the Clan too you know! Anyway call outs to Fatal's rewrite series which is definingly a big influence on this series. They aren't scared of doing this really differnt and I hope this rewrite will be good as theirs. If you are reading this from fanfiction Fatal's rewrite is on ao3 and I definetly recodem that one! They just finished book three! Anyway I hope you all enjoy leave a comment please!
As Darkstripe and Blazepaw slipped down into the ravine, Blazepaw could already see that the whole Clan had gathered together. Weaseltooth and Brindleface were keeping an eye out for intruders in the trees that hang from the side of the ravine but Blazepaw could tell that they were listening to what was happening down below. Frostshine had their tail wrapped around their kits while Goldenflower was trying to keep Mistlekit from getting too close, her three other kits peeking from behind her.
From the Elder Den, Sparrowsong and Swiftbreeze emerge to join Smallear who was glaring and muttering to Brighteye. The old molly sits up at what Smallear said and tilts her head.
"Take that thrush to the Elders then get something for you," Darkstripe says as they put the pieces of prey Blazepaw caught onto the pile. Obediently, Blazepaw nods her head and carries the thrush over to Smallear who hisses at her. Fighting the urge to roll her eyes, she laid the prey down in front of the gray tom before backing away. With her stomach roaring in hunger she grabbed a mouse and was about to head to the tree stump where the other Apprentices were when she saw the glares of Dustpaw and Bristlepaw. She freezes a bit, dread filling her. She really didn't want to deal with their mocking and taunts right now..
"Blazepaw!" turning her head she sees Briarpaw trotting over to her, "Get to the Healing Den now!" The fierce glare that the Warlock gave her almost made Blazepaw drop her mouse in surprise but she quickly walked over to him. At his paws were a bunch of pink petals and cobwebs which he quickly pressed against her wounds. Blazepaw winces in pain but tries to ignore it as she quickly bites into her meal.
"Damn..Yellowfang did a number on your ear..not surprising since she was a Warrior before she trained to be a Witch," Blazepaw swallows the rest of her mouse quickly and looks up.
"You heard of her?"
"A lot actually. We meet her during the Half-Moon meetings. I know she used to be the mate of the old ShadowClan Leader; Raggedstar and that Timberstar is her son along with Sunflame and Honeyberry. She spent her whole life in ShadowClan so the thought of her being a loner..is unusual," Briarpaw explains before he chews some of the petal and presses it against Blazepaw's ear.
Blazepaw hisses in pain, "What's a loner?"
"A cat that isn't part of a Clan or cared for by twolegs. But unlike rogues they keep to themselves and don't cause trouble, most of the time they live by Twoleg dwellings," Briarpaw looks over Blazepaw one more time before nodding his head, "Ok you should be fine now but don't wipe out the Nimbus Petals from your ear ok,"
"Nimbus Petal?" Blazepaw mutters confused and Briarpaw nods his head.
"Yeah the petals from the Nimbus Flower can numb pain while also keeping wounds from getting infected. So don't wipe it out," Briarpaw shakes his head, "I'm going to need to look for more later..Smallear likes it so much because it makes him feel like he is on a cloud..always making excuses about how his joints are in pain so he can get some,"
Blazepaw nods her head before she looks around the camp. Word has spread quickly about the two Shadows being in the camp. Blazepaw could see both Yellowfang and Sunflame resting below the Highrock, Sunflame's two kits covered by Sunflame's tail. Both were ignoring the hostile stares that were being given to them.
Looking around, Blazepaw notices that the only ones not glaring at the two Shadows were Bluestar, Lionheart, Patchbelly, Spottedleaf, Thrushflight and Speckletail. They were murmuring at one another in low tones.
Spottedleaf was meowing in annoyance, "She shouldn't have left ShadowClan at all..none of the Gods have spoken of her leaving. She is going against their word.."
"Calm down, Spottedleaf," Thrushfligh meows, "After what Mistfall's patrol found, do you blame her? What they saw there.." the sandy-gray tom shakes his head, "This is an omen..a bad one,"
Blazepaw could see by the way Spottedleaf's fur began to flatten, even though her eyes still shine in anger. The Witch nodded briefly before stalking off to the Healing den, mumbling beneath her breath.
"Spootedleaf has some right to worry," Speckletail meows, "What if this is a ploy to get our guard down? I think it's too dangerous to allow two Shadows into the heart of ThunderClan.."
"Do you think we should move?" Patchbelly meows making Bluestar purr.
"Why should we move? It's not a secret to where our Camps are and why would the ShadowClan Witch leave without a good reason? Especially with two small kittens with them.
Bluestar sighs and shakes her head before turning to Lionheart, "When you start making patrols make sure no Apprentices are out alone. Tigerclaw and Blazepaw spotted a fox in the area,"
Lionheart nods his head, "Of course Bluestar, I'll also warn the Monarchs to guard the Nursery carefully, in case the fox somehow sneaks in," the large golden tabby stoods up and heads to the Nursery.
Ignoring the glares that were being given to her by Dustpaw and Bristlepaw, Blazepaw and Briarpaw wandered over to Ravenpaw. Her friend had eaten his filled and was laying beside Graypaw who was stretched on his side, rhythmically washing a foreleg.
Ravenpaw saw Blazepaw and Briarpaw approaching and sits up, "You doing ok? You aren't in trouble are you?"
Blazepaw shrugs, "Not that I know of. Bluestar hasn't mention a punishment,"
Ravenpaw narrows his eyes sympathetically while Graypaw grunts. They all look up when Bluestar's call rang through the clearing, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join together for a meeting of our Clan,"
With most of the Warriors had finished eating and like Graypaw, were busy grooming themselves. They lifted themselves gracefully to their paws and walked over to the Highrock, where Bluestar waited to speak.
"Come on," mewed Briarpaw. He leaped up, Ravenpaw and Blazepaw followed him as he scampered over and nudged his way forward into a good position. Blazepaw groans when she saw that he chose a spot near Tigerclaw and glares at the dark brown tabby when she catches him staring at her. He snorts before turning his attention towards Bluestar.
"I heard you have all heard about our guests that we brought back with us today," Bluestar began, "But there is something else you need to know," she glanced down at the two Shadows who lay very still beside the Highrock. "Can you hear me from there?" she asked.
"I may be old, but I'm not deaf yet!" Yellowfang spat which made Blazepaw giggle.
Bluestar ignored the Witch's hostile tone and continued, "I'm afraid I have some very grave news. Today Mistfall led a patrol into WindClan territory," she nods her head to Mistfall who stands up from where she sat between Tigerclaw and Nightfire.
"The air was filled with the scent of ShadowClan, almost every tree has been marked with their scent and the border has been changed into their spells. We met no WindClan Warriors.." Mistfall then looks down, "Instead we went right into their Camp and saw the bodies of Sharpwhisker and Doespring,"
Mistfall's words were met with silence. Blazepaw saw confusion and horror in the faces of the Clan cats.
"Do..do you mean ShadowClan has chesed them out?" croaked Smallear hesitantly.
"It's the only explanation," Mistfall meowed, "With the scent of ShadowClan everywhere..the two bodies that weren't given a burial..we found more blood and fur," her ears pin on the back of her head, "Their Ward stone was cracked as well..covered in the Aura of ShadowClan.
A shock yowl rose from the crowd in a single voice. Blazepaw felt the cats around her stiffen with shock and fury. Never before has one Clan driven another from its hunting grounds.
"How can WindClan have been driven out?" Brighteye whispers, "Sure ShadowClan and WindClan have been at war since Cederstar was Leader..but WindClan..there has been so many…"
Swiftbreeze shakes her head, "I heard that they lost many cats during Leafbare..Sorrelshine, Appledawn, Meadowslip, Hickorynose, Woolytail, Palebird..but still why now?" her whiskers trembling.
"I don't know the answers to any of your questions," Meowed Bluestar, "it is well known that ShadowClan has recently gotten a new Leader, following the death of Raggedstar three Moons ago. And while Timberstar has been giving threats to WindClan for the death of Raggedstar and Cloudbreeze..but he calmed down after the trail,"
"Trial?" Blazepaw mutters and Ravenpaw nods his head.
"When a cat is killed in battle, there is a trial during the Gathering. The other Clan judges if it was an accident or on purpose and decides what the punishment will be. Both Raggedstar and Cloudbreeze were both found by the WindClan border when they died, with WindClan scent all over it. They never found out who killed them but WindClan was punished by losing some of their land just as Leafbare began to end,"
"Perhaps Yellowfang has answers," Robinwing snarls, tail thrashing behind her, "After all, she is of ShadowClan,"
"Yellowfang is a Witch!" Spottedleaf growls, "She can not speak of the secrets of ShadowClan! She swore an oath to the Gods that she would never speak a word so she can cross the borders!"
"Well it's a good thing that ShadowClan isn't my Clan!" growl Yellowfang, glaring aggressively at Robinwing and Spottedleaf both. The ShadowClan cats hisses before turning to Bluestar, "Two Moons ago Timberstar brought in the dead body of Marigoldkit, and decied that enough is enough. That if WindClan won't learn their lesson from the trials then they no longer have a place in the Forest,"
"A..a kit was killed?" Frostshine's eyes were widen in fear, their long fur was spiking up as they stood in front of the Nursery. As if trying to protect their own kits.
"It is against the Warrior Code to hurt kits!" Fuzzybush snarls, looking at Robinwing. Actually lots of the Clan was looking at Robinwing, as if still not forgiving the molly for attacking Blazepaw, "WindClan for all its faults would never do that!"
Yellowfang hung her head and sighed, "That's why I doubt it was WindClan..I have no proof..but I think it was Timberstar himself who murder her.." she looks up her orange eyes glowing in pain, "After all..he's been training kits as young as three Moons since he became leader. At five moons he has been sending them out as Warriors!" she snarls pain lacing in her voice. Sunflame beside her whimpers curling around her kits more.
Silence filled the camp as they stared at the two Shadows. Blazepaw couldn't help but feel dread filling her at the thought of kittens dying. Yellowfang continues, bitterness seeping every word, "I wanted to say something..but he accused WindClan for the murder..and since he is their Leader, they belived him," Yellowfang looks up at Bluestar before turning to Spottedleaf, "That is why I left ShadowClan...I hope that with me leaving they'll soon realize what Timberstar is doing..not all cats in ShadowClan supprot him. He not only has been training kits too young but has driven off the old and sick..killing Archeye and Crowtail when they refuse to leave..I hope with my..omen of leaving..that they'll soon fight back,"
"If this is true…" Patchbelly whispered, "No wonder we haven't been able to go to the Gathering. The Gods have been showing their anger for not only a Clan being driven out but also so many kits dying!" The other cats begin to snarl, whispering angrily.
"Silence!" Bluestar yowls. When the crowd below her begins to settle she speaks, "This situation is too serious for us to charge forward." she looks down to Yellowfang, "And while I wish we could act on this, I can not in good faith do so because you weren't given permission by the Gods. So until we got proof, we can not act,"
Yellowfang sighs and nods her head, "I understand Bluestar. The Clans weren't build in one day,"
"But that doesn't mean we can't prepare for this. From this day onward, Warriors will travel in larger groups, Apprentices can't go on their own without a Warrior. Other Clan members will remain close to camp and patrolas will travel the boundary edges more frequently,"
The cats below nodded their heads in agreement.
Bluestar continued, "Our need for warriors is our greatest obstacle. And now we shall get around this," she looks down the Highrock, "Nightfire, Robinwing, Darkstripe..are they ready?"
Nightfire purrs, "Dustpaw is more than ready, Bluestar,"
Robinwing growls, "Of course she is!"
"Bristlepaw will be a Warrior the whole Clan will be proud of," Darkstripe tail sways behind him as he presses close to Brindleface.
Sandpaw, Dustpaw and Bristlepaw looked excited as Bluestar leaps down. All three Apprentice stood in front of her, "It makes me proud that ThunderClan will have such fine Warriors," Bluestar looked up as the last arc of sun glow pink on the horizon and the sky begins to prickle with stars, "I, Bluestar, Leader of ThunderClan, call upon my Warrior Ancestors, The Messengers of the the Gods to look down on these three Apprentices. They have trained hard to understand the Code, they have listened to every story and have brought prey and learned to care for the members of our Clan and I commend them to you as Warriors in their turn," she gazed down at the three young cats in front of her. "Dustpaw, Sandpaw, Bristlepaw, do you promise to uphold the Warrior Code and to protect and defend this Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
Sandpaw stared back, her green eyes gleaming, "I do," she meows sitting proudly.
Dustpaw echoed her words, his strong and low, "I do,"
Bristlepaw's blue eyes glow in pride and happiness, "I do,"
"Then by the powers of the Gods, I give you your warrior names. Dustpaw, from this moment you will be known as Dustcloud. While you are the first in wanting to fight, deep inside you are caring, known to volunteer to rebuild dens or to go and care for the Elders and kits. The Gods honor your patience and honesty and we welcome you as a full Warrior of ThunderClan,"
Dustcloud licked Bluestar's shoulder respectively before he turned and walked towards his siblings, Cherrylight and Chesnutshade who were watching him with warm eyes, glad to see their brother finally joining them as Warriors.
"Sandpaw, from this moment you will be known as Sandstorm. Your skills in hunting will be known to ThunderClan for many leaf Seasons and your bravelry to speak out will be known to all the Clans. The Gods honor your courage and spirit, and we welcome you as a full Warrior of ThunderClan," Sandstorm too licked Bluestar's shoulder before she turned and walked over to Wildstep, looking at the night sky. Blazepaw saw her eyes flash and she wondered if she was looking for Redtail.
Bluestar then turns her blue eyes towards the silver tabby, "Bristlepaw, from this moment you will be known as Bristletail," Blazepaw watches as Poppydawn appears behind the tom, "You have grown so much since being born during the time of the Tears, taking everything that Darkstripe has taught you. The Gods honor your intelligence and loyalty, and we welcome you as a full Warrior of ThunderClan," Bristletail licks Bluestar's shoulder before he turns. Willowheart cries out in joy and runs to her son, licking his ears as Whitestorm comes over followed by Graypaw.
The voices of the Clan rose in tribute, calling out the Warriors new names for the Gods to hear, "Dustcloud, Sandstorm, Bristletail! Dustcloud, Sandstorm, Bristletail!"
"As tradition, you three will stand guard underneath the eyes of the Messengers, our Ancestors. You will not speak once you sit down in the center of the clearing, unless there is danger. Let the stars shine down on you as you soak in your new responsibilities as full Warriors,"
At once the Clan burst into cheers again and Bluestar allows them before waving her tail for silence, "Now..as for Yellowfang and Sunflame..we are Warriors not savages. Sunflame and her kits will be allow into the Nursery while both her and Yellowfang are to be treated with respect and courtesy until we have proof of what Timberstar is doing,"
"But can the Clan support them?" Cricketleap calls out besides his brother Featherheart who was moving his tail. "I know..I know but I don't want to anger the Gods..they may be angry with Yellowfang for leaving without their say so Featherheart,"
Blazepaw scrunches up her face, trying to read the signs. She was still learning and the only reason why Featherheart spoke out loud when she first met him in the forge was because she didn't know any Tailspeak. Now that she was learning, Featherheart had stopped talking out loud, which she learned was the norm.
"Featherheart is right," Robinwing growls, glaring at Blazepaw, "We already have too many mouths to feed,"
"Yeah," Briarpaw mutters, glaring at the molly, "And some of them are bigger than others," Blazepaw snorts.
"I don't need anyone to care for me!" Yellowfang snarls, "And I'll split open anyone who tries!" she tries to get up but looks to Sunflame you meows for her to calm down.
"Friendly, isn't she?" Graypaw mutters.
Blazepaw flicks the tip of her tail in silent agreement. There were muffled meows from the other cats as they grudgingly recognized her fighting spirit. Blazepaw feels her heart thump, hoping that one day she would have that type of respect.
Bluestar ignores the murmuring, "Since Blazepaw was the one to find them, she will be the one to care for them, along with anyone who wants to help her," she looks down at Blazepaw, "You will hunt for them and tend to their wounds. You will fetch fresh bedding and clear away their dirt,"
"Yes, Bluestar," Blazepaw mews bowing her head in submission. She was hiding the look of disgust on her face, "Clean away their dirt?! Yuck!" she thought to herself.
"What?!" Robinwing spits out, her amber eyes glowing in rage, "That's all! She should be punished! If Pinestar was still Leader he would have made her sleep out of the camp, showing her how harsh and cruel this world is! She fed two Shadows before feeding her Clan!"
Blazepaw looks down, shame filling her body but Bluestar glares, "So listening to her heart means she has to be punished? Robinwing, I'm glad that Blazepaw felt no shame in helping the two Shadows! Yellowfang is a Witch and Sunflame has two kits with her, if Blazepaw didn't help the two might have died. For those reasons alone she should respect them!" She shot a sharp glance at Robinwing, "And there is no humiliation in caring for another cat when they're unable to take care of themselves. This meeting is over and I would like the Cluster together so we can speak," With that, Bluestar jumped down from the Highrock and walked towards the entrance of her den. Following her was Lionheart, Rosetail, Patchbelly, Speckletail and Dappletail.
Blazepaw sighs as her stomach settles, glad to not be feeling like she was about to throw up, feeling dazed as others of the Clan begin to go back to their business. Briarpaw pats her on the back," Good luck! I'll be with Graypaw and Ravenpaw and try to save some Honey for you!" Blazepaw looks up at that, Honey was a treat she had learned to love but it was only used for celebrations, like First Naming Ceremonies, Apprentice Ceremonies and Warrior Ceremonies. She looks over as Tigerclaw stoods up, shaking his body making his long fur ruffle, "Well I hope you'll think twice about bringing strays back into the Camp next time," he sneers, his amber eyes looking into her green eyes, "Outsiders always bring trouble,"
Blazepaw blinks at him, "Well fuck you!" she meows before walking away. She ignores his sputters while Mistfall and Nightfire laugh their heads off. Blazepaw blinks when she spots Bluestar waving her over and she trots over to her.
"I'm sorry about this, Blazepaw," Bluestar meow as Blazepaw sat next to her, "But it will calm down the Clan if they see you get some sort of punishment. And there are many things you can learn from Yellowfang and Sunflame," Blazepaw nods her head at her mentor before the gray and ginger molly stood up, "Now follow me..before I meet up with the Cluster I'll show you how to get moss,"
Moonlight sliced through the leaves of the Newleaf trees as Blazepaw followed Bluestar deeper into woods, padding down a slope towards an oak tree. Its thick roots, covered in layers of green moss, snaked into the ground.
"Now what you need to do is arch your paw like thins," Bluestar demonstrated, "And stretched out your clase as far as they go," Blazepaw watches as with swift delicate precision she sliced a swath of moss from the tree, leaving the roots and dirt still cling to the bark while a clean, neat piece of moss dangled from her paw, "That way you won't pull up any dirt as well as moss..no cat likes that," she chuckles, "Now you try,"
Blazepaw copied her, arching her paw, stretching her claws till they hurt and sliced. She couldn't help but purr, for while her piece was smaller and more ragged than Bluestar's, she had managed to leave the roots and dirt behind.
"Very good!" Bluestar purrs, "Keep practicing," she meowed as she watched Blazepaw slice away at the moss, cutting piece after piece. Before long she felt a rhythm in her movement and noticed the moss that she cut was thicker and less scrappy.
"You're a natural," Bluestar meows making Blazepaw look up in confusion.
"How?"
"With each slice of your claw, you're getting more and more controlled," Bluestar explained, "By the time you mastered this, you'll be able to rake your enemy's muzzle with a flick of your paw and to kill prey quickly and clearly. Something I should have taught you awhile ago," she touches her nose to Blazepaw's ear, "You did well in your fight with Yellowfang but there will be many more fights to come in this path you have chosen,"
"And I'm ready for it!" Blazepaw meows, green eyes sparkling which made Bluestar purr.
"Well I'm glad..because we will be doing battle training in a few days time. Soon I promise," she looks amuse at the disappointment on Blazepaw's face, "But you will have to take care of Yellowfang and Sunflame for the first few days..and I think Speckletail wants you to do some studying on fire,"
Blazepaw nods her head, please. This life was so different from her life as a House Cat. She was so busy and she was learning so much!
"And now, we have to carry this moss home," Bluestar purrs when Blazepaw instantly leaned down to grasp a bunch between her teeth, "Not like that..if we carry it like that we will have to make several journeys," Bluestar warns as Blazepaw only managed to pick up a few small scraps from the top of the pile.
Blazepaw watches as Bluestar pressed the moss beneath her paws, "Squish it like this, then roll it into a bundle and grasp it under your chin," Blazepaw couldn't help the snort of laughter as Bluestar gripped a large wad beneath her own chin and held it there, looking so funny with her chin camped to her chest and moss spilling out from either sides.
"Oh don't you twitch your whiskers at me!" she chuckles, "I know it looks odd, but would you rather climb the ravine twice?"
Blazepaw shakes her head before she begins pummeling the pile of moss, rolling a ball as Bluestar did, then leaning down to grasp it under her chin. She growls, it was harder to hold in place than she'd thought, especially when she picked up a second bundle between her jaws. She had dropped each bundle twice before they reached the edge of the ravine and each time, Bluestar waited patiently while she picked it up. She didn't offer more advice, just watched and nodded as she persevered.
Scrambling down the ravine was even less dignified, she couldn't see her paws and had to feel for every clawhold. Blazepaw was relieved that Bluestar was a few steps ahead, breaking her fall every time they slipped until they reached the bottom.
But instead of going straight to Yellowfang, but towards a split in the ravine where Cricketleap and Fuzzybush were working on.
"I hope that wherever the Winds went it isn't too far," Cricketleap mutters, "We're running out of wool and we need more of it before Leafbare comes with the Tears," he looks up, his yellow eyes glowing with amusement, "Been busy huh Blazepaw?"
Blazepaw dropped her moss and nodded, "Yeah..but why are we not giving it to Yellowfang?"
Fuzzybush snorts, "And what hear them complain about wet bedding? I think you rather not," he enters the cavern, waving his tail for Blazepaw to follow. Blinking, she looked in awe at what was inside. Hanging from the ceiling were pelts of rabbits while various trinkets to deer antlers and some contraption of bright colored things that flicker bright spots of colorful light from the many lit candles.
Fuzzybush stops in one corner of the cavern where many smaller holes were, each holding an item. Blazepaw saw shiny rocks of different colors, some sort of fuzzy white fur, feathers, bracken and ferns "Put the moss right here," he waves his tail to a slab of rock that sat underneath a hole where the sunlight ray down on. While Blazepaw did that Fuzzybush grabbed a bundle of moss which he then adds feathers and bracken to ot, "Here we go..this will keep the old molly warm," he hands it to Blazepaw who notices that it wasn't damp as the ones she and Bluestar brough before laying a blanket on her back, looking at it she saw that it was stuff with some of the white fuzzy stuff "And there we go..enough to make a bedding," he turns to Bluestar, "But seriously..if WindClan is gone...we might have to make a patrol to the Farm to collect our own Wool,"
Bluestar nods her head, "If WindClan doesn't show up to the next Gathering, I'll have a patrol sent over there.."
"That is if we can go to the next Gathering…" Cricketleap mutters as he walks in, "The last two were blocked by the clouds..The Gods are angry.."
Bluestar sighs, "I know," she then looks to Blazepaw, "You have everything you need now to help Yellowfang get settle in. I'll go see Yellowfang, if I were you," she smiles, "She doesn;t look happy,"
Emerging from the cavern, he saw that the old molly was now at the other end of the fallen tree where the Elder slept, out of hearing of the Elders, but in full view of the Warriors' den. And Bluestar was right; she didn't look happy, she was glaring at her.
"Well, here goes," she mewed before she trotted off towards Yellowfang. The other Elders, Swiftbreeze, Sparrowsong, Brighteye and Smallear were watching in amusement when she stopped as the old molly hissed a warning and showed her teeth, "Stop right there, Toy!"
Blazepaw sighed, knowing she was in for a fight. She was tired, wanting nothing but to curl up in her den and the last thing she wanted to was to start a argument with her, "You can call me what you lke," she mewed annoyed, "I'm just following Bluestar's orders,"
"You are a Toy, though, aren't you? Yellowfang wheezed, eyeing her markings, "Your mother a Toy. Your father a toy?"
"My papa was a House Cat," she snarls, "And I don't know my Sire..all I know is that his name started with Thrift.." she looked down at the ground, feeling resentment burn inside her. It was bad enough that members of her own Clan still viewed her as an outsider. What she didn't know was that the Elders were now looking at her, or more importantly the green bandana with the amber stone that she wore around her neck.
Yellowfang snorts, "Toy blood is not the same as Warrior blood. Your kind has been corrupted for many generations, you won't be able to survive once Leafbare hits and the Tears that come with it. Why don't you run back home to your Twolegs now instead of looking after me? Its humiliating, being fussed over by a lowborn cat like you!"
Blazepaw's patience snapped, "That's a piece of shit I ever heard of!," she snarls, stalking up to the dark gray molly, "You'd still feel humiliated if I was born in the Clan! You'd feel ashamed whether I was a precious molly from your own Clan or a wretched Twoleg that had picked up off the ground," her lips pull showing her sharp teeth as her tail lash angrily, "Its the fact that you fucking need help that you find humilting!"
Yellowfang and the Elders stare at her with wide eyes. Brighteye was chuckling, shaking her head.
"You're just going to have to get used to being cared for until you are well enough to look after yourself, you spiteful old bone bag!" Blazepaw snarls fiercely but blinks when Yellowfang began to make a low, harsh wheezing sound. At first she thought the old molly was having a fit before she realized she was laughing. Yellowfang's body was trembling all over and her eyes had narrowed into tiny slits. A loud purr rumbled deep inside her chest.
"Well..it looks like the Twolegs didn't corrupt all of you, having such a spirit," Yellowfang chuckles, "Now why don;t you set the bedding down and I'll get it settle..I'm tired and my leg hurt..go that Witch and her little Warlock and ask for a poultice of Nimbus Petals and Boneweed..and hurry the fuck up the pain is killing me!"
Stunned by Yellowfang's change of mood, Blazepaw turned quickly and headed off. She just knew caring for Yellowfang and Sunflame was going to be a challenge.
Tigerclaw: says something mean
Blazepaw: Fuck you!
That was my favorite scene to write in this chapter. Gosh I can't wait to write more of Blazepaw.
Anyway to note, I am not deaf at all..I researched it and I am trying my best to write it out. Tailspeak is the Clans sign language and such please if I make a mistake please tell me..I want to make this series good.
Also we got cats actually telling what is happening. But since we can't go straight to Thunderclan beating Timberstar we have the oh Yellowfang wasn't told by the Gods to leave and they don't have full proof so they can't do anything. Honestly it was..kinda stupid that yellowfang didn't tell anyone about what broken was doing like she said that shadowclan wasn't hers..so I gave another reason..
anyway I hope you all enjoy and please leave a comment!