Hey, I'm the guy writing this 2 days after I posted the last chapter, I thought I would put this up and say that I have read some of the reviews and a good third are talking about the PoV writing style I'm using so I thought I would clarify. The reason I've been using this style is because in school I usually write in the 1st person and so it was easier for me to translate that into a story, but after reading the comments about how it was annoying and confusing for some people I've decided to take a little break. I'm taking the break so I can try to get a little better at writing in the 3rd person, I would rather inconvenience myself in learning a new way of writing instead of forcing someone to quit my story because they where having hard time getting through it.

SUMMARY(sorry it's in caps it just gets peoples attention): I'm taking a short 1 or 2 week break to get a handle on writing in the 3rd person, sorry.

Since it'll be a while until the next chapter I thought I would reply to some reviews now.

MBS41: Not going to lie I am kind of confused and I thought he was going to be sent to the MHA but this is cool.

BE CONFUSED NO LONGER... He's in the MHA universe but he didn't get transported there, the Ben 10 universe is basically fused with the MHA universe which lets the characters of Ben 10 influence the story without ruin the part that everyone he know has either died or moved on. If I didn't explain it well enough anyone is free to message me and I'll be happy to explain it further, just don't expect me to reply I'm lazy and 90% of the people who have read this are in America so *Time zones mumbo-jumbo that I don't understand*.

Gamelover41952: great job on this chapter

Thanks, my favourite part to write was the part where Ben just internally panicked whenever he didn't know what someone was talking about. Anyway thanks and you are now tied with 'Guest' for 2nd most comments because I refuse to believe that it's not secretly one person making every review under the name 'Guest'. 'Guest' is merely a title that has been bestowed upon the greatest review master of all time, they are called 'Guest' because once you've read their review they've already created 5 more on different stories. They move so fast that they never stay for more than a second in a story, they never stay, they never make a home, always on the move, always... A 'Guest'.

Mecha rango: Lose the pov, I can't tell which person is talking since its always "I said" without telling us which character is now talking.

Also Ben is sure quick to get over the fact that all his family and friends are dead, because of that I feel like your just rushing your story. I think you should get a beta reader or something, or you need to properly plan your story out first.

I already commented on the PoV thing so I'll talk about your other comment. You're right that Ben did get over his friends and family being dead very fast... But I should clarify, Ben is not over their deaths yet, he's just not thinking about, I want to write the story so that he is trying to avoid thinking about his lost ones as much as possible, any falling apart as he does it. In my view when Ben loses something he tends to push the people around him away, with nobody around to support him I think he would probably push himself away from the people he no longer has in his life, I think he would probably eat and drink less and stop sleeping just so he can keep moving as much as possible, kind of similar to *BEEE(spoilers spoiler spoilers)EEEP* in the manga, I doubt it would be as extreme as that but I will sprinkle more of Ben being depressed over his loss in later chapters. Also I do agree that I need someone to read my story before I post it but otherwise I do have some of my story planned out.

Guest: Wouldn't Ben be to old for any of the characters he may still look and be young but how far in future he is I think he should hold off wait for some of the characters to grow up a little first

While that is a cool idea for a story I don't plan on using it, even if I don't plan on using it I don't plan on having him fall in love for someone instantly, he might not even get into a relationship until halfway through the story. That's an amazing concept for a story or some kind of psychological test, I'm not going to use it because I don't think Ben would really think about something like that but I suggest you use it for a sci-fi story that talks about someone who lives in a world where they can't relate to anybody despite their age(... Or whatever you want it's your concept), if you're going to use a site for it I suggest using Royal Road since you can avoid the slave contracts of companies like Webnovel(you don't get paid for it but you can set up a page if you want money), make sure to tell me if you ever make the story, I'd love to read it.

Wahid Alam: you're writing style's pretty nice and the idea's pretty cool too but i gotta say, the story is a bit too slow on the slow side. nothing really interesting also isn't happening in these first 2 chapters. also, even tho the first chapter was too long and kinda dragged on, this chapter is a bit too short. like, what even happened? anyways, i would like to see those stuff change. also, the changing pov stuff is kinda distracting, you should just do 3rd pov all the time.

Yeah sorry about that I do plan to pick up the pace for the story, the time dedicated to different things was kind of spiritic, 1st I got Ben into the world, then he figures out about quirks, then he meets the guy with horns(he'll come back, I've got a name for him in everything), then he finds a place to stay till morning, then he goes to the library and figures out he's in the future, then he stops a crime and becomes a vigilante, then some heroes give their thoughts on him and then Mina is introduced in a bonus scene. The pacing was kind of all over the place, the first 3 point take up almost as much time as the other 5 points if not more, this was kind of just a mistake on my part, sorry.

Wintas:Make more or i make BenXMina hentai.

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I'M MOVING, I'M MOVING, JUST PLEASE DON'T HURT MEEEEHEEeee...!

Anyway, that's about it, I'll see you in like 2 or 3 weeks, have fun and-Guest you better get on that fucken book or so help me god I WASN'T KIDDING GUEST, I WILL FIND YOU... Bye.