I discontinued my Saiyan Self Insert story due to not liking how it turned out... I will make a new, revamped story one day.
There will be a hint as to why Tundora is so strong, even if he trained for all his life. I added this to explain the problems with how vague and glossed over his training was.
Disclaimers: I don't own Dragon Ball, Z, GT, Super, etc. I only own my original characters.
Italics for Author's notes and mental dialogue, Bold for emphasis and enraged dialogue.
The battlefield was quiet, but tense. On one side, two armored men stood with indignant faces. Both possessed an insignia representing their team. One had long white hair, red skin, and wore an armor with a white body and yellow shoulder pads. His under suit was black, yet did not extend to his legs. This man wore white gloves and boots. This was Jeice, the Red Magma of the Ginyu Force.
The other was a tall reptilian man with blue skin, and spots on his body. He had a yellow padded bald head, not unlike his shoulder pads and the toes of his boots. This man had black gauntlets with white trimming and white boots. He possessed black pants. This was Burter, the Blue Hurricane of the Ginyu Force.
On the other side was a Human-looking man with black eyes and palm tree-like hair of the same color. He wore an orange gi with a blue undershirt. The rest of his gi had a blue sash-style obi, and blue boots with yellow knots and red trimming. On his shirt was the kanji for Go on the left and on the back. This was the Saiyan raised on Planet Earth, Son Goku.
And by his side was a purple skinned man with a tail. This alien had purple biological gems on his head, shoulders, hips, ankles, and on the side of his forearms. His body had a bone-like armor which was prominent on his head, body, forearms, ankles, and on the midsection of his waist. He had three toes on both feet. On his face were two vertical stripes of a darker violet color. His red eyes were fixated on the two members of the Ginyu Force. This was Tundora, the son of a nobleman.
Without any warning, Jeice fires a volley of red ki blasts at the two. The orbs were destroyed as Tundora fired a pair of thin purple beams from his eyes to intercept them. The twin beams dispersed as Burter's right fist was attempting to collide with the Frieza Clansman's cheek, only for a lavender tail to wrap around his wrist and squeeze.
"A-a-agggghhh!" The blue alien cried out in pain. The tailed blue blood moved his head to see Burter grasping his arm, pulling it with all of his might. "Having a tail like mine is quite useful, eh?"
A snap was heard between the two, causing the taller man to howl in agony. "Burter!" Jeice rushed in readying a technique he developed in his childhood. With his left hand he forms a red sphere in his open palm, and then slammed it at Tundora with his right hand...
Only for Goku to smack the ki sphere away into the green sea of Namek, causing a medium-sized explosion.
"M-my Crusher Ball... that guy smacked it aside like it was nothing!" the Red Magma commented in disbelief. Burter was thrown a few feet away from the one who snapped his wrist.
"Aghh! Ahh..." Burter tries to relieve the pain of his right hand as Jeice realizes his opportunity and rushes to his friend's aid. "Burter! Are you alright?" The blue man looks at his partner in frustration.
"Does it look like I'm alright!? I'm sure he snapped the bones!" he yells. Before Jeice could help Burter to his feet, a tail smacked him in the face, sending him into the sea.
"Oh my... I went a bit overboard on you." Burter could barely register this latest newcomer's speed. Jeice was sent flying faster than his eyes could keep track. What he did register was Tundora appear in front of him as if no time had passed.
"How...? How did I not see you?" the self-proclaimed "Fastest in the Universe" asked in disbelief. The smirk on the member of his boss's race grew into a grin.
"That was just me moving at a speed faster than most could see. If you could sense energy, you might have realized sooner. Alas you cannot. And if you continue..." the man leans forward, the grin becoming wider. "You will die."
Burter was sweating bullets. How was he slower than this guy!?
"Hey! Get away from him!" A familiar voice commanded. Tundora turned and thrusted his fist into the armor of Jeice, who tried using an ki blade. The fist may have cracked the armor, but Jeice fell to his knees breathless.
"What to do with you?" The Frieza Clansman asked. Goku dashed toward the three with a stern look.
"You did this much to them with little effort? Man, you're strong!" The Saiyan asked. Tundora looked at him and smiled. "I trained with my nanny and forces for years to reach this level. You are just strong enough to keep track of my movements when I am suppressing my power." This got the attention of the two Ginyu Force men.
"No way! Even if you're one of Lord Frieza's race, you can't be that strong from training!" Jeice spoke, refusing to accept this fact.
"You were outclassed before I arrived here. Now... your chances of winning are less than zero." The noble spoke in an amused tone. Two incredibly powerful fighters that stood no chance against him? That was satisfaction for the former Human. He started walking away from the three.
"These two don't pose a threat. I'm going to check on your friends, Goku. They might need someone to help them."
As Tundora withdraws from the battle, Goku handles the rest of the fight. Tundora dashes to Krillin, Vegeta, and Gohan, unintentionally startling them.
"Come now. I am no threat to you. I just finished my business with those two to see how are you three doing." The short Earthling asks Tundora a question. "You came here for eternal youth, right? We came here to revive our friends who recently died. We don't need more problems with getting our wish!"
"Don't worry. That Namekian said that the Dragon Balls can grant three wishes. I can wait after you make your wish." The tailed alien tried to assure them.
"What will you do after you get your wish?" Gohan asked.
"Well... I came here to find the wish-granting orbs so I may rule the universe on a greater scale than what my father imagined. Frieza's being here was just a bonus. Oh, don't worry. I won't follow in Frieza's footsteps. I really don't like him." Tundora responded.
"You want to eliminate the competition. Did you hear about the Dragon Balls from the Frieza Force?" Vegeta said with a glare. The Frieza Clansman looked into the prince's eyes for a moment. As if thinking on what to say.
"Yes. We've heard of the Dragon Balls from our contacts in my relative's army. The men and women who joined the Force with the motive of dethroning that tyrant served me well. Although, some were just in it for the money." Tundora elaborated. He crossed his arms and lowered his head with closed eyes.
"I do want to get rid of Frieza. His father and brother are also despots. They will be dealt with later." This alarms the shortest man and the hybrid boy. "Hold on! Frieza's father and brother!?" The bald monk asks for clarification.
"Yes. King Cold is the former ruler of the cosmos. He retired and placed the title of Emperor to his youngest, Frieza. Cooler is the other son. I have had... dealings with him in the past..."
Age 749, In orbit of Cooler Planet #256 aka Planet Beppa
A 12 year old Tundora was wearing an olive green cloak with the hood over his face. He was walking alongside a gorgeous woman with light blue skin and long green hair tied into a ponytail. She was wearing an older model of the armor worn by the Frieza and Cooler Forces. Zuyu was escorting her lord through the spaceship of Cooler.
"You must be careful, my lord. Your kinsman expects you to be on your best behavior." The young Frost Demon nods with a hum.
They walk through the corridor to see a large door that opens revealing a large green alien with long black hair. He was wearing an armor that had no under suit, and possessed only a left shoulder pad. He wears purple underwear. He was wearing a white helmet with a brown center. On the left side of his face was a yellow scouter. This man hailed from the planet covered in lava below.
" Lord Tundora, General Zuyu? I am Dore of Lord Cooler's Armored Squadron. He is expecting you. Follow me." The now introduced Dore turned and motioned for the two to follow. The trio walked toward the lookout room, passing by many soldiers of different peoples. Races that the young blue blood recognized as Recoome, Jeice/Salza, Guldo, Burter's and more.
The lookout room was spacious. A tan interior with machines and operators. By the floating hoverchair, were two guards. A hand was seen motioning to the guards that they were dismissed. They bow and take their leave.
Dore got onto his knee, bowing. "Lord Cooler. The guests have arrived."
The chair turned around to face the three. In it, was the older brother of Frieza. A tall violet man with a tail. Cooler sported white armor on his chest, shins, shoulders, and head (the latter was adorned with a slim blue bio-gem).
"Ah... at last we meet. Tundora... And General Zuyu." The man began to introduce himself. "I am Cooler." A smile formed on his face.
Tundora pulled back his hood with his right hand, and bowed his head. "Pleasure to meet you Lord Cooler." Zuyu bowed as well.
"I have heard of your father's demise. A sad fate for Brumahl. You have my condolences young Tundora." Coolers spoke in a mournful tone. Tundora nodded and closed his eyes momentarily.
"If I may ask Lord Cooler, why have you summoned us?" The boy inquired his elder kinsman. Cooler rose from his hoverchair, levitating until his bare, three-toed feet touched the floor of the room.
"I've heard of your growth in power... While you were born with a somewhat respectable power level of 40,000, you have managed to increase it to 370,000 in merely 12 years!" The Emperor's brother noted.
"While my irksome little brother was born with fearsome power, he never thought to improve upon it. The utter fool. I was born with a lower power which I had to improve. I trained until my body nearly broke to reach my level of power. You seem to be cut from a similar cloth." Cooler continued by revealing that he has trained compared to Frieza.
"I had Zuyu to teach me the basics. I learned to sense the energy of others by meditating with the more skilled fighters of my army." Tundora revealed to Cooler, who raised a nonexistent eyebrow.
"Really? You don't need a scouter to detect energy? Impressive. I am able to suppress my energy, though that could come in handy." The Emperor's brother commented.
"Now, back to my purpose for summoning you. You became much stronger than your birth power level. I sense that you are capable of much more. Here is what I am offering... If you will not join my forces, then you have the options to train under my elite unit, the Armored Squadron, and eventually me."
Looks of surprise adorn the faces of Zuyu, Tundora, and Dore. "Yes, I know that this is a great opportunity. Know that while I would be disappointed if you decline, I won't hold it against you. The Armored Squadron are the finest in the Cooler Force. I will await your decision in a month from today."
In the mind of Tundora, there was thoughts of greed, power, and nervousness. (Train under the Armored Squadron and Cooler!? That sounds difficult as hell! But the rewards of power and skill are great... Will I have to kill innocent people to stay in their good graces? I'm sure as hell no angel, but I don't want to be condemned in the afterlife!)
Tundora looked to the ground thinking over the proposition. (In this world, I need strength, power, and technique to help me survive... But can I act outside my moral compass for certain moments?)
Tundora looked up to meet Cooler's eyes. "Before I make my choice, can I request one thing?" The despot nodded.
"Will you promise me to not make me hurt or kill people I wish to spare unless it cannot be helped?" This caused Cooler to blink.
"I can take on assignments that involve capturing or eliminating targets. Only the targets you need dead will die." This makes the man chuckle.
"You believe in extending mercy to others? Even if they are dangerous opponents that would spit on your mercy? That will be a nuisance. But for you, I can bend the rules just a little. I, Cooler, will not make you execute anyone, unless it is a priority."
Tundora cracked a nervous smile. "Thank you Lord Cooler. I accept your proposition."
Present Day
Tundora's POV
"Burter!"
A (Space) Australian voice jolts me back to reality. I look to see Burter on the ground with parts of his armor broken. Goku must have finished defeating the Blue Hurricane. Jeice hovers in the air in terror.
"This fight is pointless! Just take your friends and leave the planet!" Goku shouts to Jeice who looks like he is about to erupt.
"Don't be absurd Kakarot! Finish them off now!" Vegeta shouts for Goku to kill him.
"You bastard! Just wait 'til the Captain hears of this! He is gonna beat your ass, ape! And you too traitor!"
Jeice flies off before I could correct him. "Great, now he got away! And you did nothing to stop him!" Vegeta chastised me for not doing something. "You could have pulverized Jeice and you let him go!" He turned his attention to Goku, who walks up to us.
"You were a fool for not finishing the job Kakarot. Now he's on his way to alert Ginyu, the strongest of the team!" Vegeta then takes out his anger on the K.O.'d Recoome and Burter.
He darts toward the blue marauder and drives his knee to Burter's neck, killing him. "Vegeta, stop!" Goku tries to stop the prince but he has already fired a blast to destroy Recoome.
"They were already defeated! You didn't have to kill them!" Goku angrily reprimands Vegeta, who spits onto the ground as he walks toward us. "Do you really believe that these guys would just change their ways just because you offered them mercy!? They would spit on your mercy!"
The shorter man glares at Goku. "You're no Super Saiyan after all." This gets Goku's attention. "Super Saiyan? What?" he asks only for Vegeta to continue.
"What good is all that power if you don't have the killer instinct to finish the job? You make me sick!"
"We'll see. I don't think having a little compassion is going to hold me back." Goku says which makes the prince scoff. "You poor fool. A fight with Frieza is going to be your end! Frieza's going to chew you up and spit you back out!"
"I have to agree somewhat." All eyes turn to me. "Goku, while it is true that mercy can be a great thing, it won't work on these kinds of people." I state. "If that's what you believe, then why didn't you finish off Jeice!?" Vegeta questions me.
I can't tell them the whole truth. "I can defeat the Ginyu Force on my own. Especially with my potential unlocked." This gets everyone's attention. "I did not want to deal with Frieza this early." I am suppressing my ki to Goku's level as best as I can to help my argument.
"It doesn't matter now. They have the Dragon Balls. Frieza has probably already made his wish." Vegeta says in defeat. This makes Krillin speak up.
"I don't think so." Vegeta looks to Krillin. "Huh? Why not!? Explain!"
"On Earth, all sorts of crazy stuff starts happening when you summon the Dragon. The sky goes totally dark, and there's a lot of lightning, and high winds." The monk looks up. "The sky is calm."
"Then why hasn't Frieza summoned the Dragon!?" Vegeta points out. "I know! There's probably a password. On Earth, you don't need one." Goku continues.
"A password? Then there's still hope!" Vegeta says with renewed determination.
This makes Gohan and Krillin cheer up. "We can still bring back Mr. Piccolo and the others!"
A jolt passes through me. There are two powers moving toward us. And... a bunch more heading to the planet!? With an even larger ki too!?
"Do you feel that? The rest of the Ginyus are moving to our location, and there are more energy signatures heading toward Namek!" I alert the heroes and Vegeta!
"What!?" Krillin shouts.
"You're right Tundora!" Goku looks to the sky.
"Oh man!"
"More reinforcements!?" Vegeta wonders.
"Not entirely. I don't know the rest, but there is one I do know!. It's Cooler!" I grit my teeth, then look to the others in fury.
"Forget about my wish! Do what you came here to do! I need to get to my ship!" I blast off to the large amount of ki signatures that have not moved since we landed.
This is absurd! Why is Cooler here!? And who are the others!? It can't be Slug and his crew... I dealt with them six years ago.
I zoom past islands, mountains, and cliffs. I'm getting closer... There! The ship is in view.
I touch down by the entrance, multiple soldiers make way for me to enter.
"Sir! We have detected numerous power levels approaching Namek!" A horned soldier warns me. "I know! I sensed them!" I tell him.
"Where is Zuyu?" I asked. A scouter on a member of Recoome's race beeps. "She is coming out of the ship now sir."
Alright. After more than a few moments, Zuyu runs down the ramp without a scouter. Her face showed fear and worry.
"Lord Tundora! We have been betrayed! Someone was sending our coordinates and plans to not only Cooler, but the Crusher Corps as well!"
"WHAT!?" I shout in rage!
An easy battle against Burter and Jeice, a revelation about Tundora's history with Cooler, and now more trouble! Looks like the Cooler Force AND Turles' Crusher Corps are coming to Namek! Can the Z-Fighters, Vegeta and Tundora overcome this dilemma? Find out next time!
Sorry that this took so long guys and gals. I had some stuff to do, and I also got lazy. I also watched Spider-Man No Way Home recently. Expect an update for my Unbelievable Goblin SI story in the future!
If there is any suggestions you have for this story, let me know! Don't forget to check out my poll and also to review!
6/22/2022: I changed the name of Tundora's father to Brumahl (as in the word brumal, which means relating to winter). The original name for his father was... taken in a sense. I don't want to plagiarize names or characters. Though if you tried coming up with an original name for an original character, you would soon learn how difficult it is. LOL
Glaring Goblin out!