Ahh sorry this took a little bit, I was absorbed into rereading my favorite trilogy and then kind of forgot about posting this. But thank you for all the support I saw in the meanwhile!
Just some quick review replies, won't normally copy and paste the review but there were four different guests, three without nicks, so I just want to differentiate. Replaced the line breaks with / though so it takes up less space.
laurs: "GREAT STARCLAN IT'S HAMILTON / the me? i loved him is the most accurate thiung ever / also i sang this all to the tune of alexander hamilton / obviously / my brain: say no to this will be funnnn / also me: whoa wait what-" Ahh yes I actually thought the same thought about about Say No to This though, it's three songs down the line and I think it is my favorite out of all the ones I've done so far to be honest.
Guest: "That was actually dope af / Only thing I would say is that Darkstripe could have been replaced by Dustpelt, since the first one dies hating Firestar while Dustpelt goes to respect him and fight by his side" Thank you! And very true, especially since I paired him with Longtail who, like Dustpelt, went on to respect Firestar. A little too late now though :P
Guest: "I'm so confused lol" Completely understandable lol, especially if you haven't seen/listened to Hamilton. But hey, hopefully you were a little amused too!
Guest: "LMAO AT DIS STORY / SO FUNNY IMAGINING THEM SINGING" Yessssss exactly why I started doing this! Actually this is kind of why I loved my version of Say No To This so much, because it gets to Maria Reynold's part and the cat singing it totally comes out of left field.
Sorry if that got a little long, I just wanted to respond to them. Anyways, here is the little summary I put in my notes about the timeline to help y'all understand where we are now. It's much further along in Into the Wild but I've got the whole first series to play with.
Summary: "Firepaw continues to train hard, only to stumble upon Yellowfang in the forest. He defeats her before catching prey for her, the two of them sharing the meal. Later, when Firepaw doesn't seem to receive much punishment, Tigerclaw eggs on Dustpaw and Longtail by pointing out how Firepaw has unfairly earned Bluestar's favor."
BLUESTAR ON YOUR SIDE
[TIGERCLAW]
It must be nice, it must be nice to have
Bluestar on your side
It must be nice, it must be nice to have
Bluestar on your side
[DUSTPAW]
Ev'ry action has its equal, opposite reactions
Thanks to Firepaw, our Clan is fractured into factions
Try not to crack under the stress, we're breaking down like fractions
We knew a kittypet couldn't fit and now he's committing his latest infraction
I get no satisfaction witnessing his fits of passion
The way he primps and preens and sees his ginger fur as fashion
Our warriors and kits and queens are living ration to ration
And Firepaw goes and feeds a hostile rogue who only just crashed in
This prick is askin' for someone to bring him to task
Somebody gimme some dirt on this vacuous mass so we can at last unmask him
I'll spread some rumors 'round him, someone put it on the docket
But while we were all watching, he got Bluestar in his pocket
[DUSTPAW & TIGERCLAW]
It must be nice, it must be nice to have
Bluestar on your side
It must be nice, it must be nice to have
Bluestar on your side
Look back at his buried collar
[LONGTAIL]
Which I broke
[DUSTPAW/LONGTAIL/TIGERCLAW]
He still wears it inside
It must be nice, it must be nice to have
Bluestar on your side
[DARKSTRIPE]
So he's increased the size of the prey pile
Wasn't the trouble with much of our previous prey pile size?
[TIGERCLAW]
Look in his eyes!
[DUSTPAW]
See his disguise
[LONGTAIL]
Follow the scent of his kittypet ties
[TIGERCLAW]
Increasing ThunderClan discredit
And making ThunderClan discredit irrelative
[LONGTAIL]
If we don't stop it we aid and abet it
[DUSTPAW]
The Clan will decline
[DARKSTRIPE]
Somebody has to stand up for the crowd!
[LONGTAIL]
Somebody has to stand up to that mouse!
[TIGERCLAW]
If there's a fire you're trying to douse
[LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & DUSTPAW]
You can't put it out with a single pounce!
[DUSTPAW]
I'm an apprentice. I am complicit in
Watching him learnin' the code and then dissin' it
If Bluestar isn't gon' listen
To disciplined dissidents, this is the difference:
This kit is out!
[LONGTAIL & TIGERCLAW & DARKSTRIPE & DUSTPAW]
Oh!
This kittypet isn't somebody we chose
Oh!
This kittypet's keeping us all on our toes
Oh!
Let's show these pro-kittypets who they're up against!
Oh!
[DARKSTRIPE & LONGTAIL]
Some anti-kittypet-
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
Pure-blooded ThunderClan warriors!
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW & ENSEMBLE]
Oh!
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
Let's follow his antics and see where it goes
[ENSEMBLE]
Oh!
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
Because every second his influence grows
[ENSEMBLE]
Oh!
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
If we follow his antics and see where it leads
Get in the weeds, look for the seeds of
Firepaw's misdeeds
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
It must be nice. It must be nice
[LONGTAIL]
Follow his antics and see where it goes
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
It must be nice. It must be nice
[TIGERCLAW]
Kittypets break all oaths.
[DUSTPAW & LONGTAIL & DARKSTRIPE & TIGERCLAW]
We won't be invisible. We won't be denied
Still
It must be nice, it must be nice to have
Bluestar on your side
I like the idea of Longtail chiming in about him being the one who broke Firepaw's collar because I really see younger him just wanting to show off a little. Also, the "he still wears it inside" part right after that is supposed to mean that Tigerclaw and crew still consider Firepaw to still act like a kittypet even without physically wearing his collar.
Anyways, thanks for reading, hopefully I will be back to updating every day or two again!