Authors note: This isn't one of my best stories but it's definitely not my worst.

Could you give me some feedback to help me get better at writing?

What do you think about making someone else come back in time as well as Harry and they form a secret alliance?

The Harry Potter universe belongs to Joanne Rowling. Have an extraordinary time reading! :)


Harry stepped out the house and immediately tripped and fell.

"Blimey James."

Harry jumped in surprise and looked up to see who spoke. To his surprise he wasn't even outside, if he was right then he was in his dormitory at Hogwarts.

Harry then turned his head to see who spoke. "Sirius?"

"Yes, that's my name." The boy in front of him nodded.

The dormitory door opened and another boy walked in. Everyone froze. Harry would have been convinced he was looking in a mirror if the other boy didn't have hazel eyes instead of a bright green.

"James?" Sirius Black looked from one boy to the other.

"Remus!" Sirius yelled. "Sirius don't yell it's not like Moony can do anything. What do you think he'd do, kill the other me?"

"I'm not the other you I'm me." Harry folded his arms. "Well I'm not you, I'm me which means you're another me." The other boy folded his arms as well.

A brown-haired boy entered and looked from Harry to Sirius to the other boy.

"Bloody hell." He stared, "Why are there two of you?" "There isn't two of him, I'm me and he's him." Harry scowled. "I don't understand a single thing you said." The brown-haired boy then looked questionably at Sirius, "Which one's the real James?" "I'm not James." Harry stated. "Noted." Sirius nodded. "So what the bloody hell's happening?" Harry asked. "Well, what's your name?" James asked. "Harry." "That's Remus, Sirius and I'm James." Harry then recognised Remus. "He already knew my name." Sirius grinned smugly at James. "Because you look the same." Harry stated.

The three boys ignored him, "Where's Peter?" James asked. "Helping Flitwick clean the mess you made." Remus said crossly. "Sorry." James said not sounding sorry at all.

"Is anyone going to tell me what's happening?" Harry asked. "We don't know." James grumbled. "Tell McGonagall." Remus suggested. "That sounds sensible." Sirius said slowly. "How would you know what sensible is, Sirius?" James grinned. "Same goes with you." Sirius snapped.

Harry slowly stood up looking around, the dorm looked slightly different.

James and Sirius linked arms with Harry and marched him down out the dormitory with Remus following from behind.


"We have a problem!" James yelled barging into McGonagall's office. "That's not uncommon." She muttered turning around. "Who's this?" She asked looking at Harry suspiciously. "He's James's copy!" Sirius exclaimed. "I'm not anyones copy!" Harry said angrily.

"Where did he come from?" McGonagall asked. "Out of no where!" Sirius said happily. McGonagall looked at Harry, "Where did you come from?"

Harry couldn't trust anyone, especially after last year with the whole Moody problem.

"I don't remember." He lied. McGonagall looked as though she was trying to figure out what to do when she finally said, "We'll take you to the hospital wing and see what's happened and if there's a reason you can't remember anything."

"I remember my name." Harry said slowly. "What is it?" She asked. "Harry." He replied. McGonagall raised an eyebrow. "I'm not a double of James!" Harry cried out, now feeling annoyed.

"We'll remember you as a double whether you like it or not!" Sirius said grinning.