It had been a few weeks Jaune was walking around his force fathers tomb, he had put his outfit over the Armor he picked up form the death watch member. he had trained under the tail head Darth Talon. he also used the force to extract the information on how to fly the ship form the clones, who were already old. he made them age faster then the Jedi clones he want to be the only one to know of this. Now his force father died on remnant trying to understand why no force user could be born there, and what was the deal with aura.

That said, The Tomb won't house his body anyway a master like him would be come a force ghost one with the force. the tomb was loaded with holocrons he had taken to watching, books, light sabers Valuable gems and objects that would get a lot of credits. His force Father was smart enough to trade all this kingdom worth of cash into things to get cash back, In case money system changed making the ones of his day useless. the planet One big ocean one mountain filled continent also had another edge. Salt water. oceans. there was a fresh water lake, but Salt was rare, the massive salty ocean, Made this a planet with an ocean of gold basically. " put your tomb on a planet of treasure." he comment mask of the old Revan upon his face.

he looked at his hand summoning a spear of dark side energy for a moment, As he was given massive knowledge, he just need basics to use it. Darth Talon force bless the dark side user who became an amazing lover to him as well, had taught him all he need to know to use the dark side perfectly. "Bless her but it's not enough!" he made a fist, His father was feared form being grey, a true master of the force. Dark side emotion and movement, the light side was stillness and detachment. Two different addictions, that need one another to counter arc. he need a Jedi Master, he need more lovers After all he was technically king of this empty world. rich in salt water edible Plants crystals for lightsabers and treasure. he need a home. he need henchmen, he need to star searching for his friends.

he turned to Talon, "While the clones can still function to Fly Darth Talon get your sabers we are leaving. ... Tatooine has entered my mind am I right to say that is a planet?" She nodded and said, "yes my master!" she sounded happy.

the new dark Revan pointed and said,"then it be the will of the force my journey to find all I most have start there!"

Later On Tatooine. Yang was shaking in a slave girl outfit she didn't have her aura of semblance so she was helpless as she could do was hold on to the crying yellow skinned Tail head girl, no older then five who was also going to be sold.

That was when she heard a voice call out her name, "Yang," she looked up to see the ship owned by death watch landing. right in the middle it was a crash the clones flying it having killed over, But Revan and Talon walked out, the pig men Clearly working for Jabba the hut in the slave business Came around them.

the slug came out and spoke, before his droid could say anything Jaune said, "I can understand you just fine you fat fuck!" he repeated the sentence in Jabba's langue. " your a slaver so This is your final day!" the pig men charged as Jaune drew his weapons Same as Talon. the slug spoke, only for Jaune too say, "I care too much to be a fucking Jedia!" He charged with a spin cutting the henchmen down along with cages! "Talon cut the cages and chains! Too more slaves!"

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Revan held his blades out and force dashes through the pigs cutting them in half making it to Jabba, here he tightened the grip on his sabers making the hutt gasp, "to give you a heart attack will take awhile but It's the end you deserve hutt!" he said slashing around as Slaves ran for freedom, The cage for yang and the tail head remaining unopened as the Hutt screamed.

Before long the hutt's screaming stopped he was dead, his tail head servant tried to run but Revan throw his lightsaber slashing his legs off as he pulled it back. The dark saber in hand he walked over he was screaming, "Don't worry. you always leave one Alive to tell the tail. So you will live this day! I will even let you keep your arms, because You found one of the seven people I am looking for. Your life your remaining limbs is your reward. When you tell this story you will say I am Darth Revan the second! " he waved a hand knocking him out.

that is when Revan turned and walked over using the steel blade to slash the chains Yang holding the young girl. that is when the dark saber was put up so he could lower his hood then take off his mask and smile. Yang's eyes widened, "JAUNE!"

the arc put touched the steel sword to the girl, "yes now relax this is either nothing or this thing still works and you can use the force now. if you have we will see. Now Know this is shocking so well My ghostly lot of great grandpa, Molded me into his own image as a chaotic space wizard samurai yang. I believe I pull well, the red skinned woman to my right is Darth Talon we meet her guard lot of great papa's tomb. She is my lover now."

Yang got up in rage, growling her rage clear as day upon her lovely face "HOLD IT! I SAT IN THIS HORRIBLE PLACE SO YOU COULD BOLDY ...!"

she gasped as Jaune put the sword up. " I know were that was going and Talon thanks for shutting her up we have a seven year old here!" he petted the little girls head, "Now What is your name youngling!" yang's throat was let go and she panted holding it. The young one looked down Jaune held his chin, "Can't remember, this bastards are sick. How about Angel!" he petted her head and her eyes lit up, she hugged him and he returned him. this was the start but he stood up, "Now Talon help Yang to your spare outfit, Gather the things with our ship crashed and the pilots killed over form old age we need to drop it, Gather up everything worth money, We need to buy cloths for the youngling find a new ship and a ne pilot."

He held his chin before putting his mask and hood back on. he sensed it the light side, they would sense him. he could sense the confusion of a dark side user of this power out of nowhere. he was still unskilled just strong. he held his hand he was broadcasting now, something that made the other darksiders do the same in shock, the numbers a dozen of them. Lighting up in the force. The darkside won't be ignored.

Later on Watto was looking at Junes scroll, "For can't go to space people this multi functional device is amazing. This is a safe bet. I will call in my tech guy we reverse engineer it upgrade it for solar system travel make trillions of credits. your offer this deal for my largest working ship is a go. Providence class dreadnought Very big command class. Just repaint it so people don't think you are taking side on space civil war."

the door opened and Jaune turned, "Oh look the child snatching cultist are here!" Obi-wan , Anakin skywalker and there clones walked in.

Obi-wan held his chin, "Well That's ... Not technically inaccurate" he said holding in chin before he could counter Jaune said, "JEDI LORDS!" Obin wan shut up.

Anakin held his light saber only for Angel to pull it with the force to her Too yang's shock. Revan clapped, "And the sword still works. it gives the force!" he took it and force pushed it back to the Jedi to there shock.

Revan said, "let's cut the crap, If the dark side is chaos and emotion, your side is stillness and detachment. It's impossible to fit to your no attachment thing. Being on this planet as your buddy thinking of the navies who killed his mother, And the side of the dark saber on my hip reminds you of that Dutches you are shocked you didn't leave pregnant!" the clones and skywalker turned to look at Kenobi.

Kenobi cleared his throat, "So you can read our surface thoughts then"

Talon spoke up, "My master doesn't wish for a fight, he only came to this world as I only seeks the other survivors of his so primitive they though they were alone world. He seeks six more. People!"

revan bowed before sending of force lighting on the clones making them scream, "I shorted out the chips in your brain with are clearly to force you to take away free will. I short it out the program is intact if you don't believe me. Also Check under your temple It use to not be yours." They seemed confused but In a Moment revan dropped a holocron showing jedi attacking a sith temple in the location of there temple. At that point the over focused on this Jedi allowed Revan and crew to get away to the ship.

Yang crossed her arms, the copy of Talon's outfit was only slightly more covering then the slave outfit. The young ling went to go change. as the blonde who be came an adoptive mother to her said, "and I though you said you couldn't fly it?"

Revan took controls and took off, "No I said I want a professional. I can't do hyper space calculations. I can how ever put us in it for a bit to make it look like we are long gone while we hide on another planet.

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