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In Cafe

Pankaj- sir yeh zayada hua ha vo sabko maut ke mooh mein dhakel rahe ha

Tasha - esa nahi ha vo bus theek kar rahe ha

Vivek - tasha tumhari problem kya ha itna kyu side le rahe ho

Tasha - mujhe Hairan gi ha tum kyu unke against ho mujhe nahi pata

Freedy - sir app kuch kijiye please

Daya - isne sabki problems , dar or weakness ko chedha ha Sachin ko gadar kaha apne app dekh le pehle khud ko toh bimari ha bhoolne ki huh

Tasha - apko esa nahi bolna chahiye

Shreya - daya try to understand

Daya - Shreya wo samjh nahi raha ha usse bhi samjha chahiye hume hum hi kyu compromise kare

Kajal - sir koi toh hoga isd samsya ko hatane ka

Daya - bahut sar par chadha ha ese karta ha jese iski koi kamzori na... lekin mein bhi Daya hu abhijeet ke bache ko mene sabak seekha kar rahu ga ..

Pankaj - lekin

Daya - yaha thodi door ek haveli ha kafi time se band padhi ha ... kehte ha vo bahut darawni ha itni asan nahi ha (all looked at eachother) atma ka Saya you know na kya kahaniya hoti ha ... ussi haveli mein usko do din rakhte ha apne app akal ajae gi same samjhe ga na andhere kya cheez ha

on otherside 0Vikram hold Purvi hairs and throws on bed..

Vikram - bata de wo ladki kaha ha

Purvi nodded in no

Vikram - dekho Purvi tumhe jann se nahi marr raha hu kyuki tum meri behen ho..

Purvi - toh meri beti bhi apki bhanji ha..

Vikram - or vo hi bhanji meri behen ki zindagi barbad kar rahi ha

Purvi - (tearly) bhaiya mein apni beti ke bina nahi reh sakti uska koi nahi ha mein Guzar lu gi zindagi uske sath ...mujhe nahi karni ha dusri shaadi samjhiye or akhil bahut Marta ha mujhe

Vikram - zindagi bhar mein bhoj nahi sehen kar sakta tumhara samjhi or ek dhang ki aulad nahi paida kar sakti tum..(he hold her cheek ) mera koi dar nahi hai na tujhe..toh theek ha tu oro ke hath hi theek hogi abse

Purvi shocked

Vikram - mein bhi dekhta hu ki kese tum ab shaadi ke liye manna karti ho vo tumhe itna tadpae ga ki tum khud shaadi ke liye kaho gi

Voice - Vikram sahab

Vikram saw diwan

Diwan - neeche Comissioner sahab ae ha Apse milna chahte ha

Vikram - hum atte ha

Vikram went with diwan

Down stairs

Comissioner - hume behad khushi ha ki app yaha ae ha isse humare desh or udaygarh ke rishte behad mazboot honge

Vikram - humara saubhagya ha hum jante ha iss desh se humare pita ji ki yaadein Judi ha yaha hi paidaish hui ha unki hume behed acha lagta ha bharat ki taraki ki gathae sun kar..

Comissioner smile

Comissioner - rajkumari ji kaha ha

Vikram - andar aram farma rahi ha ..

Man - (to Rishi) sir

Rishi saw him

Man - abhijeet sir ready ha

Rishi took a deep breath ..and nodded

Vikram - vese Comissioner sahab ek baat puche appse

Rishi - puchiye na..

Vikram - mene ek baat yaha bahut dekha ha hume istriyo ka tarika , vayvhar, pehra bilkul bhi acha nahi laga

Rishi - Vikram ji agar mard apne pasand ka pehrava Chun sakta ha to ek istri kyu nahi yaha sabko hakk ha apna dharam, pherawa, andaz chunne ka

Vikram - humare rajy akar toh dekhiye kabhi

Rishi smile and nodded

Rishi - jis desh mein nari ki taraki nahi hoti vo desh peeche hi reh jata ha

Vikram - essi taraki ka fayda kya jo ek istri ko vastr heen karde... yaha kai baar dekha ha mene garbi ne mardo ko vastr Heen kar diya or ameeri ne istri ko ... itni choot achi nahi warna pehle ka zamana dekhiye aurte andar rehti thi mard kaam par jatte the sabko apne Kary pata hote the kintu ajj ghar koi sambhal hi nahi pata yehi tutne ka karan banjata ha ... talak naam ki parampara jo bharat mein shuru hogayi ha

Rishi took a deep breath

Vikram - apki koi putri ha ?

Rishi - nahi bete ha mere do

Vikram - vivahit

Rishi - nahi filhal mere ek bete ne ladki dhund rakhi ha dusra toh kehta hu karle ghar basale lekin janab

Vikram - karte kya ha

Rishi - ek beta doctor ha matlab vaid or ek desh ki hifazat mein ha CID officer ha Abhijeet

Vikram - inme se kisne ladki nahi chunni

Rishi - abhijeet ne

Vikram - acha ha kya

Rishi - abhijeet darasal mera sakha beta nahi lekin usse bhi badh kar ha mere bete ka dost ha lekin uski kabiliyat , uski sundarta, visheshtae, needarta bahut akarshit karti ha Hal hi mein delhi se yaha aya ha aditya jo mera bada beta ha vo delhi mein hi ha

Vikram - agar itni visheshtaee ha toh abhi tak vivah

Rishi - pariwarik samsya ke karan chinta rehte ha kal hu mila hu mein atyant krodhit rehte ha ajj kal rishta na bigad le bus isi ka dar ha or iss baat ka bhi ki koi upyog na karle pareshani ka ..

Vikram started thinking

Vikram - matlab sanskari ha bus yeh ha

Rishi - bahut zayada sir sharmata rehta ha kabiliyat ko sar chadne nahi deta ..

Vikram - zamin wagera

Rishi - sir paisa toh bahut ha karan yeh ha ki koi karch karne wala nahi isi liye vo bachata rehta ha bus

Vikram - hmm.. mein apni behen ke liye ladka dhund raha hu

Rishi - apki behen ki sundarta toh

Vikram - kintu ladh pyar ke karan kuch nahi ata usse raaj pariwar mein vivha ka socha tha kintu kisi karan se nahi kar paa rahe ha..

Rishi - umar

Rishi - 27 kuwari ha

Diwan shocked

Diwan - maharaj but he stop as Vikram showed his hand

Vikram - pita ji ke janne ke baad zimedari mujh par agayi thodi bigad gayi ha vo ab toh baat Manti nahi asani se

Diwan - oh

Vikram - mein uska vivha karke ghar basa dena chahta hu bus yehi ha jitna marzi dehaj lele samne wala..humse aptoh jante ha hum sab

Diwan - maharaj apki behen ki sundarta ke toh charche hi bahut ha koi bhi apki behen ko swikar kar sakta ha app jisko marzi somphiye koi na nahi kahe ga

Vikram - akarshan hi uske liye saza bangaya ha vivah sirf akarshan ke liye nahi hota ki insan istemal kare or phenk de vivha hota ha jeewan bhar sath dene ka ab kisi ese vese shakhs ke hath apni behen dena shobha nahi deta hume

Rishi - app abhijeet se Jodhna chahte ha apni behen

Vikram - filhal hum parakhna chahte ha usse vese abhijeet ka pariwar ? kya pariwarak samsya ha

Rishi - darasal uske baap ne do - do shaadiya kar rakhi ha pehle wali biwi toh mar gayi thi dusri ke sath rehta ha fir agge beta bhi ha bus abhijeet ko issi baat ka ha ki usse door rakha or dusre bete ko sab kuch de diya

Vikram - matlab uske pass khud ka

Rishi - areh kamata ha vo khud capable ha bus yeh koi agge peeche nahi ha hum bacha mante ha apna hi..

Vikram - hmm koi tasveer hogi kya uski ?

Rishi - ji ha..

(he showed the pic of abhijeet)

Vikram - bhej dijiye hume

Rishi send the pic

In beuro

Abhi was sitting acp was standing irritate on his head making face..Abhi was calm no one was in beuro

Acp - matam khatam hogaya ho toh lunch kar ae

Abhi ignore and continue his file

Acp snatched it

Acp - lunch karo

Abhi - mene apko hath kadi nahi lagi app jaa sakte ha apka beta neeche hi ha

Acp - toh mera ek beta beuro mein bhi ha tumhari problem kya ha !! beuro mein pyar se baat kar raha hu na kyu nahi khush rehte usme aram se baat kar raha hu tum hi jhagad te ho or kaam bhi ese karte ho

Abhi down head ..

Abhi - dad please..

Acp bend on knees and looked he was having tears

Acp - naraz ho na

Abhi was silent

Acp - I am sorry (he cupped his face) but I really missed you .. abhijeet..

Abhi - it's OK dad..

Acp smile..

Abhi - galati shayad apki bhi nahi ha ab mere naseeb mein hi yeh sab nahi toh mein kya kar sakta hu.. (acp smile vanish ) apke janne ke baad mene realize kiya ki agar maa zinda hoti toh shayad app bhi na jatte ek bache ka dard na Kowal maa samjh sakti ha kyuki ussi ne sambhale hota ha paida kiya hota ha baap toh hote hi pathar dil ha.. but app ese nahi ha mene Daya ko dekha ha he is friendly with you akhir baap hi iss umar mein dost hota ha great work..karta hu mein maff apko chodho mene apko apne bhoj se

Acp - kisne keh diya tum bhoj ho

Abhi - agar bina batae pariwar mein koi ghus jae na or akar disturb karde privacy ko toh vo bhoj hi hota ha

Acp - tumne kabhi disturb nahi kiya

Abhi - smriti se puchlijiye ga shayad vishvass hojae ... bus ek request ha ab apse..

Acp - kya

Abhi - vo ghar le lijiye mujhse..(acp shocked ) kyuki uss ghar ke mein layak nahi

Acp - tum toh uss ghar ke liye ae the na yado ke liye

Abhi - bahana tha vo kyuki mein samjhta tha ki shayad apko uss ghar se zayada or kuch keemti nahi lagta ha lekin mein galat tha duniya mein na pariwar ha toh sab kuch hai izzat ha Dolat ha.. or insan ko chahiye kya..

I am really sorry ki mene akar kafi tamasha khada kardiya apko meri wajha se sehen karna padha... mein Monday ko transfer ke liye apply kardu ga..or ajj hi hotel shift hojaunga

Acp - transfer kyu ..

Abhi - bus ese hi mann nahi ha mera

Acp - jabse ae ho tabse ladh rahe ho or ab achanak tum ese kya hua thodi der pehle tum normal the

Abhi - vo apko bataya na ajat sir ne toh daura padh jata ha gussa ho jata hu bus isi liye mentally ill hu or kya..

he just turned off the PC and closed it..

Abhi - once again, sorry sir apko mene kuch zayada hi pareshan kardiya ..

he got up and left..

Acp - ese achanak 2 minute pehle toh sab normal tha..

he thinks and open the up the computer and search for the history he got messenger app open

Acp - delhi forensics

he open it and found..saw msg

Acp - store room mein kharab papers ko mene saff Kardiya ha yeh likha ha usme ...

he open up the image and saw..

Acp - vrinda ki handwriting

(he zoom it and started reading)

Abhijeet , yeh chithi shayad tumhe tab mile jab mein bahut bahut door jaa chuki hui mein shayad hi abb tumse milu..lekin ha ek baar hum vapiss zarur mile ge lekin uss waqt ka agar tumhe intezaar karna padhe ga..or agar tumne apne dad ko pareshan kiya mein or late aungi tumhe lene ..(acp eyes filled with tear )

meri shikayat ha tumse mein dekh rahi hi tum ajj kal bahut tang karte ho dad ko ... Abhi be mature now tumhara mature hona zaruri ha beta because your dad is too weak.. agar vo time na de pae na toh rona maat kyuki puri city ki zimedari ha unpar... agar vo tumhe hi sambhalte rahe toh duty kese kare ge...mene tumhari dadi se baat ki ha shayad meri tarha tumhare liye ek or beautiful angel aee..vo tumhara dhyan rakhe gi unko bhi tang maat karna or ha tumhare papa jaha bhi le jae chale jana new angel ke sath acha behave karna.. zid maat karna or apne dad ke sath bhi it's your responsibility to keep your dad happy ..agar tumhare dad happy rahe toh I will be happy ..

Acp - meri zimedari toh sonph di thi usse lekin uski zimedari bhi sonph deti kisi ko..or maa se baat karke janne ka kya matlab hua unhe bola tumhe jinhe shaak tha abhijeet mera beta ha ki nahi

He remembered..

in shamshan ghat

Pandit - app ghar ke bade bache ko bulakar agni dilwaiye

Acp - abhi..

Abhi - (tearly) nahi mamma ko dard hoga dad

Acp - nahi hoga pakdo isse..

Abhi - (tearly) mein nahi

Acp - abhijeet

Pandit - app apne pariwar ke bhai ke ladke ko bulalijiye

Acp - nahi jo riwaz ha wo hi chale ga..

he picked the wooden stick and gave to abhi

Acp - agar tumne nahi di mein chale jaunga tum chahte ho mein akela chodh ke chale jau

Abhi - (tearly) nahi

Acp hold his hand and give fire to prey

In present

Acp open his eyes listening

Voice - dad