Replies to Reviews Part 6
1) Jss2141: Agreed. That's why the total number of votes have been extended to 23. That's a pretty solid story concept. Let me see what I can come up with in the coming days as a pitch.
2) shriramasokan: Thanks for the suggestions. Either of them could work especially if it's by the end of Fairy Tail.
3) ppsspp(first review): Thanks for the power scaling of some of Ben's aliens compared to the Super Saiyan forms. I'd say they're mostly accurate,so well done.
4) Bountyodst: It's crossed my mind, but due to how little stories they are in that section (4 Ben 10 x Kill a Kill stories) it's left me uninterested to pursue it as a story for the most part. However, it's not impossible for me to do a Ben 10 x Kill a Kill story in the future. But for now, it's not a priority for me.
Don't worry though, if there's any Studio Trigger anime I'd do a crossover with Ben 10 first, it's definitely Kill a Kill.
5) xmodaliyong12: Thanks for voting, and I agree. More Ben 10 and Bleach crossovers would be great.
6) Atish Haridas: Glad you're in support of the ship. I agree that their interactions would be very entertaining and great to watch, especially if done well. Lol,that's exactly why I said nobody for Limit Break times 10,so glad we're on the same page :)
7) Im4xsk1ll: Sorry about that. It's probably a glitch,as I didn't get a notification of any review from you prior to this one. Nonetheless, I'm glad you're in support of A Hero's Last Stand. Thanks for the suggestion as well. It could work out pretty well.
8) Maximum Rhapsody: Glad you're support of the ships for the most part. And thanks for the votes as well, I'll keep them in mind.
9) ppsspp (Second and Third review): It's fine that you still stand by your vote of Limit Break times 10. And thanks for voting for Ben x Ino as well. I'll keep it in mind.
I understand where you're coming from with making Ben's ability to transform a jutsu that's unique to him. But I think it would be better if I didn't go that path though. Let me explain.
The Omnitrix isn't just a huge part of just Ben's character, but the identify of the franchise as a whole. Substituting it for a jutsu seems very unnecessary,as there's no real reason as to why the actual thing can't just be used.
Plus due to it being a fic that merges the Ben 10 and Naruto universe together, it'd be beneficial to the story if some key story beats and plot devices from Ben 10 were followed through with. And there's nothing more key than allowing Ben to get the Omnitrix.
And no,Ben having the Omnitrix does not make him a cheater like Boruto was at that time of his series. Quite the opposite, really.
Although,both of them stumbled upon means that gave them an edge against their peers, Boruto's was premeditated. Ben found the Omnitrix by accident.
Boruto used his tools during the Chunin exam for a short lived goal that was always fleeting. Ben, although would occasionally indulge in using his the Omnitrix for his own selfish interests when he first got it, eventually grew far past it into something greater.
But perhaps the most important thing to note,is that Boruto never relied on those tools again, and would eventually grow past them. They were no longer something he drew from as a source of strength.
The Omnitrix has not only always been the source of Ben's powers, but throughout all five shows(including the reboot) we saw him make the power of the Omnitrix his own.
So much so that later on in the series,both in his universe, and to us the viewers,Ben made himself become acknowledged to everyone else that he is the true wielder of the Omnitrix.
Another reason why Ben keeping the Omnitrix would actually be beneficial to the story is because those in power in the Hidden Leaf Village would realistically acknowledge the potential Ben has to harness it's power, and make himself a force to be reckoned with. They wouldn't think little of him for it either.
But the same can't be said for his peers.
Because of how unique Ben's powers make him, they'll come to envy and resent him for how much he stands out in comparison to them. And would use any chance they can to belittle him, and make him feel like even more of an outcast.
With one of the reasons for that being due to his inability to use Ninjutsu.
To me, that's a more adequate utilization of your suggestion,to which I thank you greatly for. As I truly believe,if done well,can add a great layer of depth to not just the story, but Ben's character, and his relationship with Naruto as well.
Speaking of relationships. Your suggestion on how to go about Ben x Ino, though interesting,I don't think realistically would work.
The reason being that in canon, like you stated,Ino was very infatuated with Sasuke like Sakura was. And a huge reason behind that being Sasuke's looks,to which Ben isn't as attractive. Especially if it's kid Ben. Teen and Adult Ben is another story.
Though that doesn't mean that Ben is going to be the one seeking out her attention. I have something in mind that most likely won't see the light of day unless this story becomes reality. But so as to give you an insight,it will include mutual feelings from both of them.
Finally on Grandpa Max being the teacher of Ben, Gwen and Kevin. The role he'll play though greatly similar, will be more in line with that of a voice of reason and wisdom they can always rely on for advice.
Though Kevin's powers being a merger of his absorption abilities and a jutsu, definitely happening.
Thanks once again for the suggestions. They provided me not only with a great deal of introspection, but great suggestions I can implement as well.
10) Guest: Thanks for voting.
10) Fluffal Crusader: Thanks for voting. And I agree completely with every point you've stated. I believe that if the ship is handled with all that in mind,care and patience, not only would it be a great ship, but also one that can be even endearing to people who may not initially like it with time.
Current Ranking
1) Hero of Konoha: A Ben 10 and Naruto Crossover. Votes: 10.
2) Limit Break times 10 (Limit Break x 10): A Ben and Dragon Ball Super Crossover. Votes: 10.
Alternative: A Ben 10 and Dragon Ball Z Crossover. Votes: 1.
3) The Adventures of The Shape-shifting Hero and The Substitute Soul Reaper: A Ben 10 and Bleach Crossover. Votes: 7.
4) The Legend of Ben 10 and The Avatar: A Ben 10 and Avatar: The Last Airbender Crossover. Votes: 4.
5) The Shape-shifter, The Evo and The Devil Hunters. A Ben 10, Generator Rex and Devil May Cry Crossover. Votes: 3.
6) A Hero's Last Stand: A Ben 10 and Cartoon/Anime Xover. Votes: 2.
7) Ben 10 and Max Steel:Heroes United: A Ben 10 and Max Steel Crossover. Votes: 1.
8) The Misfit and The Changeling: A Ben 10 and Misfit of the Demon Academy Crossover. Votes: 0.
9) The Threads of Reality: A Ben 10 and Spider Man Crossover. Votes: 0.
10) Way of The Warrior: A Ben 10 and Street Fighter Crossover. Votes: 0.
And now,to close off things for the next update,I give you a sneak peek of Hero of Konoha. It's pretty short, but I hope it gives you an idea of what's to come.
Chapter 1: And Then There were 10(Reimagined)
"There are so many different ways to tell a story, but that's what makes them so interesting; you could never predict how they are going to turn out." Were the immortal words of Professor Paradox. And none could better capture the nature of the events that were about to unfold.
Events centered around a certain shape-shifting hero of the Omniverse.
His name...Ben Tennyson.
Benjamin Kirby Tennyson,to be exact,is an adolescent boy who exists in several alternate realities,all with their distinct traits and features. However,they all for the most part,bar one, had one thing in common except their name. Their fates were tied to a device that would change their lives as they knew it forever; The Omnitrix.
A device of alien origin that allows it's wearer to transform into several sentient alien life forms.
The possibilities that came with such power were limitless, and as such, some versions would gravitate towards using said power to serve their own selfish interests. Some however would pursue far more noble goals, and put others before themselves.
None embodied this better than Ben Prime, the true Hero of Heroes.
And just like his counterpart, another would take to arms the power of the Omnitrix and use it to fight the injustices of the world and fight for those who couldn't fight for themselves.
Only in a world far different than any of the one's inhabitated by the alternate Ben's.
A world where the society as they had come to know it was far deeper into the realm of fantasy than even their own.
A world of Ninjas.
And though this Ben would reach great heights of heroism befitting of his prime counterpart in this world. And would come to form bonds that would shape him into the very best version of himself.
Bonds that no matter the circumstances,or the obstacles they would face, would last for even lifetimes.
Just like his prime counterpart, would he also have humble beginnings.
Thanks once again for the support. Expect an update tomorrow, but until then, please have yourselves a good one.
